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    Abigail's Battle Clothes

    Pandemonium4ever
    Pandemonium4ever

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    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
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    Posts : 34
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Aspect
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    Abigail's Battle Clothes Empty Abigail's Battle Clothes

    Post by Pandemonium4ever 22nd June 2014, 4:23 pm

    Proof of purchase: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t7117p150-official-magic-shop#109532
    Name: Battle clothing
    Rank: Strong
    Type: Armored Clothing
    Description:
    Spoiler:

    Her entire outfit is made up of various shades of red and black, with black as the primary color on the main suit and red on the cloak. Her battle clothes are all made of polarized titanium making them very durable, but due to the material it is made of the clothes don't handle cold based attacks very well. There is a chance that the clothes will shatter if exposed to too much cold. It takes 5 D-rank ice hits or 2 C-ranked ice hits for the armor to break due to it becoming brittle. Any B-rank and high ice attacks that hit instantly breaks the section that was hit.For this reason Abigail always has a spare set of clothes in her bag in case her battle clothes break.
    Strengths: -They are fireproof, resist heat and cold easily, doesn't freeze easily, and it is ten times strong than steel so it can't be cut or pierced
    -Can't be eaten
    -Light weight
    Weaknesses: -The force of the hit(s) is still transferred to the wearer
    -Does't handle rapid temperature changes well
    -After five hits from ice attacks to the same spot will freeze that spot on the clothes while frozen extremely brittle.
    -It takes 5 D-rank ice hits or 2 C-ranked ice hits for the armor to break due to it becoming brittle. Any B-rank and high ice attacks that hit instantly breaks the section that was hit.
    Abilities:
    Name: Primal Boost
    Rank: D
    Description: This ability is always active allowing Abigail to increase the aspect(s) she uses by twenty-five percent it also raises the duration of the active aspect(s) by two posts, but at the cost of increasing the cooldown of her spells by two posts and doubling the side effect of any aspect she uses.
    Strengths:-Strengthens any active aspects by twenty-five percent
    -Increases duration by one post
    Weaknesses:-Increases the cooldown of all aspects by two
    -Doubles the negative effects of each aspect when used


    Last edited by Pandemonium4ever on 22nd June 2014, 4:46 pm; edited 1 time in total
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    Post by Guest 22nd June 2014, 4:37 pm

    Just two small changes:

    1) As a D-Rank item, the benefits should be minor, meaning the duration/Cooldown boost should be something like 1 extra post for duration, and 2 extra posts for the Cooldown.

    2) Elaborate on how easily the clothing could shatter. For example, how many hits from certain D or C-Ranked spells are required to ruin the clothing. Also, elaborate on cold attacks, especially since the word "cold" is too broad and can be abused easily in battle.
    Pandemonium4ever
    Pandemonium4ever

    Player 
    Lineage : Aspect of Pluto
    Position : None
    Posts : 34
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Aspect
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Pandemonium4ever 22nd June 2014, 4:47 pm

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    Post by Guest 22nd June 2014, 4:50 pm

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