The Beast of Alaya: The Broken Phantasm

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The Broken Phantasm

The Beasts of Alaya The Beasts of Alaya or the Entities who made contract with Alaya are those who are chosen in order to protect humanity and ensure the survivability of its species. The beasts of Alaya aren’t literally beasts rather they are figures from the past that made their mark in history, whether they are famous or infamous, this doesn't mean that one must create such a glorious achievement in order to be selected, not all of Alaya's chosen are popular. Usually Alaya chooses those who lead true lives or those who found their true destiny and it naturally prefers those who share the same mission as Alaya itself. The Beasts of Alaya are only summoned whenever a disaster were to struck that would mark the end of humanity itself, should the time come, the Beasts of Alaya will come forth and resolve the crisis before it’s too late. Sometimes instead of summoning Alaya’s beasts, alaya will embed its power into a selected soul for them to resolve the crisis, should the chosen be able to resolve it they may be selected as a potential contractor to Alaya but that goes without saying if they see their destiny to their end.The Lorelei family considers them counter guardians during the crowning of the 12th heir and gave Alaya an alternative name known as The COUNTER FORCE.

Description Justicia though little does she know it, has somewhat became one of the Beasts of Alaya early and has traversed through different timelines. This of course is one of the main causes of her mental fatigue as time lag would usually occur from time to time whether she’s using magic or not. Her sorcery falls within the concept of “To create something anew from a parallel past, present or future” meaning she can fully project weapons or rather mimic miraculous effects that were previously owned or used by those who made contract with Alaya, or simply to fuse them together to create a new kind of weapon or spell. The weapons or spells she casts are considered “Phantasms” while the weapons or spells fused and modified are considered “Broken Phantasms”. It’s basically re quip magic that revolves around the concept of Alaya. In a normal theme Re-quip magic, a set of armor and weapons have their own effects to the user but Justicia’s magic is a whole lot different. First off, Justicia cannot project armor like other requip mages can, though she can project shields or barriers, armor isn’t something that came with her magic’s ability. Second, unlike re quip, at will she can modify her weapons or fuse them to create an event greater weapon that goes without saying that the durability isn’t guaranteed to be high or low considering that anything can happen. Finally there’s something in the magic which allows her to “Stack Spells” to even deliver greater damage or by simply amplifying their effects. In order to gain these stacks, certain conditions must be met and with great succession may ultimately become a threat to her opponents.

Advantages Acquiring Projection stacks is necessary for Justicia whenever she enters combat as it increases her defenses and agility by two percent for each stack of Projection. Having multiple Projection stacks increases her survivability. Consuming Projection stacks is also necessary for Justicia in order to make her spell attacks more effective. Some of her spells may use Projection stacks instead of mana in order for them to materialize Bearing the Magic Crest Implant of Lorelei grants Justicia enhanced mana regeneration in a fight since. She was blessed by her mother, a spell which protects her from disintegrating into space and time. Overall, she gains 15% magic resistance to all types of magic whereas she gains 20% magic resistance to time and space attributed magic instead.I can't grant you resistance to "all" types of magic. Your magic needs solid weakness. Either have her 15% resistance be for elemental magic or non-elemental type.

Disadvantages Having absolutely no Projection stacks gives Justicia no defense against direct attacks at all. Sneak attacks may be able to outwit her. While having no Projection stacks, robs Justicia of utility in her spells as she would mostly rely on them in the heat of battle. As long as the magic isn’t attributed to Time or Space, Justicia receives the usual amount of damage from magic attacks. Isn't this simply contradicting yourself? Your advantages say you have resistance to all types of magic while here, you say other deal normal damage?  Lorelei’s blessing may have made her immune to crowd control effects of her rank but not the damage it can inflict. Lorelei’s blessing only grants defense against magic but not physical attacks.

Lineage The Gingerbread Man "Run and run as fast as you can. You can't catch me, I'm the Gingerbread Man." Know the story of the Gingerbread Man? That obnoxious little dough stain that always runs faster than anyone else, running so fast that no matter how fast people try to run, they can never catch him. Until one man caught him of course. In a confrontation with this little prankish devil after a promise to the people to take him down, this man, whose name faded from history, chased him down for 7 years, 7 months and 7 days, around the world and through time and space, until one day, he did the impossible and caught the little guy purely based on his own speed, rather than relying on the cunning that the fox in the classic utilized. The tremendous feat that broke the impossible resulted in the creation of a legend and the power behind this legend gave those of this man's blood supernatural agility and speed, but with a twist. Reenacting the chase that gave them this power, users of this ability have Absolute Speed. "Run and run as fast as you can. You can't escape me, I'm the Gingerbread Man." Absolute Speed, the world's most powerful speed ability. It is an ability not based on adding just raw speed to the user, but on comparing the user's speed against the speed of the opponent the user is fighting. As a result when this ability is active, no matter the speed or reflexes of the opponent, the H-rank user is always faster. ALWAYS. Not even light-speed can keep up, but being able to exceed it would depend on the rank of the user. When used, the spell adds the speed of the fastest opponent/projectile in the field to their own, making them always dominant in the speed factor. Note: you do not get auto-dodge during rolls nor auto-hits. However, if a spell is said to be so fast that you cannot try to dodge it, disregard the claim, because you can. Usage Moving so fast however may break one's body, especially when the opponent is much faster than your base speed. Thus, the limit for users is 2 uses per thread, lasting 2 posts each, with six post cool down. The user's rank also limits the max speed their still human bodies can take, with bullet-speed (1200 m/s) as the limit for C-rank and below, Mach 100(34000 m/s) for B-rank, lightning(6000 km/s) for A-rank and light(300,000 km/s) for S-rank, with exceeding light-speed at H-rank. This lineage does not apply to projectiles but does apply to physical attacks.

Unique Abilities

Structural Mastery One of the core abilities of the Broken Phantasm magic is knowledge over a structural framework of an object and mastery over projections. Prerequisites for this ability requires great creativity, photographic memory and the magic that allows you to bring this image to reality, hence its classified as a kind of projection magic. Justicia’s spells can be modified, have additional effects or can be cast more than once by consuming Projection stacks. A Projection stack can be generated once every three posts in a thread as the battle goes on, Projections stacks can also be generated by receiving spell damage or inflicting damage to a foe. Some Projection stacks are generated by spells. Justicia gains 2% Agility and 2% Damage Reduction for each stack. I can understand this is your way of gaining projection stacks but please remove the buffs it give. You are already making changes or modifying your normal spells with this projection stacks, aren't you? That's more than enough. If other players have more agility, it's because their magic usually grands it to them. And most of them has their own disadvantages to getting that speed.

Magic Crest of Lorelei Justicia, last of the two daughters of Lorelei, was implanted with a Magic Crest that not only stores all the secrets of her family’s sorcery as well as the power to generate more mana that she’d normally could. This was because that her parents expected her and her siblings to be able to have enough mana to summon the beasts of alaya as it usually cost a lot of mana. The nature of the Magic Crest isn’t as simple as having something put into your body, rather its sewn into the soul itself. Every three posts, Justicia regenerates more mana, it also allows her to refund half the mana cost if any of her offensive spells hit an enemy target or gains 1% mana for every spell that she’s hit with. Please remove the part where you refund half the mana cost if your spells hit.  At D rank she gains 5% mana At C rank she gains 7% mana At B rank she gains 10% mana At A rank she gains 12% mana At S rank she gains 15% mana.

Blessing of Lorelei Before having been sent into the time stream, Justeaze’s mother blessed her and her siblings a spell that would protect them from disintegrating into space and time. As Justeaze passed through, the effects of the spell still lingered to this very day, not only was Justeaze timeless but also the spell that was blessed upon her. Justeaze is immune to crowd control effects that bear the same rank as hers or lower. In addition, she gains 15% magic resistance to all types of magic and 20% magic resistance to time magic and space magic. I can't allow magic resistance to all magic types. Please change this.

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D Rank Spells

Gandr Offensive/Ranged Duration: 10 shots (1 shot for Finn Shot) Cooldown: 2 posts Replace this with "Duration+2 posts" just to be clear. Description Gandr is a simple curse that decreases the physical health of the target. Because the curse properly said is released from the caster’s index finger and the target must be within the field of vision to be aimed at. It has a max ranges of about 20 meters and the trajectory of each shot fires like a pistol bullet. Give it a speed. Also, depending on the number of shots you fire each post, the damage may vary. Remember, if you fire two times in one post, both shots must hit to do complete D rank damage. This is to stop you from firing 10 times in one shot and do 10 x D rank damage. You probably didn't mean it but specify that detail in the magic description for others.  Finn shot (1 Projection Stack) A Gandr with so much Magical Energy concentrated into it that becomes capable of physical interference is called Finn Shot.It has roughly the destructive power of a pistol bullet and while a single hit is not enough to kill someone, it is still capable of knocking out a normal person. It deals an additional 50% spell damage upon hit. Once the Finn shot is released, the spell will automatically be on cooldown. 2 stacks of projection deal twice its spell damage. Specify you can only use 2 projection stacks at most here. More than this would make this D rank spell deal more than C rank damage and I can't allow that. Strength Its a basic ranged spell that can be used to harass melee type opponentsFinn shot is more powerful than the gandr, whereas the Gandr has 10x the clip size.Consuming the required number of projection stacks makes the Finn shot more powerful. Weakness Agility based opponents may easily dodge the Finn shot With a projection stack consumed for the Finn shot, lowers the caster's agility and defenses Can be blocked or parried. Gandr bullets may deal less damage if more than half of the shots fired were dodged.

Reinforcement Support Duration: Instant Cooldown: 2 posts Description Reinforcement is the basic spell used to enhance or repair the durability of an object. It adds ten durability and 2+ damage to a weapon.  Choose one. Either a boost in durability or damage.But if you must have both, then decrease the 2+ thing to 1+.  Also, just what do you mean by +10 durability? The durability of objects depend on their rank. The most a magically created weapon or object would naturally have is 2 D rank worth durability. Increasing it by 10 would mean it gets SS rank durability? That's more than too much xD or do you mean 10%?  Reinforcement + (1 Projection stack) Reinforcement + Adds 12 durability and 2+ damage to a weapon. In addition a part of the body can be reinforced to either increase the damage of the next melee strike by 50%. Too many abilities even for your "projection stack" Either add a durability, or boost the damage or do the increase melee strike by 50% thing. Don't forget these are D rank spells.... Strengths Reinforcement spell increases weapon durability Reinforcement spells increases weapon damage Reinforcement + spell has increased effects and can enhance the next melee strike Weakness Requires the caster to touch whatever they wish to reinforce Cannot reinforce broken weapons. Once the reinforced melee strike lands a hit, the effects will immediately disappear.It’s a non-action spell. If there are no objects available without a Projection stack, the spell is useless.

Chaldeas Gabriel Defense/Support Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: 3 posts Description Chaldeas: Gabriel is a basic defense spell that projects a shield of 270 degrees in front of the user. The term Gabriel is derived from “God is my Strength” and while the shield persists, the next spell or basic attacks that the caster will inflict will deal an additional 20% damage I can't allow an increase in damage that comes with defensive spells. Seriously, you are only asking for too much.. The shield then can be neutralized by absorbing damage equivalent to a D rank spell All defensive spells can take up to 2 offensive spells of their same rank. Allies near the caster will receive the same bonus. Chaldeas Gabriel with 2 projection stacks, will stack its effects twice as well as the cooldown. Strengths Chaldeas Gabriel is a basic defense shield that blocks incoming damage equivalent to a D rank spell Chaldeas Gabriel, while it persists grants an attack bonus Chaldeas Gabriel when used with projection stacks is twice as powerful. Weakness Destroying the shield will eliminate the attack bonus buff. The caster is open to attack from behind, which a 90 degrees is opening. If one cannot accurately destroy the shield, avoid any incoming attack for the next 2 posts. Can be destroyed by an attack of equal value.

Projection.. START! Support/Self cast Duration: Instant Cooldown: 2 posts Description It’s the basic spell that grants the caster a Projection Buff. Projection Buffs are durable till they are consumed. Give me details. Is this for increasing the amount of projection stacks you receive or for buffing your extra abilities? Strengths Projection spell is an instant cast. Projection buffs when consumed for spells, can greatly improve and modify the spell itself Having multiple Projection buffs increases the caster’s survivability. Weakness Projection buffs is a must for the caster, without them they will be at a disadvantage. Consuming Projection buffs decreases the caster’s survivability, use it to your advantage. What's the difference between this and your last strength? Depriving the caster of their spells may rob them of their utility. Full suppression is needed in order to defeat the caster.

Moekidu wrote:

The Broken Phantasm

The Beasts of Alaya The Beasts of Alaya or the Entities who made contract with Alaya are those who are chosen in order to protect humanity and ensure the survivability of its species. The beasts of Alaya aren’t literally beasts rather they are figures from the past that made their mark in history, whether they are famous or infamous, this doesn't mean that one must create such a glorious achievement in order to be selected, not all of Alaya's chosen are popular. Usually Alaya chooses those who lead true lives or those who found their true destiny and it naturally prefers those who share the same mission as Alaya itself. The Beasts of Alaya are only summoned whenever a disaster were to struck that would mark the end of humanity itself, should the time come, the Beasts of Alaya will come forth and resolve the crisis before it’s too late. Sometimes instead of summoning Alaya’s beasts, alaya will embed its power into a selected soul for them to resolve the crisis, should the chosen be able to resolve it they may be selected as a potential contractor to Alaya but that goes without saying if they see their destiny to their end.The Lorelei family considers them counter guardians during the crowning of the 12th heir and gave Alaya an alternative name known as The COUNTER FORCE.

Description Justicia though little does she know it, has somewhat became one of the Beasts of Alaya early and has traversed through different timelines. This of course is one of the main causes of her mental fatigue as time lag would usually occur from time to time whether she’s using magic or not. Her sorcery falls within the concept of “To create something anew from a parallel past, present or future” meaning she can fully project weapons or rather mimic miraculous effects that were previously owned or used by those who made contract with Alaya, or simply to fuse them together to create a new kind of weapon or spell. The weapons or spells she casts are considered “Phantasms” while the weapons or spells fused and modified are considered “Broken Phantasms”. It’s basically re quip magic that revolves around the concept of Alaya. In a normal theme Re-quip magic, a set of armor and weapons have their own effects to the user but Justicia’s magic is a whole lot different. First off, Justicia cannot project armor like other requip mages can, though she can project shields or barriers, armor isn’t something that came with her magic’s ability. Second, unlike re quip, at will she can modify her weapons or fuse them to create an event greater weapon that goes without saying that the durability isn’t guaranteed to be high or low considering that anything can happen. Finally there’s something in the magic which allows her to “Stack Spells” to even deliver greater damage or by simply amplifying their effects. In order to gain these stacks, certain conditions must be met and with great succession may ultimately become a threat to her opponents.

Advantages Acquiring Projection stacks is necessary for Justicia whenever she enters combat as it increases her defenses and agility by two percent for each stack of Projection. Having multiple Projection stacks increases her survivability. Consuming Projection stacks is also necessary for Justicia in order to make her spell attacks more effective. Some of her spells may use Projection stacks instead of mana in order for them to materialize Bearing the Magic Crest Implant of Lorelei grants Justicia enhanced mana regeneration in a fight since. She was blessed by her mother, a spell which protects her from disintegrating into space and time. Overall, she gains 10% magic resistance to time and space attributed magic.

Disadvantages Having absolutely no Projection stacks gives Justicia no defense against direct attacks at all. Sneak attacks may be able to outwit her. While having no Projection stacks, robs Justicia of utility in her spells as she would mostly rely on them in the heat of battle. As long as the magic isn’t attributed to Time or Space, Justicia receives the usual amount of damage from magic attacks. Lorelei’s blessing may have made her immune to crowd control effects of her rank but not the damage it can inflict. Lorelei’s blessing only grants defense against magical effects but not physical attacks.

Lineage The Gingerbread Man "Run and run as fast as you can. You can't catch me, I'm the Gingerbread Man." Know the story of the Gingerbread Man? That obnoxious little dough stain that always runs faster than anyone else, running so fast that no matter how fast people try to run, they can never catch him. Until one man caught him of course. In a confrontation with this little prankish devil after a promise to the people to take him down, this man, whose name faded from history, chased him down for 7 years, 7 months and 7 days, around the world and through time and space, until one day, he did the impossible and caught the little guy purely based on his own speed, rather than relying on the cunning that the fox in the classic utilized. The tremendous feat that broke the impossible resulted in the creation of a legend and the power behind this legend gave those of this man's blood supernatural agility and speed, but with a twist. Reenacting the chase that gave them this power, users of this ability have Absolute Speed. "Run and run as fast as you can. You can't escape me, I'm the Gingerbread Man." Absolute Speed, the world's most powerful speed ability. It is an ability not based on adding just raw speed to the user, but on comparing the user's speed against the speed of the opponent the user is fighting. As a result when this ability is active, no matter the speed or reflexes of the opponent, the H-rank user is always faster. ALWAYS. Not even light-speed can keep up, but being able to exceed it would depend on the rank of the user. When used, the spell adds the speed of the fastest opponent/projectile in the field to their own, making them always dominant in the speed factor. Note: you do not get auto-dodge during rolls nor auto-hits. However, if a spell is said to be so fast that you cannot try to dodge it, disregard the claim, because you can. Usage Moving so fast however may break one's body, especially when the opponent is much faster than your base speed. Thus, the limit for users is 2 uses per thread, lasting 2 posts each, with six post cool down. The user's rank also limits the max speed their still human bodies can take, with bullet-speed (1200 m/s) as the limit for C-rank and below, Mach 100(34000 m/s) for B-rank, lightning(6000 km/s) for A-rank and light(300,000 km/s) for S-rank, with exceeding light-speed at H-rank. This lineage does not apply to projectiles but does apply to physical attacks.

Unique Abilities

Structural Mastery One of the core abilities of the Broken Phantasm magic is knowledge over a structural framework of an object and mastery over projections. Prerequisites for this ability requires great creativity, photographic memory and the magic that allows you to bring this image to reality, hence its classified as a kind of projection magic. Justicia’s spells can be modified, have additional effects or can be cast more than once by consuming Projection stacks. A Projection stack can be generated once every three posts in a thread as the battle goes on, Projections stacks can also be generated by receiving spell damage or inflicting damage to a foe. Some Projection stacks are generated by spells. Justicia gains 2% Agility and 2% Damage Reduction for each stack and caps according to the following: At D rank, bonus status caps to 10% At C rank, bonus status caps to 15% At B rank, bonus status caps t0 20% At A rank, bonus status caps to 25% At S rank, bonus status caps to 30%

Magic Crest of Lorelei Justicia, last of the two daughters of Lorelei, was implanted with a Magic Crest that not only stores all the secrets of her family’s sorcery as well as the power to generate more mana that she’d normally could. This was because that her parents expected her and her siblings to be able to have enough mana to summon the beasts of alaya as it usually cost a lot of mana. The nature of the Magic Crest isn’t as simple as having something put into your body, rather its sewn into the soul itself. Every three posts, Justicia regenerates more mana. At D rank she gains 5% mana At C rank she gains 7% mana At B rank she gains 10% mana At A rank she gains 12% mana At S rank she gains 15% mana.

Blessing of Lorelei Before having been sent into the time stream, Justeaze’s mother blessed her and her siblings a spell that would protect them from disintegrating into space and time. As Justeaze passed through, the effects of the spell still lingered to this very day, not only was Justeaze timeless but also the spell that was blessed upon her. Justeaze is immune to crowd control effects that bear the same rank as hers or lower. Because this was a spell originally meant to protect her while she traverses through space and time, it grants her 10% resistance to time and space attributed spells, friendly or hostile spells.

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D Rank Spells

Gandr Offensive/Ranged Duration: 2 posts with a number of shots that deal 1 damage, max clip of 20 (1 shot for Finn Shot) Cooldown: 3 posts (2 for the finn shot) Description Gandr is a simple curse that decreases the physical health of the target. Because the curse properly said is released from the caster’s index finger and the target must be within the field of vision to be aimed at. It has a max ranges of about 20 meters and the trajectory speed is about 15m/s. So, as I said in the cb, I need to limit your chance of getting these stacks since these stacks lets you do more damage and generally have effects that a normal D rank can't have. Tell you what, with this gun spell, if you hit your opponents with 5 shots, you can gain a stack. Which means, you have the chance of getting 4 stacks if all of the bullets hit. I know this might sound unfair, but this projection stacks give you extra abilities that no other D rank mage gets...so I need to make it difficult for you to get them or the magic app will turn out to be unbalanced. I'm sorry, kay? Finn shot (1 Projection Stack) Please change the projection stack requirement to 2. A Gandr with so much Magical Energy concentrated into it that becomes capable of physical interference is called Finn Shot.It has roughly the destructive power of a pistol bullet and while a single hit is not enough to kill someone, it is still capable of knocking out a normal person. It deals an additional 50% spell damage upon hit. Once the Finn shot is released, the spell will automatically be on cooldown. 2 stacks of projection deal twice its spell damage. Add a sentence saying, you can only put a max of 2 stacks in this ability. More than that will be letting you do more than C rank damage. Strength Its a basic ranged spell that can be used to harass melee type opponents Finn shot is more powerful than the gandr, whereas the Gandr has 20x the clip size. Consuming the required number of projection stacks makes the Finn shot more powerful. Weakness Agility based opponents may easily dodge the Finn shot With a projection stack consumed for the Finn shot, lowers the caster's agility and defenses Can be blocked or parried. Gandr bullets may deal less damage if more than half of the shots fired were dodged.

Reinforcement Support Duration: Instant Cooldown: 2 posts Description Reinforcement is the basic spell used to enhance or repair the durability of an object. It adds 2 durability and 2+ damage to a weapon. change to 1+ damage. This should be more than enough. Also, this spell should only be able to buff things in the terms of D rank. Meaning, if you use it to buff a C rank weapon, it will be able to do C + D rank damage and if you use it on a B rank weapon, it will do B + D rank damage. Reinforcement + (1 Projection stack) Reinforcement + allows the caster to reinforce a part of their body for the following options: Increase Agility by 10% for 2 posts Increase Defense by 10% for 2 posts Increase next Melee damage value by 10% on the next turn Strengths Reinforcement spell increases weapon durability Reinforcement spells increases weapon damage Reinforcement + spell has increased effects on the body Weakness Requires the caster to touch whatever they wish to reinforce Cannot reinforce broken weapons. Once the reinforced melee strike lands a hit, the effects will immediately disappear. It’s a non-action spell. If there are no objects available without a Projection stack, the spell is useless.

Chaldeas Gabriel Defense/Support Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: 3 posts Description Chaldeas: Gabriel is a basic defense spell that projects a shield of 270 degrees in front of the user. The term Gabriel is derived from “God is my Strength” and while the shield persists, the next spell or basic attacks that the caster will receive a projection stack at the second post its active. The shield then can be neutralized by absorbing damage equivalent to a D rank spell. Allies near the caster will receive the same bonus. Change the projection stack requirement of this spell to 2 Chaldeas Gabriel with 2 projection stacks, will stack its effects twice as well as the cooldown. However it cannot gain projection stacks this way. Strengths Chaldeas Gabriel is a basic defense shield that blocks incoming damage equivalent to a D rank spell Chaldeas Gabriel, while it persists grants a free projection stack Chaldeas Gabriel when used with projection stacks is twice as powerful. Weakness Destroying the shield early will eliminate the chances of gaining a free projection stack. The caster is open to attack from behind, which a 90 degrees is opening. Forcing her to enhance the shield she has will consume projection buffs. Can be destroyed by an attack of equal value.

Projection.. START! Support/Self cast Duration: Instant Cooldown: 2 posts Description It’s the basic spell that grants the caster a Projection stack. No, I can't leave it so please explain this to me, alright? Strengths Projection spell is an instant cast. Projection buffs when consumed for spells, can greatly improve and modify the spell itself Having multiple Projection buffs increases the caster’s survivability. Weakness Projection buffs is a must for the caster, without them they will be at a disadvantage. Consuming Projection buffs decreases the caster’s survivability, use it to your advantage. Depriving the caster of their spells may rob them of their utility. Full suppression is needed in order to defeat the caster.