Hana's Metal-Make Magic

Magic

Primary Magic: Metal Make
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:

Metal-make is your average maker's magic, being able to create inanimate/animate objects out of metal. The metal appears to be of a sort of dark, purplish-black color, and is very strong and durable.

Metal-make can be used for multiple purposes, such as creating tools or weapons when needed, small objects like keys, marbles and others. When used for offensive purposes, it can be made into weapons such as swords, bows, daggers and even create animate objects. When used for defensive purposes, Hana is able to create shields and blockades.The metal as stated before, is very strong and durable, and therefore when making shields, physical attacks will be less efficient unless boosted or enhanced by magic.

Strengths:

-The metal, when used to create barriers and shields, can withstand physical attacks for a slightly longer period than it can against spells.
-The metal can endure extremely high temperatures of fire-related magic(excluding lava), and therefore will prove useful in her battles against wizards that use said element.
-With enough practice and control over Metal-make, Hana is granted great versatility, and will be able to create objects in an instant.

Weaknesses:

-Hana's metal is an extremely good conductor and therefore she must be cautious when facing wizards/enemies that use lightning/electricity to fight.
-Metal-make causes Hana's body to take on some characteristics/properties of metal, therefore making her bones slightly tougher than an average human's, and turning her into a living conductor of electricity (When magic is being used).
-The bigger the object created, the heavier it is and the slower it moves.

Abilities/Powers:
-Hana is able to bend/manipulate other small metal objects without needing to create metal. However, this is limited to objects of and smaller than the size of a book. It still drains her magic though, but only 2%.
-Hana's strength is enhanced when her magic is active due to her bones taking on some traits of metal, but her weight will not be affected. Her bones can still be broken/fractured like normal humans, but it will take more effort to do so.
-Hana, while being able to bend objects that are no bigger than a book, can also create such objects for daily purposes such as keys, wires, etc. (At the cost of 2% of her magic).

Name: Farfalla
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Description: Hana creates 20 butterflies of metal that will each fly towards the enemy, their razor sharp wings being able to cut through skin, and gives the opponents cuts all over. Each butterfly is about 7cm wide and 7cm long, and they circulate around opponent within mid-range, causing the cuts as their wings make contact with the skin. This spell lasts for 1 post, and takes 2 posts to cool down before it can be used again.
Strengths:
-Strong against fire.
-Can be used to attack enemies that come in groups.
-They fly at the speed of 10m/s
Weaknesses:
-Slows down in water.
-Can be melted by lava.
-Barriers and shields can be used to protect oneself against the Farfalla.
-Magnets can be used to attract the butterflies as they are made of metal, and are very small.

Name: Katana
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Description: Hana places both palms together, then pulls them apart, at the same time creating a black metal katana. This katana is about 90cm long and 5 cm wide. It caused cuts, gashes and deep wounds, possibly life-threatening if the bleeding is not stopped. The spell lasts for three posts before the Katana is broken, and takes 4 posts to cool down before it can be used again.
Strengths:
-Will shatter the minute another person attempts to use it, unless said person has metal-make or another form of the magic.
-Is light and therefore easy to wield.
-If heated by fire, the katana can give slight burns upon coming into contact with skin, giving the opponent both minor burns and cuts.
Weaknesses:
-As Hana is required to hold the katana which is made of metal, she can be electrocuted easily.
-Can be melted by lava.
-May be used to block spells, but can only withstand 3 D rank spells and 1 C rank spell before the blade is shattered.
-If heated for a long period of time, Hana could get her hands burnt due to the whole katana being made of metal.

Name: Shield
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Description: Hana is able to create a circular-shaped shield that can cover at most three adults. The shield can withstand about 4 D Rank spells and 1 C Rank spell. The shield usually lasts for 3 posts (unless destroyed) and takes 4 posts before it can be used again.
Strengths:
-Can withstand being heated by fire.
-Cannot be broken easily using physical strength (Unless enhanced by magic)
-Cannot be shifted from its position.
Weaknesses:
-Can be melted by lava
-The attacker can attack from any other side as the shield only protects Hana from one side.
-The shield cannot be carried/moved around, and therefore Hana can only stay in that same area for as long as the shield is required.
-If the shield is charged with electricity, Hana must move away immediately as she could risk being electrocuted, her body being a living conductor when her magic is active. The shield will still remain in place unless destroyed.

Name: Hail
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Description: Hana creates 25 small shards of metal of uneven shapes, each being no bigger than 5m. They hover in mid-air, and with a single hand motion, they are sent flying towards the opponent at the speed of 10m/s. They inflict minor wounds an cuts, though hardly ever life threatening. This spells covers a radius of 10m, and lasts for a single post. It takes 3 posts to cool down.
Strengths:
-Able to withstand high temperatures of fire
-Covers a 10m radius, therefore making it easier to damage multiple opponents within said area.
-Can hardly be seen at night due to the color as size of the shards, therefore making it harder for the opponents to spot the shards.
Weaknesses:
-Cannot be redirected, and therefore Hana will be at a loss if the enemy/opponent moved faster than the spell does.
-Slows down in water.
-Can be melted by lava/magma.
-If any magnetic objects are nearby, the shards will be attracted to the magnets due to their small size.

Description:

Metal-make is your average maker's magic, being able to create inanimate/animate objects out of metal. The metal appears to be of a sort of dark, purplish-black color, and is very strong and durable.

Metal-make can be used for multiple purposes, such as creating tools or weapons when needed, small objects like keys, marbles and others. When used for offensive purposes, it can be made into weapons such as swords, bows, daggers and even create animate objects. When used for defensive purposes, Hana is able to create shields and blockades.The metal as stated before, is very strong and durable, and therefore when making shields, physical attacks will be less efficient unless boosted or enhanced by magic.

Strengths:

-The metal, when used to create barriers and shields, can withstand physical attacks for a slightly longer period than it can against spells.
-The metal can endure extremely high temperatures of fire-related magic(excluding lava), and therefore will prove useful in her battles against wizards that use said element.
-With enough practice and control over Metal-make, Hana is granted great versatility, and will be able to create objects in an instant.

Weaknesses:

-Hana's metal is an extremely good conductor and therefore she must be cautious when facing wizards/enemies that use lightning/electricity to fight.
-Metal-make causes Hana's body to take on some characteristics/properties of metal, therefore making her bones slightly tougher than an average human's, and turning her into a living conductor of electricity.
-The bigger the object created, the heavier it is and the slower it moves.

Abilities/Powers:
-Hana is able to manipulate/shape other small metal objects without needing to create metal. However, this is limited to objects of and smaller than the size of a book.
(Allright, but it will still cost you magic power to create these things. I would say around 2%)
-Hana's strength is enhanced when her magic is used due to her bones taking on some traits of metal, but her weight will not be affected. Her bones can still be broken/fracture like normal humans, but it will take more effort to do so.

Name: Farfalla
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Description: Hana creates 20 butterflies of metal that will each fly towards the enemy, their razor sharp wings being able to cut through skin, and gives the opponents cuts all over. Each butterfly is about 7cm wide and 7cm long, with razor sharp wings. This spell lasts for 1 post, and takes 2 posts to cool down before it can be used again.
(You need the butterflies a range, and also will these butterflies act like actual butterflies and fly around the user. Or are they like shot towards your enemy.)
Strengths:
-Strong against fire.
-Can be used to attack a group of wizards.
-They fly at the speed of 10m/s
Weaknesses:
-Slows down in water.
-Can be melted by lava.
-Barriers and shields can be used to protect oneself against the Farfalla.
(one more weakness)


Name: Katana
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Description: Hana places both palms together, then pulls them apart, at the same time creating a black metal katana. This katana is about 90cm long and 5 cm wide. It caused cuts, gashes and deep wounds, possibly life-threatening if the bleeding is not stopped. The spell lasts for three posts before the Katana is broken, and takes 4 posts to cool down before it can be used again.
Strengths:
-Will shatter the minute another person attempts to use it, unless said person has metal-make or another form of the magic.
-Is light and therefore easy to wield.
(at least three strengths, and always one more weakness then you have strengths)
Weaknesses:
-As Hana is required to hold it, she can be electrocuted easily.
-Can be melted by lava. Can also burn Hana's hands if heated for a long period of time as metal is a conductor of heat.
(2 more weaknesses)


Name: Shield
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Description: Hana is able to create a shield that can cover at most three adults. The shield can withstand about 3 D Rank spells and 1 C Rank spell. The shield usually lasts for 3 posts (unless destroyed) and takes 4 posts before it can be used again.
(You stated in your magic description that your defensive spells have an high durability against simple physical and melee attacks right. However you still need to add how many of those hits it can take)
Strengths:
-Can withstand being heated by fire.
-Cannot be broken easily using physical strength (Unless enhanced by magic)
(strength)
Weaknesses:
-Can be melted by lava
-The attacker can attack from around the shield as it only shields them from one side.
(weaknesses)


Name: Shape
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Description: Hana is able to create miscellaneous objects with the use of this spell. Etc. Wire, Key, Coins. This is mostly used to make gifts/objects that she usually uses in her everyday life, and requires little to no energy in doing so. This spell lasts for 1 post, and can be used repeatedly as it takes little to no energy in making the objects.
(This feels more like an ability then an actual spell, in fact I think you have written this down as an ability that you can create anything smaller then a book right. So you won't need a spell slot for it, I suggest that you use this slot for another offensive or defensive spell)
Strengths:
-Can be used to create objects for everyday use.
(strengths)
Weaknesses:
-Deals no damage at all (Unless creating a sharp object etc. A shard of metal/pocket knife)
-Can hardly be used in combat.
(weaknesses)

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