Cloud-Make Magic

Magic

Primary Magic: Cloud-Make Magic
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
Cloud-Make Magic is a form of magic that allows the user to generate and mold clouds at will. It doesn't rely on any outside forces, but can be affected by them, specifically wind. Clouds are made out of water, and thus are of the water element. There are two types of makes, Dynamic and Static. Dynamic makes are makes that move as if they are living, such as a shark or snake. Static makes are, in all actuality, magic tools that they user creates such as a whip or halberd. The clouds can densify to form harder hitting spells. In order to understand the magic, you must accept the instability of life, as clouds come, go, and change all the time.

As a Cloud-Make mage, Cyrus did horrible when his father tried to teach him earth magic. Whereas an earth mage has a strong center, Cloud-Make mages must be open to sudden change. Therefor, Cyrus became more proficient in this magic when he became a nomad. He focused on Static makes due to the fact that they can be used for multiple purposes, but he did try dynamic makes. The sudden change of clouds gave Cyrus an unpredictable fighting style, yet his lack of stability leads to little defensive capabilities. Quickness, range, and surprise describe Cyrus's magic.

There is also a variation on Cloud-Make magic. The magic itself was created by the Venti. Known also as the four winds, or the Anemoi, they are led by Aquilo, the Cold Wind of the North, who is cool and cunning. There is also Auster, the wild man of the group, who is known as the Warm Wind of the South. Then there is Vulturnus, the Rough Wind of the East, who is harsh and unforgiving. Lastly there is the Gentle Wind of the West, Favonious, who is kind and, you guessed it, gentle. They gave Cyrus the power of Cloud-Make when he was thrown out, seeing as he had very little magic beforehand, but Cyrus was unaware of their presence. When a Cloud-Make mage becomes strong enough, they can talk to, and even tap into the powers of, the Venti. These "hi cloud-make spells are of the wind element instead of water, but hold the same weaknesses as the regular clouds. They are generally stronger spells, but are harder to maintain and are not always successful in their casting.

Innate Abilities:

• Cloud Maker: The user can craft any non combat item out of clouds, albeit for a fitting amount of MP.
  
  
• Cloud Maker's Resistance: Resistance to water and light magic, since clouds are made out of water and create shade.
  

  Percentages:

  
  
• Venti: Acting as a second, third, fourth, and even fifth set of eyes, ears, and wisdom, any true cloud maker has access to the Venti. They can communicate with the user telepathically, and can be used for surveillance as such. Their range of communication is as follows:
  

  Ranges:

Aura Type: (Locked until B rank)(Here put in a minor effect your Aura will Generate alongside the Default Aura Burst Effects, These Have to be related to your magic in some form, and cannot be heavily powerful. Also Scales with Rank)(Perks Can be found Here


Strengths:
- Since clouds are normally either fluffy or whispy, this magic has generally long range.
- Solid clouds for long range blunt force
- Unpredictability when attacking
- Hard to hit a person that moves like a cloud

Weaknesses:
- Despite it's range and solidifying abilities, spells are easily blocked.
- Wind blows away clouds, so this magic is weak to wind
- Requires the user's water, and thus they need to be hydrated
- Weak defenses
- Weak against lightning due to the fact that clouds are just condensed water

Lineage:

Aspect of Pluto:

Unique Abilities:
- Cumulonimburst: Allows the user to change the next spell into a lightning based spell, negating it's weaknesses to wind and lightning but changing wind's effects to earth and lightning's effects to metal. In order for a spell to be changed, Cyrus must use 1.5x the normal mana he has to use for the spell.

- Composite Body: Axil is able to change his body's composition to travel through large bodies of water. He can't go through things like puddles or creeks, but lakes, rivers, oceans, and seas are all viable pathways. He can only do this out of combat.

- Cloud Skills: Axil can similarly change his body's composition to travel in winds, as if he was made out of clouds. This too can only be done when outside of a combat situation.

- Water Sense: Axil's is sensitive to the presence of water. If there is moisture in the area, he wil naturally be able to sense it. If it's within 20 meters of him, he can pinpoint it. This sense extends to 50 meters, but outside of 20 meters

[spoiler="Signature Spell"]
Name: Cloud Make: Kuma Kumo
Rank: C
Type: Water, Supportive
Description: The user creates a cloud at their feet. They can use this to move around, even when using abilities that prevent movement. That is the main usage of it. Of course, it can be used for movement anywhere as well, but it's kind of pointless to be used in other ways.
Strengths:
- 25 ft Range
- Swift Casting
- The Swift Casting can catch opponents off guard
Weaknesses:
- Weak Damage
- Deals no damage to a wind shield and 1/5 damage to a lightning shield (in addition to normal resistances)
- Deals 1/2 damage to any other shield (in addition to normal resistances)
Lasts 2 posts, cooldown 2 posts

D Rank Spells:

C Rank Spells:

Axilmeus Steel wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Cloud-Make Magic
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
Cloud-Make Magic is a form of magic that allows the user to generate and mold clouds at will. It doesn't rely on any outside forces, but can be affected by them, specifically wind. Clouds are made out of water, and thus are of the water element. There are two types of makes, Dynamic and Static. Dynamic makes are makes that move as if they are living, such as a shark or snake. Static makes are, in all actuality, magic tools that they user creates such as a whip or halberd. The clouds can densify to form harder hitting spells. In order to understand the magic, you must accept the instability of life, as clouds come, go, and change all the time.

As a Cloud-Make mage, Cyrus did horrible when his father tried to teach him earth magic. Whereas an earth mage has a strong center, Cloud-Make mages must be open to sudden change. Therefor, Cyrus became more proficient in this magic when he became a nomad. He focused on Static makes due to the fact that they can be used for multiple purposes, but he did try dynamic makes. The sudden change of clouds gave Cyrus an unpredictable fighting style, yet his lack of stability leads to little defensive capabilities. Quickness, range, and surprise describe Cyrus's magic.

Strengths:
- Since clouds are normally either fluffy or whispy, this magic has generally long range.
- Solid clouds for long range blunt force
- Unpredictability when attacking
- Hard to hit a person that moves like a cloud

Weaknesses:
- Despite it's range and solidifying abilities, spells are easily blocked.
- Wind blows away clouds, so this magic is weak to wind
- Hard to maintain one spell for very long
- Weak defenses
- Weak against lightning due to the fact that clouds are just condensed water

Abilities/Powers:
- Cumulonimburst: Allows the user to change the next spell into a lightning based spell, negating it's weaknesses to wind and lightning but changing wind's effects to earth and lightning's effects to metal. (5 post cooldown, duration until end of next spell.)

- Resistance to water and light magic, since clouds are made out of water and create shade.  <--- Please specify your resistance to it.  You could make a table saying something along the lines of "At D-Rank, the user is 15% resistant to these elements from D-Rank spells, 5% from C-Rank spells, and has no resistance to rank above those.  At C-Rank, the user is 25% resistant to these elements from D-Rank spells, 15% from C-Rank, 5% from B-Rank, none from above those" etc...  Or, if you don't wanna go through all of that hassle, you can give yourself a general resistance which WILL stay the same at all ranks, but it will apply to every single ranked magic.  Should you desire to do the second one, I recommend giving yourself a 25% resistance.

D Rank Spells:

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Axilmeus Steel wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Cloud-Make Magic
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
Cloud-Make Magic is a form of magic that allows the user to generate and mold clouds at will. It doesn't rely on any outside forces, but can be affected by them, specifically wind. Clouds are made out of water, and thus are of the water element. There are two types of makes, Dynamic and Static. Dynamic makes are makes that move as if they are living, such as a shark or snake. Static makes are, in all actuality, magic tools that they user creates such as a whip or halberd. The clouds can densify to form harder hitting spells. In order to understand the magic, you must accept the instability of life, as clouds come, go, and change all the time.

As a Cloud-Make mage, Cyrus did horrible when his father tried to teach him earth magic. Whereas an earth mage has a strong center, Cloud-Make mages must be open to sudden change. Therefor, Cyrus became more proficient in this magic when he became a nomad. He focused on Static makes due to the fact that they can be used for multiple purposes, but he did try dynamic makes. The sudden change of clouds gave Cyrus an unpredictable fighting style, yet his lack of stability leads to little defensive capabilities. Quickness, range, and surprise describe Cyrus's magic.

Strengths:
- Since clouds are normally either fluffy or whispy, this magic has generally long range.
- Solid clouds for long range blunt force
- Unpredictability when attacking
- Hard to hit a person that moves like a cloud

Weaknesses:
- Despite it's range and solidifying abilities, spells are easily blocked.
- Wind blows away clouds, so this magic is weak to wind
- Hard to maintain one spell for very long
- Weak defenses
- Weak against lightning due to the fact that clouds are just condensed water

Abilities/Powers:
- Cumulonimburst: Allows the user to change the next spell into a lightning based spell, negating it's weaknesses to wind and lightning but changing wind's effects to earth and lightning's effects to metal. (5 post cooldown, duration until end of next spell.)

- Resistance to water and light magic, since clouds are made out of water and create shade.
 At D rank: 15% resistance to D rank spells, 5% resistance to C rank spells, no resistance to higher ranks
 At C rank: 25% resistance to D rank spells, 15% resistance to C rank spells, 5% resistance to B rank spells, no resistance to higher ranks
 At B rank: 35% resistance to D rank spells, 25% resistance to C rank spells, 15 % resistance to B rank spells, 5% resistance to A rank spells, no resistance to higher ranks
 At A rank: 45% resistance to D rank spells, 35% resistance to C rank spells, 25% resistance to B rank spells, 15% resistance to A rank spells, 5% resistance to S rank spells, no resistance to higher ranks
 At S rank: 50% resistance to D rank spells, 40% resistance to C rank spells, 30% resistance to B rank spells, 25% resistance to A rank Spells, 15% resistance to S rank spells, no resistance to higher ranks

D Rank Spells:

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