Requiem's Dance Takeover

• Please update your template to follow the Take Over Spell Template Guidelines. It aids in grading, and saves time. You can keep your passives as they are, but every active ability within your takeovers must follow the template as well. I have gone ahead and graded the Takeovers themselves, and the associated Passives, I will grade the actives after this change.
  
• A Mechanic to empower your magic with a UA and give extra effects is not allowed, for many reason I stated below. I have however said it here as well because you will have to remove all the the associated effects in your Full Takeovers.
  
• almost all of your Full Takeovers, and a few of your other spells have HP, or Requip mechanics. Please be sure to clarify what you mean, and if you have requips in the magic, it can not be solitary.
  
• Note, Quite a few of your spells needed futher clarification before I could grade them. Keep in mind Partial and Full Takeovers are different, and their numbers change as such it is crucial you explicitly state what kind it is.
  

Jeanette wrote:

Requiem's Dance Takeover




Magic Type:
Takeover Solitary

Description:
Jeanette is a girl who has 2 different sides to her. One, her good side, and the other, her bad. However, with her takeovers, she gains completely new forms. The way this takeover works, is that she takes souls of powerful female mages from the past and transforms into a representation of their magical ability. This can include her becoming a humanoid water elemental from the spirit of a water mage. However, she doesn't completely copy their magic, she puts a twist on it. She adds the flare of dance into these spells. There are instances where these takeover's don't have abilities that relate to dance, but she can adapt those abilities and weave them into a form of dances.

Unique Abilities:

Dancer's Flare  
Every single time Jeanette uses a full takeover, she gains a stack of dancer's flare. What this means is, she gains a different type of energy source almost like mana, but completely different. She can have up to 3 of these stacks, with each one buffing her speed by 25% for each one(capping at user rank buff cap). She can spend one of these stacks whenever she wants as long as she is in a full takeover form, to use an enhanced version of one of the full takeover's ability. This is a mechanic that has been looked at before, and deemed unallowed. You can not use a UA to give every spell addition Effects, and stronger mechanics, as that would break balance. Also, it would go over cap for allowed effects.

Dancer's Touch  
With this unique ability, every time Jeanette attacks this will have to be damages an enemy. an enemy with an attack within max user rank burst range, she marks them with a stack of dancer's touch. What this means is, that a beautiful heart emblem is placed where the most impact of the spell hit. She can clench her fist, and teleports behind them(as long as they are within max burst range) and then deal 25% of user rank spell damage. This can only be done to an enemy every 3 posts.Current this acts like an auto hit, please modify the teleport and mechanic to be such that it does not auto hit.

Jeanette wrote:

Solar Samba Soul

Full Takeover:

Nova Grasp:

Nuclear Explosives:

Volcanic Ember:

Jeanette wrote:

Water Waltz Takeover

Full Takeover:

The Blade of Grace:

The Enchanted Pool:

The Unwavering Body:

Jeanette wrote:

Star Pirouette Soul

Full Takeover:

Constellation's Bow:

Comet's Streaks:

Mark of the Moon Goddess:

ANY POST BELOW THIS IS NOT ATTACHED TO THE MAGIC. IT IS JUST USED AS A RESERVE FOR LATER SPELLS
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Jeanette wrote:

Signature Spells and Passives

Star Gloves:

Cosmic Edge:

Cosmic Plating:

Jeanette wrote:

Signature Spells and Passives

Star Gloves:

Cosmic Edge:

Cosmic Plating:

Jeanette wrote:

Requiem's Dance Takeover




Magic Type:
Takeover Solitary

Description:
Jeanette is a girl who has 2 different sides to her. One, her good side, and the other, her bad. However, with her takeovers, she gains completely new forms. The way this takeover works, is that she takes souls of powerful female mages from the past and transforms into a representation of their magical ability. This can include her becoming a humanoid water elemental from the spirit of a water mage. However, she doesn't completely copy their magic, she puts a twist on it. She adds the flare of dance into these spells. There are instances where these takeover's don't have abilities that relate to dance, but she can adapt those abilities and weave them into a form of dances.

Unique Abilities:

Dancer's Wings  
Every single time Jeanette uses a full takeover, she gains a stack of dancer's flare. What this means is, she gains a different type of energy source almost like mana, but completely different. She can have up to 3 of these stacks, with each one buffing her speed by 25% for each one(capping at user rank buff cap). At three stacks, she can use those up(losing the speed buff gained from them) to create wings for herself, that match whatever takeover form she is in, if she is in any. This gives her a 50% speed buff, and allows her to dash in the air once per post for max burst range at max burst speed. These wings lasts for the max user rank duration.

Dancer's Touch  
With this unique ability, every time Jeanette attacks(Still needs to be damages an enemy, not just attacks as an attack can miss) an enemy with an attack within max user rank burst range, she marks them with a stack of dancer's touch. What this means is, that a beautiful heart emblem is placed where the most impact of the spell hit. She can clench her fist, and teleports behind them(as long as they are within max burst range) and then strike at them with her fist from behind to deal 25% of user rank spell damage. This can only be done to an enemy every 3 posts.

Jeanette wrote:

Solar Samba Soul

Full Takeover:

Nova Grasp:

Nuclear Explosives:

Volcanic Ember:

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Jeanette wrote:

Water Waltz Takeover

Full Takeover:

The Blade of Grace:

The Enchanted Pool:

The Unwavering Body:

Jeanette wrote:

Star Pirouette Soul

Full Takeover:

Constellation's Bow:

Comet's Streaks:

Mark of the Moon Goddess:

ANY POST BELOW THIS IS NOT ATTACHED TO THE MAGIC. IT IS JUST USED AS A RESERVE FOR LATER SPELLS
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Jeanette wrote:

Signature Spells and Passives

Star Gloves:

Cosmic Edge:

Cosmic Plating:

Jeanette wrote:

Signature Spells and Passives

Star Gloves:

Cosmic Edge:

Cosmic Plating: