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    Post by 美空 6th June 2014, 11:02 pm

    Sleet Make Magic Ou6w7k

    Primary Magic: Sleet Make Magic
    Secondary Magic: ---
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Sleet-Make Magic, is a a magic in which the user creates many different things out of solidified on semi-solidified ice and water combined. This magic has both offensive AND defensive maneuvers, making it quite versatile. Things this magic can create include; weapons(swords, spears, chains, etc.), living creatures(birds, tigers, lions, etc.), useful items(fly swatters, nets, cages, etc.), and etc. The user is also capable of turning their own bodies into semi-solidified ice and water to evade damage by enemy attacks that are purely physical and or physical attacks that are boosted by magic. Because it is a mix or ice AND water only ice and water god.demon slayers are capable of eating the spells cast by the user.
    Strengths:

    • Can change objects created from being solid to semi-sold at will


    • strong against earth magic.


    • Extremely versatile, capable of offensive, defensive, AND supportive maneuvers.


    Weaknesses:

    • Not very much resistance to similar elements.


    • Weak against fire magic.


    • Demon/God Slayers can eat it.


    • Short range spells

    Abilities/Powers:


    Sleet Make D-Rank Spells:


    Last edited by *~Misora~* on 18th July 2014, 12:49 am; edited 18 times in total


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    Post by Aria Beleren 6th June 2014, 11:35 pm

    I'll be going over this tomorrow in the morning


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    Post by Aria Beleren 7th June 2014, 4:51 am

    Please put in your last spell and tell me when you are ready


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    Post by 美空 7th June 2014, 6:38 am

    I'm not adding a fourth spell, i'll add one in later if I'm able to think of one.


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    Post by Aria Beleren 8th June 2014, 11:01 pm

    Had to switch this up with Gemma. I'm helping out with a system.


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    Post by Gemma 9th June 2014, 12:26 am

    Ok so I'll be doing just the base of the magic right now, and the spells after the corrections are done. I put all my corrections in teal.

    *~Misora~* wrote:
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    Primary Magic: Heavenly Sky Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: ---
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This is a very powerful magic ]All magics are technically same level], that is said to only be used by sky nature spirits. Very little is known about this magic, therefore, not many people possess it. However, one thing is known about it, and that is it's element is the heavens themselves. ]Heaven is not an acceptable element] No one can teach this magic to another because it is an ancient and lost magic. The reason Misora has this particular magic is because she herself, is a sky nature spirit. This is a holy magic.

    The user summons the heavens ]Once again heaven isn't an element.] in their palms. They can either use it to attack, heal or give support to an ally in battle. Because this magic originated from the heavens, and is not normal sky, slayers are incapable of eating it ]I believe Kyll and you had agreed to take out all mentions of Slayers? Anyway there is no reason why sly slayers couldn't eat it as it is essentially holy air magic]. The user can shoot beams of heavenly sky at an opponent for attacking, heal an ally's injuries by put their hands in contact with the injured person, or even boost an ally's attacking power by at lease 10% by surrounding that ally in a heavenly light.
    Strengths:
    >Can't be eaten by dragon or god slayers, this magic uses heavenly skies ]So as said, this is not an acceptable strength]
    > capable of healing allies.
    > extremely versatile, capable of offensive, defensive, AND supportive maneuvers
    Weaknesses:
    >not very much resistance to similar elements.
    >healing spells leave the user worn out.
    > weak against earth and fire magic.
    >demon slayers can eat the spells ]Same]
    Abilities/Powers:

    • Flight:


    this magic, grants the user the ability to fly freely through the sky by growing a pair of angel wings. This ability is however, limited to two times per thread with a duration of 3 posts and a cooldown of 5 posts [This isn't what is considered an ability. This seems more like, and could work as, a spell (if you add all needed information such as speed, distance etc) but not as ability]


    Ok so since there's a lot of things not working out right now with the basis of your magic i'm not looking over your spells as I'd think you'd have to modify them once this is done, naturally. I can only already tell you than unless you have very short duration or very long cool downs, they are not considered a weakness and thus need about 2 more new weakness per spell.

    I understand this is quite a bit, do feel free to contact me for more information or help.


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    Post by 美空 9th June 2014, 3:53 pm

    bump


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    Post by Gemma 9th June 2014, 5:23 pm

    As usual annotations in teal~

    *~Misora~* wrote:
    Sleet Make Magic QNfY1Sl

    Primary Magic: Heavenly Sky Spirit Magic
    Secondary Magic: ---
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This is a magic, that is said to only be used by sky nature spirits. Very little is known about this magic, therefore, not many people possess it. However, one thing is known about it, and that is it's element is the skies themselves[Sky is not an acceptable element]. No one can teach this magic to another because it is an ancient and lost magic. The reason Misora has this particular magic is because she herself, is a sky nature spirit. This is a holy magic.

    The user summons the skies in their palms. They can either use it to attack, heal or give support to an ally in battle. Because this magic originated from the heavens, it is not normal sky]By this you mean it makes it holy right?]. The user can blast tunnels of high pressure at an opponent for attacking, heal an ally's injuries by put their hands in contact with the injured person, or even boost an ally's attacking power by at lease 10% by surrounding that ally in a heavenly light.
    Strengths:
    > can be used to boost an ally's attacking power.
    >capable of healing allies.
    >extremely versatile, capable of offensive, defensive, AND supportive maneuvers
    Weaknesses:
    >not very much resistance to similar elements.
    >healing spells leave the user worn out.
    >weak against earth and fire magic.
    >slayers can eat it
    Abilities/Powers:


    Heavenly Sky Spirit D-Rank Spells:

    So clearly you see we have an element problem too. Once more you must change any mention of sky as it is not acceptable as an element. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions about the magic or the grading.


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    Post by 美空 10th June 2014, 3:43 pm

    edited, some things i'm not changing because there is no need to change them seeing as they don't go against magic making guidelines.


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    Post by Gemma 10th June 2014, 10:55 pm

    Approved.


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    Post by Sumdumguy 18th July 2014, 12:49 am

    Reapproved~

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