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    Sharp-Shooter

    Jade_Nettle
    Jade_Nettle

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    In Progress Sharp-Shooter

    Post by Jade_Nettle 30th April 2022, 12:37 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Sharp-Shooter

    Magic Type: Re-Equip

    Description: Far before firearms made their appearance in the world, snipers and sharpshooters were still feared by armies and lone-wolf mages alike. A well-placed arrow could blind, hobble, or poison someone from a hidden position. There is truly no shortage of enchanted bows, as well as the augmentations and magical charms that can be added to them. Not all mages require strength, but the arts of an arcane sharpshooter have unique demands on the body and mind that not many even among mages can muster. The most legendary of bows were said to have their own intelligence and refuse to be used by all but the most elite.

    The archers and woodland snipers of Fiore are a varied lot--united only by their focus and concentration. They have been well known as trackers, scouts, spies, assassins, and more. Those that fear a sniper-mage's magic know well the damage a poisoned arrow head can do--as well as the information that can be stolen by the unwavering gaze of a silent stalker. Many arcane sharpshooters focus on magics that enhance their stealth, allowing them to disappear in any environment or cause the mind to gloss over their existence. In the beginners bag of tricks, there are often also abilities that assist the sniper's allies and hobble their enemies. Poison magic is a common technique--as are spells designed to pin their targets down--so that their allies may close in and finish the job.

    In an ideal world, the magical sharpshooter's power and skill is one that can turn the tide of even large-scale battles--from a safe distance.  


    Unique Abilities:
    • Ability 1: Magic Sensory Ability is larger in range than a normal mage.
    • Ability 2:
    • Ability 3:


    Spells

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    Name: Bramble Arrow
    Rank: D
    Requip Type: Weapon (Bow)
    Grade: Normal
    Linked Equipment: N/A
    Duration: 3 Rounds / Posts
    Description: This bow is made from various natural materials, including roses, thistle, poppies, and other thorny plants. Those with a sharp nose would note that it smells almost like the rampant new growth of spring, but with a slight metallic tinge. A shiny sap drips from the arrow tip. Does normal D ranked re-equip damage. It doesn't look like it would be pleasant to be shot with one...

    Ability 1:

    Ability 2:


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    Name: The Whispered Lullaby
    Rank: D
    Requip Type: Weapon (Bow)
    Grade: Normal
    Linked Equipment: N/A
    Duration: 3 Rounds / Posts
    Description: A bow made from old, dark wood. It requires magic energy to be used, and the string itself is formed with the power of a mage. A normal archer has no hope of using it. It glows faintly with dancing blue and pale purple flames, like a nightlight in a child's bedroom. It gives off a calming odor, like lavender. When shot, the arrow leaves the faintest trail in darkness--like a ghostly firefly.

    Ability 1:

    Ability 2:

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    Name: Falling Petals Bow
    Rank: D
    Requip Type: Weapon (Bow)
    Grade: Normal
    Linked Equipment: N/A
    Duration: 3 Rounds / Posts
    Description: A delicate-looking bow made of a pale blue, nearly white material. Pale, white flowers are dispersed here and there about the twining strands of the bow. The arrows are made of pure magic energy. They do not hurt to be shot with, but rather feel like a refreshing jolt of energy.

    Ability 1:

    Ability 2:

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    Name: The Wildflower
    Rank: D+
    Requip Type: Weapon (Bow)
    Grade: Normal
    Linked Equipment: N/A
    Duration: 3 Rounds / Posts
    Description: This bow looks like it is made from intertwined wildflowers and slender vines. The wildflowers area always local to the area the bow is in, and are from the appropriate season. It gives off a very faint scent. Somehow, the user is harder to keep track of when they equip it.

    Ability 1:

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    Last edited by Jade_Nettle on 21st June 2022, 9:46 pm; edited 3 times in total


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    In Progress Re: Sharp-Shooter

    Post by Guest 3rd May 2022, 7:08 am

    Hey there Jade, Med here to grade this. I have a couple of overarching edits which cover the whole magic before I get to the more detailed ones.

    Firstly, this actually looks like more like a holder magic than a requip one at the moment since you are summoning the arrows but not the bows. It might work easier if the bows were what were summoned and each one used different arrows.

    Secondly, you've put bow in each of the linked equipment sections but not actually linked anything. In order to link equipment, you have to make a weapon and have it approved, then put the link to it in your app. As it is, you need to replace every instance of bow and put N/A instead.

    Thirdly, I need you to go through this and remove all numbers besides the durations since this is a statless magic.

    You'll find my other edits in blue. If you have any questions, please either reply here or DM me on discord and I'll do my best to help. When you're finished, just bump this thread. :)

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    In Progress Re: Sharp-Shooter

    Post by Jade_Nettle 21st June 2022, 9:47 pm

    Edits made.


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    In Progress Re: Sharp-Shooter

    Post by Guest 22nd June 2022, 3:47 am

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