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    Vestments of Avalon

    JaffaArchfiend
    JaffaArchfiend

    Summoner of Faith


    Summoner of Faith

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
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    Posts : 580
    Guild : Sabertooth
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Holy Stigmata Magic
    Second Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by JaffaArchfiend 6th August 2014, 4:15 am

    Name: Vestment of Avalon
    Rank: Artifact
    Type: Armour

    Description: ( What it looks like. A picture should suffice, but make sure to put it in a spoiler. )

    "Clad mine flesh in thine vestments, sacred shield of the Dragon of Divinity, sheathe to the sacred blade of Arturia! Lend me thine light, and grace mine allies even as thou damn mine foes! Shine forth, Avalon!"

    The ancient holy armour is always shining, even in the darkest of places such is its radiance. The faith imbued within this holy reliquary armour keeps it clean from all filth, dirt, blood, stains and other such befoulments. In other words, it is always clean.

    Vestments of Avalon:

    Due to the strain of the ancient power, the armour can only be called upon for three posts, and must cooldown for four posts after it disperses

    Strengths:

    • Can resist A Rank and below Spells
    • Is summoned forth from a ring on the wearer in a pillar of light that can blind foes temporarily.
    • Darkness and Shadow attacks only deal 50% damage to the wearer.


    Weaknesses:

    • Cannot resist spells higher than A Rank
    • Can be pierced by Legendary rank and higher weapons
    • Requires the chant written above to be uttered aloud to activate.
    • Pure Holy magic wielders that are opposed to the wearer are not affected by the armour's abilities.


    Abilities:


      PLAYER RANKED EFFECTS
    • Sacred Blessing: All allies within a half-mile radius of the wearer can infuse their own attacks with Holy magic of the same rank as the wearer, who's own Holy Spells damage and effects are boosted by 50% when wearing this armour
    • Blinding effect when summoned lasts one post, and only effects those the wearer considers enemies.


    Last edited by JaffaArchfiend on 12th December 2014, 5:51 pm; edited 5 times in total


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    Post by Indiana Jones 7th August 2014, 8:26 am

    Okay. Most of it works for me, though there is only one small thing that in my opinion has to be changed. Say that shadow and darkness attacks deal 60% reduced damage. Full immunity is really powerful and having it as an armors strength is sadly too much. But everything else looks good to me. So bump the thread when changes have been made.


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    JaffaArchfiend
    JaffaArchfiend

    Summoner of Faith


    Summoner of Faith

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
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    Posts : 580
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    Character Sheet
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    Post by JaffaArchfiend 7th August 2014, 8:34 am

    and updated :3 Figured I'd see how far I could push it since it was an Artifact armour :P


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    Post by Indiana Jones 7th August 2014, 8:42 am

    All looks good now. So...

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    Aayla
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    Post by Aayla 28th November 2014, 6:25 pm

    Unlocked for image adjustment


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    Post by Aayla 11th December 2014, 3:51 pm

    JaffaArchfiend wrote:Name: Vestment of Avalon
    Rank: Artifact
    Type: Armour

    Description: ( What it looks like. A picture should suffice, but make sure to put it in a spoiler. )

    "Clad mine flesh in thine vestments, sacred shield of the Dragon of Divinity, sheathe to the sacred blade of Arturia! Lend me thine light, and grace mine allies even as thou damn mine foes! Shine forth, Avalon!"

    Spoiler:


    Strengths:

    • Can resist A Rank and below Spells
    • Is summoned forth from a ring on the wearer in a blaze of light that can blind foes temporarily.
    • Darkness and Shadow attacks only deal 40% damage to the wearer. (increase to 50, 40 is such a weird number)


    Weaknesses:

    • Cannot resist spells higher than A Rank
    • Can be pierced by Legendary rank and higher weapons
    • Limited time only depending on rank. (This isn't a weakness its a duration)

      D-Rank = 1 posts
      C-Rank = 3 posts
      B-Rank = 5 posts
      A-Rank = 7 posts
      S-Rank = 9 posts
      SS-Rank = 11 posts

    You also need an extra weakness here, two since the last one isn't a weakness
    Abilities:

      PASSIVES
    • Armour shines with light to guide through dark places.
    • Armour is always clean, even when dirt and blood splatters on it, they vanish.
    • Blinding effect when summoned lasts one post, and only effects those the wearer considers enemies.
    • Stigmata Spells no longer cost health to cast when wearing the Armour

      PLAYER RANKED EFFECTS
    • Sacred Blessing: All allies within a half-mile radius of the wearer can infuse their own attacks with Holy magic of the same rank as the wearer.
    • All Holy Spells damage and effects are boosted by 50% when wearing this armor.


    Sorry, but edits are in blue before I can approve it XD


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    JaffaArchfiend
    JaffaArchfiend

    Summoner of Faith


    Summoner of Faith

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 580
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Secondary - Katherine Wickfield
    Experience : 4986.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Holy Stigmata Magic
    Second Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by JaffaArchfiend 11th December 2014, 4:26 pm

    Edits made :)


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    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

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    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

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    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Aayla 12th December 2014, 12:13 pm

    JaffaArchfiend wrote:Name: Vestment of Avalon
    Rank: Artifact
    Type: Armour

    Description: ( What it looks like. A picture should suffice, but make sure to put it in a spoiler. )

    "Clad mine flesh in thine vestments, sacred shield of the Dragon of Divinity, sheathe to the sacred blade of Arturia! Lend me thine light, and grace mine allies even as thou damn mine foes! Shine forth, Avalon!"

    Spoiler:


    Strengths:

    • Can resist A Rank and below Spells
    • Is summoned forth from a ring on the wearer in a blaze of light that can blind foes temporarily.
    • Darkness and Shadow attacks only deal 50% damage to the wearer.


    Weaknesses:

    • Cannot resist spells higher than A Rank
    • Can be pierced by Legendary rank and higher weapons
    • Requires the chant written above to be uttered aloud to activate.
    • Due to the strain of the ancient power, the armour can only be called upon twice per thread and has a three post cooldown between activations.



    Limited time only depending on rank.

    D-Rank = 1 posts
    C-Rank = 3 posts
    B-Rank = 5 posts
    A-Rank = 7 posts
    S-Rank = 9 posts
    SS-Rank = 11 posts
    H-Rank = 13 posts

    Abilities:

      PASSIVES
    • Armour shines with light to guide through dark places.
    • Armour is always clean, even when dirt and blood splatters on it, they vanish.
    • Blinding effect when summoned lasts one post, and only effects those the wearer considers enemies.
    • Stigmata Spells no longer cost health to cast when wearing the armour.

      PLAYER RANKED EFFECTS
    • Sacred Blessing: All allies within a half-mile radius of the wearer can infuse their own attacks with Holy magic of the same rank as the wearer.
    • All Holy Spells damage and effects are boosted by 50% when wearing this armour.


    Okay so, final thing is that you've got way too many abilities going on. You only get two player ranked effects, any passives of your armor cannot affect anything in combat. So, move your first two passives o your description, and the last two need to either be removed, or incorporated into your ranked effects.

    Also since this armor is summoned, I need a duration to go with your cooldown


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    JaffaArchfiend
    JaffaArchfiend

    Summoner of Faith


    Summoner of Faith

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 580
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Secondary - Katherine Wickfield
    Experience : 4986.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Holy Stigmata Magic
    Second Skill: Celestial Spirit Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by JaffaArchfiend 12th December 2014, 5:44 pm

    Awww :shame: :seijin: Edits made


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    Aayla
    Aayla

    Knight of Water


    Knight of Water

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Dragon Slayer- A-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 1634
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 15
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hydrianna (Water Dragon), Deniel (Takeover)
    Experience : 8500

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 3rd Generation Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Aayla 12th December 2014, 5:54 pm

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