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    Fellis Starshade

    Thagirion
    Thagirion

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    Experience : ‭1,126,090

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Abysmal Blackness
    Second Skill: Mortal Coil
    Third Skill: Border-Realm

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    Post by Thagirion 8th May 2019, 8:05 pm

    Fellis Starshade Fellis10

    Name: Fellis Starshade
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Combat pet
    Proof of Purchase: -
    Description:
    Fellis has all of the characteristics of a typical exceed, being a relatively small feline with a pair of wings on his back that allow him to fly around. Standing at a height of roughly 30 centimeters, Fellis is a white haired exceed that has some distinct markings on his right eye and on the left side of his head. While called markings, they are merely spots of differently colored, grey fur. With his pair of yellow eyes, Fellis has a generally nice appearance to him that doesn't exactly strike anyone with fear. Wearing black shorts and a black open-chested vest, he also wears a grey shirt underneath it and a white sash around his waist.
    Personality:
    Ever since Fellis and Solmar started traveling together, the exceed went from being skeptical to the point where he now looks up to Solmar. Having never met someone who had a demon inside of them that they managed to lock away deep within their psyche the way he did while still being able to mostly enjoy the little things in life like Solmar can, he respects him mostly for that. Another part he respects about the human is his ferocity and unwillingness to go down in battle, something that has saved the both of them several times over already. Now, it can often be found rooting around in Solmar's large fur coat, sleeping within one of the long sleeves. Using the pockets on the inside of the coat as his personal drawers, Solmar knows better than to ask what he might encounter within them.

    Personally though, Fellis is not much like Solmar in that he doesn't like fighting, which is why Solmar often entrusts his coat to the exceed and tells it to put some distance between them and watch from above. Often called "overwatch" to make it feel better about not being much of a fighter, Fellis makes a point out of keeping Solmar's coat safe. One of the things Fellis does share with Solmar is that he has taken over quite a few words from his vocabulary, and can sometimes cuss and swear without really knowing what it is that he's saying. In spite of being somewhat of a coward, he is still very protective of his master and friend, and won't stand for anyone badmouthing him within earshot. It goes to show that Fellis cares for Solmar enough to, at times, forget about his own cowardice.

    Much like Solmar, Fellis does not like fish and most seafood, making an exception for shrimp, crab and lobster. His favorite food is chicken or beef, though he'll eat just about anything Solmar cooks up for him. While he is not much of a cook himself, he always insists on helping with the cooking activity by bringing in ingredients and spices and helping to stir the pot or flip the meat.
    Abilities: As an Exceed, Fellis has the passive ability to fly.

    C ranked spell:
    D ranked spell:


    Last edited by Vetis on 11th May 2019, 5:13 am; edited 1 time in total
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


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    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 10th May 2019, 6:02 am

    Hey, Nessa here, I'll be grading this item for you. All edits will be in this colour! Bump the thread when done and I'll take a look!


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    Thagirion
    Thagirion

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Rising Star- Demon Slayer- Complete Your First Job!- Player 
    Lineage : Heir to the Void
    Position : None
    Posts : 483
    Cosmic Coins : 100
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : ‭1,126,090

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Abysmal Blackness
    Second Skill: Mortal Coil
    Third Skill: Border-Realm

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    Post by Thagirion 10th May 2019, 9:07 am

    Regarding the "Melee/Self" thing, if it is meant to be used primarily on others, what sort of things should I write down for it? Because I did add in a range, but i'm not really sure how to best fill out the speed thing.

    And for the % thing, it is also something to be used on others, and it isn't really a "Regenerate X MP or HP per post" but rather a "Restore X MP or HP right away" kind of deal. I'm not sure how that kind of thing should best be handled though, or if it would be better to maybe just add a flat number or something?
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 11th May 2019, 4:16 am

    'Melee/Self' represents a character natural speed, which is why it is the most effective for effects like this. However, if you do not wish to use them, then I would recommend using rank ST Speed [60MPS For D Rank / 120MPS for C Rank]. Instant is only a speed permitted for teleports.

    As for the Regen thing, you may state a base number for HP which is the equivalent to an ST spell of that rank. MP, however, cannot have a 'flat' value regeneration, without a significant drawback i.e. damage to yourself.

    Also, You still need to amend the duration on 'Encouragement' because only Burst/Signature spells can have instant durations.



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    Thagirion
    Thagirion

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Rising Star- Demon Slayer- Complete Your First Job!- Player 
    Lineage : Heir to the Void
    Position : None
    Posts : 483
    Cosmic Coins : 100
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : ‭1,126,090

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Abysmal Blackness
    Second Skill: Mortal Coil
    Third Skill: Border-Realm

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    Post by Thagirion 11th May 2019, 5:14 am

    Alright, that seems understandable.

    Made the appropriate changes, dropped the percentages and fixed the speeds and durations.
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

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    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 11th May 2019, 6:17 am

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