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    Nakigame's Song magic

    Nakigame Takechi
    Nakigame Takechi

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    First Skill: Song Magic
    Second Skill: N/A
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    Post by Nakigame Takechi 8th November 2014, 12:33 pm

    Primary Magic: Song magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Song magic is used by distributing magic energy to your voice. Song magic is magic that can be used for many things depending on the song the holder is singing. If the holder is singing a summoning song, they can summon the monster, animal, machine, object, or element that they are trying to summon in the song. It can be used to put your enemy under a hallucination depending on what the song is about. It can alter anybody's mood based on the tone of the song. It can also be used as a buffer for the user. Like, It can give the user a speed boost or boost their physical abilities. The caster can also blend songs together in order to use two abilities of the magic at once. For certain spells however, such as summoning animals, the user has to be standing still in order to do it.

    Na
    •It affects anyone that hears the song
    •It is effective in most types of offense
    •It is good for defense
    Weaknesses:
    •If the caster isn't careful, it can affect their allies
    •If the caster is faced with a fast enemy, they might not have time to sing their song
    •The hallucinations break if it is on an enemy of a higher rank
    •The Caster has to be still in order to summon animals

    Abilities/Powers:
    • When there is a full moon, she can enhance the affect of all of her songs. It increases the power in her voice by 10%. They are enhanced on full moons because from the day she was born, up until the day she left home, she would have to eat a small piece of lacrima every full moon that had the voice of the singers in her clan. However, because this happened on a full moon, that's the only time she can access this power.

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    Post by Cirven 8th November 2014, 4:07 pm

    Hey Nakigame. I will be reviewing your magic. Edits will be in THIS color. Bump when finished.


    Nakigame Takechi wrote:Primary Magic: Song magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Song magic is used by distributing magic energy to your voice. Song magic is magic that can be used for many things depending on the song the holder is singing. If the holder is singing a summoning song, they can summon the monster, animal, machine, or object that they are trying to summon in the song. It can be used to put your enemy under a hallucination depending on what the song is about. It can alter anybody's mood based on the tone of the song. But each holder can only summon one category of things, the holder can only have hallucination songs that have the same meaning(it can have different images though), and the holder can only make others feel one emotion.

    Nakigame uses it to summon animals and objects. She uses it to make opponents have hallucinations of being in front of angry angels. And she uses it to make her opponent feel drowsy.
    Strengths:
    •It affects anyone that hears the song
    •It is affective in most types of offense
    •It is good for defense
    Weaknesses:
    •If the caster isn't careful, it can affect their allies
    •If the caster is faced with a fast enemy, they might not have time to sing their song
    •The hallucinations break if it is on an enemy of a higher rank
    •The Caster has to be still in order to sing their song.

    Abilities/Powers:
    • If there is a full moon, she can make her voice be heard by an entire country. This isn't going to work. Way too powerful.

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    Nakigame Takechi
    Nakigame Takechi

    Player 
    Lineage : Pride Of A Mercenary
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Song Magic
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Nakigame Takechi 8th November 2014, 4:49 pm

    Bump~ Edited it and changed some things. Hope its all good now.


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    Nakigame Takechi
    Nakigame Takechi

    Player 
    Lineage : Pride Of A Mercenary
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    Posts : 40
    Guild : Guildless
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    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Song Magic
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Nakigame Takechi 8th November 2014, 6:31 pm

    Bump


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    Post by Cirven 8th November 2014, 6:32 pm

    Bump after.

    Nakigame Takechi wrote:Primary Magic: Song magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Song magic is used by distributing magic energy to your voice. Song magic is magic that can be used for many things depending on the song the holder is singing. If the holder is singing a summoning song, they can summon the monster, animal, machine, or object that they are trying to summon in the song. It can be used to put your enemy under a hallucination depending on what the song is about. It can alter anybody's mood based on the tone of the song. But each holder can only summon one category of things, the holder can only have hallucination songs that have the same meaning(it can have different images though), and the holder can only make others feel one emotion.

    Na
    •It affects anyone that hears the song
    •It is affective in most types of offense
    •It is good for defense
    Weaknesses:
    •If the caster isn't careful, it can affect their allies
    •If the caster is faced with a fast enemy, they might not have time to sing their song
    •The hallucinations break if it is on an enemy of a higher rank
    •The Caster has to be still in order to sing their song.

    Abilities/Powers:
    • If there is a full moon, she can make her voice be heard by a small town. The reason why this is too much is because of the number of people it can affect with your spells later on. Did you want this to be a sort of thing that would not be combat related? If so you can leave this but just state that it is not combat related.

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    Character Info:
    Nakigame Takechi
    Nakigame Takechi

    Player 
    Lineage : Pride Of A Mercenary
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Song Magic
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Nakigame Takechi 8th November 2014, 6:46 pm

    Bump


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    Post by Cirven 8th November 2014, 7:22 pm

    I need you to add how does the full moon make your songs better? Does it make them do more damage(if so how much more)? Does it the effectiveness increase somehow? Or does each spell get affected differently with a full moon out and you will add how to each spell individually?

    Change the ability to add more specific details on it so I know. If you need to PM me to discuss this more.


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    Nakigame Takechi
    Nakigame Takechi

    Player 
    Lineage : Pride Of A Mercenary
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Guildless
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    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Song Magic
    Second Skill: N/A
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    Post by Nakigame Takechi 8th November 2014, 7:37 pm

    Bump


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    Post by Cirven 8th November 2014, 8:37 pm

    Approvedededed.

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    Nakigame Takechi
    Nakigame Takechi

    Player 
    Lineage : Pride Of A Mercenary
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Guildless
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    First Skill: Song Magic
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    Post by Nakigame Takechi 25th December 2014, 9:01 pm

    Bump- Can someone lock it? I changed the thing I needed to change.


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    Nakigame Takechi
    Nakigame Takechi

    Player 
    Lineage : Pride Of A Mercenary
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    Posts : 40
    Guild : Guildless
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Song Magic
    Second Skill: N/A
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    Post by Nakigame Takechi 26th December 2014, 12:19 pm

    Bumppp


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    Age : 35
    Experience : 833,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

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    Post by Cirven 26th December 2014, 12:49 pm

    Hey again Nakigame, was all you changed your ability some with adding lore?

    Also with your Song of Spikes spell can you change the second weakness to that each spike has half a D-rank of durability? This is to balance out with the number you summon as well as balancing with the rank of the spell. Also this means all of the spikes will have to clash with a spell of equal rank to cancel both attacks out. Just further balancing for the number summoned.

    Last thing is remember if all the spikes are destroyed before the spell duration is up then the spell will go on CD.


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    Character Info:
    Nakigame Takechi
    Nakigame Takechi

    Player 
    Lineage : Pride Of A Mercenary
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 25

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Song Magic
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Nakigame Takechi 26th December 2014, 1:14 pm

    Bump- made the edit you requested


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    Age : 35
    Experience : 833,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

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    Post by Cirven 26th December 2014, 1:25 pm

    Anddd

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