Lunar Frost

Luna Fennec wrote:Lunar Frost


Magic Name: Lunar Frost
Magic Type: Caster
Description: Luna grew up in a frozen fortress, where she learned Ice Make magic along with her sister. However, as the years went on, her sister grew I'll, eventually going into a comatose state, and being encased in an ice prism in order to preserve her life. Luna continued to learn, in the hopes of one day saving her sister, and when she came of age, she was sent to Capitol Crocus, to join the Rune Knights, but not before copying a page from a certain book of forbidden spells.


Unique Abilities: 

• Ability: 50% resistance to Ice magic. Please lower to 45%. Additionally, I'd like you to specify physical ice resistance or magical ice resistance.
  
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Solitary Benefit: +25% to cost reduction.
 
Spells:


Name: Ice Make: Arrows
Rank: C
Type: Burst
Damage: 60
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna holds up both hands, sending a torrent of ice shards flying towards her target.




Name: Ice Make: Aurora Borealis
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Burst
HP: 60
Range: 30
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna raises her hands high above her head, creating a shimmering wall of Ice and Light, which can absorb damage up to one C rank single target or burst spell before it dissipates. You can increase this to three C rank spells (180 HP).




Name: Ice Make: Cage
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 60
Range: 30 Can be increased to 120m.
Speed: 30 mps Can be increased to 120mps.
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna aims her open palm at her target, then slowly closes her fist, as a cage of Ice bars encloses them.




Name: Ice Make: Spear
Rank: C
Type: Burst
Damage: 4 Can be increased to 60HP.
Durability: 80
Range: 30
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna claps her hands together, and, as she pulls them apart, a Spear forms in the space between them. If you want this spell to allow you to use the spear to attack multiple people in one post, then I recommend you change this to multi-target. Then, each hit will be treated like a multi-target attack. Up to you.




Name: Ice Make: Fist
Rank: C
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60
Range: 30 Can be increased to 120m.
Speed: 30 mps Can be increased to 120mps.
Duration: Instant
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna focuses magic into her fist, and punches the air, in the direction of her target, creating a large fist of Ice near the target, which launches towards them.




Name: Ice Make: Dagger
Rank: C
Type: Burst
Damage: 4 Can be increased to 60HP.
Durability: 80
Range: 30
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna snaps her fingers, and a dagger appears in her hand. See Ice Make: Spear.




Name: Ice Make: Armor
Rank: C+
Type: Defensive, Single Target
Damage Reduction: 6 Your magic is not requip - as such, you should not have damage reduction.
Durability: 120 This can be increased to 270HP.
Range:  180
Speed: 180 mps
Duration: 6
Downside: does not cover tails, damage to tails done in full.
Description: Luna covers her face with her hand, then waves it over her frame, encasing herself in a suit of armor, made of Ice, with individual tail holes.




Name: Ice Make: Floor
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45 Can be increased to 68HP.
Range: 90 Can be increased to 135m.
Speed: 45 mps Can be increased to 100mps.
Duration: 6
Downside: can potentially effect allies negatively
Description: Luna kneels down, and places her hand on the floor, coating it in slippery Ice. How does this deal damage? Please go into more depth.




Name: Ice Make: Emblem
Rank: C
Type: Signature, Instant
Damage: 0
Range: 0
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: This spell is more of a morale booster, and not meant for combat.
Description: Luna slams her right fist into her left palm, and forms a small ice sculpture of the Rune Knights emblem.

Luna Fennec wrote:Lunar Frost


Magic Name: Lunar Frost
Magic Type: Caster
Description: Luna grew up in a frozen fortress, where she learned Ice Make magic along with her sister. However, as the years went on, her sister grew I'll, eventually going into a comatose state, and being encased in an ice prism in order to preserve her life. Luna continued to learn, in the hopes of one day saving her sister, and when she came of age, she was sent to Capitol Crocus, to join the Rune Knights, but not before copying a page from a certain book of forbidden spells.


Unique Abilities: 

• Ability: 45% resistance to Ice magic. Unfortunately, adding a bold and underline is not going to be enough. The words we use in our magic system exist in order to make things as clear as possible. Please use the actual term of "magical resistance", or "spell resistance".
  
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Solitary Benefit: +25% to cost reduction.
 
Spells:


Name: Ice Make: Arrows
Rank: C
Type: Burst
Damage: 60
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna holds up both hands, sending a torrent of ice shards flying towards her target.




Name: Ice Make: Aurora Borealis
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Burst
HP: 180
Range: 30
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna raises her hands high above her head, creating a shimmering wall of Ice and Light, which can absorb damage up to three C rank single target or burst spells before it dissipates.




Name: Ice Make: Cage
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna aims her open palm at her target, then slowly closes her fist, as a cage of Ice bars encloses them.




Name: Ice Make: Spear
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Durability: 80 Apologies for not noticing this the first time, but durability should not exist in a non-requip spell. Please remove this.
Range: 30 This may be increased to 90m.
Speed: 30 mps This may be increasde to 65 mps.
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna claps her hands together, and, as she pulls them apart, a Spear forms in the space between them.




Name: Ice Make: Fist
Rank: C
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: Instant
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna focuses magic into her fist, and punches the air, in the direction of her target, creating a large fist of Ice near the target, which launches towards them.




Name: Ice Make: Dagger
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Durability: 80 Please remove the durability.
Range: 30 This may be increased to 90m.
Speed: 30 mps This may be increased to 65mps.
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna snaps her fingers, and a dagger appears in her hand.




Name: Ice Make: Armor
Rank: C+
Type: Defensive, Single Target
Durability: 270
Range:  180
Speed: 180 mps
Duration: 6
Downside: does not cover tails, damage to tails done in full.
Description: Luna covers her face with her hand, then waves it over her frame, encasing herself in a suit of armor, made of Ice, with individual tail holes.




Name: Ice Make: Floor
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 68 Once again, I apologize immensely as I had misread this for a multi-target spell and given you the incorrect statistics. Please lower this to 45 HP.
Range: 135 Please lower to 90m.
Speed: 120 mps Please lower to 45mps.
Duration: 6
Downside: can potentially effect allies negatively
Description: Luna kneels down, and places her hand on the floor, causing a coat of Ice to spread from the point of contact, lowering the temperature around herself, and potentially causing damage to anyone who is unfortunate enough to not jump over the edge of the approaching coat of ice.




Name: Ice Make: Emblem
Rank: C
Type: Signature, Instant
Damage: 0
Range: 0
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: This spell is more of a morale booster, and not meant for combat.
Description: Luna slams her right fist into her left palm, and forms a small ice sculpture of the Rune Knights emblem.

Luna Fennec wrote:Lunar Frost


Magic Name: Lunar Frost
Magic Type: Caster
Description: Luna grew up in a frozen fortress, where she learned Ice Make magic along with her sister. However, as the years went on, her sister grew I'll, eventually going into a comatose state, and being encased in an ice prism in order to preserve her life. Luna continued to learn, in the hopes of one day saving her sister, and when she came of age, she was sent to Capitol Crocus, to join the Rune Knights, but not before copying a page from a certain book of forbidden spells.


Unique Abilities: 

• Ability: +45% to Ice magic resistance
  
• Ability:
  
• Ability:
  

Solitary Benefit: +25% to cost reduction.
 
Spells:


Name: Ice Make: Arrows
Rank: C
Type: Burst
Damage: 60
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna holds up both hands, sending a torrent of ice shards flying towards her target.




Name: Ice Make: Aurora Borealis
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Burst
HP: 180
Range: 30
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna raises her hands high above her head, creating a shimmering wall of Ice and Light, which can absorb damage up to three C rank single target or burst spells before it dissipates.




Name: Ice Make: Cage
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna aims her open palm at her target, then slowly closes her fist, as a cage of Ice bars encloses them.




Name: Ice Make: Spear
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 65 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna claps her hands together, and, as she pulls them apart, a Spear forms in the space between them.




Name: Ice Make: Fist
Rank: C
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: Instant
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna focuses magic into her fist, and punches the air, in the direction of her target, creating a large fist of Ice near the target, which launches towards them.




Name: Ice Make: Dagger
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 65 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna snaps her fingers, and a dagger appears in her hand.




Name: Ice Make: Armor
Rank: C+
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 270
Range:  180
Speed: 180 mps
Duration: 6
Downside: does not cover tails, damage to tails done in full.
Description: Luna covers her face with her hand, then waves it over her frame, encasing herself in a suit of armor, made of Ice, with individual tail holes. This armor can absorb up to 270 damage.




Name: Ice Make: Floor
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 6
Downside: can potentially effect allies negatively
Description: Luna kneels down, and places her hand on the floor, causing a coat of Ice to spread from the point of contact, lowering the temperature around herself, and potentially causing damage to anyone who is unfortunate enough to not jump over the edge of the approaching coat of ice.




Name: Ice Make: Emblem
Rank: C
Type: Signature, Instant
Damage: 0
Range: 0
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: This spell is more of a morale booster, and not meant for combat.
Description: Luna slams her right fist into her left palm, and forms a small ice sculpture of the Rune Knights emblem.

Luna Fennec wrote:Lunar Frost


Magic Name: Lunar Frost
Magic Type: Caster
Description: Luna grew up in a frozen fortress, where she learned Ice Make magic along with her sister. However, as the years went on, her sister grew I'll, eventually going into a comatose state, and being encased in an ice prism in order to preserve her life. Luna continued to learn, in the hopes of one day saving her sister, and when she came of age, she was sent to Capitol Crocus, to join the Rune Knights, but not before copying a page from a certain book of forbidden spells.


Unique Abilities: 

• Ability: +45% to Ice magic resistance
  
• Ability:
  
• Ability:
  

Solitary Benefit: +25% to cost reduction.
 
Spells:


Name: Ice Make: Arrows
Rank: C
Type: Burst
Damage: 60
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna holds up both hands, sending a torrent of ice shards flying towards her target.




Name: Ice Make: Aurora Borealis
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Burst
HP: 180
Range: 30
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna raises her hands high above her head, creating a shimmering wall of Ice and Light, which can absorb damage up to three C rank single target or burst spells before it dissipates.




Name: Ice Make: Cage
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna aims her open palm at her target, then slowly closes her fist, as a cage of Ice bars encloses them.




Name: Ice Make: Spear
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 65 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna claps her hands together, and, as she pulls them apart, a Spear forms in the space between them.




Name: Ice Make: Fist
Rank: C
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: Instant
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna focuses magic into her fist, and punches the air, in the direction of her target, creating a large fist of Ice near the target, which launches towards them.




Name: Ice Make: Dagger
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 65 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna snaps her fingers, and a dagger appears in her hand.




Name: Ice Make: Armor
Rank: C+
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 270
Range:  180
Speed: 180 mps
Duration: 6
Downside: does not cover tails, damage to tails done in full.
Description: Luna covers her face with her hand, then waves it over her frame, encasing herself in a suit of armor, made of Ice, with individual tail holes. This armor can absorb up to 270 damage.




Name: Ice Make: Floor
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 6
Downside: can potentially effect allies negatively
Description: Luna kneels down, and places her hand on the floor, causing a coat of Ice to spread from the point of contact, lowering the temperature around herself, and potentially causing damage to anyone who is unfortunate enough to not jump over the edge of the approaching coat of ice.




Name: Ice Make: Emblem
Rank: C
Type: Signature, Instant
Damage: 0
Range: 0
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: This spell is more of a morale booster, and not meant for combat.
Description: Luna slams her right fist into her left palm, and forms a small ice sculpture of the Rune Knights emblem.

Luna Fennec wrote:Lunar Frost


Magic Name: Lunar Frost
Magic Type: Caster
Description: Luna grew up in a frozen fortress, where she learned Ice Make magic along with her sister. However, as the years went on, her sister grew I'll, eventually going into a comatose state, and being encased in an ice prism in order to preserve her life. Luna continued to learn, in the hopes of one day saving her sister, and when she came of age, she was sent to Capitol Crocus, to join the Rune Knights, but not before copying a page from a certain book of forbidden spells.


Unique Abilities: 

• Ability: +45% to Ice magic resistance
  
• Ability:
  
• Ability:
  

Solitary Benefit: +25% to cost reduction.
 
Spells:


Name: Ice Make: Arrows
Rank: C
Type: Burst
Damage: 60
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna holds up both hands, sending a torrent of ice shards flying towards her target.




Name: Ice Make: Aurora Borealis
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Burst
HP: 180
Range: 30
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna raises her hands high above her head, creating a shimmering wall of Ice and Light, which can absorb damage up to three C rank single target or burst spells before it dissipates.




Name: Ice Make: Cage
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna aims her open palm at her target, then slowly closes her fist, as a cage of Ice bars encloses them.




Name: Ice Make: Spear
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 65 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna claps her hands together, and, as she pulls them apart, a Spear forms in the space between them.




Name: Ice Make: Fist
Rank: C
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: Instant
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna focuses magic into her fist, and punches the air, in the direction of her target, creating a large fist of Ice near the target, which launches towards them.




Name: Ice Make: Dagger
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 65 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: n/a
Description: Luna snaps her fingers, and a dagger appears in her hand.




Name: Ice Make: Armor
Rank: C+
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 270
Range:  180
Speed: 180 mps
Duration: 6
Downside: does not cover tails, damage to tails done in full.
Description: Luna covers her face with her hand, then waves it over her frame, encasing herself in a suit of armor, made of Ice, with individual tail holes. This armor can absorb up to 270 damage.




Name: Ice Make: Floor
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 6
Downside: can potentially effect allies negatively
Description: Luna kneels down, and places her hand on the floor, causing a coat of Ice to spread from the point of contact, lowering the temperature around herself, and potentially causing damage to anyone who is unfortunate enough to not jump over the edge of the approaching coat of ice.




Name: Ice Make: Emblem
Rank: C
Type: Signature, Instant
Damage: 0
Range: 0
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5
Downside: This spell is more of a morale booster, and not meant for combat.
Description: Luna slams her right fist into her left palm, and forms a small ice sculpture of the Rune Knights emblem.

Lumine Fennec wrote:Lunar Frost

Magic Name: Lunar Frost
Magic Type: Caster
Description: Luna grew up in a frozen fortress, where she learned Ice Make magic along with her sister. However, as the years went on, her sister grew I'll, eventually going into a comatose state, and being encased in an ice prism in order to preserve her life. Luna continued to learn, in the hopes of one day saving her sister, and when she came of age, she was sent to Capitol Crocus, to join the Rune Knights, but not before copying a page from a certain book of forbidden spells. Her sister, Lumine, now uses this same magic as a way to honor her.

(Missing the second paragraph detailing how your character uses this magic)

Unique Abilities: 

• Ability: +45% to Ice magic resistance (Damage resistance is no longer a stat that can be freely buffed or debuffed as per updated Magic Rules. Please rework this into an applicable buff or another mechanic)
  
• Ability:
  
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Solitary Benefit: +25% to cost reduction.
 
Spells:

Name: Ice Make: Arrows
Rank: C
Type: Burst
Damage: 60
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: n/a
Description: Lumine holds up both hands, sending a torrent of ice shards flying towards her target.

Name: Ice Make: Aurora Borealis
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Burst
HP: 180
Range: 30
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: n/a
Description: Lumine raises her hands high above her head, creating a shimmering wall of Ice and Light, which can absorb damage up to three C rank single target or burst spells before it dissipates.

Name: Ice Make: Cage
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: n/a
Description: Lumine aims her open palm at her target, then slowly closes her fist, as a cage of Ice bars encloses them. (This is an auto-hit, as it does not allow a target to dodge the spell and its effects at all. I must ask you to not only include that this spell originates with the user before travelling the distance to its target in the form of a projectile of some kind, but also that this aforementioned change must allow the target of this spell to dodge its effects)

Name: Ice Make: Spear
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 65 mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: n/a
Description: Lumine claps her hands together, and, as she pulls them apart, a Spear forms in the space between them. (This spell does not detail how it is used to attack at all, which I must ask you to add. Further, as this is a Multi Target spell, I must also ask you to add that a maximum of 5 spears may be created in any given post this spell is active)

Name: Ice Make: Fist
Rank: C
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60
Range: 120
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 1 post
Downside: n/a
Description: Lumine focuses magic into her fist, and punches the air, in the direction of her target, creating a large fist of Ice near the target, which launches towards them.

Name: Ice Make: Dagger
Rank: C
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 65 mps
Duration: 5 posts
Downside: n/a
Description: Lumine snaps her fingers, and a dagger appears in her hand. (This spell does not detail how it is used to attack at all, which I must ask you to add. Further, as this is a Multi Target spell, I must also ask you to add that a maximum of 5 spears may be created in any given post this spell is active)

Name: Ice Make: Armor
Rank: C+
Type: Defensive, Single Target
HP: 270
Range:  180
Speed: 180 mps
Duration: 6 posts
Downside: does not cover tails, damage to tails done in full.
Description: Lumine covers her face with her hand, then waves it over her frame, encasing herself in a suit of armor, made of Ice, with individual tail holes. This armor can absorb up to 270 damage.

Name: Ice Make: Floor
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45
Range: 90
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 6 posts
Downside: can potentially effect allies negatively
Description: Lumine kneels down, and places her hand on the floor, causing a coat of Ice to spread from the point of contact, lowering the temperature around herself, and potentially causing damage to anyone who is unfortunate enough to not jump over the edge of the approaching coat of ice.

Name: Ice Make: Emblem
Rank: C
Type: Signature
Damage: 0
Range: 0
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 post
Downside: This spell is more of a morale booster, and not meant for combat.
Description: Lumine slams her right fist into her left palm, and forms a small ice sculpture of the Rune Knights emblem. (Does this spell have any other effect or is it cosmetic only? Just clarifying)