Requip-Morning Star

Lucifer the Fallen wrote:Primary Magic: Requip-Morning Star
Secondary Magic: None
Caster or Holder: Holder
Description: Lucifer uses requip magic in the form of swords, spears, and armors. He perticularally uses them to get in close to the opponent and overpower them, while also standing up to those above him with passive armor abilities. He mainly uses plate or chain mail, but may or may not use leather or lighter armors for speed purposes. With his main fighting purpose as cqc and physical combat it makes him extreemly vulnerable to ranged mages and non-physical combat.

Strengths:
-Can change inbetween armors and weapons to fight a variety of different foes
-Can summon a suit of armor and weapon simoutaneously
-Makes it hard to fight up close and personal with basic ranged combat
-Thicker makes for higher resistance against physical attacks

Weaknesses:
-Changing inbetween armors takes time to do, and regardless of how quick any wasted time in a fight could mean life or death
-Cannot use more than one weapon at one time, in addition one weapon is specific to one armor, making it harder to fight
-Ranged combat and magical combat proves much more effective
-Thicker armor makes for slower speeds
-Armor, while can have natural Passives, cannot provide specific defenses against elements (fire, water, light, dark, etc)
-Weapons are not ranged (with exception of spear but if you throw it you basically lost your weapon)

Abilities:
-Natural Requip Ability: Can change armor and weapons in battle

Name: Moonlight Sword
Rank: D
Type: Broadsword
Description: A straight white steel sword. It has no special properties by itself, and has a 4"6' total length, the blade only being 3"2'. With the armor's ability it faintly increases glowing a whitish color as time goes by
Strengths:
-Very effective against magic users who have very little physical defensive options.
-Very effective in CQC regardless
-Broadswords are typically a mixture of longsword and shortsword, having higher strength than a Shortsword and higher mobility than longsword
Weaknesses:
-Cannot deflect, bounce back, provide defense against, etc, against magical attacks
-Has literally no effect in far range combat
-No magical properties (such as shooting fireballs or other magic-based attacks.)
-Standardly heavy, basically weighs more than a Shortsword, making it harder to maneuver than a Shortsword (but is easier than a longsword)

Name: Moonlight Armor
Rank: D
Type: ChainMail
Description: All white ChainMail armor, and the users entire left arm has a golden plate gauntlet (like kratos' golden fleece) which glows white as the battle goes on. Has a helmet, also white. -special passive ability-Torment: As the battle continues after activated(each post), user of the armor gets 25% stronger and faster
Ability Duration: Up to 10 Posts
Ability Cooldown: 10 Posts regardless of how long it is held
(1 post-100%, 2 posts 125%, 3 posts 156.25% etc...)
Strength:
-Can prolong fights to tire out opponents
-Left arm can withstand more damage than any other part of the armor
-Can put up fights against stronger opponents and higher class mages
-ChainMail armor is typically strong, stronger than leather and cloth type tunics and such
Weaknesses:
-Tiring out an opponent and prolonging fights takes very hard work, and can easily fail by opponent insta-winning
-Left arm is also the arm that wields the blade, so therefore the shield type armor wont really work unless I stop fighting
-Fight must continue on VERY long for me to catch up to a very strong Mage, making it easier to lose earlier in the fight
-ChainMail armor is weaker than plate mail, and is basically useless against spears, lances and other "Stabby" weapons
-Produces no special magical resistance (fire, elemental, etc)
-Once I equip a different armor, special ability resets back to 100% regardless of what it was before change (could be at 500% but still goes back to 100%)

Name: Vengeance Spear
Rank: D
Type: Spear
Description: A cold, steel black spear that is 5"7' in length. No other special physical properties
-special passive ability- Balance- While the spear seems like a lopsided weapon it is perfectly balanced to the user giving higher accuracy and mobility
Strength:
-Spears can be thrown giving very slight ranged combat
-Very much longer than a sword, giving distance to fighting
-Special Passive lets for higher mobility than average spears
Weaknesses:
-Once thrown, spear does not auto-return to Lucifer until he changes armors again and basically loses his weapon until he regains it
-While distanced fighting is better for spears, cqc isn't. Daggers, swords, and other "get in close" weapons will be devastating against the spear
-Passive does not get rid of the weight of the spear, it only seems lighter and balanced, so no speed increase would be involved
-Doesn't have as much varied fighting options like swords (slicing, stabbing, etc)
-Can ONLY be used for "stabbing" moves (and of course hitting with the stick but what will that get you?)
-Can only be used with the nemesis armor
-Cannot be used like a baseball bat to deflect projectiles
Name: Nemesis Armor
Rank:D
Type: Plate Mail
Description: Cold, Steel black playing all over Lucifers body. Does not have a helmet. Has a picture of a scale on the upper right chest plate, and underneath the plate armor is leather. As I take damage the armor glows dark red.
-special passive- Balance (different than before) As I take damage, opponent takes damage equal to what I take.
Duration: Attack at hand
Cooldown: 3 posts
Strength:
-Plate mail is the strongest of the four armor types (cloth 0% def-leather 25% def-ChainMail 50% def-plate mail 75% def) giving most defense
-Recoil type effect does not work vise versa (if I attack opponent I do not take damage)
-(only if plate mail is off) Leather makes for easier maneuvering and quicker speeds
Weaknesses:
-Plate mail generally is the slowest and hardest to maneuver armor type of them all
-(if someone can somehow get the armor off) Leather armor produces way less defense against attacks than plate
-Recoil Ability only works if opponent does (on a scale of one to ten) four or more damage in one hit
-Plate armor is separated into (obviously) plates, and each plate is separate, which means I can easily get cut through the plates, or the armor can be taken off (by will or by force)

Lucifer the Fallen wrote:Primary Magic: Requip-Morning Star
Secondary Magic: None
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Lucifer uses requip magic in the form of swords, spears, and armors. He perticularally uses them to get in close to the opponent and overpower them, while also standing up to those above him with passive armor abilities. He mainly uses plate or chain mail, but may or may not use leather or lighter armors for speed purposes. With his main fighting purpose as cqc and physical combat it makes him extreemly vulnerable to ranged mages and non-physical combat.

Strengths:
-Can change inbetween armors and weapons to fight a variety of different foes
-Can summon a suit of armor and weapon simoutaneously
-Makes it hard to fight up close and personal with basic ranged combat
-Thicker makes for higher resistance against physical attacks

Weaknesses:
-Changing inbetween armors takes time to do, and regardless of how quick any wasted time in a fight could mean life or death
-Cannot use more than one weapon at one time, in addition one weapon is specific to one armor, making it harder to fight
-Ranged combat and magical combat proves much more effective
-Thicker armor makes for slower speeds
-Armor, while can have natural Passives, cannot provide specific defenses against elements (fire, water, light, dark, etc)
-Weapons are not ranged (with exception of spear but if you throw it you basically lost your weapon)

Abilities:
-Natural Requip Ability: Can change armor and weapons in battle

Name: Moonlight Sword
Rank: D
Type: Broadsword
Description: A straight white steel sword. It has no special properties by itself, and has a 4"6' total length, the blade only being 3"2'. With the armor's ability it faintly increases glowing a whitish color as time goes by
Strengths:
-Very effective against magic users who have very little physical defensive options.
-Very effective in CQC regardless
-Broadswords are typically a mixture of longsword and shortsword, having higher strength than a Shortsword and higher mobility than longsword
Weaknesses:
-Cannot deflect, bounce back, provide defense against, etc, against magical attacks
-Has literally no effect in far range combat
-No magical properties (such as shooting fireballs or other magic-based attacks.)
-Standardly heavy, basically weighs more than a Shortsword, making it harder to maneuver than a Shortsword (but is easier than a longsword)
Duration Sword stays in combat- up to 5 posts then vanishes I said 3 to 4 posts. While you might not think it's fair, everyone has the same duration and cooldowns. EVERYONE...
Cooldown after vanishes- 6 posts

Name: Moonlight Armor
Rank: D
Type: ChainMail
Description: All white ChainMail armor, and the users entire left arm has a golden plate gauntlet (like kratos' golden fleece) which glows white as the battle goes on. Has a helmet, also white. -special passive ability-Torment: As the battle continues after activated(each post), user of the armor gets 25% stronger and faster25% per post it's activated is too much for D rank. 10% at minimum...
Ability Duration: Up to 5 PostsOnce again, i said 3 - 4
Ability Cooldown: 7 Posts regardless of how long it is held
(1 post-100%, 2 posts 125%, 3 posts 156.25% etc...)
Strength:
-Can prolong fights to tire out opponents
-Left arm can withstand more damage than any other part of the armor Why? and give me a percentage of how much more.
-Can put up fights against stronger opponents and higher class magesI will let you know now, that D ranks can not win against mages B rank or higher. The system is designed this way by power levels
-ChainMail armor is typically strong, stronger than leather and cloth type tunics and such
Weaknesses:
-Tiring out an opponent and prolonging fights takes very hard work, and can easily fail by opponent insta-winning
-Left arm is also the arm that wields the blade, so therefore the shield type armor wont really work unless I stop fighting
-Fight must continue on VERY long for me to catch up to a very strong Mage, making it easier to lose earlier in the fight
-ChainMail armor is weaker than plate mail, and is basically useless against spears, lances and other "Stabby" weapons
-Produces no special magical resistance (fire, elemental, etc)
-Once I equip a different armor, special ability resets back to 100% regardless of what it was before change (could be at 500% but still goes back to 100%)This kinda has to do with what i said above that it's 10% per post minimum.
Duration of Armor- Same as swordfix
Cooldown after vanishes-  7

Name: Vengeance Spear
Rank: D
Type: Spear
Description: A cold, steel black spear that is 5"7' in length. No other special physical properties
-special passive ability- Balance- While the spear seems like a lopsided weapon it is perfectly balanced to the user giving higher accuracy and mobilitycompared to other spear holders? Id say it is a 5% accuracy increase...At D rank.
Strength:
-Spears can be thrown giving very slight ranged combatHow far?
-Very much longer than a sword, giving distance to fighting
-Special Passive lets for higher mobility than average spears
Weaknesses:
-Once thrown, spear does not auto-return to Lucifer until he changes armors again and basically loses his weapon until he regains it
-While distanced fighting is better for spears, cqc isn't. Daggers, swords, and other "get in close" weapons will be devastating against the spear
-Passive does not get rid of the weight of the spear, it only seems lighter and balanced, so no speed increase would be involved
-Doesn't have as much varied fighting options like swords (slicing, stabbing, etc)
-Can ONLY be used for "stabbing" moves (and of course hitting with the stick but what will that get you?)
-Can only be used with the nemesis armor
-Cannot be used like a baseball bat to deflect projectiles
Duration of Spear- Up to 5 postsFix
Cooldown after vanish- 6 posts
Name: Nemesis Armor
Rank:D
Type: Plate Mail
Description: Cold, Steel black playing all over Lucifers body. Does not have a helmet. Has a picture of a scale on the upper right chest plate, and underneath the plate armor is leather. As I take damage the armor glows dark red.
-special passive- Balance (different than before) As I take damage, opponent takes damage equal to what I take.Why would opponent take damage as well? unless magic is sensory link magic... im confused...
Duration: Attack at hand? what?
Cooldown: 5 posts
Strength:
-Plate mail is the strongest of the four armor types (cloth 0% def-leather 25% def-ChainMail 50% def-plate mail 75% def) giving most defenseare you saying this gives higer defense than other armors?? Typically, the way armor works, is that it absorbs amount of spells or attacks. SO ALL ARMOR'S ** you need to say the amount of damage they can take without breaking... this would be 3 C rank Damage ( 6 D rank )
-Recoil type effect does not work vise versa (if I attack opponent I do not take damage)
-(only if plate mail is off) Leather makes for easier maneuvering and quicker speeds
Weaknesses:
-Plate mail generally is the slowest and hardest to maneuver armor type of them all
-(if someone can somehow get the armor off) Leather armor produces way less defense against attacks than plate
-Recoil Ability only works if opponent does (on a scale of one to ten) four or more damage in one hit
-Plate armor is separated into (obviously) plates, and each plate is separate, which means I can easily get cut through the plates, or the armor can be taken off (by will or by force)
Duration of Armor- Up to 5 postsFix
Cooldown of armor- 7 posts

Lucifer the Fallen wrote:I have edited what I thought needed to be edited and I will explain everything else

"I will let you know now, that D ranks can not win against mages B rank or higher. The system is designed this way by power levels"
-The way you put this is stupid. While I is take this out you must think regardless of class anyone can beat anyone given enough work. ANYONE.Try to go against an S rank in PVP... there is a reason we have ranks... D rank spells do not affect B rank and higher.

"Why would opponent take damage as well? unless magic is sensory link magic... im confused..."
-Think of Pokemon. I don't remember exactly cause I haven't played in so long but I think it is the move stone edge. When you use the move you also take damage. The concept is like that, I can't explain it entirely because I'm not a "magic expert" but I hope that lessens your confusion.Okay, now you need to put that in your magic app, and it has to be put as a Active ability. Also it will be the same amount of damage given. 1/2 damage...

"are you saying this gives higer defense than other armors?? Typically, the way armor works, is that it absorbs amount of spells or attacks. SO ALL ARMOR'S ** you need to say the amount of damage they can take without breaking... this would be 3 C rank Damage ( 6 D rank )"
-Again, while I did take this out I just wanna say (no offense intended btw) that your armor system is unrealistic and confusing. Armor has VERY little resistance against magical attacks unless enchanted, otherwise I was relating to physical attacks. Note while those who rank up get higher power it doesn't mean they can break through friggin steel. As said before: HIGHLY unrealistic. I could understand sword breaking another sword but a fireball breaking a plate mail chest plate is out if my view of sight. I don't care if it doesn't make any realistic sense. This is a Fantasy world and I do not make the rules. You still have to label the amount of damage It can take before vanishing. This is how the system works

Oh yeah also the left arm thing is just cause it's stronger armor than the rest.Then you need to put that, and how much stronger it is.

As said before edited. Think of what I said, I mean no harm but it's just critisim.I have dealt with many people with criticism, Once again, i don't make the rules. I just tell them to you so you can fix it so i can approve it.