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    Post by Zalck 29th August 2014, 9:08 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Super-Heavy Champion Requip Magic
    Secondary Magic: None
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: This form of magic is based on the usage and summoning of many different magical weapons and armor that are pulled from and stored in a magical pocket space. Super-Heavy Champion Requip was created to allow for the use of heavy armor without it being cumbersome to the user, allowing for a wider range of uses for the items deployed through the magic.

    Alito focuses on getting out a set of his Super-Heavy items out, and using their light-weight abilities and his levitation spell to surprise his opponent with his speed and versatility.

    Strengths:

    • Use of heavy weapons and armor without the penalties of speed and without the strength requirements.
    • While heavy items usually require brute force as their only tactics, this magic allows for more versatility in its usage.
    • Very effective in one on one combat.
    • Although lightweight to the wielder of the magic, the items are still very heavy to others.

    Weaknesses:

    • Slight channelling time to get each item out. Items can be used together, but cannot be brought out simultaneously.
    • Much less effective against groups of enemies.
    • No kind of elemental magic can be used/fused/mixed with Super-Heavy Champion magic.
    • It requires a strong will to maintain the summoned items and their passive abilities. If the user’s will is broken, the items will lose their lightweight abilities and in extreme cases return to their magical pocket space.
    • All items are unique, and if broken by a stronger spell must be remade.


    Abilities/Powers: Lightweight: All items, while being heavy in nature, are lightweight to the user, comparative to light armor and regular swords and shields instead of their heavy variants.

    Spells:


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    Post by Zalck 9th September 2014, 11:45 am

    Bump for approval process please! Thanks!


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    Post by Sonya<3 11th September 2014, 9:14 pm

    Im going to bump this app o.o


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    Post by Zalck 22nd September 2014, 1:02 pm

    I think it's okay to bump this? I'm just excited to get started!


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 23rd September 2014, 1:04 am

    Zalck wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Super-Heavy Champion Requip Magic
    Secondary Magic: None
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: This form of magic is based on the usage and summoning of many different magical weapons and armor that are pulled from and stored in a magical pocket space. Super-Heavy Champion Requip was created to allow for the use of heavy armor without it being cumbersome to the user, allowing for a wider range of uses for the items deployed through the magic.

    Alito focuses on getting all three of his Super-Heavy items out, and using their light-weight abilities and his levitation spell to surprise his opponent with his speed and versatility. When you rank up are you planning to add in more armors. If so, this probably isn't necessary. Just say something like Alito focuses on getting a set of Super-Heavy items out and using their light-weight abilities and....

    Strengths:

    • Use of heavy weapons and armor without the penalties of speed and without the strength requirements.
    • While heavy items usually require brute force as their only tactics, this magic allows for more versatility in its usage.
    • Very effective in one on one combat.
    • Although lightweight to the wielder of the magic, the items are still very heavy to others.

    Weaknesses:

    • Slight channelling time to get each item out. Items can be used together, but cannot be brought out simultaneously.
    • Much less effective against groups of enemies.
    • No kind of elemental magic can be used/fused/mixed with Super-Heavy Champion magic.
    • It requires a strong will to maintain the summoned items and their passive abilities. If the user’s will is broken, the items will lose their lightweight abilities and in extreme cases return to their magical pocket space.
    • All items are unique, and if broken by a stronger spell must be remade.


    Abilities/Powers: Lightweight: All items, while being heavy in nature, are lightweight to the user, comparative to light armor and regular swords and shields instead of their heavy variants.

    Spells:


    Comments are in teal.

    Also, I feel the channeling time might not be necessary, unless that is all you can think of as a weakness. IF it is I would shorten it as half a post seems odd. Also, putting a channeling time in posts seems odd anyway. So i'd say it takes like five seconds to channel it or something. A solid number that an opponent could take advantage of in their next post or something


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    Post by Zalck 23rd September 2014, 8:55 am

    Should all be fixed now! Everything you commented makes a lot of sense!

    On the shield bit it goes like this- so say you cast a D-Rank fireball spell. The shield deflects it, and the conditions are perfect for the deflection to get directed at your partner. Your partner can cast a D-Rank fireball at it, and easily dispel the deflected one, since it is at 80% of its original power. It basically because a weaker version of the same spell.

    Lastly, but not least-ly, Bump!


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 24th September 2014, 12:49 am

    You have made fixes, but your channeling time is still .5 of a post in two of your items.
    Also are you sure you want to go for an 8ft long weapon that you have to wield two handed. It will mean you will generally have to use between attack and defense as I doubt you can use your shield and a two handed weapon.

    To be honest you would probably be better off with either a shorter sword, but give it more weight than the average sword of that size so if you hit someone with it, or drop it on them, they know about it OR a weapon other than a sword. It seems the main concept of this weapon is the shockwave and the gems. Why not go for a war hammer. They are bloody heavy and would fit a 'champion' in my mind.

    If you want to stick with the 8ft long sword that is fine. I just wanted to confirm this.

    The rest seems fair enough


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    Post by Zalck 24th September 2014, 8:08 am

    Last fix made to duration.

    I did change the sword to 7.5 ft. That may seem arbitrary, but Alito himself is 7'2" tall, so it is only 4" taller than he is. My vision was something like a Dark Souls Boss, especially inspired by the Pursuer in Dark Souls 2. Having the ability to use heavy weaponry without loosing all mobility. So then the sword can be used one or two handed, it just is a lot more effective as two handed. I had implied that's how I was going to use it previously, as both one and two handed, but now I've put it in there plainly for all to see. Let me know if that's not going to work.

    Thank you for all your help!


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 24th September 2014, 10:06 am

    Seems good to me. Approved


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    Post by Thorn 28th July 2015, 10:40 am

    Unlocked for edits


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    Post by Zalck 28th July 2015, 11:37 am

    Bumped for approval!


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    Post by Chelvaric 29th July 2015, 10:52 am

    Super Heavy Tower Greatshield - Takes 3 hits to be destroyed 3 C rank or 1.5 B rank cd of 2 posts

    Super Heavy Sempill Ultra Greatsword - doesnt knock back A rank mages - explain your passive more

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    Post by Zalck 13th August 2015, 9:52 pm

    Sorry for the delay.

    Updates made on the greatshield.

    Updates made on the greatsword. Revamped passive- giving it more resistance. Let me know if this is fair.

    Removed the morning star, moving the halberd to D-Ranked (Changed cooldown and duration to match other D-Ranks instead of C ranked.) And making Warmonger's Armor a C-Ranked spell.

    Made Battlin' Boxer Cestus the signature spell.

    Hope everything is to your liking.


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