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    Nemean Force

    Noah Xander
    Noah Xander

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    Post by Noah Xander 20th August 2014, 10:49 am

    Primary Magic: Nemean Force
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Nemean Force is a branch of Light and Fire based magic that focuses on overwhelming power whilst buffing up the caster. It is a very physical form of magic, relying on the casters body for the spells. It can also be affected by the casters emotional state.

    Strengths:
    • Most Slayers can’t consume the casters magic as it is a mixed magic.
    • When the caster is angry, magical damage is increased by 20%
    • Fire and Lightning damage is reduced by 5%


    Weaknesses:
    • When the caster is angry, spell cost increases. I.E. D-rank spell normally costs 10% at D-Rank mage. Anger cost increase makes a D-Rank Spell cost 15% instead etc.
    • Slayers who have access to both Light and Fire can conceivably consume this magic.
    • The magic is ineffective underwater.
    • Water and Ice magic deals 10% more damage to the caster

    Abilities/Powers: (List the abilities it provides, make sure to separate each ability! Abilities are like passive traits, or a hidden power that can be activated for a very limited amount of time.)
    • Passive: 5% increase in physical strength.
    • Activate: Nemean Force: After a thread reaches fifteen posts (not including dice rolls), the caster can activate this ability. At a cost of 50% Magic Power, the caster can increase their physical strength by 50%, their magical damage by 50%, and their speed by 50% for three of their posts. Damage taken is reduced by 50%. This ability can only be used once per thread. How it appears is as an orange fire-like aura around the caster, with white sparks flashing around their body. Their eyes turn into those of a lions, and their body becomes leaner yet more muscular pronounced.







    Spells
    D-Rank Spells:

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    Nemean Force Empty Re: Nemean Force

    Post by Kihia 23rd August 2014, 7:00 pm

    Hallo There Noah, I am Kihia and I will be going over your magic with you, Everything that needs to be addressed/edited will be in This color
    Noah Xander wrote:Primary Magic: Nemean Force
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Nemean Force is a branch of Light and Fire based magic that focuses on overwhelming power whilst buffing up the caster. It is a very physical form of magic, relying on the casters body for the spells. It can also be affected by the casters emotional state.-Please expand on this, elaborate on the very nature of the magic and how your character uses it

    Strengths:
    • Most Slayers can’t consume the casters magic as it is a mixed magic.
    • When the caster is angry, magical damage is increased by 20%
    • Fire and Lightning damage is reduced by 5% -Is this against a damage resistance or? please elaborate


    Weaknesses:
    • When the caster is angry, spell cost increases. I.E. D-rank spell normally costs 10% at D-Rank mage. Anger cost increase makes a D-Rank Spell cost 15% instead etc.
    • Slayers who have access to both Light and Fire can conceivably consume this magic.
    • The magic is ineffective underwater.
    • Water and Ice magic deals 10% more damage to the caster
    -Keep in mind Fire or Light God Slayers and Demon Slayers can eat the parts of their magics in correlation to their element
    Abilities/Powers: (List the abilities it provides, make sure to separate each ability! Abilities are like passive traits, or a hidden power that can be activated for a very limited amount of time.)
    • Passive: 5% increase in physical strength.
    • Activate: Nemean Force: After a thread reaches fifteen posts (not including dice rolls), the caster can activate this ability. At a cost of 50% Magic Power, the caster can increase their physical strength by 50%, their magical damage by 50%, and their speed by 50% for three of their posts. Damage taken is reduced by 50%. This ability can only be used once per thread. How it appears is as an orange fire-like aura around the caster, with white sparks flashing around their body. Their eyes turn into those of a lions, and their body becomes leaner yet more muscular pronounced.- This Either needs to be Heavily modified OR removed, this bears a extreme resemblance to the sites Slayer Force system, we do not allow non slayer magics to have similar abilities to that mechanic,







    Spells
    D-Rank Spells:



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