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    Light Orb magic

    Lilyan
    Lilyan

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    First Skill: Artificial Takeover: Angel Soul
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    Post by Lilyan 8th April 2014, 3:40 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Light Orb
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: This magic is activated threw the power of the Light Orb, and can be used by anyone plus not perfectly controlled. When the orb is activated, the user is transformed into a fairy, and gains many power with some attacks which he/she can use while in that form. This orb disappears when it is used to transform the user.
    Strengths:
    Stats: It has permanent abilities and makes the user more powerful even if it’s not magic attacks.
    Speed: It can activate quickly.
    Flying: As it turns into a fairy, it has wings letting her fly.
    Weaknesses:
    Holder: As it is a holder magic and it’s an orb which can’t do anything if it isn’t activated, if its stolen at the start of the battle, you’re basically doomed because it leaves you with nothing to do.
    Attack: This transformation, even if it’s powerful, it doesn’t provide many powerful attacks.
    Dark: many of the attacks can’t do anything against dark magic.
    Partner: As this magic is not that offensive, she really needs a partner to help her.
    Abilities/Powers:
    She gets 25% defense against light magic’s.
    Signature Move:
    D rank magics:
    C rank:


    Last edited by Lilyan on 12th July 2014, 2:07 pm; edited 6 times in total
    Lilyan
    Lilyan

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    Age : 26
    Experience : 175

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Artificial Takeover: Angel Soul
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Lilyan 10th April 2014, 3:26 pm

    :( can anybod like check this please
    Lilyan
    Lilyan

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    First Skill: Artificial Takeover: Angel Soul
    Second Skill: N/A
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    Post by Lilyan 15th April 2014, 7:57 am

    Any recomendations/corrections.


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    Lilyan
    Lilyan

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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Artificial Takeover: Angel Soul
    Second Skill: N/A
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    Post by Lilyan 20th April 2014, 7:13 am

    Nop?


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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 20th April 2014, 9:48 am

    Lilyan wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Light Orb
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: This magic is activated threw the power of the Light Orb, and can be used by anyone plus not perfectly controlled. When the orb is activated, the user is transformed into a fairy, and gains many power with some attacks which he/she can use while in that form. This orb disappears when it is used to transform the user.
    Strengths:
    Stats: It has permanent abilities and makes the user more powerful even if it’s not magic attacks.
    Speed: It can activate quickly.
    Hey there! Every magic requires at least 3 strengths and 1 extra weakness in the general description. So say I have 4 strengths, I'd need 5 weaknesses.
    Weaknesses:
    Holder: As it is a holder magic and it’s an orb which can’t do anything if it isn’t activated, if its stolen at the start of the battle, you’re basically doomed because it leaves you with nothing to do.
    Attack: This transformation, even if it’s powerful, it doesn’t provide many powerful attacks.
    Dark: many of the attacks can’t do anything against dark magic.
    I've already explained the weakness/strength thing ^^
    Abilities/Powers:
    She gets some defense against light magic’s. <--- How much defense? I'd say around 25%
    D rank magics:

    I'm so, so sorry this didn't get looked at for the longest of times! I truly am! Comments are in this colour. I might've missed some things, but for now, please make the changes and bump the thread once it's done~!


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    Post by Lilyan 22nd April 2014, 2:40 pm

    I think i corrected everything, and ill stay with the 1 meter saber :D.


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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 25th April 2014, 3:55 am

    Lilyan wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Light Orb
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: This magic is activated threw the power of the Light Orb, and can be used by anyone plus not perfectly controlled. When the orb is activated, the user is transformed into a fairy, and gains many power with some attacks which he/she can use while in that form. This orb disappears when it is used to transform the user.
    Strengths:
    Stats: It has permanent abilities and makes the user more powerful even if it’s not magic attacks.
    Speed: It can activate quickly.
    Flying: As it turns into a fairy, it has wings letting her fly.
    Weaknesses:
    Holder: As it is a holder magic and it’s an orb which can’t do anything if it isn’t activated, if its stolen at the start of the battle, you’re basically doomed because it leaves you with nothing to do.
    Attack: This transformation, even if it’s powerful, it doesn’t provide many powerful attacks.
    Dark: many of the attacks can’t do anything against dark magic.
    Partner: As this magic is not that offensive, she really needs a partner to help her.
    Abilities/Powers:
    She gets 25% defense against light magic’s.
    D rank magics:

    Right!  So, sorry this was late again!  As always, comments are in this colour.  Please bump once the changes are made!


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    Lilyan
    Lilyan

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    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
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    Posts : 269
    Guild : Rune Knights
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    Age : 26
    Experience : 175

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Artificial Takeover: Angel Soul
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Lilyan 25th April 2014, 7:05 pm

    Ready, bump :D


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    Lilyan
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    Post by Lilyan 28th April 2014, 1:45 pm

    Bump :D


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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 30th April 2014, 6:36 am

    Well, I'll approve this for the time being, since I'm really not too strict on the whole strength/weakness thing.

    So yeah.

    Nice job :3


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    Lilyan

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    Post by Lilyan 16th June 2014, 7:29 am

    I edited C rank magics


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    Post by Guest 16th June 2014, 7:42 am

    Hey there Lilyan =]

    Could you please decrease the healing powers of Light Pillar to C-rank please. As a C-rank spell it is not possible for it to heal B-rank damage.

    For Light of Prevention, could you state that it can block two C-rank spells or 1 B-rank and that, in the case of the latter (B-rank), the user would take 50% of the damage being dealt (essentially C-rank damage). This is because if a shield spell is hit with 2 C-ranks it will simply shatter as expected. If it's hit by a B-rank then that's a considerably powerful force that the shield is taking in one hit, thus recoil damage would take place from the shield being blown apart so ferociously.

    Please bump when these edits are made =] nice work so far.
    Lilyan
    Lilyan

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    Post by Lilyan 16th June 2014, 1:42 pm

    I think im done, so bumpy :D


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    Lilyan

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    Post by Lilyan 17th June 2014, 1:22 pm

    Bumpy?


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    Post by Guest 18th June 2014, 12:42 am

    I'll let that 10%MP ability pass as I can see where you're going with it.

    Thank you for making the edits and sorry for the slight delay on this.

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    Post by Sumdumguy 10th July 2014, 9:58 pm

    Unlocked for the addition of a signature spell.

    Pre-Approved here: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t8396-lilyan-s-signature-spell#114559
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    Post by Sumdumguy 12th July 2014, 2:22 pm

    Approved, moving back to approved section nao~

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