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    Satan Soul: Netherworld

    Hania
    Hania

    Demonically Bound


    Demonically Bound

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    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 206,450

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requiem
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Hania 27th July 2017, 1:28 am

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    Kite Wilhelm
    Kite Wilhelm

    Demon King


    Demon King

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    Lineage : Power Of Apocalypse
    Position : None
    Posts : 1142
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 34
    Experience : 801,130

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Flame Demon Slayer
    Second Skill: NetherFlame Demon Slayer
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kite Wilhelm 25th August 2017, 4:49 am

    Magic unlocked upon user request.
    FeitanKazeshini wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Satan Soul: Netherworld
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Satan soul takeover is the magic that allows one to take on the physical aspects of a demon, as well as use a fraction of, or their entire powers and abilities. Satan Soul: Netherworld allows the user to make contracts with demons from an infernal plane they call the Netherworld. In short a Netherworld is a land in a different dimension that was taken over by demons and all of their inhabitants were corrupted and changed into demonic entities. These dimentions can only be accessed by those who know they exist and have the ability to contact that side. The user of Satan Soul: Netherworld are able to take over the physical appearance of the demons they make contracts with from everything. From height, and weight, to the clothes that the entity was wearing when they first made the contract with them. It is also possible that the entity was slain by the wielder of this magic and they had their power and form taken and absorbed.

    Feitan uses this magic to give himself the advantage in fights and to allow him to access different magics, and abilities that he would never even dream of. He either makes a contract with the entitiy he has copied, or he has slain them and gained their powers. Feitan has contracted and slain powerful demons whose powers are unique, and help him fight in a wide assortment of battles and keep him from losing the advantage.

    Strengths:
    * Versitile: This magic allows the caster to take control of a wide variety of demons and powers thus giving the versatility factor a major spike.
    * Demonic: This magic gives the user an innate strength against Dark, Unholy, and Poison magics
    * Magic: Depending on the transformation this magic will give Feitan access to different magics while using certain forms.
    Weaknesses:
    * Holy: Being demonic in nature this magic suffers a 25% vuneralbility to Light, Holy, and Fairy Magics.
    * One Form: This magic only allows the user to use one form at a time. Meaning the only way they can do multiple partials is if it from the same demon.
    * 3 Partials: The amount of partials for one form can never exceed three and thus it hinders the amount of buffs one gets.
    * Demon Slayer: Feitan takes aditional damage (25% more) from any and all demon slayers as he himself is a demon, or at least demonic in nature.
    Lineage:
    Arm of Destiny:
    Description: Long ago, there was a famed demon hunter. It was said that he never brought any tools with him. No swords, no bow, he didn't even use magic. He used one hand, the hand that shot forth a brilliant beam of pure light energy. It was bestowed upon him by the gods when he swore to hunt to down all that was evil after his family’s tragic death. He destroyed many demons, and while his name remains a mystery, his legend and powerful lineage lives on to this day, scattered throughout the world.
    Ability: The user can call forth a powerful laser of light energy to decimate whatever lies ahead of them. 100 meter range.
    Usage: The user pulls back their hand (right or left, whichever arm they we’re bestowed with) gathering up energy before thrusting it forward to unleash the devastating beam. The user can only use this once every 4 posts and the beam rivals a B rank Dragon Slayer Roar. Can only be used 3 times per thread.
    Unique Abilities:
    * Demonology: This magic gives it's user a vast knowledge of all types of demons. Including where they live, how they fight, and what kind of abilities they have. (Excluding player demons, and demonic magic/style fighters)
    * Call to the Nethers: This magic gives the user the ability to contact the Netherworld. He is also able to contact demons to make a contract with them in order to obtain new powers and forms.
    * Demon Siphon: This magic allows the user to siphon magic and power from demons they have slain. Allowing them to restore a set mana portion equal to their rank. (Weak/Normal- 5%, Strong/Boss- 10%)

    Current Demons Contracted with:
    Full Takeover Forms:

    Partial Takeover Demons:
    Spells:
    Signature Spell:

    D Rank Spells:


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    Kite Wilhelm
    Kite Wilhelm

    Demon King


    Demon King

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    Lineage : Power Of Apocalypse
    Position : None
    Posts : 1142
    Guild : Sabertooth
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    Age : 34
    Experience : 801,130

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Flame Demon Slayer
    Second Skill: NetherFlame Demon Slayer
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kite Wilhelm 25th August 2017, 4:50 am

    FeitanKazeshini wrote:This is the second half of my Magic thread. Starting at C rank and working it's way upwards.
    C Rank Spells
    C Rank:

    B Rank Spells
    B Rank Spells:


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    FeitanKazeshini
    FeitanKazeshini

    Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Satan Soul: Netherworld
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill:

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    Post by FeitanKazeshini 25th August 2017, 8:11 am

    Completely changed the Active ability of 2 B rank takeovers.

    1: Overlord Laharl's active ability has been changed.

    2: Red Magnus' active ability has been changed.


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    Hania
    Hania

    Demonically Bound


    Demonically Bound

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    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 206,450

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requiem
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Hania 26th August 2017, 3:14 pm

    part 1 complete:


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    True sins are the ones that you cannot atone for.
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    Hania
    Hania

    Demonically Bound


    Demonically Bound

    Developer/GFX Artist- Demon VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Player 
    Lineage : Warrior of Steel
    Position : None
    Posts : 1093
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 206,450

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requiem
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Hania 26th August 2017, 3:15 pm

    Done and done:

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    True sins are the ones that you cannot atone for.
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    Lester Drynedi
    Lester Drynedi

    Gentleman florist


    Gentleman florist

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    Age : 23

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 24th October 2018, 12:49 am

    Unlocked & Moved at users request
    Pt 1

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    Lester Drynedi
    Lester Drynedi

    Gentleman florist


    Gentleman florist

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 24th October 2018, 12:50 am

    Unlocked & Moved at users request
    Pt 2

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    ivyleaf33
    ivyleaf33

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    First Skill: Advanced Solid Script
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill: N/A

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    Post by ivyleaf33 9th December 2018, 7:21 pm

    Spoiler:

    Hey there! it's ya boi Ivy here to grade your magic - all edits will be made in this spoopy color. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to let me know. Without further ado, let's get into this.


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    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    FeitanKazeshini
    FeitanKazeshini

    Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
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    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hisoka
    Experience : 6,240

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Satan Soul: Netherworld
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill:

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    Post by FeitanKazeshini 10th December 2018, 6:19 am

    Edits have been made. Also, I will note that any full takeover was made with the knowledge that it gets all of the actives, passives, and buffs of the pieces that make it up.


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    ivyleaf33
    ivyleaf33

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    Mentor : Speculo (former)
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Advanced Solid Script
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill: N/A

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    Post by ivyleaf33 10th December 2018, 8:58 am

    Spoiler:

    Few more edits.


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    Satan Soul: Netherworld - Page 2 B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    ivyleaf33
    ivyleaf33

    Moderator- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Dragon VIP Status- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Dark Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Rich- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Summer Special Participant- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Player 
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Advanced Solid Script
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill: N/A

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    Post by ivyleaf33 11th December 2018, 4:07 am

    Spoiler:

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    Satan Soul: Netherworld - Page 2 B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
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    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 8th August 2019, 2:52 am


    Moved and Unlocked at the User's Request~

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    FeitanKazeshini
    FeitanKazeshini

    Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Overlord's Fail Safe
    Position : None
    Posts : 757
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hisoka
    Experience : 6,240

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Satan Soul: Netherworld
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill:

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    Post by FeitanKazeshini 14th August 2019, 7:05 am

    Most edits have been made.


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    Shane Stern
    Shane Stern

    Player 
    Lineage : Super Soldier
    Posts : 789
    Guild : Rune Knights
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    Experience : 623,530

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    First Skill: Plus Ultra
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Shane Stern 26th August 2019, 3:50 am

    Hey man, sorry for taking this long to get back to you.

    Your magic's all okay, except for one thing. I understand that your lineage allows 2 additional signature spells, so at B-rank you may only have 3 active. You will to specify which of the 2 in your 5 spells to be locked until further rank-up.

    Edits:


    D rank:

    C Rank Spells:





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    FeitanKazeshini
    FeitanKazeshini

    Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Overlord's Fail Safe
    Position : None
    Posts : 757
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hisoka
    Experience : 6,240

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Satan Soul: Netherworld
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill:

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    Post by FeitanKazeshini 18th September 2019, 1:41 pm

    I thought I included those. If you look at the names of the last 2 signature spells they have (Locked) next to them. I thought this would mean I can't use them until the appropriate rank.


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 26th November 2019, 3:54 am

    Hey there, okay so generally this looks good, however since the last grading there has been a new magic update and all spell templates now include a 'Category' section that must be completed in both statless and stat magic. Please update your magic to include this, bump when done and I'll take a look~

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    FeitanKazeshini
    FeitanKazeshini

    Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Overlord's Fail Safe
    Position : None
    Posts : 757
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hisoka
    Experience : 6,240

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Satan Soul: Netherworld
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill:

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    Post by FeitanKazeshini 26th November 2019, 8:22 am

    The Edits have been made


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 27th November 2019, 2:55 am

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    Post by Guest 16th October 2022, 4:34 am

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    FeitanKazeshini wrote:This is the second half of my Magic thread. Starting at B rank and working it's way upwards.

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    Post by Saraphina 22nd October 2022, 1:56 pm

    Hey there feitan, I'm Saraphina and I'll be your grader today. Before I can go ahead and grade this, I'm going to need you to fiddle with coding a bit. I don't want the page to break on us while we go through this and you not see anything because of messed up coding.

    Under Shackles of the Sinner, you didn't close the list in the spoiler, as well as in Gunner's Holsters. You might have one too many closing spoilers at the end of the Signature's spoiler. Sometimes the spoilers and bullet points don't act friendly with one another and causes page breaks as well.

    I'm not fully sure what else there is to fix with the coding, I've tried for a while myself already, and all that I suggested so far is what I have come up with. When you think you have most of the code fixed. Please bump the thread and let me know so I can fix the other posts that staff spoilered to not break the thread page the rest of the way.

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