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    Advent of the Dragoon

    Shea Duskhelm
    Shea Duskhelm

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 126
    Guild : Black Sails
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Grand Aria
    Second Skill: Advent of the Dragoon
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Shea Duskhelm 16th August 2017, 2:58 pm

    Username: Shea Duskhelm
    Secondary Magic Name: Advent of the Dragoon
    Evidence of Accomplishment: Bought by my alt Grema Fen here, post 475
    Description: The art of dragooning is an ancient one, born of great need. There was once a lonely mountainous country whose ruler castle sat near the top of one. The mountains guarded the country against other human invaders. But not from what the locals called dragons, which were really wyverns, for this area was filled with them. The so called dragon bombarded the people, stole their food, and overall terrorized them. It was when a village was burned to the ground leaving only one girl as a survivor that things began to change. Spurred by vengeance against the beasts the girl spent years mastering a fighting style that could defeat the dragons. She figured out a lance or spear is very effective against flying creatures and trained in their use excessively. But the only problem was that it was very hard for her to reach the flying monsters, even with a long weapon, and it was proven too dangerous to attack them on the ground. So the girl decided that like her enemies, she must fly. The next great battle against the dragons was won, all thanks to the girl who could leap high into the air and use the momentum to down flying enemies. She was greatly rewarded and loved by the kingdom and quickly taught others her new battle style, giving it and the ones who use it the name Dragoon.

    Shea uses this battle style the same way the girl of legend did, often adding mystical magic to it while she leaps into the air to tear her enemies down.

    Strengths:
    - Extra damage against flying enemies
    - A good attack based magic
    - Gives the user the ability to jump high and land without being harmed
    - Makes the user faster while in the air

    Weaknesses:
    - Must be wielding a spear or lance (or overall long and  narrow weapon) for this magic to work
    - Very hard to hide or be subtle about jumping into the air to attack
    - A bit slower than other magics since leaping into the air takes time
    - Not very compatible with Shea's other magic since she can't sing while yelling out this magics spell names
    - Can hurt oneself if the dragoon does not land properly

    Abilities:

    Sky Child:

    Nemesis of Flight:

    Spells:

    Spells:

    Signature Spell Name: Airborne Light
    Rank: C (Rankes up to S)
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 1
    Type: Offensive/Light
    Description: The dragoon leaps high into the air and thrusts their spear, filled with a holy light, downwards toward their target, before dropping to strike their enemy dealing 50% more damage on dark/shadow element based enemies.

    Strengths:
    -A good offensive attack
    -Does extra damage to dark/shadow element based enemies

    Weaknesses:
    -Gives off a light when attacking, so hard to hide
    -May unintentionally harm dark/shadow allies
    -May blind allies with its light


    Last edited by Shea Duskhelm on 20th August 2017, 6:39 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Aura
    Aura

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    Post by Aura 20th August 2017, 1:46 pm

    Hey Shea, I'm Aura and I'll be your grading moderator for today. Any changes or notes will be in this sizzling color. If there are any questions regarding your magic or my grading, do feel free to PM me and i'll get back to you as soon as I can. ^-^


    So without further ado, let the grading commence!


    Shea Duskhelm wrote:Username: Shea Duskhelm
    Secondary Magic Name: Advent of the Dragoon
    Evidence of Accomplishment: Bought by my alt Grema Fen here, post 475
    Description: The art of dragooning is an ancient one, born of great need. There was once a lonely mountainous country whose ruler castle sat near the top of one. The mountains guarded the country against other human invaders. But not from what the locals called dragons, which were really wyverns, for this area was filled with them. The so called dragon bombarded the people, stole their food, and overall terrorized them. It was when a village was burned to the ground leaving only one girl as a survivor that things began to change. Spurred by vengeance against the beasts the girl spent years mastering a fighting style that could defeat the dragons. She figured out a lance or spear is very effective against flying creatures and trained in their use excessively. But the only problem was that it was very hard for her to reach the flying monsters, even with a long weapon, and it was proven too dangerous to attack them on the ground. So the girl decided that like her enemies, she must fly. The next great battle against the dragons was won, all thanks to the girl who could leap high into the air and use the momentum to down flying enemies. She was greatly rewarded and loved by the kingdom and quickly taught others her new battle style, giving it and the ones who use it the name Dragoon.

    Shea uses this battle style the same way the girl of legend did, often adding mystical magic to it while she leaps into the air to tear her enemies down.

    Strengths:
    - Extra damage against flying enemies
    - A good attack based magic
    - Gives the user the ability to jump high and land without being harmed
    - Makes the user faster while in the air

    Weaknesses:
    - Must be wielding a spear or lance (or overall long and  narrow weapon) for this magic to work
    - Very hard to hide or be subtle about jumping into the air to attack
    - A bit slower than other magics since leaping into the air takes time
    - Not very compatible with Shea's other magic since she can't sing while yelling out this magics spell names
    - Can hurt oneself if the dragoon does not land properly

    Abilities:

    Sky Child:
    I'm afraid I'm gonna have to throw the hatchet into this one. 300 meters to begin with is already incredibly high, leave along making that more than half a kilometer at S-rank. Secondly this UA would fall under the "instant" category, which would drastically backfire on you, as those have the smallest range you can use. I however would suggest making it 50 meters per rank, capping at 250 meters at S-rank. It's still a decent jump for a dragoon, and way more than an instant spell would allow you to go.

    Nemesis of Flight:

    Spells:

    Spells:

    Signature Spell Name: Airborne Light
    Rank: C (Rankeds up to S)
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 1
    Type: Offensive/Light
    Description: The dragoon leaps high into the air and thrusts their spear, filled with a holy light, downwards toward their target, before dropping to strike their enemy dealing 50% more damage on evil enemies.

    Strengths:
    -A good offensive attack
    -Does extra damage to evil enemies

    Weaknesses:
    -Gives off a light when attacking, so hard to hide
    -May unintentionally harm dark allies
    -May blind allies with its light
    Since "evil enemies" is rather vague and dependent on the user's views, I would suggest changing it to "dark enemies" or even mages that wield a darkness/shadow element.



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    And be she but Small,
    she is Fierce


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    Shea Duskhelm
    Shea Duskhelm

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 126
    Guild : Black Sails
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Grand Aria
    Second Skill: Advent of the Dragoon
    Third Skill:

    Advent of the Dragoon Empty Re: Advent of the Dragoon

    Post by Shea Duskhelm 20th August 2017, 6:39 pm

    Bump~


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    Aura
    Aura

    Moderator- Mythical VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Dragon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Haiku Contest Participant- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Rich- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Player 
    Lineage : Gingerbread Man
    Position : None
    Posts : 1345
    Guild : Sabertooth 《Guildmaster》
    Cosmic Coins : 400
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 29
    Experience : 60,342

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Fires of Creation
    Second Skill: The Riyenas
    Third Skill:

    Advent of the Dragoon Empty Re: Advent of the Dragoon

    Post by Aura 25th August 2017, 2:41 am

    Hi-ho Dragoon!:

    Advent of the Dragoon NUWp39U


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    And be she but Small,
    she is Fierce


    Advent of the Dragoon GWsGXSQ

    .:} The Road of Desire |Fire Dragon Slayer | Kenna Terrynhain {:.
    .:} The Nightmare in Your Head | Avide - Combat Pet {:.


    D~4 ||C~4 ||B~2 ||A~ ||S~

    Slots: 4/6




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