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    Lelouch's Shadow Abyssal Magic

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    Post by Guest 17th March 2014, 12:01 pm


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    Primary Magic: Shadow Abyssal Magic
    Secondary Magic: -
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This magic originated and got its power from another dimension known as the abyss. It mainly focuses around using shadows from the abyss for offensive, defensive, and supportive uses in combat. The caster is able to cloak part of their bodies in shadows from the abyss to attack an enemy, fire beams of abyssal shadows, and even avoid physical attacks by transforming their entire body into an abyssal shadow. Because this magic is capable of offensive, defensive, and supportive maneuvers, it is quite versatile.

    Strengths:
    - Help from darkness:
    Darkness helps to use the magic
    - Multi-uses:
    able to use the abyssal shadows for offensive and defensive as well as supportive spells
    -Control of shadows
    Can control shadows from the abyssal dimension.

    Weaknesses:
    - Weakness to light:
    this magic is extremely weak to light magic being consisted of abyssal shadows, the user takes a boosted 30% damage from higher ranked light spells and only 20% boosted damage from equal rank light spells.
    - Short durations:
    all spells this magic is have very short durations, meaning the spells don't last for very long.
    - weak against holy magic:
    because this particular magic originated from the unholy dimension of the abyss, the user takes an extra 40% damage from holy magic spells.
    -Negative personality defects:
    This magic can affect the user's personality in a negative way the more they use it. it will gradually cause the user to go insane because humans aren't meant to control shadows from the abyss.



    Abilities/Powers:


    • Night Vision:

    The user develops the ability to see better at night and in the dark than other people can normally.


    • Health by Abyss:

    By cloaking the user in shadows, One can step into the dimension that the shadows are summoned from, coming into contact with the dimension,  helps heal three physical injuries equal to the user's rank and reduces cool downs for spells by two posts. It has a cool down of 5 posts. this ability can only be used once per thread.


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    Post by TacticalFallacy 18th March 2014, 4:43 am

    LelouchoftheRebellion wrote:
    Lelouch's Shadow Abyssal Magic Geass_Symbol_by_Akazukinto

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    Primary Magic: Shadow Abyssal Magic
    Secondary Magic: -
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This magic originates and gets its power from another dimension known as the abyss. It mainly focuses around using shadows from the abyss for offensive, defensive, and supportive uses in combat. The caster is able to cloak part of their bodies in shadows from the abyss to attack an enemy, catch an enemy off guard by appearing behind them from the abyssal dimension it self, fire beams of abyssal shadows, and even avoid physical attacks by transforming their entire body into an abyssal shadow. Because this magic is capable of offensive, defensive, and supportive maneuvers, it is quite versatile.

    Strengths:
    - Help from darkness:
    Darkness helps to use the magic
    - Multi-uses:
    can pretty much do anything with this particular magic.
    -Control of shadows
    Can control shadows, living or not living.

    Weaknesses:
    - Weakness to light:
    Light magic will hurt, a lot. Extremely weak to it.
    - Short durations:
    all spells this magic is capable of, have very short durations.
    - weak against demon slayers:
    a shadow demon slayer could eat the shadows spells use and produce
    -Negative personality defects:
    This magic can affect the user's personality in a negative way the more they use it.



    Abilities/Powers:


    • Night Vision:

    The user is born with the ability to see better at night and in the dark than other people can normally.


    • Abyssal Boost:

    The user uses the abyssal shadows to increase their speed by 20%, allowing them to land attacks faster than normal.


    • Health by Abyss:   

    The user enters the abyss, coming into contact with the dimension, helps heal physical injuries and reduces cooldowns for spells. However, the user can only use this ability once every 4 posts. (First of all, this is bordering on rejection since it is healing, cooldown-reduction and since you 'enter the abyss', looks like a form of teleportation/protection. Abilities are only features of your magic that don't require exertion and doing this seems to be a little too much for such a criteria. Also, a lot of it is vague, like how much does it heal in terms of ranked injuries/severity of injuries (i.e how many injuries equal to your rank are healed with each usage), how much is the cooldown reduced(I don't allow this anyway for abilities unless there is a sizeable sacrifice.). Finally, the cooldown needs to be at least 5 posts and will be more depending on the power of the ability.)


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    Post by Nykyrian 20th May 2014, 11:20 pm

    LelouchoftheRebellion wrote:

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    Primary Magic: Shadow Abyssal Magic
    Secondary Magic: -
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This magic originates and gets its power from another dimension known as the abyss.Going to stop you right here for a second, all magic comes from inside the mage, Known as the bodies magic power. So this magic better not be coming from anywhere else. However you can say it originated ( past tense ), meaning a mage learned it from a Abyss. It mainly focuses around using shadows from the abyss for offensive, defensive, and supportive uses in combat. The caster is able to cloak part of their bodies in shadows from the abyss to attack an enemy, catch an enemy off guard by appearing behind them from the abyssal dimension it selfNope, nope nope nope. The only mages capable of dimensional handling are summoners, and requipping. You can not travel into the other dimension itsself. Furthermore, shadows are a different thing, as you pull them from the dimension with your magic. Kinda like summoning but not. Still no being will be allowed. Sorry., fire beams of abyssal shadows, and even avoid physical attacks by transforming their entire body into an abyssal shadow. Because this magic is capable of offensive, defensive, and supportive maneuvers, it is quite versatile.

    Strengths:
    - Help from darkness:
    Darkness helps to use the magicDoes this mean that it works better at Night than at Day?
    - Multi-uses:
    can pretty much do anything with this particular magic.I don't understand. Is this a make magic? or is this a shadow magic? Cause there is a difference. One controls shadows and manipulates them; already existing shadows( shadow magic ), and one is able to pull shadows from nowhere and form them into things ( make )
    -Control of shadows
    Can control shadows, living or not living.Umm i would think he would only be able to control his shadows. Like natsu is only able to control his flames.

    Weaknesses:
    - Weakness to light:
    Light magic will hurt, a lot. Extremely weak to it.give me a percentage of how much more it is effective, and what about Holy magic?

    - Short durations:
    all spells this magic is capable of, have very short durations.
    - weak against demon slayers:
    a shadow demon slayer could eat the shadows spells use and produceAnd God, and Dragon, perhaps at a higher rank the others wouldn't be able to eat it
    -Negative personality defects:
    This magic can affect the user's personality in a negative way the more they use it.I understand possession manipulating your personality, but why does this?


    Abilities/Powers:


    • Night Vision:

    The user is born with the ability to see better at night and in the dark than other people can normally.Born? Is he not human? Humans can develop these abilities along with thier magic, but they are not BORN with it.


    • Abyssal Boost:

    The user uses the abyssal shadows to increase their speed by 20%, allowing them to land attacks faster than normal.Hmmm explain this. Shadows have no force to them, like fire, or wind. Are you talking like shadow stepping? Once again, that would only be possible with YOUR shadows.


    • Health by Abyss:

    The user enters the abyss by teleportation, coming into contact with the dimension,  helps heal three physical injuries equal to the user's rank and reduces cool downs for spells by two posts. It has a cool down of 5 posts.refer to above about what i said about entering the dimension.


    D-Rank Spells:

    Go ahead and make those edits before i move onto your spells. ^^


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    Post by Guest 20th May 2014, 11:41 pm

    bump, also, im not getting rid of the health by abyss. There is nothing in the rules against it, so I'm keeping it. however, i made all the other edits to my magic reg.
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    Post by Nykyrian 21st May 2014, 9:02 am

    I didn't say get rid of it, but you need to think of a different way to do it. If i let you be able to step into another dimension whenever you feel like it.. that is really OP plus it is like having a totally different magic. If you can think of another way to use shadows to heal yourself, ( like light magic ) then great.


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    Post by Guest 21st May 2014, 3:29 pm

    there, i added that the ability can only be used once per thread, happy? (FYI: not giving you attitude, just so you know..)
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    Post by Nykyrian 27th May 2014, 1:01 pm

    LelouchoftheRebellion wrote:

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    Lelouch's Shadow Abyssal Magic Geass_Symbol_by_Akazukinto


    Primary Magic: Shadow Abyssal Magic
    Secondary Magic: -
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This magic originated and got its power from another dimension known as the abyss. It mainly focuses around using shadows from the abyss for offensive, defensive, and supportive uses in combat. The caster is able to cloak part of their bodies in shadows from the abyss to attack an enemy, fire beams of abyssal shadows, and even avoid physical attacks by transforming their entire body into an abyssal shadow. Because this magic is capable of offensive, defensive, and supportive maneuvers, it is quite versatile.

    Strengths:
    - Help from darkness:
    Darkness helps to use the magic
    - Multi-uses:
    able to use the abyssal shadows for offensive and defensive as well as supportive spells
    -Control of shadows
    Can control shadows from the abyssal dimension.

    Weaknesses:
    - Weakness to light:
    this magic is extremely weak to light magic being consisted of abyssal shadows, the user takes a boosted 30% damage from higher ranked light spells and only 20% boosted damage from equal rank light spells.
    - Short durations:
    all spells this magic is have very short durations, meaning the spells don't last for very long.
    - weak against holy magic:
    because this particular magic originated from the unholy dimension of the abyss, the user takes an extra 40% damage from holy magic spells.
    -Negative personality defects:
    This magic can affect the user's personality in a negative way the more they use it. it will gradually cause the user to go insane because humans aren't meant to control shadows from the abyss.



    Abilities/Powers:


    • Night Vision:

    The user develops the ability to see better at night and in the dark than other people can normally.


    • Health by Abyss:

    By cloaking the user in shadows, One can step into the dimension that the shadows are summoned from, coming into contact with the dimension,  helps heal three physical injuries equal to the user's rank and reduces cool downs for spells by two posts. It has a cool down of 5 posts. this ability can only be used once per thread.


    D-Rank Spells:


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    Post by Guest 27th May 2014, 3:55 pm

    bump- edited
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    Post by Nykyrian 27th May 2014, 10:56 pm

    Much better ^^ Approved, and i better not hear any complaints about that stepping into the dimension being over used!


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