Dhruv's Magic

Primary Magic: Sky Divine Magic
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)

Caster or Holder: Caster

Description: Sky Divine magic is a magic which allows caster to cast different type of spells.By this magic Dhruv can cast different type of spell for different purposes like for attack,defence,healing etc.
Dhruv learned this magic by himself and called this magic Sky Divine Magic.This magic allow him to cast different type of offensive,defensive,supportive and illusion magic.Using too much of this magic make Dhruv tired and he fall asleep for hours.Most the spells needs to be chant before activating.
Strengths:
-It increases the speed and strength of the caster.
-Aura can react with the caster body to divide him into particals and can also change the property of particals.
-Sky divine magic also allows caster to cast different type of spells related to sky and energy.
Weaknesses:
-Most of the offensive spells needs to chant before activating.
-Using too much energy makes caster tired.
-Using too much his magic makes him fall asleep for hours.
Abilities/Powers:
Increase speed.
Increase power.
Increase power of the physical moment(like jump)
Name: Mist Body
Rank: D
Type: Supportive.
Description: Dhruv concentrate in his mind for a second and his body divides into the small partials(or dust).Dhruv can come to his orignal body when he wants to come.
Strengths:
-This spell can be used if the opponent attacks him.
-He can not be harmed in partical form.Caster can also move in his partical form.
-Dhruv can not be touched by anything in his partical form.
-He can move upto 1 km with a very high speed in his mist body.
-Dhruv can move in air in his mist body.
Weaknesses:
-Dhruv can not use any other type of magic expect replica in his partical form.
-He can not touch anything in this form.
-He can not harm his opponent in this form.
Cooldown-1 post
Duration-3 posts or below.

Name: Star Lightning
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description:Dhruv just focus in his mind and blue aura covers his whole body.This increases Dhruv's speed and power.The speed of Dhruv increases upto 30m/sec.It is very difficult to see Dhruv exact position when he is moving.
Strengths:
-Increases speed of caster upto the speed of light.
-Increases Dhruv's moment and physical attacking(punch,kick,etc)speed and power.
-Can dodge the opponent attack.
Weaknesses:
-Caster can not use any other spell unless he stop using this spell.
Duration-3 posts or below
Cooldown-1 posts
Name: Replica

Rank: D

Type: Dublicating

Description: Dhruv concentrate in his mind for a moment and then convert him into particals just like the mist body magic but instead of coming in his orignal body,he changes into some other person body(any person which he ever seen).To come to his orignal body,Dhruv can reverse the replica magic any time by concentrating on his mind.

Strengths:

-Can be use to distract opponent.

-If caster uses mist body magic,he can still use replica magic.
Weakness
-Can not use any other type of magic(except Mist Body)unless caster dont come to his orignal body.
Duration-5 posts
Cooldown-3 posts

Name: Divine Senses
Rank: D

Type: Supportive
Description: Dhruv brings his index and middle finger of right hand in his forhead and says Divine Senses;Vision,Divine Senses;Hear,Divine Senses;Feel and Divine Senses;Smell.Caster can use different senses in a row.
Strengths:
-This magic can increases the working of all the senses of caster.
-When caster chants Divine Senses;Vision,Caster can see the far objects clearly.This also allow caster to see things behind anythings( behind walls,mist,water,etc).
-When caster chant Divine Senses;Smell it increases his smelling power.
-If caster chant Divine Senses;Feel, he can feel the presence of anyone around him without actually seeing them and can also locate their exact position without seeing them if they are near upto 50 meter.
-If caster chants Divine Senses;Hear,it increases caster hearing power.
Weaknesses:
-Using this magic,caster can use only supportive magic.
-This magic also require high concentration power.
Duration-1 post or below for each senses
Cooldown-1 post.

Random question: You ever watch Kaze No Stigma? The main characters wind abilities are the kind of vibe I'm getting from this magic. It's cool. Anyway.

Mist Body: Needs some kind of duration it can't exactly be limitless. Needs a duration of how long he can stay in that form and how far he can travel with it before its up. Also a cool down like the rest of your spells. It can be low since its basically a support spell but just balance it with the duration

Divine Senses: It needs a cool down of some sort. Or if he can just rapidly use it, have it be less effective each time he uses it.

Healing: Does it heal other people? Just wondering

Also, are you basically going to be a melee character for D rank because you have no offensive spells. That's fine, just want to clarify. Bump when edited.

I have edited something in different spell,you can check them.I think Lightning Bolt will be enough for battle in D rank jobs as it also increases the power of Dhruv's attact.Also I can use the combination of Blue Mist,Divine Senses and Lightning Bolt in any battle.
Is that anime is also known as Stigma of the Wind.If yes then I had watched 1-2 eposide of it.Still I dont know much about its characters expect the guy use wind magic and girl use fire magic.

I want to ask about duration in a magic.Like in replica magic I said that its duration is 10 posts or below so that he can turn into his orignal body anytime.What if i said that its duration is 10 post,doest it means the same or caster can not change in his orignal body untill 10 posts.

Looks good to me. And yes Stigma of the Wind = Kaze no Stigma. And you can come out of it whenever you like just the cooldown will be from when you first used it

I forgot, D rank mages only have 4 spells now so please take away two spells of your choice.

How does Aura enable healing magic? A passive heal i can get, but not a direct full blown healing spell. So make up your mind, is this an aura, or a magic. The two are not linked directly with each other. All of your spells do not even need the damn aura. So again, is this an aura magic, or a caster inside body magic.

Star Lightning also makes no sense, you add a visual effect to your movements......THAT DOESN'T GIVE YOU ANYTHING

Divine sense also makes no sense, you do not explain how that spell works. Your just saying divine senses.....I would allow it, if you had to be more specific like "Divine Sense; Sight" And then you gained massively increased sight by focusing your magic into your eyes, but just doing what you said makes NO sense and is not even a spell.......

Shooting Star also makes no sense. Everything has a dodge rating, your using a skill shot not a homing technique. Further more it is shot out of your fingers, how is it a shooting star, I would get it if you used a pentagram magic circle like in the anime, raised it above your head, and then just a small volley or even one energy blast fires out and lands where you want it, but what you are doing it is a skill shot ergo miss rating is included.


When I look at ALL of your spells, not one makes the slightest bit amount of sense. You are trying to combine two different types of magic into one, and it fails horribly. Revamp your magic ENTIRELY, and make them more accurate according to their names, what you want them to do, get more descriptive with them, and then define WHAT YOUR MAGIC REALLY IS! Is it an aura based magic with a bunch of passives, or is it magic you cast yourself. Magic can create a small buff aura, but they do not last long. Your magic doesn't make the slightes tbit amount of being SKY or Divine.

Ok,I edited it but I didnt changed the name of divine senses cause it increases all of his senses not only eye.

Blue MIst's range is too large for a D rank spell, narrow it down. You have 300 feet, yeah too far for D rank. C maybe, B definitely, Anything above is childs play, and then D is no.

Star Lightning's speed boost is also too great now, it makes you unimaginably unbeatable in one on one fight. Lower it down greatly. A Good, Great, or even Extraordinary speed boost is acceptable, but to go basically to max speed you could punch your opponent to death in 1.2 seconds. Yeah, BEYOND OP for a D rank spell.

Devine Senses again I want NERFED from all TO ONE AT A TIME (Was not asking you to change the name, just make the spell itself more specific to one sense at a time) in other words, you needing to chant to boost ONE SENSE PER CAST! (Like saying "Divine Sense; Sight. Or Divine Sense; Hear. Or even Divine Sense Smell. but the name does not change) That way you are not omnipotent on the battle field, and are able to be hindered more. I can understand you wanting to match yourself up to other mages of higher ranks, but you are D rank. FOcus on D rank mages to meet up, not one is anywhere near that powerful.

also i forgot to mention this to you, but you do know that Mist Body is ATTACHED to your main description...please add the spacing for that.

Ok,I replaced Blue Mist with Replica.I am going to make Blue Mist as my C rank spell in future.And other things are also edited as you said.

ok fair enough, approved.