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    Rin's Starting Equipment: Tempest Blade (Done!)

    Rin Moriyama
    Rin Moriyama
    Rin Moriyama

    Goddess of Storms


    Goddess of Storms

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    Rin's Starting Equipment: Tempest Blade (Done!) Empty Rin's Starting Equipment: Tempest Blade (Done!)

    Post by Rin Moriyama 7th February 2014, 5:10 pm

    Name: Tempest Blade
    Rank: Legendary(+)
    Type: sword
    Description:
    Tempest Blade:
    Strengths:
    -Strong against storm based magic attacks
    - Made of incredibly tough materials, making breaking it almost impossible
    - Strong against lightning based magic attacks too
    Weaknesses:
    - Weak against poison magic
    - Weak against fire magic
    - if broken, its unfixable except by use of arc of time magic
    Abilities:
    - Speed boost:
    This active boosts the wielder's speed by 20% when they attack an opponent.
    Rank: D
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts

    - Element absorption:
    This active allows the tempest blade to absorb up to 4 water, wind, or lightning magic spells the same rank as the spell at a time. However, it is unable to use the spells it absorbs against the wielder's opponents
    Rank: D
    Duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 4 posts


    Last edited by TsukinoUsagiChan on 11th March 2014, 3:31 pm; edited 9 times in total


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    Post by Alye 7th February 2014, 5:22 pm

    TsukinoUsagiChan wrote:
    Name: Tempest Blade
    Rank: D
    Type: sword
    Description:
    Tempest Blade:
    Strengths:
    -Strong against storm based magic attacks
    - Made of incredibly tough materials, making breaking it almost impossible
    - Strong against lightning based magic attacks too
    Weaknesses:
    - Weak against poison magic
    - Weak against fire magic
    - if broken, its unfixable except by use of arc of time magic
    Abilities:
    - can shoot lightening bolts.
    - able to absorb most storm spells
    - blade is able to change forms.
    - forms include; lightning, wind, and water making it very versatile.

    Weapon: This weapon has entirely too many abilities. Especially at D-Rank. Pick two that you wish to keep and we shall move on from there.
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    Goddess of Storms


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    Post by Rin Moriyama 7th February 2014, 9:22 pm

    Bump~


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    Post by Alye 9th February 2014, 1:10 pm

    For your lightning bolts attack, you need to specify how many lightning bolts it can shoot at one time, give it a cooldown, detail that they only do D-Rank damage, and then add a range for how far they travel before the electricity dissipates.

    For the Storm Spell absorption ability, you need to specify that you can only absorb one spell at a time, and you can only absorb a D-Rank's worth of the spell. Meaning you could absorb a D-Rank storm spell, but you would only absorb a D-Rank's worth of magic from a C-Rank spell or higher. Also, note that you cannot eat spells absorbed by the blade. And the absorption needs to have a cooldown.
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    Goddess of Storms


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    Post by Rin Moriyama 16th February 2014, 4:58 pm

    k, edited it X3 plz approve~!


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    Post by Grizzly 17th February 2014, 2:57 pm

    As I already commented on your armor. This weapon is marked as D Rank, meaning weak :c Unless you mixed things up and actually bought it, I need to see your purchase link.

    But weak weapons don't get any combative abilities. So please remove all abilities and wait until you've upgraded them equivalently ._.

    Sorry for the inconvenience.


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    Goddess of Storms


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    Post by Rin Moriyama 9th March 2014, 6:19 am

    bumpity bump


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    Post by Grizzly 9th March 2014, 6:27 am

    Approved


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    Post by Grizzly 11th March 2014, 3:07 pm

    Open for editing

    Pastry:


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 11th March 2014, 3:17 pm

    TsukinoUsagiChan wrote:Name: Tempest Blade
    Rank: D
    Type: sword
    Description:
    Tempest Blade:
    Strengths:
    -Strong against storm based magic attacks
    - Made of incredibly tough materials, making breaking it almost impossible
    - Strong against lightning based magic attacks too
    Weaknesses:
    - Weak against poison magic
    - Weak against fire magic
    - if broken, its unfixable except by use of arc of time magic [color=teal]I think you should phrase this to 'in the thread' otherwise it makes it seems like it is completly unfixable
    Abilities:
    - Speed boost:
    This active boosts the wielder's speed by 3x when they attack an opponent. I feel 3x is too big a boost. At H rank this could make you almost unstoppable. Say like 20%
    duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts

    - Element absorption:
    This active allows the tempest blade to absorb water, wind, and lightning magic spells the same rank as the user. However, it is unable to use the spells it absorbs against the wielder's opponents
    duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 4 posts

    Please state the rank of your spells. Spell effects should be based on the rank of the spell not the rank of the user. As this is legendary they are both D rank


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    Rin's Starting Equipment: Tempest Blade (Done!) Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Rin's Starting Equipment: Tempest Blade (Done!) Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Rin's Starting Equipment: Tempest Blade (Done!) Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 11th March 2014, 3:32 pm

    Approved


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    Rin's Starting Equipment: Tempest Blade (Done!) Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Rin's Starting Equipment: Tempest Blade (Done!) Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
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