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    Torrent God Slayer

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    Completed Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Guest 30th July 2018, 4:54 am

    Magic

    Magic Name: Torrent God Slayer

    Magic Type: Slayer

    Description: Torrent God Slayer is a form of slayer magic that allows the user to gain complete control over the element of water. Rather than simply being taught by the water goddess, Valara, Sarisha instead bonded with her, fusing their minds, bodies and souls together by way of a ritual. This form of water magic lacks the supportive nature of other water based magic's and instead focuses on the offensive, destructive side that is often underestimated. The soul purpose of the magic is the destruction of those who stand in the way of the user and in order to be used effectively, the mage must take on that same state of mind, as well as to embrace the thrills and immerse in the pleasure that comes from causing harm and ending lives.

    With this magic, Sarisha is able to consume almost any other form of water in order to increase her power and is as comfortable in water as she is in air, being able to remain in the former for as long as she likes. She can enhance her physical abilities, unleash a barrage of destructive attacks and is even known to occasionally drain the life out of another being in order to boost her reserves from time to time.

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    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Godly Partnership: As the bond between Sarisha and her Godly partner has developed, so has their might, granting the mage a passive 55% damage increase to her spells.
    • Ability: Valara's Kiss: When an enemy falls to 10% HP or less, Sarisha is able to drain the water from their body in order to replenish 5% of her HP and 5% of her magic power, killing the opponent. This ability lasts a single post, with a range and speed of 75M/S.  (Requires player consent in PVP)



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    Last edited by Sarisha Huxx on 20th April 2019, 12:01 pm; edited 90 times in total
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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Lester Drynedi 4th August 2018, 2:51 am

    Hey there Lester here, just one change!

    Torrent gods passion:
    Sarisha surrounds her body with a powerful rush of water, increasing her physical strength and speed both by 20% for the duration. Each successful physical attack increases this by a further 5%.

    Buffs can only go up to 50% total for D rank, so you'll either need to say that the 5% increase caps at the second physical attack, or remove it
    I would suggest just removing it and putting the two buffs up to 25% each, if you wanted to add something else in there you could put a defence spell in that protected for one or two D rank damage (40-80)


    Once you've made the changes just reply to this thread with a 'bump' and feel free to ask any questions~


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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Guest 4th August 2018, 3:05 am

    I edited the skill in the way you suggested. To be honest, I do want to try and keep things as simple as I can because I'll just confuse myself if I don't. :D

    I changed my fourth spell just before you posted to this. I just wanted to make you aware of that in case you graded her old one instead of the new. :)

    I'd like for her to have the ability to be able to breathe underwater for as long as she likes. Does that need to be a UA or can it just be a plot perk kind of thing?

    Any other advice would be appreciated. I seriously struggle with this. :)

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Lester Drynedi 4th August 2018, 3:21 am

    For the breathing underwater you can just add it into another ability, like
    Ability: Water's Grace: By fusing with Valara, Sarisha has gained a portion of the Goddess's natural speed, granting her a 40% increase and the ability to breath underwater.

    The fourth spell is all good, thanks for the heads up!

    With magic I suggest to just get started with roleplaying, its not bad to spend time on magic but once you do a couple of combat jobs you'll figure out what spells you use, don't use and need. You can always go back and edit lower ranked spells later on.

    A couple of things you can keep in mind for when you add more spells: a teleport is really useful especially as a signature spell since you can use it once per post. if you get stuck for spells go down the list, defense, heal, teleport, damage over time, buff. Also don't think that they have to follow a certain rule or be serious, with slayer you don't have to do "torrant gods X" but if you want to thats fine as well, be creative if you have an idea and you don't know how to fit it within the rules feel free to send me a message!


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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Guest 4th August 2018, 4:20 am

    OK, I added the underwater part to Water's Grace.

    I did feel a little intimidated when I first looked at the magic system if I'm truthful. It's not something that I'm used to and far more complicated than other sites that I've written on over the years. Most of them weren't anime based and you were just given a list of skills to choose from at each rank. I guess I'm just not used to having complete freedom over my characters powers and will get used to it as time goes by. I think it's a confidence thing more than anything else.

    I'd love to delve a bit more in to the "Water Vampire" idea that I've started with her Valara's Kiss UA. It's something a little different from other water magic's that I've seen and it would suit Sarisha's personality so well. I'm just a bit worried that it might push the PG13 rating though so perhaps not.

    Thank you for the advice. I will definitely use the list method when coming up with new spells and I reckon that I could use a "Water Body" kind of deal for a teleport perhaps. Maybe she turns in to water and reappears somewhere else?

    Anyway, I've gone way off track here. What I meant to say was....

    Bump.
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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Lester Drynedi 4th August 2018, 4:35 am


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    Don't stress too much, I remember what it was like when I came here, it can be overwhelming but just take your time, there is a lot of freedom here, really you can do just about anything and fit it into the rules.

    With the pg 13 you can kill, vampires suck blood you'll be able to do that. Just don't get too descriptive with the sexual side of it, feel free to send me a message on discord if you have any further questions (Katrina~ #0253)

    Teleporting through water would work well, could evaporate or turn into a puddle.


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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Fluffy 18th August 2018, 3:31 pm

    Unlocked and moved at user request,

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Guest 21st August 2018, 2:13 pm

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by 88 6th September 2018, 3:18 am

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Lilium 8th September 2018, 3:12 pm

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 23rd September 2018, 7:16 am

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 26th September 2018, 2:29 am

    Hello Sarisha, everything looking good so far, just a minor thing.
    - Torrent God's Healing Current: The maximum a D rank single target healing spell can heal is 1xD rank (40) HP. Please adjust this spell accordingly and you'll be all good to go. When you have done so give me a bump

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Guest 26th September 2018, 8:34 am

    All done. Bump.
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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 26th September 2018, 8:37 am

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 24th March 2019, 4:55 am

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 25th March 2019, 12:08 am

    Hey Sarisha, Joh here to grade your magic. Looking good, almost ready for approval, just need you to change your magic type from "Caster" to "Slayer" since this is a solitary slayer magic.


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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Guest 25th March 2019, 3:02 am

    Ok, all done. :)
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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 25th March 2019, 3:03 am

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 17th April 2019, 6:10 am

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 20th April 2019, 4:38 am

    Hey there, Nessa here, so it looks like I'll be grading this for you. All my edits will be done in this colour! Once you've made the edits bump the thread and I'll take a look.

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Guest 20th April 2019, 5:31 am

    Ok, I think I've edited everything that was needed although I was a little confused about what rank stats I was supposed to use for my second UA. I've based it on a rank A burst but I'll gladly change it if it's wrong. It's normally just a finisher that she uses on a target that she's taken a liking too in truth.

    I also boosted the passive of my first UA by five percent, as I forgot to do it when updating.

    Anyway, bump. :)
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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 20th April 2019, 11:31 am

    So to explain, ALL abilities the regenerate magic or health cap each at 5% per spell or ability regardless of rank. One more small tweak and it should be ready to go.

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    Post by Guest 20th April 2019, 12:14 pm

    Ah OK, thanks for clearing that up for me.

    I made the tweak that was needed and added a post extra to the durations to Wave and Claw because of the effects.
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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 20th April 2019, 2:01 pm

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    Completed Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Saraphina 12th June 2019, 9:48 am

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