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    Post by King Zenshin 21st May 2012, 8:12 pm

    Primary Magic: Ice-Make
    Secondary Magic: Bullet Magic
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Creation magic is a unique magic. Depending on the user, the element of which the creations are made of differ. For example, fire mages can create fire objects while ice mages can create ice objects. The only two limits to this type of magic are the amount of magic the user has and the creativity of the user. Zen's Ice creations in particular are shaded in a black and purplish tint that is surrounded by white fog, due to the effects of sublimation. Light is unable to bounce off air particles around his ice to, giving it a 'dark' look. This effects all the spells, even if they aren't being made from the ability Dark-Ice.

    Strengths: The power to create whatever Zenshin can imagine up, so long as his magic can last. The opponent won't know until a moment before it's created. They have the element of surprise when they go to battle.

    Weaknesses: Although it is difficult to predict what they are going to make next, ice makers must call out what they're making in order for the more powerful creations to work.

    Abilities/Powers:

    Dark-Ice
    Dark-Ice is a special form of ice usable by the ice mages of the Hitsumo bloodline. It infuses dark magic into the ice, twisting the natural attribute of ice to Dark-Ice. Dark-Ice increases the acceleration and strength of the spells causing them to become one rank higher(durability wise), and causes the speed of his spells to go up 50% faster, whenever they are casted. This can be turned activated by calling out the spell a little differently, but the rules still apply, if Zenshin has casted two regular A-Rank spells, he can't use Dark-Ice since it'll be his third. His regular ice is always used unless specified in the call out of the spell or post. Aside from making the ice faster and more powerful, it does have its downsides. It uses up more magic than that of a regular Ice-Make mage, decreasing the number of spells he can use one 'adventure' (thread) by one, meaning he won't be able to use H-Rank spells, only be able S-Rank spells once, A-Rank twice and so on. Another downside is that Zenshin turns 'dark' some of the time during some battles, making him bent on killing his foe and sometimes, rarely, making him attack his own allies. He can't remember the battle when this happens and this 'evil' wears off after the battle, giving him his normal personality. As far as aesthetics, Dark-Ice turns the entire ice black on the inside and a purple tint on the outside, giving it a void/spacial look to it as well as not allowing light particles to reflect off the ice or any particles around it, giving it a dark look. In addition, not being able to bounce off light could be ineffective when trying to bounce off light or lightning attacks from allies. Dark-Ice, being also dark in attribute, not only burns the target with frostbite from sheer cold of the ice, but with darkness, causing even more pain than regular frostbite and creates a dark spot wherever it hit. Zenshin is accustomed to the ice after training with it for years and is not affected by these harmful properties, however, enemies and ally alike will get burned if they touch it. The sublimation that is given off by the ice is darker than smoke as opposed to it's clear ice counterpart of clear, white gas. The spells labeled as both dark and ice are required to be casted in Dark-Ice, forcing them to be reduced per thread.

    Frostbite
    Frostbite is an ability associated with Zenshin's magic that advances in stages as it goes along. Depending on the ability depends the chance of the target getting frostbite and it is also up to them on how they decide to handle it. Only one hand or foot can be afflicted at one time. The ability used has to be inflict a wound beyond bruising or blunt damage (has to cut). Once it begins, the frostbite will start in one hand or foot.

    D-Rank Spells: 25% chance of getting afflicted
    C-Rank Spells: 50% chance of getting afflicted
    B-Rank Spells: 75% chance of getting afflicted
    A-Rank Spells: 100% chance getting afflicted

    1 post afflicted: Slightly darker mark on their skin, not noticeable if on a tanned or darker toned opponent.

    2 and 3 posts afflicted: The mark is much more noticeable and starts spreading rapidly to the nearest hands or feet.

    4 and 5 posts afflicted: It has reached the hand or foot by now and is about to get very severe

    8 posts afflicted: Blood no longer flows to the body part of the body afflicted and it rendered useless.

    Final Make: Iced Shell
    The ultimate technique at his disposal. One that he would only use is all hope was lost and there was no other way to stop whatever caused such a thing. Truly the "last resort technique". Gathering all of the magic power he has left, he crosses his arms in an "X" and calls out the name of the technique, Iced Shell. Magic energy swirls around him and enormous magical circles surround the enemy (or enemies) before they begin to freeze. In conclusion, the threat will be frozen solid for eternity, as the ice never melts, but at a mighty cost. To use such an ability, Zenshin must sacrifice his own life, his body disappearing into the wind by the end of it.

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    Post by Xana 22nd May 2012, 8:33 am

    Get rid of your A-Rank spells. Other than that, you're good bro.
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    Post by King Zenshin 22nd May 2012, 1:37 pm

    I am A ranked, anything else?


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    Post by Xana 22nd May 2012, 6:58 pm

    A-ranks are only allowed 2 A-rank spells. Unless you bought a spell slot, of course. o.o
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    Post by King Zenshin 22nd May 2012, 7:19 pm

    bump


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    Post by Xana 23rd May 2012, 5:47 am

    Add cool downs to your jaws and chains.
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    Post by King Zenshin 23rd May 2012, 5:49 am

    Bumpity, and I took a page from glacial radiance if you don't mind : /.


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    Post by Xana 23rd May 2012, 2:51 pm

    Er... You can't just be able to use dark ice out of nowhere. That, and other than the ranged attack, it's too similar to mine. Also, you can only have 2 A-rank spells. You're gonna have to get rid of your dragon or chains if you want that.
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    Post by King Zenshin 23rd May 2012, 4:44 pm

    Bump, it better?


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    Post by Xana 23rd May 2012, 6:47 pm

    Just change the color aspect of it. If your base is clear, the ice you're using still has to be clear. My ice is originally shining white and hazy, thus my Glacial Radiance makes my character glowing white and hazy. The way you describe your ice, it's just like any ordinary ice. If so, then your ice will just be clear when using Benumb.
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    Post by King Zenshin 23rd May 2012, 6:53 pm

    Ok, I didn't fully understand what you meant, but I think I might've, Bump.


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    Post by Xana 23rd May 2012, 7:05 pm

    Next time, describe everything in more detail please? XD

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    Post by King Zenshin 8th June 2012, 8:02 am

    Bump


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    Post by Zeno 9th November 2012, 8:53 pm

    Reapproved


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    Post by King Zenshin 25th November 2012, 2:04 am

    Ready for Re-re-evaluation!


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    Post by Alleria 27th November 2012, 10:00 pm

    Its balanced. Also those with no duration they are instant which means 1 post am i right?


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    Post by Alleria 27th November 2012, 10:00 pm

    Oh ok. Approved then.


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    Post by Emilia Hawke 10th December 2012, 12:28 am

    Ok I am sorry but, are ya'll blind? There are some serious issues with this app.

    First being the Dark Ice mode. Cool its a bloodline, fine with that despite the fact you already have one thats what lineages are. My issue is more with this. "Dark-Ice increases the acceleration and strength of the spells causing a small 'boom', as it breaks mach one" .....Mach one? Ice? Yeah NO. Ice is meant for three things, durability, blunt damage, freezing. That is how ice works. And you're empowering it with DARKNESS. Now if it were lightning, or perhaps wind, then yeah, mach speeds I can see, because that actually makes SENSE. Darkness and Ice? No effing way. It can be a speed boost yeah, but no where NEAR that is anything close to acceptable given your magic. It's not how ice works.


    Next is your spells. A giant majority of them, in fact. More than half your spells are listed as Ice/Darkness. I was under the impression that your Dark Ice "ability" was a forced activation, similar to something like Dragon Force. For it to be listed as Dark anything for your spells, Dark Ice needs to be active then, correct? Or is it just on all the time and you can only use so many spells ever in any thread? Either way, that's not made apparent anywhere in this app. Pick one or the other. Either Dark Ice is always active and you can only use so many spells a thread, or you activate it on will, thus adding more limitations dependent upon how many spells and of what rank you've used already before its activation. As it is now, it just makes it seem like Dark Ice is a thing constantly present within your magic and your ability is rather pointless to have.

    Also your ice make dragon. I'm sorry, but the ONLY living person to see WHAT the Ice Dragon looks like is the Ice Dragon Slayer raised by him, me. I have a spell giving me armor to resemble a more humanoid form of him, and as of yet, in character, you have NOT seen me use this spell. Get rid of that part that states it looks my Dragon when no one but me has seen it, and in character the only one to see my armor is Night and a bunch of dead NPCs. Fix that.

    Bump when edited. How NONE of this came to the attention of anyone else is beyond me. And before you say anything, its NOT because we have a rivalry or some bs. The things you have in this app are issues that make no sense to have approved and need to be fixed, Night will agree with me on this.


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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 10th December 2012, 11:08 am

    Unique as Dark Ice sounds; i agree with eclipse. You need to state the specifics of the ability, and edit it so it makes sense along with the spell of Ice Dragon


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    Zenshin's Magic Empty Re: Zenshin's Magic

    Post by King Zenshin 10th December 2012, 3:07 pm

    Bump...


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    Zenshin's Magic Empty Re: Zenshin's Magic

    Post by Emilia Hawke 10th December 2012, 4:32 pm

    Sa'll good now. Approved.Thank you for cooperating.


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    Zenshin's Magic Empty Re: Zenshin's Magic

    Post by King Zenshin 10th July 2013, 7:13 am

    Bump


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    Character / Vincent Gauss
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    Zenshin's Magic Empty Re: Zenshin's Magic

    Post by NightDrivenEn7 10th July 2013, 11:25 am

    You need to make sure all of your strengths and weaknesses are 3-4 in that order. (minimum strenghts- 3 minimum weaknesses-4)

    Could you also try to get larger descriptions in there for your spells? It is weird seeing only 1-2 sentences in some of them.


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    Zenshin's Magic Empty Re: Zenshin's Magic

    Post by King Zenshin 10th July 2013, 12:06 pm

    Bump


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    Zenshin's Magic Empty Re: Zenshin's Magic

    Post by NightDrivenEn7 10th July 2013, 12:18 pm

    No D rank Secondary spell?


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