Blood Curse

Akane-chan wrote:Primary Magic: Little Red Riding Hood
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Holder
Description: Little Red Riding Hood, the famous fairy tale, is also the name of the ability gifted to Akane and Akane alone. Because of how Little Red Riding Hood is used, it is often compared to ReQuip magic. The only difference is that Akane cannot switch between weapon to weapon. Her one and only weapon is the scarf around the neck. Knitted from magic, the scarf is as sharp as a blade, though it stays comfortably tied around Akane's neck. With the scarf being a scythe, the magic itself is a balance of offense and defense, while staying fashionable at all times!

Strengths:

• Balance | This magic balances offense and defense, having an equilibrium of both.
  
• Element | As this is of clothing itself, there is no elemental advantages or disadvantages, proving as a strength and weakness.
  
• Combo System | Akane's magic is heavily reliant on the combo system.
  

Weaknesses:

• Supportive | There's zero supportive or supplementary spell in this kit of Akane's. As her personality befits, only solo play is what works with Akane.
  
• Element | As this is of clothing itself, there is no elemental advantages or disadvantages, proving as a strength and weakness.
  
• Stripped | If the weapons are somehow dismantled from Akane's body, their powers are rendered useless. The only exception of this rule is if the spell itself leaves her body.
  
• Water | Despite having some metal-like properties, in the end the clothes are clothes regardless. No one likes wearing wet clothes and Akane is no exception. However, it is the fact that drenched clothes bring down the combat level of this magic by 50% entirely.
  

Lineage:

• Zeus' Decedent | There once was a powerful mage who called himself Zeus the Mighty. During a magical lightning storm, he got struck by lightning twice at the same time. He miraculously survived and gained the ability to redirect electricity and magical current, and passively gained the ability to resist it. His descendants inherited this power but it grew weaker with every generation, so only certain spells could be redirected.
  
  
  
  
  • Ability: Can redirect any lightning based spells that equal the user's rank or less(S Max) by spending the MP the spell would cost them for their rank to cast it plus half. Also grants the user a 25% resistance to any and all lightning-based spells, regardless of spell rank. They gain a single user-ranked lightning spell (S Max) or a user-ranked minus one signature lightning spell (A Max) in addition to their spells.
    
    
  • Usage: Redirection has a 4 post cooldown and the rest are passive.
    
    
  • Proof: HERE
    
  
  
  

Unique Abilities:

• Indestructibility | Because the scarf is the medium and holder weapon, it is indestructible by all means. All holder items are indestructible without having to use a spell or unique ability slot. I suggest changing this UA to something more useful for the magic.
  
• Telekinesis | Akane can move the scarf around without saying a word because of telekinesis. It only applies to the scarf and nothing else. As I said in the above comment, this is a kind of UA that I would allow to simply be placed in the magic description or as a strength to the magic, and I suggest changing this UA to something more useful for the magic.
  

You are allowed a 3rd Unique Ability.

Spells:

Akane-chan wrote:Primary Magic: Little Red Riding Hood
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Holder
Description: Little Red Riding Hood, the famous fairy tale, is also the name of the ability gifted to Akane and Akane alone. Because of how Little Red Riding Hood is used, it is often compared to ReQuip magic. The only difference is that Akane cannot switch between weapon to weapon. Her one and only weapon is the scarf around the neck. Knitted from magic, the scarf is as sharp as a blade, though it stays comfortably tied around Akane's neck. With the scarf being a scythe, the magic itself is a balance of offense and defense, while staying fashionable at all times! This magic is heavily reliant on the combo system, boosting Akane's damage output if combos are performed.

Strengths:

• Balance | This magic balances offense and defense, having an equilibrium of both.
  
• Element | As this is of clothing itself, there is no elemental advantages or disadvantages, proving as a strength and weakness.
  
• Combo System | Akane's magic is heavily reliant on the combo system.
  

Weaknesses:

• Supportive | There's zero supportive or supplementary spell in this kit of Akane's. As her personality befits, only solo play is what works with Akane.
  
• Element | As this is of clothing itself, there is no elemental advantages or disadvantages, proving as a strength and weakness.
  
• Stripped | If the weapons are somehow dismantled from Akane's body, their powers are rendered useless. The only exception of this rule is if the spell itself leaves her body.
  
• Water | Despite having some metal-like properties, in the end the clothes are clothes regardless. No one likes wearing wet clothes and Akane is no exception. However, it is the fact that drenched clothes bring down the combat level of this magic by 50% entirely.
  

Lineage:

• Zeus' Decedent | There once was a powerful mage who called himself Zeus the Mighty. During a magical lightning storm, he got struck by lightning twice at the same time. He miraculously survived and gained the ability to redirect electricity and magical current, and passively gained the ability to resist it. His descendants inherited this power but it grew weaker with every generation, so only certain spells could be redirected.
  
  
  
  
  • Ability: Can redirect any lightning based spells that equal the user's rank or less(S Max) by spending the MP the spell would cost them for their rank to cast it plus half. Also grants the user a 25% resistance to any and all lightning-based spells, regardless of spell rank. They gain a single user-ranked lightning spell (S Max) or a user-ranked minus one signature lightning spell (A Max) in addition to their spells.
    
    
  • Usage: Redirection has a 4 post cooldown and the rest are passive.
    
    
  • Proof: HERE
    
  
  
  

Unique Abilities:

• Switch | Upon saying "Switch", Akane's weapon can change from a scarf into a scythe. Specifics on the scythe will be mentioned in the weapon itself during weapon registration. This ability is instantaneous with a cooldown of 2 posts after duration.
  
• Lifesteal | Upon the defeat of an enemy, Crimson Rose (weapon) is able to sap and rejuvenate 10% of Akane's health and 5% mana.
  
• Combo System | For every combo completed, Akane's next physical attack will deal an extra 50% more damage, dealing a total of 150%.
  

Spells:

Invidia wrote:

Primary Magic: Blood Curse
Secondary Magic: -
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Curses are supposedly an ancient magic that can only be achieved through deals with demons. They prove to be rather versatile magics, capable of overpowering its cousins with sheer power alone. Curses are dangerous to both the user and the opponents. Curses slowly eat away at their caster, eventually devouring them and taking the form of a true demon. This is often called the revival of a demon, unleashing a distraught power into the world. As a result, very few people take on a curse, knowing full well that they will not survive in the case of doing so.

Blood Curse is, as the name suggests, a curse revolving around the manipulation of blood. The blood manipulated may be from themselves or even others; any source of blood in the vicinity belongs to Invidia unless it is overpowered by an even stronger blood magic. For offensive measures, the blood harnessed is able to take on many shapes or intensities, to be either projected or used as part of a melee enhancement. Invidia can also control the state of blood, usually forcing it into a solid state to deal damage and defensive structures.

Strengths:

• An olden magic that's versatile, there's little knowledge on Blood Curse. Knowledge is vital and as a result, not many know about how it's used or how to fight against it. As per element of the magic, there's no elemental weakness to it whatsoever. This last sentence sounds like another strength, mind making it into another one?
  

Weaknesses:

• As it doesn't have an element to oppose it, it also doesn't have an element that's effective against it.
  
• Friendly fire doesn't have a toggle button for this magic. Some of the lower ranked spells can be controlled to focus a specific person or set of people, but as the ranks go higher, more and more area-of-effect spells take place. Allies can get hurt in this situation.
  
• The more it's being used, the weaker Invidia herself will become. The curse is slowly eating away at her.
  

Lineage:

• Zeus' Descendant:
  
  
  
  • Description: There once was a powerful mage who called himself Zeus the Mighty. During a magical lightning storm, he got struck by lightning twice at the same time. He miraculously survived and gained the ability to redirect electricity and magical current, and passively gained the ability to resist it. His descendants inherited this power but it grew weaker with every generation, so only certain spells could be redirected.
    
    
  • Ability: Can redirect any lightning based spells that equal the user's rank or less(S Max) by spending the MP the spell would cost them for their rank to cast it plus half. Also grants the user a 25% resistance to any and all lightning-based spells, regardless of spell rank. They gain a single user-ranked lightning spell (S Max) or a user-ranked minus one signature lightning spell (A Max) in addition to their spells.
    
    
  • Usage: Redirection has a 4 post cooldown and the rest are passive.
    
  
  
  

Unique Abilities:

• Sanguine Pool: Invidia can turn into a pool of blood, untargetable for up to 3 posts. There's then a cooldown of 5 posts. While in this form, she can run away and slip through small crevices that she normally wouldn't be able to get through.
  
  
• Lifesap: Because of the nature of this magic revolving around blood, Invidia can intake outside blood as health and mana. She can steal 8% health and 4% mana per attack.
  
  
• Hemoplague: All of Invidia's moves stack Hemoplague. Hemoplague stacks are removed by waiting four posts or popped by Invidia. For every 3 stacks of Hemoplague popped, the opponent takes damage equivalent to a spell in user rank. The number of stacks Invidia can have on an opponent at once is 6. It can affect multiple targets. There is a cooldown of one post after popping the stacks. I would like the stacks to be explained better, such as does 6 stacks mean 2x rank damage? If it does, I would like that changed. Also, I would like the cool down to be longer than 1 post.
  

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Invidia wrote:

Primary Magic: Blood Curse
Secondary Magic: -
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Curses are supposedly an ancient magic that can only be achieved through deals with demons. They prove to be rather versatile magics, capable of overpowering its cousins with sheer power alone. Curses are dangerous to both the user and the opponents. Curses slowly eat away at their caster, eventually devouring them and taking the form of a true demon. This is often called the revival of a demon, unleashing a distraught power into the world. As a result, very few people take on a curse, knowing full well that they will not survive in the case of doing so.

Blood Curse is, as the name suggests, a curse revolving around the manipulation of blood. The blood manipulated may be from themselves or even others; any source of blood in the vicinity belongs to Invidia unless it is overpowered by an even stronger blood magic. For offensive measures, the blood harnessed is able to take on many shapes or intensities, to be either projected or used as part of a melee enhancement. Invidia can also control the state of blood, usually forcing it into a solid state to deal damage and defensive structures.

Strengths:

• An olden magic that's versatile, there's little knowledge on Blood Curse. Knowledge is vital and as a result, not many know about how it's used or how to fight against it.
  
• As per element of the magic, there's no elemental weakness to it whatsoever.
  

Weaknesses:

• As it doesn't have an element to oppose it, it also doesn't have an element that's effective against it.
  
• Friendly fire doesn't have a toggle button for this magic. Some of the lower ranked spells can be controlled to focus a specific person or set of people, but as the ranks go higher, more and more area-of-effect spells take place. Allies can get hurt in this situation.
  
• The more it's being used, the weaker Invidia herself will become. The curse is slowly eating away at her.
  

Lineage:

• Zeus' Descendant:
  
  
  
  • Description: There once was a powerful mage who called himself Zeus the Mighty. During a magical lightning storm, he got struck by lightning twice at the same time. He miraculously survived and gained the ability to redirect electricity and magical current, and passively gained the ability to resist it. His descendants inherited this power but it grew weaker with every generation, so only certain spells could be redirected.
    
    
  • Ability: Can redirect any lightning based spells that equal the user's rank or less(S Max) by spending the MP the spell would cost them for their rank to cast it plus half. Also grants the user a 25% resistance to any and all lightning-based spells, regardless of spell rank. They gain a single user-ranked lightning spell (S Max) or a user-ranked minus one signature lightning spell (A Max) in addition to their spells.
    
    
  • Usage: Redirection has a 4 post cooldown and the rest are passive.
    
  
  
  

Unique Abilities:

• Sanguine Pool: Invidia can turn into a pool of blood, untargetable for up to 3 posts. There's then a cooldown of 5 posts. While in this form, she can run away and slip through small crevices that she normally wouldn't be able to get through.
  
  
• Lifesap: Because of the nature of this magic revolving around blood, Invidia can intake outside blood as health and mana. She can steal 8% health and 4% mana per attack.
  
  
• Hemoplague: All of Invidia's moves stack Hemoplague. Hemoplague stacks are removed by waiting four posts or popped by Invidia. For every 3 stacks of Hemoplague popped, the opponent takes damage equivalent to a spell in user rank. The number of stacks Invidia can have on an opponent at once is 6. It can affect multiple targets. There is a cooldown of three posts after popping the stacks. Invidia can pop only up to 3 stacks at once, forcing the maximum damage output per person to be an extra spell of rank.
  

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