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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready

    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Aayla 10th September 2014, 11:29 am

    Username: Aayla
    Secondary Magic Name: Takeover Magic
    Evidence of Accomplishment: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t9517-aayla-s-secondary-magic-training-private
    Caster or Holder: Caster Magic
    Description: Aayla's brand of takeover magic is very unique, being a representation of her own soul, instead of a soul she has actually taken over. Allowing the soul to represent itself by taking over Aayla's body, grants her greater strength and speed, along with a variety of new skills like flying.
    Strengths:
    - Improves the users primary magic when in a partial or full takeover. Adding an extra rank of damage per primary magic used.
    Increases physical strength and speed by 10%
    - While in a full body takeover, dragon force only requires Aayla to be eating water for 4 consecutive posts, not 5
    Weaknesses:
    - No matter which form she is in, she will always be vulnerable to lightning
    - All water spells are weaker against Vegetation and steel magic
    - The Serpent Soul magic requires Aayla's primal soul to take over, therefore, when in this form, Aayla doesn't act like her usual self. She is much more up front, sometimes mean and tough as her mind is corrupted by a sudden darkness.
    TO Magic Rules for reference:

    ~Spells~
    Signature Spell:


    D Rank:


    C Rank:

    B Rank:

    A Rank:

    S Rank:


    Last edited by Aayla on 2nd December 2014, 12:14 pm; edited 56 times in total


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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Aayla 17th September 2014, 5:40 pm

    Ready to be reviewed!


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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Aayla 19th September 2014, 3:23 am

    Bumped


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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Fc9659f1-c886-4f01-a734-cae0d61afbaf_zpsh3e1k6vj
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Aayla 20th September 2014, 3:24 am

    Buuuuuuumps...


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    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 21st September 2014, 11:53 am

    You haven't actually given any description of the magic itself at all.

    Nor the strengths and weaknesses of the magic itself.

    Also if you look at the magic rules the amount of TOE for each spell rank is defined.

    So D rank should be 10, C rank 20 etc.

    Fix these and PM me then i'll review the spells.


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    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 22nd September 2014, 12:16 pm

    Ok. Takeovers work like this:

    Partials have to be lower ranked than the full form.

    From my understanding your D, C and A are currently partials of your B and then your S is another takeover without partials?

    If so, you need to swap your B and A rank round. Also your S rank won't be as effective as it isn't made from partials. I am not sure if you are ok with that or not. Either post here with details and PM me you have or PM me your decisions


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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 26th September 2014, 12:33 am

    I believe your A rank might not be allowable. Its essentially three spells in one. I know you can't use them in conjunction, but its like...you have the spells without having the spell slots.

    I'd prefer it if your A rank just had one partial form. If you don't want to do this I will speak to other staff and discuss it. PM me with your decision. Thank you

    What would be better is that you have
    D, C, B as partials then have A as a full and then S is like a super full. It uses the same partials, but boosts them further or something.


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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 29th September 2014, 1:33 am

    A spell with three different abilities again just seems like you are trying to get away with three different spells using only one slot. These effects are different. If perhaps you did the following way: You use the eye spell and then D ranks are turned to stone for a few posts, C and B ranks can be put to sleep, higher ranks can be put in 'fear'.

    Also in your S rank you mention serpent maiden's form. No idea what this is.

    ALso did you decide to go with the fact that A rank takeover is made up of the C and D partials and then the S rank takeover is like a boosted form with some added effects? Or something else? Couldn't quite tell from your description.


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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 30th September 2014, 1:58 am

    *stares for a moment*

    I think I'd like definition of how long the poison takes to take effect properly on the passives and how it effects other ranks. Other than that it looks good


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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Aayla 5th October 2014, 12:33 pm

    Fini, bump


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    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 15th October 2014, 1:15 am

    Approved


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    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Serpent Soul Takeover Magic - Ready Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Cirven
    Cirven

    Devil's Advocate


    Devil's Advocate

    Moderator- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : The Devil Jester
    Position : None
    Posts : 2448
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 35
    Experience : 833,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

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    Post by Cirven 1st November 2014, 10:37 pm

    Unlocked for edits.


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    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Aayla 3rd November 2014, 3:47 am

    Removed TOE/TOC from spells and included signature spell


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    Cirven
    Cirven

    Devil's Advocate


    Devil's Advocate

    Moderator- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : The Devil Jester
    Position : None
    Posts : 2448
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 35
    Experience : 833,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

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    Post by Cirven 29th November 2014, 6:45 pm

    Approved.

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