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Magic Name: Wind Strike Magic
Magic Type: Caster: Solitary Benefit (+25% to MP Cost Reduction)
Description: Leona practices a form of Wind magic named Wind Strike Magic, which was taught to her by her mother and older brother. It is a powerful offensive style that features many traditional spells for long-range combat. It also incorporates magically enhanced martial arts to allow the practitioner to be flexible in the range in which they can engage enemies and fight without a weapon if they are disarmed.
In combat Leona uses Wind Strike Magic for a balanced offense since the magic lends itself to both close-range and long-range combat with single-target, multi-target and area-of-effect spells. While this lack of specialization means that Leona's magic does not have a particular "optimal" range, Leona can quickly switch between close-range and long-range combat as the fight progresses and competently use either style. Opponents expecting her to only be a threat at one range often get an unpleasant surprise when Leona can hit them at what they thought was a "safe" distance.
If there is a serious weakness to Wind Strike Magic, it is that the magic is composed almost exclusively of offensive spells. It has only one Defensive spell with which to protect herself and only one Auxiliary spell to either help Leona close the range with adversaries or to avoid their attacks with a burst of speed. However, the benefits of flexibility and simple, straightforward combat spells have served Leona well over the course of her adventures.
Unique Abilities:
- Nocturnal Hunter: When nightfall arrives, Leona receives a 50% boost to Melee Damage. She also gains night vision that can see in darkness, whether it is natural or artificial. This night vision works at all times of day and works both indoors and outdoors.
- Gale Speed: Leona's Speed is boosted by 60%. This UA maxes out at 60%.
- Sky Command: Leona's mastery of Wind Strike Magic is so extensive that Spell Damage is boosted by 30% and Spell Speed is boosted by 30%. In addition, her MP is restored faster; she replenishes 5% of her MP every other post.
- Ascendant Ability (X-Rank):
Name: Power Of Apocalypse:
Description: Acnologia fought a brave mage that caused Acnologia to bleed. Although Acnologia survived and had killed the mage, his blood got poured over an unfortunate witness who survived, but immediately started to mutate uncontrollably. The mutation remained invisible on the outside, but the blood of the man had changed. The man gained the ability to enter magical adrenaline rushes that would allow him to perform superhuman actions.
Ability: Upon activation of this lineage the user becomes physically adept at any obstacles ahead. The adrenaline rush adapts to the situation. Whatever the user needs most, whether it is speed, strength or agility, is boosted at that moment by the rush. That one attribute is boosted by 100%.
Usage: Upon activation the ability lasts 1 post with a cooldown of 6 posts.
- Ascendant Ability (Y-Rank):
Name: Magician's Spirit
Description: The first human gifted with the ability of magic became a powerful Sage of wisdom, and was the messenger of the Gods. Able to lift up mountains, part the oceans, conjure meteors, summon massive tornadoes, Open black holes out of thin air, call upon the stars themselves to come to his aid. However, he was not immortal, and though he did magnificent deeds and told the word of the Gods; he knew he would not live forever and that they would choose another. Unable to let go of his duties, he chained his spirit to the physical world so it can inherit a new host, and transfer his powers to them. Doing this however, relinquished all of his omnipotent power. Those who inherit his spirit, will gain him as a mentor of guidance; but will need to unlock the power of the magic themselves.
Ability: 25% increase to base MP as well as 25% to spell damage, ability to identify the enemies magic (Whether it's good / evil, elements, and general nature). Ability to summon mage to fight, able to communicate with an ancient spirit with vast information.
Usage: The user will passively gain an increase of MP and Spell power, as well as have the old Sage appear when needed for guidance. They can however, summon the mage to perform a powerful spell in times of great crises once per thread. Doing this however, will drain the user of their available magic, and relinquish the Sage's wisdom and guidance for the rest of the thread as well as suffering the effects of having 0% MP. The user must have at least 20% MP to summon the Sage to attack.
Spell: Flare of Solaria- Crash of the Majestic Sun; The Sage will appear next to the user and conjures a Meteor to fall from the sky upon a 30 meter radius + 15 per rank beyond D with an explosion of fifteen meter radius beyond that (+5 per rank beyond D), for 200% user-ranked spell damage. Range is 30 meters + 15 per rank above D away from the user.
- Ascendant Ability (Z-Rank):
Name: Gold Rush
Description: Centuries ago, a tribe came to Fiore from a continent that is so incredibly far away that to this day those who ventured to find it have failed; the tribe members claimed to have come from a place called "Egypt". Wherever the tribe went, they prospered beyond belief; to each country and continent they went to, they rose to become the most powerful group of people there. Eventually, they were captured by all dark guilds at the time for their fortune and ability to prosper, and when the tribe refused to cooperate, they were all killed. Luckily, some were not captured, so your bloodline still lives on today. However, you must be wondering - "How did they do it?". Well, it's quite simple.
The tribe from Egypt, which were known as Egyptians, were cast away from their homeland by raiders with absolutely nothing. An Egyptian goddess, who was saddened by what could potentially happen to her people, cast a powerful spell over the tribe to make them the luckiest people on the planet (literally!). Because of this, the tribe was able to find a significant more amount of jewels, items to sell, and they were said to be so lucky that they could even cheat death and danger; of course, that wasn't the case when they were completely obliterated...
Ability: The user is given 3 passive abilities and 2 active abilities, though they can only ever choose one ability from the passive and active parts of this lineage. Whenever going on a job, the user must always pick from one of the following abilities:
* Increase your own jewel reward by 100%
* Find a custom weapon, item, or armor (rank depends on the difficulty of the job; you get to choose the type of item)
* Increase the jewel reward of you and ONE other participant of the job by 50%
The user's active ability are the following:
* The user is able to sacrifice their EXP gained from jobs for additional jewels
* The user's luck will become at its peak (as though you needed any more...) and will now have great things overall happen to them. This ranges from getting a simple kiss from that one special person, to having your opponent stumble, causing them to, even if narrowly, miss the direction they were sending their spell at.
Usage: Lineage has three passive abilities and two active abilities; you MUST pick one of the passive abilities at the start of any job. The second active ability of this lineage can only be used once per thread, with a duration of 4 posts; again, you can only pick pick one of the two active abilities.
Whenever the second passive ability of this lineage is used, the rank of the weapon/item/armor is found at the following job ranks:
* D-Rank: Nothing
* C-Rank: Strong
* B-Rank: Strong+
* A-Rank: Strong+
* S-Rank: Legendary
* SS-Rank: Legendary+
* 10Y: Legendary+
* 100Y: Artifact
Whenever the first active ability of this lineage is used, the jewels gained for the amount of exp sacrificed is as the following:
* 25 EXP: 1,000 (D-Rank)
* 50 EXP: 2,500 (C-Rank)
* 250 EXP: 7,500 (B-Rank)
* 1,250 EXP: 17,000 (A-Rank)
* 6,250 EXP: 30,000 (S-Rank)
* 18,750 EXP: 45,000 (SS-Rank)
* 56,250 EXP: 70,000 (10Y-Rank)
* 168,750 EXP: 100,000 (100Y-Rank)
Spells:
Signature Spells:
Name: Wind Wall
Rank: S
Category: Defensive
Type: Single Target
Durability: 120 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Raising a hand into the air and then swinging it downward, Leona generates a small tornado that blocks one S-ranked spell before dissipating. It protects an area of 11.25m in front of her.
Name: Wind Blast
Rank: S
Category: Offensive
Type: Multi-Target
Damage: 90 HP
Range: 300 Meters
Speed: 225 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Focusing magic into her hand until it glows silver, Leona then pushes outward with the palm of her hand. A fast, concussive burst of wind is released that travels at 225 meters per second and reaches up to 300 meters. If the spell hits, each opponent takes 90 HP in damage and can be knocked off their feet. Up to five opponents standing close together can be knocked down in a single Wind Blast. OOC permission is required to knock down and move PCs or Event NPCs.
Name: Zephyr Dash
Rank: S
Category: Auxiliary
Type: Burst
Damage: N/A
Range: 100 Meters
Speed: 100 Meters per Second
Duration: Instantaneous Edit:: We no longer permit 'instant' durations, please amend this to an numerical value.
Downside: N/A
Description: Focusing magic into her legs, Leona crouches down and performs a "flash step." This spell can be used to cover distances quickly to pass by obstacles or close the distance for Leona to use melee attacks. Zephyr Dash can be used once per post.
D Rank Spells:
Name: Swift Palm
Rank: D
MP Cost: 20
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 40 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona draws back her hand and curls up her fingers, exposing the heel of her palm. She then brings it forward towards the target's face or chest in a swift palm strike. If the attack hits the target it takes 40 HP in damage.
Name: Lion's Tail Sweep
Rank: D
MP Cost: 20 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 40 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona's foot is encased in a glowing silver "boot" of wind magic. She performs a low sweep kick. If the target is hit, it takes 40 HP in damage and may be knocked down. OOC permission is required to knock down and move a PC or event NPC.
Name: Air Disc
Rank: D
MP Cost: 20 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 40 HP
Range: 60 Meters
Speed: 60 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Powering her hand with energy, Leona swings it sideways in a swift motion, sending forth a disc made of wind. It travels at 60m/s and reaches up to 60 meters in range. It can bounce off of objects once without losing power; a second bounce before hitting the target makes it dissipate immediately. If the target is hit, it takes 40 HP in damage and the disc dissipates on impact.
Name: Fast Ball
Rank: D+
MP Cost: 30 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60 HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 90 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: : Leona opens her hand and a ball of wind energy forms in her hand. She then throws it at the target in the same fashion as throwing a baseball. The projectile travels at 90 m/s up to 90 meters in range. If the spell hits, the target takes 60 HP in damage. The projectile dissipates upon impact.
C Rank Spells:
Name: Storm Impact
Rank: C
MP Cost: 30 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Area Of Effect
Damage: 30 HP
Range: 60 Meters
Speed: 30 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Raising a fist into the air, it is wrapped in wind shaped like a miniature tornado. Leona then drops to one knee and punches the ground. An expanding dome of wind with a radius of 60 meters emanates from her position at a speed of 30 meters per second, dealing damage and possibly staggering opponents. OOC permission is required to stagger and move PCs or Event NPCs.
Name: Air Burst
Rank: C
MP Cost: 30 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Multiple Target
Damage: 45 HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 65 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Channeling magic into her open hands, Leona leaps into the air and swings them at opponents. Eight wind balls the size of tennis balls rain down on the enemy. The projectiles travel at a speed of 65 Meters per Second. If a ball hits, the opponent takes 45 HP in damage.
Name: Mach Jab
Rank: C
MP Cost: 30 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona forms her hand into a fist and focuses magic into it. The fist glows silver for only a second before she punches forward. It is a swift jab that can catch opponents off guard. If it hits the target takes 60 HP in damage.
Name: Smashing Crescent
Rank: C+
MP Cost: 45 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 90 HP
Range: 180 Meters
Speed: 180 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Gathering magic into her hand, Leona performs a downward chopping motion. A crescent made of wind energy is launched towards the enemy. The projectile travels at 180m/s up to a range of 180 meters. If it hits, the target takes 90 HP in damage and may be staggered. OOC permission is required to stagger and move a PC or Event NPC.
B Rank Spells:
Name: Lion Claw
Rank: B
MP Cost: 40 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona opens her hand and claws of wind form on her fingers. She then slashes at her opponent. A hit deals 80 HP in damage but does not cause bleeding.
Name: Gale Cannon
Rank: B
MP Cost: 40 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80 HP
Range: 200 Meters
Speed: 200 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona focuses magic into her hand until a miniature tornado whirls on her arm and then points her palm at the target. A basketball-sized ball of magic is then released that travels at 200 meters per second and travels up to 200 meters in range. If the target is hit, the projectile explodes on impact, dealing 80 HP in damage and knocking the target down. OOC permission is required to knock down and move a PC or Event NPC.
Name: Mach Straight
Rank: B
MP Cost: 40 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona forms her hand into a fist and focuses magic into it. The fist glows silver for only a second before she then punches forward, executing a fast and powerful straight punch infused with Wind magic. If the Mach Straight hits, the target takes 80 HP in damage and is staggered from the impact. OOC permission is required to stagger and move a PC or Event NPC.
Name: Crescent Cutter
Rank: B+
MP Cost: 60 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60 HP on impact, then 1/2 B-ranked damage for four turns
Range: 300 Meters
Speed: 300 Meters per Second
Duration: 5 Posts
Downside: N/A
Description: Forming her hand into an edge and focusing magic into it, Leona chops downward, sending a sharp blade of wind at her target. It travels at 300 m/s and reaches up to 300 meters. A hit causes 60 HP in damage on the first turn and then causes the opponent to bleed and take 1/2 B-ranked damage for up to three turns after. The bleeding effect can be ended earlier by items, UA effects, or healing magic.
A Rank Spells:
Name: Mach Uppercut
Rank: A
MP Cost: 50 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 100 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona forms her hand into a fist and focuses magic into it. The fist glows silver for only a second before she performs an uppercut punch. It is a swift uppercut that can catch opponents off guard. If the target is hit, it takes 100 HP in damage and is knocked down. OOC permission is required to knock down and move a PC or Event NPC.
Name: Zephyr Charge
Rank: A
MP Cost: 50 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst
Damage: 100 HP
Range: 75 Meters
Speed: 75 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona focuses magic into her body and crouches down. She then disappears in a "flash step" that can reach up to 75 meters and travels at 75 meters per second. At the end of the "flash step" Leona slams into the opponent with a buffer of air in front of her. If it hits, the target takes 100 HP in damage; the buffer transfers the momentum of Leona's dash to the opponent and knocks them down while she remains unaffected. OOC permission is required to knock down and move a PC or Event NPC.
Name: Wind Bullet
Rank: A+
MP Cost: 75 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 150 HP
Range: 450 Meters
Speed: 450 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Leona focuses magic onto the tip of her finger. She then points at the target and fires a small but deceptively powerful silver projectile the size of a marble that has a range of 450 Meters and travels at 450 Meters per Second. If it hits, the target takes 150 HP in damage and is knocked back. OOC permission is required to knock back and move a PC or Event NPC.
S Rank Spells:
Name: Hurricane Punch
Rank: S
MP Cost: 60 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 120 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Channeling magic power into her arm and fist, Leona then punches the target rapidly for a total of twelve punches. Her arm moves so quickly that observers see only a blur. Each punch does 10 HP in damage; if all twelve punches hit, the target takes 120 HP in damage and is disoriented for one post.
Name: Sky Hammer
Rank: S
MP Cost: 60 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 120 HP
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Channeling magic energy into her foot, Leona lifts her leg above her head and performs an axe kick. She brings her heel down on the target with great force. If the kick hits, the target takes 120 HP in damage and is knocked to the ground. OOC permission is required to knock down and move PCs or Event NPCs.
Name: Lion's Fury
Rank: S+
MP Cost: 90 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst
Damage: 180 HP
Range: 150 Meters
Speed: 150 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Channeling energy into her legs and hands, Leona crouches down. She then performs a "flash step" that has a range 0f 150 meters and travels at 150 meters per second. At the end of the "flash step" Leona uses fingers tipped with silver claws made of wind to quickly slash at the target 18 times. Each hit does 10 HP in damage; if all 18 slashes hit, the target takes 180 HP in damage and is disoriented for one post.
H Rank Spells:
Name: Silver Tempest
Rank: H
MP Cost: 70 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 140 HP
Range: 600 Meters
Speed: 450 Meters per Second
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: N/A
Description: Putting together her index and middle fingers and forming a fist with the rest of her fingers, Leona holds the two fingers sideways and channels magic into them until they glow silver. She then fires a horizontal silver column of air in the shape of a tornado at the opponent that travels up to 600 Meters and travels at a speed of 450 Meters per Second. If it hits, the target takes 140 HP in damage and is buffeted by the tornado, becoming disoriented for one turn. The disorientation can be cured with a UA, healing spell, or other effect.
Name: Silver Blade
Rank: H+
MP Cost: 105 MP
Category: Offensive
Type: Single Target
Damage: 105 HP on impact, 1/2 H-ranked damage for up to four posts after
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: 5 Posts
Downside: N/A
Description: Putting together her index and middle fingers and forming a fist with the rest of her fingers, Leona points the two fingers down at her side and channels magic into them until they glow silver. She then slashes at the opponent with a silver blade of wind that leaves a brief silver afterimage. If it hits, the target takes 105 HP in damage and suffers 1/2 H-ranked bleeding damage for up to four turns afterward. The bleeding can be stopped sooner with a UA, healing spell, or other effect. - Nocturnal Hunter: When nightfall arrives, Leona receives a 50% boost to Melee Damage. She also gains night vision that can see in darkness, whether it is natural or artificial. This night vision works at all times of day and works both indoors and outdoors.
