William Gear

Name: William Gear
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Birthday: 10/20/1995
Sexuality: Bi
Special Characteristics: Tattoo: VII on fire on the base left side of his neck.

Personality: William was a bright person as most people in his profession, but he was corrupted by a dark force. Now he is a dark man, everything about him is dark. His sense of humor, his way of thinking, even his logic are all dark and evil. He doesn't like being questioned or told what to do, unless him and that person have a similar interest or that person in a higher rank. William has a strong sense of honor, like most in his line of work. He is very dry and sarcastic when he is at the best of moods. When around strangers he will only ask the essential questions, who, what, when, where, how, and why. If these strangers are part of a Legal guild William will not associate with them at all. If these strangers are part of a Dark guild William will try to befriend them, or at least get their trust.

Likes:Sarcasm: Because he is.
Darkness: It resembles who he is. It's intimidating.
His hair: What person doesn't like their hair?
His tattoo: I mean he had to pay for it, of course he likes it.
Bad jokes: Bad jokes are the highlights to his day, besides, killing someone.
Music: Life is never complete without music, good or evil.
Rainy days: It is soothing to him.
His Sword: A sword bestowed upon him during his corruption.

Dislikes: Light: It hurts his eyes.
Bright colors: It is the polar opposite of what he likes.
Long hair: It takes to much time and effort to keep up with it.
People with no honor: You can't live your life without it in his eyes.
Ranged weapons: Little honor is associated with guns and bows.
Bigots: They are just stupid.
Cats: They get in his way and they are annoying.
Liars: Why can't you just give him the information he wants?

Motivations: His religion(no matter how dark it is), The God of Darkness, His leader, Music.
Fears: The God of Light, spiders, heights, falling.

General Appearance


Height: 5'10"
Weight: 138
Hair: Dark brown, kept around 10cm long
Eyes: Greyish brown
Skin Tone: White, very pale.
Appearance:
William is slim with a slight tone. He wears alot of black clothes. Generally he wears black skinny jeans, a plain black T-shirt, two black leather cuffs on his wrists, black and white converse, and a black bandanna atop his head. No matter what he always lets his two tattoos be shown.

Guild/Council Guild

Guild: Shadow Wing

Tattoo: It is located on the back of his hand. Black ink.

Rank: D

Good app, but there are some problems.

Expand your personality. It's already fine, but it's just too short.

Put spaces between the spots that separate personality from likes, likes from dislikes, etc.

And lastly, you start out as a D rank.

Bump. Did what you have asked.

You overdid the spelling. You shouldn't have put them between each item in likes, dislikes, etc. It should only be on the borderline that separates the likes from dislikes and etc. Fix that, though it's only minor.

And also, I don't think you're allowed to have magical armor as your gen appearance.

Okay dokay. I fixed the likes dislikes thing, and I did something different for his general appearance. Everything is fixed and ready to go.

Approved.