Requip- Ice Empress (Ready to be checked)

• The user can requip instantly, surprising her enemy.
  
• The weapon increases the user's attacking power.
  
• This magic offers a variety of defensive capabilities
  

• The weapons are made of ice, thus can break easily.
  
• Cannot use two or more weapons at the same time.
  
• The weapons cannot stay within high temperature for too long.
  
• Weak against fire magic.
  

• The sword has a 73 cm long blade, allowing it to attack at a longer range.
  
• The 2 m long ribbon hanging from the pommel attached to the hilt allows the user to swing around the sword and cover very long distances.
  
• The blade has an extremely low temperature, so when slashed at, it causes the wound to freeze, making it more painful.
  

• The blade is made purely out of ice so it can break.
  
• The sword can only be used contentiously for 2 posts as it has to kept at a low temperature.
  
• Weak against against wind or fire magic.
  
• It is very difficult to have the weapon move around according to the user's will when held by the ribbon.
  

• The shield is made up of several layers of titanium and a few layers of ice.
  
• The armour strengthens the defensive capability of the shield.
  
• The armour can take an extra D ranked hit of fire magic before breaking.
  

• The shield can only protect the user from a direct attack.
  
• The armour and the shield together are heavy and can slow down the user while moving.
  
• Cannot defend against wind magic.
  
• Ice age armour along with the shield can disappear in the middle of defending against an attack if the time limit is exceeded.
  

• It can attack at longer ranges.
  
• It can be thrown as an attack at a distance of 5 m.
  
• The blades are very sharp and can slice through any kind of non-magical solid object.
  

• The blades can take 2 D ranked hits before it shatters , leaving the user only the stick to fight with.
  
• To user the spear, the wielder needs to be fast so that they can use the 3 m length of the weapon to their advantage other wise the weapon will be hard to control.
  
• Cannot slice through fluids.
  
• cannot remain in intense heat for a long time because it can melt away after 1 post.
  

• The two swords help the user attack the enemy more frequently without any delay.
  
• It can parry two melee attacks at once.
  
• The swords are made of thick ice coated with layers of magic. It can take about 3D ranked hits before breaking.
  

• The blades move in perfect sync so if one is halted or thrown away from the users hand, the other one will not work very well.
  
• The spell costs the user twice as much MP to activate than the other weapons as it deals with more damage.
  
• The swords move according to the wielder's will so if the wielder is slow or cannot comprehend what's going on, the swords will be rendered useless.
  
• Have a heavy weight so they slow down the wielder.
  

requip rules:

Riley Nightwalker wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Requip Ice Empress
Secondary Magic: -
Caster or Holder: Holder
Description: Requip Ice Empress is a type of requip ability that allows the user to equip themselves with different ice made weapons. The user can instantly requip from one weapon to the other.

Riley can requipt different weaponry and an armour. Since she is a low ranked wizard, her power does not extend to more that 3 weapons, 1 shield and an armour. She can instantly requip one weapon after the other, and she does it quite often between fights to prevent her weapons from breaking, which they can easily since they are made of ice. Riley combines her extremely good combat skills with her expert swordsmanship to make her attacks more powerful.
 
Strengths: 

• The user can requip instantly, surprising her enemy.
  
• The weapon increases the user's attacking power.
  
• The defensive shield has an armour along with it, making the defensive capability stronger.(these strengths are supposed to refresent your over-all magic, so keep this strength for the proper spell. Instead you could say something like "This magic offers a variety of defensive capabilities")
  

Weaknesses:

• The weapons are made of ice, thus can break easily.
  
• Cannot use two or more weapons at the same time.
  
• Can only act defensive or offensive against a D ranked wizard.
  
  
• The weapons can only be used for amount of time.
  (ok so the two weaknesses that I underlined are kind of understood when it comes down to it. You obviously are better at fighting a D ranked mage, but you can also hit C ranked mages, just for less damage. As for the limited amount of time bit, that is considered your duration and cooldown and shuldn't really be a weakness unless all your magic is instant cast and takes something like 5 posts to cooldown)
  
• Not compatible against fire magic.(weak against fire magic would be the better way to say this as you yourself cant use fire)
  
  

Lineage: Shinigami Protection:
Description: The Gods of death, the Shinigami control the afterlife; sending each spirit to its rightful destination, while making sure that everyone dies at the right time. Every person has their own unique Shinigami. Occasionally, a Shinigami will develop a bond with a living mortal, and will assist them to the best of their abilities when they are most needed; sometimes lending the mortal their powers at the cost of their life span. 
Ability: The user is able to summon the help from their Shinigami in battle or to assist them solving a dangerous solution.   
Usage: Shinigamis cannot kill or fatally wound enemies, but can take what would be a fatal blow, or give their bound user time to act. The Shinigami will assist the user for five posts, and can only be summoned once per thread. 


Spells:

Name: Moonlight Talon
Rank: D
Type: Ice, Offensive
Duration:
Cooldown:
Description: Moonlight talon is a ice type sword. It is an average sized katana with the blade length of about 73 cm. The blade is white, made completely out of ice, along with a snowflake shaped guard and a white hilt between 12-18 cm long. There is a long white ribbon, about 2 m long hanging from the pommel attached to the end of the hilt. (please state that it deals regular D ranked damage)

Strengths: 

• The sword has a long blade, allowing it to attack at a longer range.(please specify how long a range, how long is this ribbon?)
  
• The ribbon allows the user to swing around the sword and cover very long distances.
  
• The blade has an extremely low temperature, so when slashed at, it causes the wound to freeze, making it more painful.
  

Weaknesses: 

• The blade is made purely out of ice so it can break.
  
• The sword can only be used contentiously for about 45 minutes as it has to kept at a low temperature. (please change the time to a post duration, and move that to the added section above)
  
• Not compatible against wind or fire magic.(just switch out the not compatible part to "weak against")
  
  
• It is very difficult to have the weapon move around according to the user's will when held by the ribbon.
  

Moonlight talon:

Name: Ice age
Rank: D
Type: Ice, Defensive 
Duration:
Cooldown:
Description: Ice age is a defensive shield along with a full body armour. The shield resembles a heater shield that was used in the middle ages, except it is light blue in colour made with layers of titanium strengthened with the help of ice. It has a snowflake carved onto it. Along with the ice age shield is a full body armour, made simply from titanium, making it strong yet light. (please state that this deals regular D ranked damage)

Strengths: 

• The shield is made up of several layers of titanium and a few layers of ice.
  
• The armour strengthens the defensive capability of the shield.
  
• The armour is highly resistant from fire. (Please state that it can take an extra ranked hit of fire damage before breaking)
  

Weaknesses: 

• The shield can only protect the user from a direct attack.
  
• The shield along with the armour has a time limit of only 10 minutes.(We dont use actual time as a duration, we use posts. So please specify how many posts it s active for and more that into the above added Duration/cooldown section)
  
• Cannot defend against wind magic.
  
• Ice age armour along with the shield can disappear in the middle of defending against an attack if the time limit is exceeded.
  

Ice age:

Name: Spear of Iced teardrop
Rank: D
Type: Ice, offensive
Duration:
Cooldown:
Description: Spear of Iced teardrop is, as the name suggests a spear. It had a length of 3 m with two greenish-blue ice blades at the top. The rest of the spear is black in colour and has a golden guard that attaches the blades to the stick. There is also a golden guard at the end of the spear with a blue gem attached to it.  

Strengths: 

• It can attack at longer ranges.
  
• It can be thrown towards an enemy if the shooter's aim is good.(how far can you throw it?)
  
• The blades are very sharp and can slice through any kind of solid object.(non magical solid objects)
  

Weaknesses: 

• The blades can be shattered if hit with a lot of force, leaving the user only the stick to fight with.(how many hits of damage can it take before breaking? should be about 2D rank)
  
• The spear can be used continuously only for an hour.(please remove the time limit and change it into a post count and list it above)
  
• Cannot slice through fluids.
  
• cannot remain in high temperature for a long time.(state that the spear can only remain in intense heat or one post before melting away)
  

Spear of Iced Teardrop:

Name: Frost Devils
Rank: D
Type: Ice, offensive
Description: Frost devils is a weapon consisting two swords that look alike. Both swords resemble a classical sword but with the edge of the guard slightly curved. The guard along with the hilt is pitch black, extending a little on the blade. Each sword has a 75 cm long ice blade pointy at the tip. (you have two options here, as you are dual wielding you can have each blade deal 1D rank damage but have this spell cost you extra MP, or you can have each blade deal 0.5D rank of damage and the spell cost you regular MP. Whichever you chose, please state it here)

Strengths: 

• The two swords help the user attack the enemy more frequently without any delay.
  
• It can deflect a sword attack from two people and can also parry two attacks at once. (specify: it can parry two melee attacks at once)
  
• The swords are made of thick ice coated with layers of magic, so it cannot be broken or shattered very easily. (how many hits can they take? should be about 3D rank each before breaking)
  

Weaknesses: 

• The blades move in perfect sync so if one is halted or thrown away from the users hand, the other one will not work very well.
  
• The swords are very strong so can be maximally for about 30 minutes. (please change to post count and move above)
  
• The swords move according to the wielder's will so if the wielder is slow or cannot comprehend what's going on, the swords will be rendered useless.
  
• Have a heavy weight so might slow down the wielder.(please remove the word might. If it's a weakness, then the DO slow down the wielder.)
  

Frost Devils:

Riley Nightwalker wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Requip Ice Empress
Secondary Magic: -
Caster or Holder: Holder
Description: Requip Ice Empress is a type of requip ability that allows the user to equip themselves with different ice made weapons. The user can instantly requip from one weapon to the other.

Riley can requipt different weaponry and an armour. Since she is a low ranked wizard, her power does not extend to more that 3 weapons, 1 shield and an armour. She can instantly requip one weapon after the other, and she does it quite often between fights to prevent her weapons from breaking, which they can easily since they are made of ice. Riley combines her extremely good combat skills with her expert swordsmanship to make her attacks more powerful.
 
Strengths: 

• The user can requip instantly, surprising her enemy.
  
• The weapon increases the user's attacking power.
  
• This magic offers a variety of defensive capabilities
  

Weaknesses:

• The weapons are made of ice, thus can break easily.
  
• Cannot use two or more weapons at the same time.
  
• Can only act defensive or offensive against a D ranked wizard.
  (Remove what is in yellow please. This isn't a weakness, it's purely based on your rank.)
  
• The weapons cannot stay within high temperature for too long.
  
• Weak against fire magic.
  

Lineage: Shinigami Protection:
Description: The Gods of death, the Shinigami control the afterlife; sending each spirit to its rightful destination, while making sure that everyone dies at the right time. Every person has their own unique Shinigami. Occasionally, a Shinigami will develop a bond with a living mortal, and will assist them to the best of their abilities when they are most needed; sometimes lending the mortal their powers at the cost of their life span. 
Ability: The user is able to summon the help from their Shinigami in battle or to assist them solving a dangerous solution.   
Usage: Shinigamis cannot kill or fatally wound enemies, but can take what would be a fatal blow, or give their bound user time to act. The Shinigami will assist the user for five posts, and can only be summoned once per thread. 


Spells:

Name: Moonlight Talon
Type: Ice, Offensive
Duration: 15 posts
Cooldown: 15 post
(Woohoo you're duration and cooldown are way too high. Haha sorry I guess I should of given you a guideline. At D rank, it shouldn't last longer than 2-3 posts with a cooldown that is one post longer than your duration)
Description: Moonlight talon is a ice type sword. It is an average sized katana with the blade length of about 73 cm. The blade is white, made completely out of ice, along with a snowflake shaped guard and a white hilt between 12-18 cm long. There is a long white ribbon, about 2 m long hanging from the pommel attached to the end of the hilt. Moonlight talon is a weapon that can deal with regular D ranked magic.

Strengths: 

• The sword has a 73 cm long blade, allowing it to attack at a longer range.
  
• The 2 m long ribbon hanging from the pommel attached to the hilt allows the user to swing around the sword and cover very long distances.
  
• The blade has an extremely low temperature, so when slashed at, it causes the wound to freeze, making it more painful.
  

Weaknesses: 

• The blade is made purely out of ice so it can break.
  
• The sword can only be used contentiously for 15 posts (as stated above this is way too high. If you really want the duration as a weakness, then you shouldn't be able to use it for longer than 1 or 2 posts as maximum) as it has to kept at a low temperature.
  
• Weak against against wind or fire magic.
  
• It is very difficult to have the weapon move around according to the user's will when held by the ribbon.
  

Moonlight talon:

Name: Ice age
Rank: D
Type: Ice, Defensive 
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 10 posts
(still way too high. At D rank, it shouldn't last longer than 2-3 posts with a cooldown that is one post longer than your duration)
Description: Ice age is a defensive shield along with a full body armour. The shield resembles a heater shield that was used in the middle ages, except it is light blue in colour made with layers of titanium strengthened with the help of ice. It has a snowflake carved onto it. Along with the ice age shield is a full body armour, made simply from titanium, making it strong yet light. It can deal with regular D ranked damage.

Strengths: 

• The shield is made up of several layers of titanium and a few layers of ice.
  
• The armour strengthens the defensive capability of the shield.
  
• The armour can take a high (please remove the word "high" as you can only take an extra hit of your rank, not higher) ranked hit of fire magic before breaking.
  

Weaknesses: 

• The shield can only protect the user from a direct attack.
  
• The shield along with the armour is limited to 5 posts. (Thats not a low limit, and please come up with a new weakness. Duration does not belong here)
  
• Cannot defend against wind magic.
  
• Ice age armour along with the shield can disappear in the middle of defending against an attack if the time limit is exceeded.
  

Ice age:

Name: Spear of Iced teardrop
Rank: D
Type: Ice, offensive
Duration: 15 posts
Cooldown: 10 posts
(still way too high. At D rank, it shouldn't last longer than 2-3 posts with a cooldown that is one post longer than your duration)
Description: Spear of Iced teardrop is, as the name suggests a spear. It had a length of 3 m with two greenish-blue ice blades at the top. The rest of the spear is black in colour and has a golden guard that attaches the blades to the stick. There is also a golden guard at the end of the spear with a blue gem attached to it.  

Strengths: 

• It can attack at longer ranges.
  
• It can be thrown as an attack at a distance of 5 m.
  
• The blades are very sharp and can slice through any kind of non-magical solid object.
  

Weaknesses: 

• The blades can take about (Please remove the word about, as it will ONLY take 2 hits) 2 D ranked hits before it shatters , leaving the user only the stick to fight with.
  
• The spear can be used continuously for 15 posts. (Still not a weakness. Please remove this and create a new weakness)
  
• Cannot slice through fluids.
  
• cannot remain in intense heat for a long time because it can melt away after 1 post.
  

Spear of Iced Teardrop:

Name: Frost Devils
Rank: D
Type: Ice, offensive
Duration: 15 posts
Cooldown: 25 posts
(still way too high. At D rank, it shouldn't last longer than 2-3 posts with a cooldown that is one post longer than your duration)
Description: Frost devils is a weapon consisting two swords that look alike. Both swords resemble a classical sword but with the edge of the guard slightly curved. The guard along with the hilt is pitch black, extending a little on the blade. Each sword has a 75 cm long ice blade pointy at the tip. Each blade can deal with 1D rank damage.

Strengths: 

• The two swords help the user attack the enemy more frequently without any delay.
  
• It can parry two melee attacks at once.
  
• The swords are made of thick ice coated with layers of magic. It can take about 3D ranked hits before breaking.
  

Weaknesses: 

• The blades move in perfect sync so if one is halted or thrown away from the users hand, the other one will not work very well.
  
• The swords are very strong so can be maximally for 15 posts. (Not a weakness. Here you need to state that the spell costs you twice as much MP to activate/create than your other weapons as you are dealing more damage, and the weapons can take more hits before breaking)
  
• The swords move according to the wielder's will so if the wielder is slow or cannot comprehend what's going on, the swords will be rendered useless.
  
• Have a heavy weight so they slow down the wielder.
  

Frost Devils: