Shadow Flame

Magic

Primary Magic: Shadow Fire
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster

Description: Shadow fire magic is a corrupted version to regular fire magic. It is darker and almost solely black in colour and looks more like a void, although it does still contain the characteristics of fire.

This Magic was created after ones heart is completely changed from what it was. As in Videns' case such an event happened him when he was only five. Although outside of battle showing his flame, it is a regular red, but in battle is personality drastically changes causing it to turn black. So in a way, it's color changes depending on his state of mind and emotions. Granted, Videns can change it at will to show it, but it would not have the same effect as it would when he is in battle. It is a highly destructive magic with aspects of darkness magic and fire both.
Strengths:

• This magic possesses the elemental strengths of Fire and Darkness, making it a dual element magic.
  
• Cannot be extinguished by air magic.
  
• The darkness properties of this magic can be used to conceal the user's presence, or to blind targets temporarily.
  

Weaknesses:

• As a dual element magic, this possesses the weaknesses of both elements.
  
• The beneficial effects of thing magic can only be used on Videns himself. He cannot aid his allies with its powers.
  
• This magic is purely offensive, and as such does not possess any defensive capabilities. It cannot directly protect Videns from damage the way a barrier or defense spell would.
  
• If Videns draws on the power of the Shadow Fire for too long and over exerts himself, the dark energy from it causes him to go berserk and not be able to recognize friend from foe.
  

Lineage: Armoured Beast:
Description: A humanoid monster was said to live in a small village in Fiore. The monster was said to be intelligent, yet strong. However, despite holding the intelligence of a human, it was shunned for it's hideous figure, which lead to it crafting it's own armour to hide it. Eventually the armoured beast rescued a princess in distress and they fell in love, eventually settling down and making a family. Their children, however, didn't have a hideous appearance of their father, but were prodigy at war, and wore armour fit for conquerors.
Ability: A passive defensive ability that allows the user to have a higher endurance, tolerance and a keener intellect than most others.
Usage: Passive ability that effects the user.  The user is able to take two more user-ranked hits than your average mage.

Unique Abilities

• Videns can see through his own spells, as well as any natural fire or shadows - but not those created by other people's magic.
  
  
• Symbiosis - as Videns' magic has completely melded with his soul and body, it feeds on external sources of fire much like a parasite would. Fire magic or fire spells of rank equal to his own or lower would instead heal him for half the amount instead of causing damage. This only works on a direct hit and not spells of higher rank, or multi element. Can be done once per turn.
  
  
• Forged in Flames - While in battle, Videns exudes an ominous aura that burns through his skin. It causes anything or anyone that comes into contact with him - or anyone he comes into contact with - to take one instance of burning damage equal to half his rank. Of course, this requires physical contact for it to work as the effect only covers his body and doesn't extend out.
  

Spells:
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Name: Shadow Slash
Rank: D
Type: Fire + Dark, Offensive
Duration:instant
Cooldown: 3
Description: As the name of this spell suggests, Videns will create a slashing movement with a weapon or part of his body. From the movement a 1 meter in length and 4 inch thick black flame will come after the movement at a speed of 10m/s with a range of 15 meters. Upon contact the flames will give the target 1st to second degree burns and a small cut where hit. D rank damage (20)
Strengths:
A spell that can travel quickly.

Long range so it can go for a long distended before breaking

This spell is a dual element so it cannot be totally resisted.
Weaknesses:
Videns needs to make a slashing motion of 1 meter so this spell may work. This could take tine if things are in his way ot he is stopped mid swing. Furthermore if interrupted the spell will be canceled

As it is thin it makes the spell easier to dodge.

Weak to the water Element, reducing damage by half.

Stands out in bright places making it easier to see and avoid.


Name: Shadow storm
Rank: D
Type: Fire + Dark, Detrimental
Duration:3
Cooldown: 4
Description: As the name of this spell suggests, Videns will create a storm of shadows around someone. These flames are pitch black and cannot be seen out of. To create these flames, Videns must be 1 meter from them. Once in the range a black vortex will surround them, making them disorientated and unable to see or hear anything outside the vortex.
Strengths:
Prevents the target from seeing, hearing or smelling outside the vortex

Videns' spells and body may freely pass through this spell

Dual element so this spell cannot be totally resisted

Weaknesses:
Videns needs to be at close range to use this spell

This spell is made useless if a sensory spell of equal or higher rank is used, or by a mage of a high rank, who can then detect Videns anyway.

Lasts for a fixed amount of time so he cannot make them totally blind for a topic

Stands out in bright  places alerting others or making it easier to see and avoid.

Water magic can still extinguish the flames as, even with the shadow element, they are still flames
Name: Shadow Snatch
Rank: D
Type: Fire + Dark, Utility
Duration: instant
Cooldown: 3
Description: As Videns casts this spell, his shadow will get bigger and lunge at another person's shadow. With this Videns is able to make his shadow grab another shadow and send it towards Videns. This also drags the owner of the Shadow towards Videns too.
Strengths:
Can grab a shadow of a person

They cannot escape once grabbed, unless they somehow destroy Videns' Shadow which is holding them

Dual element so cannot be totally resisted.
Weaknesses:
Videns needs to be 15 meters from them so he may grab the shadow

There needs to be a shadow to grab in the first place otherwise this spell is made useless

Makes Videns far more noticeable as the spell grabs someone as if from thin air, which would alert others

Can be completely stoped if light magic is used

Name: Shadow Smoke
Rank: D
Type: Fire + Dark, Offensive
Duration:3
Cooldown: 4
Description: As the name of this spell suggests, Videns will create a darkish smoke directally from his body. Upon inhalation of anyone other then Videns, their lungs will begin to burn from the inside , as if on fire and do half D rank ( 10 ) damage. This will also make the target hard of breathing and also keep Videns slightly concealed as the smoke is pitch black.
Strengths:
Can conceal Videns aswell as do danage

It can disorientate anyone caught in the smoke

Dual element so this spell cannot be totaly reisted
Weaknesses:
Videns needs to breath out this smoke from his mouth, so if shut at all the spell will be canceled

If this spell in not inhaled no damage will be done

Can be blown away easily by wind magic

Stands out in bright places making it easier to see and avoid.

List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

Name Name of the Spell )
Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)

Done

Hiya Videns, just a couple of little things I need to ask before I give the magic a full review, otherwise you'll end up with random little green bits in every line :P

Could you add in the parts of the template that you removed please? It's just the bits at the top but they need to be there for future use.

Please extend and elaborate on your strengths and weaknesses a little. We like to see at least a sentence for each one.

Bump!

Thanks for doing that =] all edits now are written in green in the spoilers below. If you've any issues with the edits I've requested then please PM me or talk to me in the chatbox.

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Thank you :D

For shadow snatch I ment to keep them there trapped, but just changed it anyway xD

Bump!

Approvedededed!

Now get your ass into jobs! =D