by timmir1 30th August 2014, 9:18 pm
((Hey Von. May I advise to slow down and take the time to describe things a bit. Your post is kind of hard to follow, and feels very 'bunny-moddy', which I don't appreciate. I understand that your trying to do a fast action scene, but trying to do in in one paragraph just doesn't work. Especially when your sentences are just running into eachother like they are. Just something to keep in mind in the future.))
Malm looked at the man as he claimed he needed help. However, before he could respond, he heard the van return. He looked back curiously wonder what exactly those driving the van wanted with the man. Yet it didn't seem like he was getting any answers as the man said they gotta go before suddenly grabbing hold of Malm's hand (or wrist rather) and dragging him along.
Seeing that he didn't exactly have much choice, Malm followed the man into a building. It seemed the men who were driving the van had entered the building shortly after the pair. Maybe Malm should have blocked while he had a chance, but then again he didn't knew what was going on. The man he was following could possibly be a criminal for all he knew, and the men following after them were just trying to bring him to justice. Though he must admit that he had his doubts that the men chasing them were actually lawmen judging from the vehicle they were driving.
The chase had led the duo to the roof. "What now?" Malm asked before seeing the man jump to another roof, giving him his answer. Malm paused in awe at how the man just jumped without even seeming to give it a second.
Malm looked back as he heard the group of men chasing them were quickly approaching. A thought went through his head that he should try talk things out with them, but something gave him the impression that that wasn't going to work. Without much other option, Malm looked back over at the man, who had already cleared three rooftops, and took a deep breath. "Just don't look down. Just don't look down." Malm said to himself repeatedly as he took a running start and started jumping across the rooftops after the strange man. Everything seemed to be going swell until Malm accidentally jumped a little early and had nearly dropped down into one of the alleyways below. Fortunately, he managed to catch the edge of the building just in time to save himself before scrambling back up onto the rooftop.
Malm eventually managed to catchup to the strange man, but things were beginning to look bleak. They were at a deadend and the men chasing after them were quickly catching up. "Well I guess we have no choice, but to..." Before Malm could finish his statement, the man jumped into hole that seemed to be filled with water. "Well I guess that's another choice. Why me?" The green-haired teen asked with a sigh as he looked over at the men as they cornered him.
Well here goes nothing...
Malm screamed as he fell before being suddenly interrupted by water engulfing him without warning. Unable to swim, Malm quickly flailed about in the water trying to grasp onto anything he could. He luckily managed to grab ahold of the man as they traveled underwater. Everything soon became a blur before they seem to have come across an abandoned warehouse.
Malm coughed up a bit of water as he listened to the man as he talk. He could only respond with a small nod in agreement as the teen gasped for breath. That was definitely not what Malm was expecting when he went to help the man, and he would pretty much like an explanation for what in the world was going on. He believed he deserved one after nearly dying a couple of times back there.