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    Snow Hell

    Hana
    Hana

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    Completed Snow Hell

    Post by Hana 1st July 2016, 11:47 am

    Primary Magic
    Snow Hell
    Secondary Magic
    -
    Caster or Holder
    Caster
    Description
    Snow Hell is a magic based on creating and manipulating snow on her the own wish, from change the density of the snow and create solid snow barriers till create a snow storm. The user is always with a slow temperature in her body. As a versatile magic that allows the user to become snow itself. The user can move on the snow very fast, like if her own feet were mix with the snow.

    Some people say that this magic comes from angels of the mountains because the lot of beauty its users have and for that reason, its user have the alias of “Snow Angel”.

    The Magic relies around the use of ice for offense, defence and even supports propose while the user is doing control of her cold body to weaken her enemies and even use her own body like weapon to attack the opponents both on melee and from distance or also cover her own body in frost to protect herself.
    Strengths
    ❄ It is stronger on cold climates.
    Weaknesses
    ❄ Her magic is weak against fire and high temperatures because the snow melts under those circumstances. Because of that, spells aren’t going to have the hole effect against fire magic.
    ❄ The magic cannot freeze anyone, it just can cool the other.
    Linage
    Description:
    Centuries ago, a tribe came to Fiore from a continent that is so incredibly far away that to this day those who ventured to find it have failed; the tribe members claimed to have come from a place called "Egypt". Wherever the tribe went, they prospered beyond belief; to each country and continent they went to, they rose to become the most powerful group of people there. Eventually, they were captured by all dark guilds at the time for their fortune and ability to prosper, and when the tribe refused to cooperate, they were all killed. Luckily, some were not captured, so your bloodline still lives on today. However, you must be wondering - "How did they do it?". Well, it's quite simple.

    The tribe from Egypt, which were known as Egyptians, were cast away from their homeland by raiders with absolutely nothing. An Egyptian goddess, who was saddened by what could potentially happen to her people, cast a powerful spell over the tribe to make them the luckiest people on the planet (literally!). Because of this, the tribe was able to find a significant more amount of jewels, items to sell, and they were said to be so lucky that they could even cheat death and danger; of course, that wasn't the case when they were completely obliterated...

    Ability:
    The user is given 3 passive abilities and 2 active abilities, though they can only ever choose one ability from the passive and active parts of this lineage. Whenever going on a job, the user must always pick from one of the following abilities:
    ❄ Increase your own jewel reward by 100%
    ❄ Find a custom weapon, item, or armor (rank depends on the difficulty of the job; you get to choose the type of item)
    ❄ Increase the jewel reward of you and ONE other participant of the job by 50%
    The user's active ability are the following:
    ❄ The user is able to sacrifice their EXP gained from jobs for additional jewels
    ❄ The user's luck will become at its peak (as though you needed any more...) and will now have great things overall happen to them. This ranges from getting a simple kiss from that one special person, to having your opponent stumble, causing them to, even if narrowly, miss the direction they were sending their spell at.

    Usage:
    Lineage has three passive abilities and two active abilities; you MUST pick one of the passive abilities at the start of any job. The second active ability of this lineage can only be used once per thread, with a duration of 4 posts; again, you can only pick pick one of the two active abilities.

    Whenever the second passive ability of this lineage is used, the rank of the weapon/item/armor is found at the following job ranks:
    ❄D-Rank: Nothing
    ❄ C-Rank: Strong
    ❄B-Rank: Strong+
    ❄ A-Rank: Strong+
    ❄ S-Rank: Legendary
    ❄ SS-Rank: Legendary+
    ❄10Y: Legendary+
    ❄ 100Y: Artifact

    Whenever the first active ability of this lineage is used, the jewels gained for the amount of exp sacrificed is as the following:
    ❄ 25 EXP: 1,000 (D-Rank)
    ❄50 EXP: 2,500 (C-Rank)
    ❄ 250 EXP: 7,500 (B-Rank)
    ❄ 1,250 EXP: 17,000 (A-Rank)
    ❄ 6,250 EXP: 30,000 (S-Rank)
    ❄ 18,750 EXP: 45,000 (SS-Rank)
    ❄56,250 EXP: 70,000 (10Y-Rank)
    ❄ 168,750 EXP: 100,000 (100Y-Rank)
    Unique Abilities
    Snow body: The user can turn its body into solid snow, causing a damage reduction of 25% from normal sources of damage all but fire. Reduced damage from melee snow, water and ice strikes to 35 percent and increases fire and heat attacks to a 25% to the normal damage.
    Low Temperature: Her low body temperature makes weaken everything she touches or is in a 15m radius from her by will increasing it by 15m area per rank. It weakens the enemy in a 25 percent damage increases. This would only affect mages equal to and lower in rank to the userand the effect would lessen for mages one rank higher, a 10 percent, and two ranks higher wouldn't be affected by this debuff.]
    Angel Skin: Hana can manipulate by will her own snow in order to be on a really low temperatures on her skin which made every spell can causes a 25%  of her rank damage over three turns.
    Spells
    D RANK SPELLS:
    Nya





    Last edited by Hana on 22nd July 2016, 5:16 am; edited 4 times in total


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    Snow Hell KQAiVVW
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    Completed Re: Snow Hell

    Post by Edward Von Aurence 2nd July 2016, 10:00 am

    Greetings Hana, my name is Vinn and I shall be the moderator in charge of grading your magic application on this lovely day. Any notable changes or suggestions will be in this brilliant hue. If you wish to discuss this further without constantly posting in this particular topic, you may pm me or reach me via my skype account which is Tenchi_Mibu.

    Hana wrote:
    Primary Magic
    Snow Hell
    Secondary Magic
    -
    Caster or Holder
    Caster
    Description
    Snow Hell is a magic based on creating and manipulating snow on her the own wish, from change the density of the snow and create solid snow barriers till create a snow storm. The user is always with a slow temperature in her body. As a versatile magic that allows the user to become snow itself. The user can move on the snow very fast, like if her own feet were mix with the snow.

    Some people say that this magic comes from angels of the mountains because the lot of beauty its users have and for that reason, its user have the alias of “Snow Angel”.

    The Magic relies around the use of ice for offense, defence and even supports propose while the user is doing control of her cold body to weaken her enemies and even use her own body like weapon to attack the opponents both on melee and from distance or also cover her own body in frost to protect herself.
    Strengths
    ❄ It is stronger on cold climates.
    Weaknesses
    ❄ Her magic is weak against fire and high temperatures because the snow melts under those circumstances. Because of that, spells aren’t going to have the hole effect against fire magic.
    ❄ The magic cannot freeze anyone, it just can cool the other.
    Linage
    Description:
    Centuries ago, a tribe came to Fiore from a continent that is so incredibly far away that to this day those who ventured to find it have failed; the tribe members claimed to have come from a place called "Egypt". Wherever the tribe went, they prospered beyond belief; to each country and continent they went to, they rose to become the most powerful group of people there. Eventually, they were captured by all dark guilds at the time for their fortune and ability to prosper, and when the tribe refused to cooperate, they were all killed. Luckily, some were not captured, so your bloodline still lives on today. However, you must be wondering - "How did they do it?". Well, it's quite simple.

    The tribe from Egypt, which were known as Egyptians, were cast away from their homeland by raiders with absolutely nothing. An Egyptian goddess, who was saddened by what could potentially happen to her people, cast a powerful spell over the tribe to make them the luckiest people on the planet (literally!). Because of this, the tribe was able to find a significant more amount of jewels, items to sell, and they were said to be so lucky that they could even cheat death and danger; of course, that wasn't the case when they were completely obliterated...

    Ability:
    The user is given 3 passive abilities and 2 active abilities, though they can only ever choose one ability from the passive and active parts of this lineage. Whenever going on a job, the user must always pick from one of the following abilities:
    ❄ Increase your own jewel reward by 100%
    ❄ Find a custom weapon, item, or armor (rank depends on the difficulty of the job; you get to choose the type of item)
    ❄ Increase the jewel reward of you and ONE other participant of the job by 50%
    The user's active ability are the following:
    ❄ The user is able to sacrifice their EXP gained from jobs for additional jewels
    ❄ The user's luck will become at its peak (as though you needed any more...) and will now have great things overall happen to them. This ranges from getting a simple kiss from that one special person, to having your opponent stumble, causing them to, even if narrowly, miss the direction they were sending their spell at.

    Usage:
    Lineage has three passive abilities and two active abilities; you MUST pick one of the passive abilities at the start of any job. The second active ability of this lineage can only be used once per thread, with a duration of 4 posts; again, you can only pick pick one of the two active abilities.

    Whenever the second passive ability of this lineage is used, the rank of the weapon/item/armor is found at the following job ranks:
    ❄D-Rank: Nothing
    ❄ C-Rank: Strong
    ❄B-Rank: Strong+
    ❄ A-Rank: Strong+
    ❄ S-Rank: Legendary
    ❄ SS-Rank: Legendary+
    ❄10Y: Legendary+
    ❄ 100Y: Artifact

    Whenever the first active ability of this lineage is used, the jewels gained for the amount of exp sacrificed is as the following:
    ❄ 25 EXP: 1,000 (D-Rank)
    ❄50 EXP: 2,500 (C-Rank)
    ❄ 250 EXP: 7,500 (B-Rank)
    ❄ 1,250 EXP: 17,000 (A-Rank)
    ❄ 6,250 EXP: 30,000 (S-Rank)
    ❄ 18,750 EXP: 45,000 (SS-Rank)
    ❄56,250 EXP: 70,000 (10Y-Rank)
    ❄ 168,750 EXP: 100,000 (100Y-Rank)
    Unique Abilities
    Snow body: The user can turn its body into solid snow, increasing her defence into a 15%.
    [With this particular ability, I would envision you taking an extra percentage of damage from fire based magic since your body has become solid snow. However, my suggestion for this ability is to change it damage reduction of 20 percent from normal sources of damage all but fire based or you can change it to where you take reduced damage from freezing based magic such as snow, ice, and even water spells along with taking reduced damage from melee strikes to 35 percent. But I suggest saying that the defence increase doesn't apply to fire or heat effects.]Low Temperature: Her low body temperature makes weaken everything she touches or is in a 10m radius from her by will. [My suggestion is to have this ability to rank up as you get stronger increasing it by 5 meters per rank. I need for you to clarify exactly what it weakens, I can suggest a slowing effect of 25 percent. This would only affect mages of the same rank and the effect would lessen for mages one rank higher and two ranks higher wouldn't be affected by this debuff.]
    Angel Skin: Hana can manipulate by will her own snow in order to be on a really low temperatures on her skin which made every spell can causes a first-degree burn. [For this one, I need damage modifier or amount that it does it. I can suggest that spells would a percentage of her rank in damage over three turns. The percentage would be 10 percent per turn or 30 percent of your rank.]
    Spells
    D RANK SPELLS:
    Nya





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    Jobs: D : 6 | C : 0 | B : 0 | A : 0 | S : 0 | SS : 0 | 10y : 0 | 100y : 0

    Current EXP Total: 150
    Total EXP Needed To Rank Up: 1200
    Hana
    Hana

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    Completed Re: Snow Hell

    Post by Hana 4th July 2016, 12:48 pm

    Bump!


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    Completed Re: Snow Hell

    Post by Guest 21st July 2016, 7:25 am

    Hey there, Hana,

    Since Vinn was demoted from trial mod, I'll be the one taking over your application, which means the grading will be different. I've taken the edited version of your application and read it over, so any edits you made for Vinn are still there. My own edit requests can be found in this color, and you're more than welcome to ask any questions or comments that you have. If you have a Skype, you can contact me at secret_sorrow; if not, then you can just send me a message on here.

    Sincerely,
    Marceline Anicetus (Marcy/Marshy)
    Hana wrote:
    Primary Magic
    Snow Hell
    Secondary Magic
    -
    Caster or Holder
    Caster
    Description
    Snow Hell is a magic based on creating and manipulating snow on her the own wish, from change the density of the snow and create solid snow barriers till create a snow storm. The user is always with a slow temperature in her body. As a versatile magic that allows the user to become snow itself. The user can move on the snow very fast, like if her own feet were mix with the snow.

    Some people say that this magic comes from angels of the mountains because the lot of beauty its users have and for that reason, its user have the alias of “Snow Angel”.

    The Magic relies around the use of ice for offense, defence and even supports propose while the user is doing control of her cold body to weaken her enemies and even use her own body like weapon to attack the opponents both on melee and from distance or also cover her own body in frost to protect herself.
    Strengths
    ❄ It is stronger on cold climates.
    Weaknesses
    ❄ Her magic is weak against fire and high temperatures because the snow melts under those circumstances. Because of that, spells aren’t going to have the hole effect against fire magic.
    ❄ The magic cannot freeze anyone, it just can cool the other.
    Linage
    Description:
    Centuries ago, a tribe came to Fiore from a continent that is so incredibly far away that to this day those who ventured to find it have failed; the tribe members claimed to have come from a place called "Egypt". Wherever the tribe went, they prospered beyond belief; to each country and continent they went to, they rose to become the most powerful group of people there. Eventually, they were captured by all dark guilds at the time for their fortune and ability to prosper, and when the tribe refused to cooperate, they were all killed. Luckily, some were not captured, so your bloodline still lives on today. However, you must be wondering - "How did they do it?". Well, it's quite simple.

    The tribe from Egypt, which were known as Egyptians, were cast away from their homeland by raiders with absolutely nothing. An Egyptian goddess, who was saddened by what could potentially happen to her people, cast a powerful spell over the tribe to make them the luckiest people on the planet (literally!). Because of this, the tribe was able to find a significant more amount of jewels, items to sell, and they were said to be so lucky that they could even cheat death and danger; of course, that wasn't the case when they were completely obliterated...

    Ability:
    The user is given 3 passive abilities and 2 active abilities, though they can only ever choose one ability from the passive and active parts of this lineage. Whenever going on a job, the user must always pick from one of the following abilities:
    ❄ Increase your own jewel reward by 100%
    ❄ Find a custom weapon, item, or armor (rank depends on the difficulty of the job; you get to choose the type of item)
    ❄ Increase the jewel reward of you and ONE other participant of the job by 50%
    The user's active ability are the following:
    ❄ The user is able to sacrifice their EXP gained from jobs for additional jewels
    ❄ The user's luck will become at its peak (as though you needed any more...) and will now have great things overall happen to them. This ranges from getting a simple kiss from that one special person, to having your opponent stumble, causing them to, even if narrowly, miss the direction they were sending their spell at.

    Usage:
    Lineage has three passive abilities and two active abilities; you MUST pick one of the passive abilities at the start of any job. The second active ability of this lineage can only be used once per thread, with a duration of 4 posts; again, you can only pick pick one of the two active abilities.

    Whenever the second passive ability of this lineage is used, the rank of the weapon/item/armor is found at the following job ranks:
    ❄D-Rank: Nothing
    ❄ C-Rank: Strong
    ❄B-Rank: Strong+
    ❄ A-Rank: Strong+
    ❄ S-Rank: Legendary
    ❄ SS-Rank: Legendary+
    ❄10Y: Legendary+
    ❄ 100Y: Artifact

    Whenever the first active ability of this lineage is used, the jewels gained for the amount of exp sacrificed is as the following:
    ❄ 25 EXP: 1,000 (D-Rank)
    ❄50 EXP: 2,500 (C-Rank)
    ❄ 250 EXP: 7,500 (B-Rank)
    ❄ 1,250 EXP: 17,000 (A-Rank)
    ❄ 6,250 EXP: 30,000 (S-Rank)
    ❄ 18,750 EXP: 45,000 (SS-Rank)
    ❄56,250 EXP: 70,000 (10Y-Rank)
    ❄ 168,750 EXP: 100,000 (100Y-Rank)
    Unique Abilities
    Snow body: The user can turn its body into solid snow, causing a damage reduction of 20 percent You can go ahead and boost this to 25%from normal sources of damage all but fire. Reduced damage from melee snow, water and ice strikes to 35 percent and increases fire and heat attacks to a 15 percent I'd like to see this increased to 25%to the normal damage.
    Low Temperature: Her low body temperature makes weaken everything she touches or is in a 10m If you want, you can make this the max range of 15m radius from her by will increasing it by 5 meters per rank and you may bump this up to 10-15m area. It weakens the enemy in a 25 percent damage increases. This would only affect mages of the same rank I would add that this affects mages equal to and lower in rank to the userand the effect would lessen for mages one rank higher, a 10 percent, and two ranks higher wouldn't be affected by this debuff.]
    Angel Skin: Hana can manipulate by will her own snow in order to be on a really low temperatures on her skin which made every spell can causes a 30 (10percent per turn) percent of her rank damage over three turns You can leave it as is, or you can change this to 25% damage over three posts/turns (without having to divide the damage between turns).
    Spells
    D RANK SPELLS:
    Nya



    Hana
    Hana

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    Age : 26
    Experience : 0

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    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
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    Completed Re: Snow Hell

    Post by Hana 22nd July 2016, 12:19 am

    Bump!
    Thanks for the suggestions <3


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    Completed Re: Snow Hell

    Post by Guest 22nd July 2016, 5:04 am

    The cool down for GARASUSHĪRUDO should be 1 post longer than the duration.
    Hana
    Hana

    Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Gold Rush
    Position : None
    Posts : 83
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Snow Hell

    Post by Hana 22nd July 2016, 5:16 am

    Bump!
    Sorry I forgot to change that.


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    Completed Re: Snow Hell

    Post by Guest 22nd July 2016, 10:03 am

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