Siria Glaczer, the Noble Beast (希獣 Ki-jū, lit.Rare Beast) (Ready to be Reviewed)

Tsykotics wrote:Name: Siria Glaczer
Gender: Female
Age: Early 20s
Birthday: Unknown, presumed late fall
Sexuality: Queer
Special Characteristics:
- Siria has a Kaiju Form sealed away behind a key phrase, being her Epithet "Kiju". Upon activation, spikes made of bone which glow with a red light from the inside and sporadically discharge plasma between nearby spikes erupt from her body, piercing directly through her skin; notable ones are on the outside of her forearms and biceps, the back of her hands, her spine, hips, elbows, the outside of her thighs and calves, and knees. This hurts a tremendous amount and causes blood to pour from each puncture wound. Upon using it, any magic she uses during the duration of the transformation gains the "Blood Magic" tag, but does not gain the solitary, secondary, or tertiary benefits of the tag, and does an increased amount of damage. She also gains the benefit of increased mobility in terms of dexterity and physical strength. In exchange, she loses 1% of her max health per post in this form. If her current max health drops to 50% of her actual max health, she becomes feral and loses the ability to use or understand speech and unable to discern friend from foe, as well as becomes enraged, even outside of her Kaiju form. Your character application really isn't where you should be getting into magic and stats. It's okay if you want to talk about different physical appearances she can take on, but anything getting into stat or magic related items should either be a part of your magic application itself, or worked into a custom lineage if you ever decide to get one. So, I would remove anything here that gets into that kind of stuff.
- As a super soldier experiment of the Pergrande Imperial Army, she was brainwashed at a very early age, to the point of absolute belief in their cause and doing whatever it takes to fulfill that mission. As such, she is supremely resistant to mind control, mind manipulation, and other such tactics. Attempting to break into her mind will cause intense pain and potential irreparable mental damage to the aggressor if pursued beyond that point. This is also more of a lineage or magic related ability. The special characteristics sections is meant more for physical appearance items of note, such as "they have tattoos all over their back" or "a scar going down their face over their left eye". I would save this to put in your magic application, or again look into getting a custom lineage at some point.

Personality: Siria is, by all accounts, comparable to an emotionless machine. As a brainwashed super soldier, she follows orders by anyone above her in the Ironheart Pact, though orders from Pergrande leaders supersede any from other countries. She speaks in a silted, controlled manner similar to a computer. What emotions she does show are only a facade, used to blend into a social environment she is infiltrating or to demonstrate the chain of command in a military setting. The only true emotion she has demonstrated since her indoctrination is pure, unadulterated, and primal rage, which is triggered from the overused of her Kaiju mutation. In this form, killing is second nature to her, and will rip and tear anyone and anything in her way so long as there is something to murder until she passes out from blood loss or fatigue.
Siria intensely fears retribution from her proprietors and those in control of her, and will do anything to avoid repercussions. She is without morals in this regard as well, and those who stand in her way will not be pitied. Without the control of her masters, Siria would likely be lost within a vast sea of nothingness, with no anchor to hold onto, which in reality is her greatest weakness. Find a way to cut her off from her master's plans and she will likely shut down entirely, forced to reconcile with the blank slate of her being. Someday, deep, deep within her subconscious she hopes that someone will break her free of her chains and give her a life worth living. Until then, she is a weapon to be pointed at the enemy. Woe and mercy to those who stand in the way of the Ironheart Pact. Personality needs to be a minimum of 300 words. You're almost there, but still a little short.


Per the guidelines on the character application template, all likes, dislikes, motivations, and fears must include a small descriptive sentence of some kind. It doesn't have to be anything in depth or overly detailed, just something to give each of these bullet points some substance.
Likes:

• The Ironheart Pact, specifically Pergrande
  
• Following Orders
  
• Her Creator
  
• The Glory of the Pergrande Imperium
  

Dislikes:

• The Luminous Covenant
  
• Traitors
  
• Those who don't know their place
  

Motivations:

• Being a good soldier
  
• Success of the mission
  
• Destruction of the Luminous Covenant
  

Fears:

• Failure
  
• Losing control
  
• Being abandoned
  

General Appearance

Height: 5'10"
Weight: ~230lbs
Hair Color: Pink
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone: Fair
Appearance: With a sharp but muscular build and shape, Siria would not look out of place compared to most Pergrande residents, if it weren't for her distinct Enca features. She wears a heavily modified exosuit, clearly from the Pergrande army, although not of any particular design most could reference. It is lithe, sleek, and does not restrict movement, and when broken heals itself as long as it is unobstructed.

Face Claim: Abigail Walker


Guild: Silver Wolves
Tattoo: The standard marking, placed on the left side of her stomach.
Tattoo Color: Silver

Faction: The Ironheart Pact
Faction Chapter: Pergrande

Tsykotics wrote:Name: Siria Glaczer
Gender: Female
Age: Early 20s
Birthday: Unknown, presumed late fall
Sexuality: Queer
Special Characteristics:
- Siria has a Kaiju Form sealed away behind a key phrase, being her Epithet "Kiju". Upon activation, spikes made of bone which glow with a red light from the inside and sporadically discharge plasma between nearby spikes erupt from her body, piercing directly through her skin; notable ones are on the outside of her forearms and biceps, the back of her hands, her spine, hips, elbows, the outside of her thighs and calves, and knees. This hurts a tremendous amount and causes blood to pour from each puncture wound.

Personality: Siria is, by all accounts, comparable to an emotionless machine. As a brainwashed super soldier, she follows orders by anyone above her in the Ironheart Pact, though orders from Pergrande leaders supersede any from other countries. She speaks in a stilted, controlled manner similar to a computer. What emotions she does show are only a facade, used to blend into a social environment she is infiltrating or to demonstrate the chain of command in a military setting. The only true emotion she has demonstrated since her indoctrination is pure, unadulterated, and primal rage, which is triggered from the overused of her Kaiju mutation. In this form, killing is second nature to her, and will rip and tear anyone and anything in her way so long as there is something to murder until she passes out from blood loss or fatigue.
When on a mission, she often attempts to take point as the leader if no one who is in control of her is involved. Decisive and fierce, she acts almost like a dog turned to a task, acting in a controlled fusion of instinct and intelligence. In this way, she also falls quickly to subservience when her masters are in the ranks, deferring immediately to those with power over her. This is because Siria intensely fears retribution from those in control of her, and will do anything to avoid repercussions. She is without morals in this regard as well, and those who stand in her way will not be pitied. Without the control of her masters, Siria would likely be lost within a vast sea of nothingness, with no anchor to hold onto, which in reality is her greatest weakness. Find a way to cut her off from her master's plans and she will likely shut down entirely, forced to reconcile with the blank slate of her being. Someday, deep, deep within her subconscious she hopes that someone will break her free of her chains and give her a life worth living. Until then, she is a weapon to be pointed at the enemy. Woe and mercy to those who stand in the way of the Ironheart Pact.

Likes:

• The Ironheart Pact, specifically Pergrande
  Siria is a follower of the doctrines of the Imperium, to a fault perhaps. So long as she breathes, she will fight for the Ironheart Pact.
  
• Following Orders
  When she's not in control of the mission, she easily falls into the role of the obedient soldier, acting swiftly upon orders given to her.
  
• Her Creator
  When it comes to her Creator, the person who experimented on her and transformed her, she has both fierce loyalty and devotion to them. In some regard, she views them as both father and god.
  

Dislikes:

• The Luminous Covenant
  The Covenant is to be despised as something abhorrent, an ugly thing that stands in the way of the glory of the Imperium and it's allies.
  
• Traitors
  Turning from the path of the Imperium is both a serious offense and a true shame. How could they betray those who pitied them and gave them purpose? They will gain new purpose in the afterlife then, she supposes.
  
• Those who don't know their place
  The hierarchy is structured the way it is for a reason, and defying it openly is only to invite chaos and strife.
  

Motivations:

• Being a good soldier
  A soldier is a tool, a weapon. She will be turned upon the enemy. The will of the Empress be done.
  
• Success of the mission
  A task set upon by Siria is one that will be completed without fail, for there is no room for failure in the Imperium.
  
• Destruction of the Luminous Covenant
  Death to the Covenant! Long live the Empress!
  

Fears:

• Failure
  Failure is not an option. Failure is the same as death, and so long as Siria lives, she will be of use to the Imperium.
  
• Losing control
  Being a beast by their nature is something one must grapple with very deeply. In the wrong situation, Siria could easily turn on her masters. She both very subconsciously wants to be free while paradoxically never wants to betray her countrymen by losing control.
  
• Being abandoned
  If failure is the same as death, then being abandoned as not even being worth the time to kill is certainly worse.
  

General Appearance

Height: 5'10"
Weight: ~230lbs
Hair Color: Pink
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone: Fair
Appearance: With a sharp but muscular build and shape, Siria would not look out of place compared to most Pergrande residents, if it weren't for her distinct Enca features. She wears a heavily modified exosuit, clearly from the Pergrande army, although not of any particular design most could reference. It is lithe, sleek, and does not restrict movement, and when broken heals itself as long as it is unobstructed.

Face Claim: Abigail Walker


Guild: Silver Wolves
Tattoo: The standard marking, placed on the left side of her stomach.
Tattoo Color: Silver

Faction: The Ironheart Pact
Faction Chapter: Pergrande