Nephalem Take Over

Bumb once again!

Self-Stat Buffs on Bloodlust, Purify, and Chaos have been removed.

Extra debuffs have been added to each.

Energy Trigger(Ability Number 4) has been replaced.

Full Body Take Overs have been upgraded to S ranks.

Helm of the White Angel and Crown of the Black Devil have been upgraded to A ranks.

2 Partial Take Overs under Nephalem have been added. S rank ones.

Everything else is left untoucehd.

ill look over this tonight

Okay. Also, I've added two more things.

One Partial Nephalem Take Over (A Rank)

And another Ability.

[quote="Decayuss"][center][blur]Primary Magic: Nephalem Take Over
Secondary Magic: Nephalem Sword Art
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Deniel is a Nephalem, a hybrid of a demon and an angel, and this primary magic is what he uses to unlock the true power of each of his origins. He is zero percent human, and the only parts he has is good and evil, light and dark, angel and demon. The Nephalem Take Over is a magic that is impossible to learn or mimic, the only reason Deniel knows it is because he IS a Nephalem. He doesn't turn into one. He is one.

His Black Devil Take Over specializes in dealing tons of damage, and taking tons of damage. His strength surpasses a lot of things even without his Take Over, and with it, there is almost nothing out there that is stronger than him. In addition to his physical strength, Deniel’s spells in this Take Over form are made specifically to dish out damage to either one or multiple targets. And the deadliest form of damage comes from his Bloodlust Stacks, a plague that Deniel spreads that can stack to deal fatal damage in an instant. And, the best offense is a good defense. Deniel’s hardened scales in his Black Devil form can make him resist spells of his own rank, and shrug them off like they were nothing. An one-man army and massacre, The Black Devil destroys anything that stands in its way.

Deniel’s White Angel Take Over is something that shouldn’t be underestimated, either. While being slightly weaker when it comes to the raw strength and durability The Black Devil has, and the massive damage caused by Bloodlust Stacks, but has plenty for its own. Instead, The White Angel focuses on shutting down single or multiple targets at a time with Silencing spells, and dealing damage with its twin blades. In addition, The White Angel is built for speed, so actually hitting him will be tricky, and he can take out some opponents before they even knew what hit them. Literally. Instead of Bloodlust stacks, the White Angel uses Purify on its foes, which ultimately drains them of their power. The White Angel is equipped with twin blades, and can cut down an entire forest in a matter of seconds. Whether facing one or many, The White Angel renders its opponents useless by taking away their magic, their strength, their speed, and anything else. The Lord giveth, and the lord taketh away.

And finally, The Nephalem. A creature that shouldn’t even exist. But because it does, everything is in danger. Deniel in his Nephalem form can easily be described as double the trouble. He benefits from everything in his Black Devil and White Angel Take Over forms, and in addition to those, he has some unique things of his own. These include Chaos Energy, the ability to create, and even the ability to mimic and copy. The Nephalem is even worse than the Black Devil and the White Angel combined.

Every form has its own weapon that Deniel uses to further boost its effectiveness. Armageddon, Vita and Mors, and Nidhogg.

Strengths:

• Deniel's stats will outclass his own rank in his Full Body Take Overs, and can even surpass ranks above him if he's given enough time.
  
• Deniel's Magic is very brutal when it comes to damage.
  
• Long Take Over durations, which will prevent stalling.
  

Weaknesses:

• Deniel's Take Over forms focus on dealing damage, and very little on helping his allies. In fact, he might unintentionally harm them.
  
• Deniel's Take Over forms might alter his friend or foe part of his mind.
  
• Deniel is vulnerable to Demon or God Slayer Magic.
  
• With long durations can come long Cool Downs.
  

Lineage: I really hate this one...

Avatar of Ilyria:

Unique Abilities: 1. Take Over Energy: Every time Deniel lands an attack, takes one, blocks one, or dodges one, he builds up one point of Take Over Energy. Once he reaches 10, Deniel can instantly refresh the cool down of ANY spell. Including a Full Body Take Over, or a spell in one. Once he uses it, it will take a post to start building up. If Deniel uses this option on a Full Body Take Over, it also refreshes the partials so he can use his Take Over right away again. Normal spells require much less Take Over Energy to refresh than Full Body Take Overs or spells in them. D rank spells need 1, C rank 2, B rank 4, A rank 8, S rank 10 and Full Bodies require the amount of partials rank combined. Ex: 4 B rank partials will take 16, and 1 A rank Full Body will take 8. Which means 24 stacks are needed.
scrap this to op or if you wana try to get it balanced only after 20 RECEIVED hits

2. Every spell in The Black Devil, White Angel, and Nephalem forms are made up of Unholy, Holy, and Chaos energies respectively, with Chaos being made up of both Holy and Unholy Energy at the same time. These energies are crimson red, sky blue, and dark purple. Each one behaves in very distinct ways depending on their spells. What's important is that these are not considered elements, and have no disadvantage towards elements what-so-ever, and it's impossible for slayers to consume them.
Scrap the chaos unholy and holy can never be togheter at the same time it’s a conflicting element

3. Stacks: The stacks below are Deniel’s bread and butter of his Take Overs. Not only his spells and deadly stats, but these can make his opponents cry for mercy with how strong they are.


Bloodlust: Bloodlust stacks are generated by different means from Deniel while in his Black Devil form. There are two different stacks: one for him and one for his opponent. Once a person receives a Bloodlust stack, that isn't Deniel, they get a little bomb. The bomb explodes on them after 5 posts of receiving the first stack. For every stack, they are dealt C rank damage, and this caps out at 6 stacks. So the maximum damage a person receives is AB damage. A person can't remove the stacks or block the bomb. The stat debuff lasts for 3 posts, and once Bloodlust has detonated, a person can be infected again. If Deniel reaches 10 stacks before the bomb is detonated, (the last four stacks won’t add bomb damage)then the person will be left vulnerable, and the next spell or attack Deniel himself pulls off on them will deal an additional 50% damage. This effect can only be activated for 3 posts within the bomb’s detonation time.

remove the second portion of the ability. the 10 stack thing is a bit to much and has to go. the first part ill allow but each stack does D rank damage and a max of 4 staks or aka 1 B rank spell.

Purify: Purify stacks are generated by different means from Deniel while in his White Angel form. For every stack, his opponents are drained for 5% of their speed and strength, and Deniel heals himself for .5% of his health every post for every stack, capping up to 5% according to rules. The duration is 5 posts, and if a new stack is gained, then the duration resets. 10 stack cap. If the person reaches all 10 stacks, then their next spell on Deniel will have its damage cut in half.

max of 5 stacks, reduce the 5% to 2%, and cut the last part of the 10 stacks out. the regen is fine.

Chaos: Chaos stacks are generated by different means from Deniel while in his Nephalem form. The duration for this is 5 posts, and if another stack is granted, then the duration resets. His opponents suffer both the debuffs from Bloodlust and Purify; losing stats, the bomb, the damage reduction, and the damage taken debuff. However, since this is meant to be more powerful, there is a bonus: in addition to the damage reduction, the person who receives 10 stacks of Chaos will also silence themselves for 3 posts after they have cast a spell, and will also leave themselves vulnerable to double the damage instead of 50% for Deniel’s next attack. This only lasts throughout the silence duration.

completly remove this its way to powerfull.



4. Nephalem Body: Deniel's body, and blood, is made up of a combiniation of a Demon and an Angel, and these are directly linked to the type of Magic Deniel is able to use. As a result, whenever Deniel gets hit by a Demon Slayer, God Slayer, or Light and Dark based attacks, he immediately regenerates 15% of his Magic Power. This does not negate the damage in any way, Deniel's body just converts some of the Energy used to some of his own Magic.

nope cut this out to. it doenst make sense your stil part demon so a demon slayer would still have an advantage over you. same goes for god slayer.

5. Heartless: When Deniel was young, his mentor Vergil ripped his heart out so that Deniel could not be killed there. Instead, Deniel’s blood that delivers the oxygen his body needs goes through an artificial heart beat that works through magic. Since Deniel lacks a heart, it is impossible for him to suffer fatal damage in that area. In other words: he can’t be killed by getting a stab in the chest.
remove it. has nothing to do with your magic.color]



6. Inspiring Aura: Deniel is the Guildmaster of Eclipse Soul. He is also quite a terrifying person. So now, Deniel has found a way to make sure he doesn't appear or seem to be as terrifying whenever he is in a Take Over. When Deniel gains a stat buff, any person with the Eclipse Soul Guild Mark that is within 100 meters of Deniel receive half of the stat bonuses Deniel has whenever he is in a Partial or Full Body Take Over.

take this out this is a guild spell not a passive


[spoiler="Forms"]

The Black Devil:

[spoiler="The White Angel"]

S Rank:

A Rank:

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Wings of the White Angel:

Body of the White Angel:

Legs of the White Angel:

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The Nephalem:

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ALSO

delete all the silence on th angel

and evry ability active and passive of the take over needs to be in a spell template with 3 strenghts and 4 weaknesses

I'm gonna' bump.

Here's a list of things I didn't do:

I did not "remove", "scrap", or "cut" anything. Anything I was told to do so has been nerfed instead. I changed the wording on Chaos so it makes sense, Inspiring Aura so it's not a Guild spell, Take Over Energy, etc.

I'm not reducing the damage on Bloodlust bomb, as the rules say that damage for Dots is 150% of the damage over the duration. And, the duration of the bomb and the number of Bloodlust stacks granted by each spell line up with the rules perfectly.

I'm not reducing the stats on the Full Body Take Overs, as it's in the rules 175% is allowed for S ranks.

The rules used to say that the damage for the spells in Take Overs have increases of 50% when they have 4 Partials if I'm not mistaken. If I am, I'll change it.

I'm not removing the rank reduction, since it makes no sense for something that's fire to have full damage on a demon, especially since that's usually where they thrive. Same for Angel and wind attacks.

I'm not removing the silences, but I am nerfing them to one post.

Something I'm kind of sensitive about is the "Heartless" ability. I've had that thing for a while now, it's been in my lore, and it's not really overpowered in any way. It's just the heart. But, overall, I don't want to remove it. I want that ability, I've had that ability, and even if it has nothing to do with my Magic, I still want it expressed in some way shape or form. Or else I would have to change my lore almost completely.

Everything else has been edited and nerfed.

Decayuss wrote:

Unique Abilities: 1. Take Over Energy: Every time Deniel lands an attack or takes one, he builds up one point of Take Over Energy. Once he reaches 10, Deniel can instantly refresh the cool down of ANY spell. Including a Full Body Take Over, or a spell in one. Once he uses it, it will take a post to start building up once again. If Deniel uses this option on a Full Body Take Over, it also refreshes the partials so he can use his Take Over right away again. Normal spells require much less Take Over Energy to refresh than Full Body Take Overs or spells in them. D rank spells need 1, C rank 2, B rank 4, A rank 8, S rank 10 and Full Bodies require the amount of partials rank combined. Ex: 4 B rank partials will take 16, and 1 S rank Full Body will take 10. Which means 26 stacks are needed.I will accept is people land 10 attacks of B-Rank or higher attacks. Anything below B-Rank does not cause much damage to you. The reason for only taking damage is because it would be too easy to gain the hits.


2. Every spell in The Black Devil, White Angel, and Nephalem forms are made up of Unholy, Holy, and Chaos energies respectively. These energies are crimson red, sky blue, and dark purple. Each one behaves in very distinct ways depending on their spells. What's important is that these are not considered elements, and have no disadvantage towards elements what-so-ever, and it's impossible for slayers to consume them. Chaos Energy is a unique form of matter, that occurs when Holy and Unholy Energy are combined: they are two opposing forces, so they do not blend together nicely, which is why it is called "Chaos Energy". It is highly destructive, as both forces are attempting to overpower each other even in the smallest form of Chaos Energy. It is a constant battle between good and evil, and Deniel can only use this energy simply because he has both in his Magic.Holy energy can be consumed by the white dragon slayer because white magic is considered a holy magic. Also the Unholy magic can be eaten by the Hell Demon Slayer


3. Stacks: The stacks below are Deniel’s bread and butter of his Take Overs. Not only his spells and deadly stats, but these can make his opponents cry for mercy with how strong they are.


Bloodlust: Bloodlust stacks are generated by different means from Deniel while in his Black Devil form. There are two different stacks: one for him and one for his opponent. Once a person receives a Bloodlust stack, that isn't Deniel, they get a little bomb. The bomb explodes on them after 5 posts of receiving the first stack. For every stack, they are dealt C rank damage, and this caps out at 6 stacks. So the maximum damage a person receives is AB damage. A person can't remove the stacks or block the bomb. The stat debuff lasts for 3 posts, and once Bloodlust has detonated, a person can be infected again. If Deniel reaches 10 stacks before the bomb is detonated, (the last four stacks won’t add bomb damage)then the person will be left vulnerable, and the next spell or attack Deniel himself hits them with will deal an additional 50% damage, with 25% for S rank, and none for H. This effect can only be activated for 3 posts within the bomb’s detonation time.

Purify: Purify stacks are generated by different means from Deniel while in his White Angel form. For every stack, his opponents are drained for 3% of their speed and strength, and Deniel heals himself for .5% of his health every post for every stack, capping up to 5% according to rules. The duration is 5 posts, and if a new stack is gained, then the duration resets. 10 stack cap. If the person reaches all 10 stacks, then their next spell on Deniel will have its damage cut in a fraction depending on the spells. H rank is unaffected, S rank is cut by 25%, A rank is 50%, B rank is 75%, and D and C rank are completely negated.

Chaos: Chaos stacks are generated by different means from Deniel while in his Nephalem form. The duration for this is 5 posts, and if another stack is granted, then the duration resets. His opponents suffer both the debuffs from Bloodlust and Purify; losing stats, the bomb, the damage reduction, and the damage taken debuff. But, since it would be overwhelmingly powerful if Deniel was able to apply 10 full stacks of debuffs, the debuffs are limited to 5 stacks. That means only 15% reduced stats, and AC damage. However, since this is meant to be more powerful in other ways, there is a bonus: in addition to the damage reduction, the person who receives 10 stacks of Chaos will also silence themselves for 1 post after they have cast a spell, and will also leave themselves vulnerable to double the damage instead of 50% for Deniel’s next attack. This only lasts throughout the silence duration.



4. Nephalem Body: Deniel's body is made up of both Demon and Angel, or only one of them depending on the Take Over he is in. Because of this, if Deniel is in a full body Take Over, he will absorb certain energies. This does not negate the damage in any way, but gives Deniel Magic Power. If he's in the Black Devil Full Body Take Over, he absorbs half of the Magic Power used to cast a demonic, unholy, or God Slayer spell that hits him. This includes Darkness. The more powerful the spell, the greater the Magic Power gained. If he is in the White Angel Full Body Take Over, the effect is the same, except applying with angelic, holy, or Demon Slayer spells. This includes Light spells.

5. Heartless: When Deniel was young, his mentor Vergil ripped his heart out so that Deniel could not be killed there. Instead, Deniel’s blood that delivers the oxygen his body needs goes through an artificial heart beat that works through magic. Since Deniel lacks a heart, it is impossible for him to suffer fatal damage in that area. In other words: he can’t be killed by getting a stab in the chest.

6. Inspiring Aura: Deniel has found one way to benefit his allies, after being able to hurt them with almost every single one of his spells. If Deniel is in a Partial or Full Body Take Over, anyone he chooses can share half of the stat bonuses that benefit him with in a 100 meter radius. Deniel can choose anyone, and can also cancel the buff they receive whenever he wishes.

Forms:

The White Angel:

Soul of the Black Devil:

Soul of the White Angel:

A-Rank looks good

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