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    Thunder God Slayer Magic (雷の滅神魔法 Kaminari no Metsujin Mahō)

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    Post by Nero_ 21st April 2014, 7:54 am

    Magic
    Primary Magic: Thunder God Slayer

    Secondary Magic: Illusion Magic

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Thunder God Slayer Magic (雷の滅神魔法 Kaminari no Metsujin Mahō) Thunder_god_by_343guiltyspark-d2xw5ws

    Description: God Slayer Magic(滅神魔法~Metsujin Mahō): A form of lost magic used to slay gods,  Granted to humans by Gods themselves, This magic however, was lost, and forgotten, having nothing about it's origin or how to obtain it, only few chosen ones may control it, it controls a powerful element, of course the element a god slayer holds is far stronger, than the element a dragon slayer holds, and equal to its counter part the demon slayer. It is a form of Ancient Spell in which the caster is able to attain the abilities of a "God", using a specific element as their type. The certain elemental type of God Slayer Magic can be conjured from the caster's body and be used for various purposes, mainly in combat.

    Thunder God Slayer Magic (雷の滅神魔法 Kaminari no Metsujin Mahō) is a Caster Magic, Lost Magic that incorporates the element of lightning into the user's body, allowing them to produce black lightning from various parts of their body, which is mostly used for offensive purposes. Such distinctive "black lightning" possesses high voltage and great destructive power, and, much like that employed in standard Lightning Magic, can be generated in places away from the caster. The user is also granted the signature ability of the Slayer line to eat external sources of their element to heal themselves and regain power, thus making them immune to lightning; the Thunder God Slayer can even consume the lightning of the Lightning Dragon Slayer. The user can not only generate lightning from their body, but also make it appear from almost anywhere to strike their opponents, taking them by surprise. By generating electricity on different parts of their body, they are capable of making their attacks in melee deadlier, and of propelling themselves around to gain extra momentum.

    Victoria learned this magic from the Thunder God Raijin. After escaping the cellar in which she remained locked after her mother's death, Raijin, the Thunder God, kidnapped her. He wanted to train the girl, as he saw that she had potential. And so he began teaching her God Slayer magic. Victoria was a good student, thus during that time she was not thinking logically, but a darker, more insane part of her was controling her. Victoria, as every God Slayer, despite her element, has it pitch black. Also, as every God Slayer, her strength, speed and intelligence raise.

    Strengths:

    ·  She can eat lightnings, even the Lightning Dragon Slayer's lightnings, but Dragon Slayers cannot eat the Lightning she produces.

    · She tends to have lightnings around her body even when she isn't casting any spells, so people that are distracted can have a bit of a trouble there.

    · This type of Magic combines perfectly with water and Metal Magic, and even better with Water and Metal God Slayers.

    Weaknesses:

    · Useless against Earth and Rubber:Since the earth and rubber are somehow immune to Lightnings, Earth Magic doesn't get affected by her magic, nor do rubber magic or rubber armor/ clothes.

    · Cannot be used to support allies: The black lightning is extremely offensive, powerful and its voltage is extremely high, and cannot be used to support allies, since it can harm allies in the way to the point where it might leave them unconscious.

    · Little Passive and Defensive uses: The black lightning is extremely offensive, and has little applications in the defensive and passive spell area.

    · Incapability of eating her own Lightnings: God Slayers, much like Dragon Slayers, cannot eat elements produced by them.

    · Mental Inestability: Victoria, as mentioned before, was a incredibly different person while at the God's residence, which was the time in which she used her magic most. Now, since she finally has regained the logic. However, if she uses her God Magic in excess, she riscs to invoce her Insane part once again.

    Abilities/Powers:

    · God Force: When consuming a determined amount of his own element, a God Slayer can active his God Force, which augments his strenght, speed, visual perception, spell damage, etc... The God Force lasts for 5 posts and has a cooldown of 7 posts.

    · Sharper Sneses/ Better Physical Abilities: Like all God Slayers, Victoria has a sharper sense of visual perception, etc.. and is stronger and faster than a normal human or any mage.

    · High Voltage Lightnings

    · Flight

    · Electro-Perception

    · Enhaced Speed

    D Ranked Spells:

    C Ranked Spells:

    B Ranked Spells:



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    Post by Godlike Frederik 22nd April 2014, 5:38 am

    Breakdown Fist of the Thunder God

    Rank: D

    Type: Offensive

    Description: When utilizing this technique, the user gathers a large amount of lightning around one of their fists, bending their arm and then extending the fist forward in a punching motion. This prompts their magic seal to appear before them, from which an oversized version of their fist, completely composed of black lightning, is generated. There, the fist collects outside sources of lightning, similar to a lightning rod, which gathers upon the fist, which absorbs the lightning in order to accelerate its speed and enhance its power for a few moments, before the user launches it towards the target. When it connects with the enemy, aside from inflicting damage upon them, the electricity stuns them, leaving them open to the subsequent attacks of the user.
    (what is the range of this spell?)

    Strengths:

    · Stunning effect: Atfer this magic hits the enemy, it stuns them leaving them open for another attack.

    · Surprise factor: Enemies think that they will recieve a normal fist in the face, however, what they really recieve is a gigantic fist of black lightning.

    · C Ranked Damage in God Force: When the user is using this spell while in God Force, it deals C Ranked Damage.

    Weaknesses:

    · Incapability of breaking through Walls: It, strangely, cannot break through hard rock walls.

    · Easily blocked by Metal: Metal Mages can block it easily and backfire it at Victoria.

    · Useless in large range combat: If the opponent is too far away from Victoria, she cannot attack him.

    · Duration/Cooldown: Duration of 1 post, Cooldown of 3.





    Name: Black Fang of the Thunder God

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Description: The user channels a large amount of black lightning to their hand. The amount of lightning is so great that it becomes visible; appearing as a mass of black lightning that crackles violently in the user's hand; despite its chaotic appearance, it is actually rather concentrated and stable. There, the user punches forward with the lightning fist, unleashing tremendous damage while releasing the lightning as a powerful blast that has the potential to pierce through almost any and all defenses; this drilling effect is formed by the magical power spinning around the bolt of lightning at high speeds, giving it the appearance of a drill; and the user can form this technique on both of their hands.

    Strengths:

    · Useful in Melee Attack: This spell is possibly one of the only Close Range Spells that Victoria owns, which makes it useful in Melee fights.

    · Stunning effect: This spell, as all of the other spells, has a stunning effect on enemies.

    · Can pierce through almost every defense: Thanks to its power, this spell can pierce through almost every defense.

    Weaknesses:

    · Can become Unstable: If the user isn't trained, this spell can become unstable.
    (what happens if it become's unstable? Does this explode in your face? Or does it send your own electricity back through your body.)

    · Useless in Large Range: It's a melee attack: It's pretty useless in large range attacks.

    · Backfired by Metal: Metal, as an alliance of Lightning, is capable of taking it and backfiring it at the user.

    · Duration/Cooldown: Duration of 1 post, Cooldown of 3 Posts.




    Name: Heavenward Halberd of the Thunder God

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Description: The user raises both of their hands in the air at their sides; slowly, but surely generating and gathering electricity between their open, facing palms. This is rapidly shaped into the form of a massive spear composed of lightning, which the user proceeds to hurl at the enemy. When thrown, it produces a massive blast of lightning that spirals out from the epicenter of the point where the spear impacted. The powerful blast of voltage released by this technique upon impact can quickly reduce anything it touches except for its intended target to ashes, as it inflicts heavy damage upon the user's opponent, wreaking havoc for an extended radius

    Strengths:

    · Useful in Melee: This spell is useful in melee fights

    · Can Hit more than one enemy: When he massive blast of lightnings is released, it can hit more than one enemy.

    · Blind: The lightning can blind enemies

    Weaknesses:

    · Blind Allies: The lightnings can blind allies. (duration for the blindess as well as how mages that are higher ranked then you are affected by it.)

    · Attack Allies: The massive blast of lightnings can attack the allies of the caster.

    · Useless in Large Range: This spell cannot be used in large range.

    · Cooldown/Duration: Duration of 3 posts, Cooldown of 5




    Name: Shadow Dragon's Black Wrath

    Rank: C

    Type: Offensive

    Description: Victoria unleashes a black/purple, smoke-like miasma that radiates outward from her. The umbra immediately ages and rots anything that it comes into contact with. It can move fast enough to strike even the fastest of mages. This spell can even dissolve weak spells, while some top-tier defensive or barrier spells and/or seals can only be partially damaged or can even remain untouched.

    Strengths:

    · Can break through most of the Shields: Can break through shields of equal rank or lower, and can damage shields of higher rank.

    · Almost Impossible to dodge: Only mages with Speed Magic can dodge this spell.

    · Ages and Rots: This spell's special ability is to rot and age everything the user wants it to. If the enemy gets his flesh aged or rotten, it can deal him C Rank Damage.

    Weaknesses:

    · Cannot go through walls: This spell is incapable of going through walls, so enemies can hide in a house if they are enough fast to escape it first, that is.

    · No damage done to God and Demon Slayers of the same element: It cannot deal damage or rot any God or Demon slayer that uses Darkness. Nor can it hurt Shadow Dragon Slayers.

    · Weak against Light Magic: Light Mages can avoid and destroy this spell with ease.
    (how about light based/holy defenses? Can it break through them, or does it have a weakened effect.)

    · Duration/Cooldown: Duration of 2 posts and Cooldown of 5.


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    Post by Nero_ 22nd April 2014, 6:45 am

    Bump.


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    Post by Godlike Frederik 23rd April 2014, 6:55 am

    approved


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    Post by Guest 3rd May 2014, 12:45 am

    Moved so Victoria can insert her B-Rank spells (as requested by her)
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    Post by Nero_ 3rd May 2014, 4:34 am

    Bump, B Ranked spells added and ready for revision.


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    Post by Guest 3rd May 2014, 11:52 am

    For your first B-Ranked spell in the Thunder God category, convert the blindness (which is in seconds) to one post, because people can easily manipulate that factor. Additionally, the amount of lightning you gather needs a number/quantity, and more measurements are required for all of your B-Ranked spells (other than the Shadow Dragon Slayer spell (that's approved )). Also, be sure to edit your spells so they don't look like auto-hits (Example: Your first B-Rank Thunder God spell).

    Everything else is fine. Make these changes, then reply for a second review.
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    Post by Nero_ 4th May 2014, 8:44 am

    Bump, Requip Dude, all corrected.


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    Post by Guest 8th May 2014, 6:13 am

    With Nightmare of the Thunder God you haven't stated the maximum range for the first initial strike. As it stands, it seems as if you can hit anyone from anywhere XD If you could put a maximum distance of say, 100 metres or something of the like, that would be awesome. I'm assuming that it's the combined number of lightning bolts that deal the B-rank damage as well, so if that's the case then there's no issues there.

    In fact, all three of your B-rank spells lack a maximum range at the moment, so if you could put a range on each of them, that would be great.

    With Wrath of the thunder god you've put the blinding effect down in seconds. You'll need to change that to posts, as seconds don't really help.

    I think those are the only changes at the moment

    As for your Shadow Dragon spell, you've not yet finished the strengths. HOWEVER, I believe that, if you were a God Slayer from the start, you are unable to also have Dragon Slayer Lacrima, so you are likely to have to choose a new secondary magic as this appears to be the case.

    Sorry to be the bearer of bad news there. Bump when this is ready for review and feel free to check with an admin on the Shadow DS Lacrima thing in case I'm wrong.

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    Post by Nero_ 8th May 2014, 6:57 am

    Changes made, Legs. And thank you once again for telling me about the DS issue.


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    Post by Nero_ 10th May 2014, 10:35 am

    Bump, strengths of the B Ranked Shadow DS are updated, as long as everything else.


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    Post by Guest 11th May 2014, 2:40 am

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    Post by Guest 11th May 2014, 5:53 am

    Sorry about this but I have only just become informed of the decision in regards to the issue I mentioned above. It's been decided that God/Demon Slayers CANNOT use Dragon Slayer Lacrima as a Slayer. For that reason I have to revoke my approval.

    Please let me know when you've removed/replaced your secondary magic and I'll happily check it and approve it once again. Once again I'm sorry about this.
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    Post by Nero_ 11th May 2014, 7:56 am

    Shadow DS removed.


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    Post by Guest 11th May 2014, 1:09 pm

    Well everything looks to be in order now with the removal of the Shadow DS lacrima so yeah...

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    Post by Nero_ 13th June 2014, 10:27 am

    Mkays, Spells added and require correction.

    (Spells that require correction:

    D--Thunder God's Lightning Flower Trap; Repulsion Force of the Thunder God; Spark Bust of the Thunder God

    C- Lightning Whip of the Thunder God

    B- Bellow of the Thunder God )


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    Post by Guest 13th June 2014, 12:20 pm

    Hey there Izzy, it's me reviewing your magic again ;)

    All edits are in the specific spoilers in blue.

    Thunder God's Lightning Flower Trap:

    Repulsion Force of the Thunder God:

    Spark Burst of the Thunder God:


    Lightning Whip of the Thunder God:


    Bellow of the Thunder God:
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    Post by Nero_ 13th June 2014, 2:37 pm

    Aye. Changes made.


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    Post by Nero_ 17th July 2014, 5:50 am

    bumpity bump.


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    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Rising Star- Demon Slayer- Dragon Slayer- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 1- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Daughter of the Almighty
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    Posts : 1549
    Guild : Eclipse Soul
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    Mentor : Morgana (Demon Slayer) Jyuubei (Swordsmanship)
    Experience : 80,050

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    Post by Samus Aran 17th July 2014, 9:33 am

    All the changes previous mods have asked for have been made. This looks good in my eyes.

    Approved.


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