Phoenix Magic | Onoro

Magic

Primary Magic: Phoenix Magic
Secondary Magic: -
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
This magic is told to have come from the Pheonix and the Phoenix people over 500 Years ago. A group of People that lived around Volcanic areas in the skies. They lived on clouds and  were able to use wings and such to fly, and move around at high speeds. Onoro specifically comes from the Royal bloodline of the people, told to be the sons the very last Phoenix that lived, and as a result, Onoro is the Royal Prince of these people that were unfortunately wiped out by the Dragons. These dragons dominated the Last Pheonix shortly after living in peace, and out of each others ways, but unfortunately the Dragons were just to greedy.

This Magic is not FIRE, but instead Aura/Energy. This magic has a very destructive force to it, and can incinerate almost any and everything in its path. Depending on the use, its color varies from red to pink. Red Energy in it's simplest form is pure magic given physical form and property similar to fire, while Pink would be colder, even below Zero if the user wishes. The mage has control over the density, heat, destructive nature and form of the red or pink energy. Using the energy to inflict blunt or sharp damage, make the energy cold below zero that can engulf the opponents and restrict them from moving (freezing) or of extreme temperatures that rival the sun, have the energy burn, crush, corrode or obliterate the target, and even mold constructs or entities. The user can also heal others with the magic.

Strengths:

• User cannot be harmed by own magic
  
• Healing Capabilities
  
• Freezing Capabilities
  
• Wide Range of offensive Use
  

Weaknesses:

• Water: Can Negate Burning Effects
  
• Fire: Can Negate Freezing Effect
  
• Very Destructive ( Dangerous to use around allies)
  
• Not Much Defensive Abilites to Use
  
• Can't use Magic to Heal Themselves
  

Abilities/Powers:

• Wings : Allows flight. User can summon them at any time, or make them disappear.
  
• 20/2 Vision : See things at long distances. As the user grows more tired, his vision will be affected progressively
  
• Thermal Resistance :  Onoro is able to survive at any temperature without discomfort, thriving in the center of a sun or below sub zero. This negates the long term effects of smoking, and this doesn't mean Onoro cannot be burned with Fire magic or any magic that burns, or frozen with Ice magic or any magic that freezes.
  

Slice (D Rank):

Small Destruction Blasts (D Rank):

Small Body Blast (D Rank):

Magic

Primary Magic: Phoenix Magic
Secondary Magic: -
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
This magic is told to have come from the Pheonix and the Phoenix people over 500 Years ago. A group of People that lived around Volcanic areas in the skies. They lived on clouds and were able to use wings and such to fly, and move around at high speeds. Onoro specifically comes from the Royal bloodline of the people, told to be the sons the very last Phoenix that lived, and as a result, Onoro is the Royal Prince of these people that were unfortunately wiped out by the Dragons. These dragons dominated the Last Pheonix shortly after living in peace, and out of each others ways, but unfortunately the Dragons were just to greedy.

This Magic is not FIRE, but instead Aura/Energy. This magic has a very destructive force to it, and can incinerate almost any and everything in its path. Depending on the use, its color varies from red to pink. Red Energy in it's simplest form is pure magic given physical form and property similar to fire. The mage has control over the density, heat, destructive nature and form of the red energy. Using the energy to inflict blunt or sharp damage, make the energy cold below zero or of extreme temperatures that rival the sun, have the energy burn, crush, corrode or obliterate the target, and even mold constructs or entities.
(So according to the color of aura/energy you will use it takes on the aspects of an element. So Red would be fire. While Blue would be the opposite of that. Please clarify in the description)

Strengths:

User cannot be harmed by own magic
Healing Capabilities
Freezing Capabilities (Explain in the description please)
Wide Range of offensive Use

Weaknesses:

Water: Can Negate Burning Effects
Fire: Can Negate Freezing Effect
Very Destructive ( Dangerous to use around allies)
Not Much Defensive Abilites to Use
Slayers of Fire Element Can Eat Fire Nature of this Magic


Abilities/Powers:

Wings : Allows flight. User can summon them at any time, or make them disappear.
20/2 Vision : See things at long distances. As the user grows more tired, his vision will be affected progressively
Regeneration : Onoro's MP Rises by 2.5% HP every post (No, as a mage you already have a standard mp regenerate ability. So this won't be necessary)
Thermal Resistance : Onoro is able to survive at any temperature without discomfort, thriving in the center of a sun or below sub zero. This negates the long term effects of smoking, and this doesn't mean Onoro cannot be burned with Fire magic or any magic that burns, or frozen with Ice magic or any magic that freezes.



Name: Slice
Rank: D
Type: Phoenix Energy [Offensive]
Description: Onoro slashes his hand and a diagonal slash of Phoenix energy that is 5 feet in length, 2 inches in width & will travel to the target at 5 meters per second, and can reach up to 20 feet away. When the slash hits it will cause a long slash that isn't deep, the slash also has a burning effect and will burn the opponent with 1st degree burns
Strengths:

Long Distance
Quick
Burning Effect

Weaknesses:

Water Negates Burning Effect
Doesn't Cause A lot of Damage
(per spell you need at least 3 strengths, and one more weakness then you will have strengths)

(Cooldown and duration. Ever spell has a duration, i figure it will be 1 post for this spell. Every spell needs a cooldown as well, that always need to be at least one post more then the duration. At D rank, spells always start with a 3 post cooldown.)



Name: Small Destruction Blasts
Rank: D
Type: Phoenix Energy
Description:[/b] Onoro will Gather the aura to his Hand/s. This will show a flash of Red Aura around his body and his hands will glow red. He aims his hand/s at an opponent/Target and shoots out 4 Aura blasts that will go up to 20 feet, and move at 5 Meters per second. Causing slight cuts and 1st degree burns.
Strengths:

Quick Attack
Multiple attacks
Quick Moving
Long Distance

Weaknesses:

High concentration
Water Magic
(per spell you need at least 3 strengths, and one more weakness then you will have strengths)

Duration/Cooldowns: 2 posts (cooldown and duration)

Name: Small Body Blast
Rank: D
Type: Phoenix Energy
Description: Emiko will ignite the Aura around his body, He will then center the Aura around his stomach and Shoot out a blast of Red Aura that would travel at 5 Meters per second and can only go up to 15 feet, causing bigger but weak bruises and slight cuts and burns.
Strengths:

Bigger attack/ wider range
Strong effect
Long Distance
Longer duration

Weaknesses:
[*]Water Magic
[*]High concentration
[*]Longer Cooldown
(just one more)
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Duration/Cooldowns: 3 posts (cooldown and duration)

Bump

well looks good, but you do know you can have at least 4 D rank spells right when you start out

I know, I just can't think of another xD

ok changes made then, approved