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    The Solar Brawler

    Fear
    Fear

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    Post by Fear 18th March 2019, 1:20 am

    Magic

    Magic Name: The Solar Brawler
    Magic Type: Caster; Solitary Benefit
    Description:

    A powerful magic that was granted to the family of Heidi’s after his great ancestor managed to steal the secrets of it after a series of bloody events. This magic allows the user to become the embodiment of the sun, able to use several aspects of it such as light, heat and even its electromagnetic field. While many of his family wielded it in typical ways, Heidi’s is different as he primarily uses these aspects in tandem with his martial arts making him a dangerous fighter. Through the mix of martial arts and the solar magic that he uses, Heidi gave birth to what is known as The Solar Brawler. This allows him to use the suns immense heat for a powerful punch or even infusing himself with lightning to make himself faster. However, even though he typically does use this for short range fighting, Heidi also has multiple ranged attack’s as well.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Rays of Life: With the suns power flowing through him, Heidi gains a passive 20% power and 20% speed.
    • Ability:
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    Spells:

    Name: Solar Punch LV 1
    Rank: D
    Type: Caster; Single Target
    Damage: 40HP
    Range: Touch
    Speed: 60 MPS
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: Must be close to target
    Description:

    Heidi clenches his fist and flames of the sun erupt violently before engulfing his fist. After having his fist covered in sun flames, Heidi puts his power into a punch which deals D-rank damage upon contact as well as 1st degree burns.

    Name: Brilliant Sun
    Rank: D
    Type: Caster; AOE
    Damage: 0
    Range: 30M
    Speed: 15 MPS
    Duration: 3
    Downside: Allies can be caught in spell
    Description:

    Using his magic, Heidi fills his body with the light of the sun. Instead of attacking with it, he flexes and his body begins to glow with a blinding light. This light makes it harder for those who aren’t Heidi to see.

    Name: Light Blast Punch LV 1
    Rank: D+
    Type: Caster; Single Target
    Damage: 60HP
    Range: 90 M
    Speed: 90 MPS
    Duration: 3
    Downside:
    Description:

    Heidi clenches his hand into a fist and begins to channel the light of the sun into it. The light is dull as it begins to charge before turning into a blinding bright light. Once his fist grows the bright white, he punches the direct of his opponent releasing a beam of light which can travel up to 90M towards his opponent and causes 50% more D-rank damage than normal as well as 1at degree burns.

    Name: Lightning Speed
    Rank: D-rank
    Type: Caster; Single Target Buff
    Damage: -
    Range: Self
    Speed: 60MPS
    Duration: 3
    Downside:
    Description:

    Heidi uses his manipulation of the suns electromagnetic field to produce lightning that he channels through his legs. This gives him a 50% buff to his speed for the duration of the spell.




    Last edited by Fear on 18th March 2019, 8:00 am; edited 1 time in total
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 18th March 2019, 4:30 am

    Hey there, I'm Nessa and I'll be grading this magic for you. All my edits will be done in this colour! Once you've made the recommended edits, bump the thread and I'll take a look!

    Edit:: First of all, I have graded all the spell according to the rules, however you have 4 normal D Ranks spells here. To start with you receive 3 Normal D Rank spells and 1 Advanced, please change one of these to a D+ spell.

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    Fear
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    Post by Fear 18th March 2019, 8:03 am

    Everything is fixed~
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 18th March 2019, 2:46 pm

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