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    Requip: Planet

    Chozara
    Chozara

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    Lineage : Aspect Of Neptune
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    Approved Requip: Planet

    Post by Chozara 22nd December 2014, 1:10 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Requip: Planet
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This magic is a caster based magic that allows the user to requip into different armor that has different weapons based on the planet that they are requipping into. Each planet has its individual ability. This Magic allows the users to store items in a pocket dimension so they can easily summon it at any time, even during battle, which gives them a high level of flexibility in combat. However, there is a limit to how much the pocket dimension can store. Requip can be used for simple or for combat-related purposes. Some users may just choose to use it to change their clothing. More skilled users are able to Requip different weapons in battle, and it is even possible to Requip armors in the midst of battle.

    Chozara uses this magic by equipping into any and every planet. He mostly uses Neptune, Mercury, and Pluto. He uses the other ones based on their strength.
    Strengths:
    •The user can Requip into any and every planet
    •Each planet gives the user a unique ability based on the magic
    •His physical abilities are enhanced
    Weaknesses:
    •The user can only use one weapon at a time
    •The user must wear the armor until its duration is over or until it is broken
    •It takes one post to requip into a planet
    •The armor can break

    Lineage: Aspect of Neptune
    Description: The aspect of Neptune, one of the most powerful gods of the sea from whence it he came but now just a drop of what he once was. Neptune was considered a candidate for king and was second only to Jupiter. Neptune's dominion over the sea makes it's mark on it's host.
    Ability: The Aspect of Neptune grants it's host favour with the seas. Their can only be eaten by god slayers.  Water magic costs 5% extra when targeting the host. The host can spend half of the magical energy a water mage uses for a spell to nullify it.
    Usage: Small passive,  3 post cooldown on nullification. Can only be done three times per thread.



    Unique Abilities:
    •Neptunes requip has 10% more damage than the other planets since he is an aspect of it

    Requip:

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    Last edited by Chozara on 25th December 2014, 7:45 pm; edited 6 times in total
    Chozara
    Chozara

    Player 
    Lineage : Aspect Of Neptune
    Position : None
    Posts : 33
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Chozara 22nd December 2014, 7:46 pm

    Bump- Revision needed


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    Requip: Planet 6_Fit_LYu
    Felicity
    Felicity

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    Second Skill:
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    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Felicity 22nd December 2014, 11:46 pm

    Chozara wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Requip: Planet
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This magic is a caster based magic that allows the user to requip into different armor that has different weapons based on the planet that they are requipping into. Each planet has its individual ability.

    Chozara uses this magic by equipping into any and every planet. He mostly uses Neptune, Mercury, and Pluto. He uses the other ones based on their strength. A little more description would be appreciated. 150 words atleast. Can include the basic description of ReQuip magic or how Chozara trained for this magic, etc, etc.
    Strengths:
    •The user can Requip into any and every planet
    •Each planet gives the user a unique ability based on the magic
    •The user gets armor and weapons
    Weaknesses:
    •The user can only use one weapon at a time
    •The user must wear the armor until its duration is over < Or if it is broken.
    •It takes one post to requip into a planet < This is a general weakness for ReQuip mages, replace this with a specific weakness of your magic.
    •Certain planets are weaker than others < Yesh, of course. I mean, a D Rank spell would be weaker than a C Rank spell. This is a null and void weakness so replace this.
    Lineage: < Copy paste your lineage from the Sacred Library.
    Unique Abilities:
    •Neptunes requip has 10% more damage than the other planets since he is an aspect of it

    Name: Requip: Neptune
    Rank: D
    Type: Water, Offensive
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts < Increase to 5
    Description: The spell is cast by Chozara stating, "Requip: Neptune!" When the spell is cast, an ocean blue magic circle appears on the top and bottom of him. This spell gives him ocean blue armor and a Trident. This equipment allows him to cast and control water and run at a speed of 25 kilometers an hour. This equipment allows him to do D-Rank damage and an extra 10% of damage per hit. Describe what parts of the body is covered by the Armour and the size of the trident. Cast water? I think you can do that if you make a water-spell for this armour. Otherwise get rid of that part. You can do D Rank "physical" damage. 10% damage by the trident or a punch or a kick? Please specify.
    Strengths:
    •He can control water in this form < Put a range to this.
    •He can run at a speed of 25 kph
    •He does an extra 10% damage
    Weaknesses:
    •He can only control water while holding the trident
    •He can only attack with the trident
    •This equipment is weak in hot areas, about 150° F as it can evaporate
    •He is weak against wind magic, as the water can just be blown away

    List of Spell Fusions:

    Name Requip: Saturn
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts < 5
    Description: This spell is cast by Chozara stating,"Requip: Saturn!" When this spell is cast, a purple magic circle appears on the top and bottom of him and he is equipped into dark purple armor with floating rings around it. This spell give him a glaive that is able to deconstruct things and trap people, or things in silence. The glaive sends out silent pulses that deconstruct objects, and damage humans. The attack does D-Rank damage. This armor allows him to move at a speed of 25 kilometers per hour. Describe the armour and size of the glaive. Deconstruction and trapping in silence shizzle need to be spells. Choose some weaker ability instead.
    Strengths:
    •He can trap people in silence
    •He can deconstruct objects
    •He can move at a speed of 25 Kilometers per hour First two points need to go or be replaced.
    Weaknesses:
    •He must have the glaive in order o attack
    •He can't deconstruct humans
    •The floating rings slow the armor down < Why?
    •This magic is weak against any magic that affects sound

    Name: Requip: Pluto
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive, Ash
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cool down: 3 posts < 4 posts
    Description: This spell is cast by Chozara stating,"Requip: Pluto!" When the spell is cast, a gray magic circle appears above and beneath Chozara, and he is equipped with ash gray armor and silver spear. The spear allows him to cast and control ash and mold it into whatever he pleases. He can only do it as long as he has the spear. The ash is sharp and cut enemies. He can also make the ash hot or cold. He can freeze or burn enemies. The ash does D-Ranked damage per hit. In this armor, he can move at a speed of 15 kilometers per hour. The ash can get to a high of 150°F and a low of -2°F. Describe armour and size of spear. Casting ash needs to be a spell and the control ability needs to have a range.
    Strengths:
    •He can cast ash
    •He can make the ash hot
    •He can make the ash cold
    Weaknesses:
    •He can only cast ash when he has the spear
    •He can only control ash when he has the spear
    •He can only move at a speed of 15 kilometers per hour
    •The ash can affect him if it is blown back in his direction

    You're only a D Rank mage so you're abilities are quite limited now, sorry for that. You can add another spell. Also, add in how many spells and what ranked spells can destroy your armour and weapons.

    Edits are in THIS color. Bump when done.


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    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Requip: Planet ObrztW

    Chozara
    Chozara

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    Lineage : Aspect Of Neptune
    Position : None
    Posts : 33
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Chozara 24th December 2014, 8:33 am

    Bump- attempted to make the edits. hope I did it right.


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    Requip: Planet 6_Fit_LYu
    Felicity
    Felicity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Dark Guild Ace- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Advertisement Achievement Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Evil Angel
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    Posts : 2984
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Felicity 25th December 2014, 6:26 am

    Chozara wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Requip: Planet
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This magic is a caster based magic that allows the user to requip into different armor that has different weapons based on the planet that they are requipping into. Each planet has its individual ability. This Magic allows the users to store items in a pocket dimension so they can easily summon it at any time, even during battle, which gives them a high level of flexibility in combat. However, there is a limit to how much the pocket dimension can store. Requip can be used for simple or for combat-related purposes. Some users may just choose to use it to change their clothing. More skilled users are able to Requip different weapons in battle, and it is even possible to Requip armors in the midst of battle.

    Chozara uses this magic by equipping into any and every planet. He mostly uses Neptune, Mercury, and Pluto. He uses the other ones based on their strength.
    Strengths:
    •The user can Requip into any and every planet
    •Each planet gives the user a unique ability based on the magic
    •His physical abilities are enhanced
    Weaknesses:
    •The user can only use one weapon at a time
    •The user must wear the armor until its duration is over or until it is broken
    •It takes one post to requip into a planet
    •The armor can break

    Lineage: Aspect of Neptune
    Description: The aspect of Neptune, one of the most powerful gods of the sea from whence it he came but now just a drop of what he once was. Neptune was considered a candidate for king and was second only to Jupiter. Neptune's dominion over the sea makes it's mark on it's host.
    Ability: The Aspect of Neptune grants it's host favour with the seas. Their can only be eaten by god slayers.  Water magic costs 5% extra when targeting the host. The host can spend half of the magical energy a water mage uses for a spell to nullify it.
    Usage: Small passive,  3 post cooldown on nullification. Can only be done three times per thread.



    Unique Abilities:
    •Neptunes requip has 10% more damage than the other planets since he is an aspect of it

    Requip:

    Requip:

    Requip:

    Alright, so just confirming; but the two spells that are linked to the armours are the Active abilities, aren't they? If yes, you can have one more spell. If not, then get rid of one of the linked-to armours spell; cause you're only allowed four as a D Rank mage.


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    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Requip: Planet ObrztW

    Chozara
    Chozara

    Player 
    Lineage : Aspect Of Neptune
    Position : None
    Posts : 33
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Chozara 25th December 2014, 11:02 am

    Bump- I intentionally left Saturn without a spell :p it's better off with just the weapon.


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    Requip: Planet 6_Fit_LYu
    Felicity
    Felicity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Dark Guild Ace- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Advertisement Achievement Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Evil Angel
    Position : None
    Posts : 2984
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Felicity 25th December 2014, 7:03 pm

    Dear, I have edits for you INSIDE the spoilers as well. In THIS font color. Guess you didn't notice it last time, for none of the edits have been made.


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    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Requip: Planet ObrztW

    Chozara
    Chozara

    Player 
    Lineage : Aspect Of Neptune
    Position : None
    Posts : 33
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Chozara 25th December 2014, 7:36 pm

    I did make them. Guess the post wasn't successful xd I don't really pay attention to whether or not they go through.


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    Requip: Planet 6_Fit_LYu
    Chozara
    Chozara

    Player 
    Lineage : Aspect Of Neptune
    Position : None
    Posts : 33
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Chozara 25th December 2014, 7:45 pm

    Bump- I made sure it was successful this time.


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    Requip: Planet 6_Fit_LYu
    Felicity
    Felicity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Dark Guild Ace- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Advertisement Achievement Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Evil Angel
    Position : None
    Posts : 2984
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Felicity 25th December 2014, 8:19 pm

    Alright, we're almost done with this. I just want you to know that you can have one more ReQuip spell- as we allow four for D Rank Mages. I'm counting "Gather Around Water" and "Summoning Ash" as "active abilities" of your ReQuip spells.

    If you don't want to add another spell, its okay and I'll approve this in a jiffy.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________


    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Requip: Planet ObrztW

    Chozara
    Chozara

    Player 
    Lineage : Aspect Of Neptune
    Position : None
    Posts : 33
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Chozara 25th December 2014, 8:53 pm

    I don't want another one.


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    Requip: Planet 6_Fit_LYu
    Felicity
    Felicity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Dark Guild Ace- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Advertisement Achievement Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Evil Angel
    Position : None
    Posts : 2984
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Approved Re: Requip: Planet

    Post by Felicity 25th December 2014, 9:22 pm

    Requip: Planet 2Lh9N1X


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    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Requip: Planet ObrztW


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