Advent of the Dragoon

Sky Child:

Nemesis of Flight:

Spells:

Shea Duskhelm wrote:Username: Shea Duskhelm
Secondary Magic Name: Advent of the Dragoon
Evidence of Accomplishment: Bought by my alt Grema Fen here, post 475
Description: The art of dragooning is an ancient one, born of great need. There was once a lonely mountainous country whose ruler castle sat near the top of one. The mountains guarded the country against other human invaders. But not from what the locals called dragons, which were really wyverns, for this area was filled with them. The so called dragon bombarded the people, stole their food, and overall terrorized them. It was when a village was burned to the ground leaving only one girl as a survivor that things began to change. Spurred by vengeance against the beasts the girl spent years mastering a fighting style that could defeat the dragons. She figured out a lance or spear is very effective against flying creatures and trained in their use excessively. But the only problem was that it was very hard for her to reach the flying monsters, even with a long weapon, and it was proven too dangerous to attack them on the ground. So the girl decided that like her enemies, she must fly. The next great battle against the dragons was won, all thanks to the girl who could leap high into the air and use the momentum to down flying enemies. She was greatly rewarded and loved by the kingdom and quickly taught others her new battle style, giving it and the ones who use it the name Dragoon.

Shea uses this battle style the same way the girl of legend did, often adding mystical magic to it while she leaps into the air to tear her enemies down.

Strengths:
- Extra damage against flying enemies
- A good attack based magic
- Gives the user the ability to jump high and land without being harmed
- Makes the user faster while in the air

Weaknesses:
- Must be wielding a spear or lance (or overall long and  narrow weapon) for this magic to work
- Very hard to hide or be subtle about jumping into the air to attack
- A bit slower than other magics since leaping into the air takes time
- Not very compatible with Shea's other magic since she can't sing while yelling out this magics spell names
- Can hurt oneself if the dragoon does not land properly

Abilities:

Sky Child:

I'm afraid I'm gonna have to throw the hatchet into this one. 300 meters to begin with is already incredibly high, leave along making that more than half a kilometer at S-rank. Secondly this UA would fall under the "instant" category, which would drastically backfire on you, as those have the smallest range you can use. I however would suggest making it 50 meters per rank, capping at 250 meters at S-rank. It's still a decent jump for a dragoon, and way more than an instant spell would allow you to go.

Nemesis of Flight:

Spells:

Spells:

Signature Spell Name: Airborne Light
Rank: C (Rankeds up to S)
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 1
Type: Offensive/Light
Description: The dragoon leaps high into the air and thrusts their spear, filled with a holy light, downwards toward their target, before dropping to strike their enemy dealing 50% more damage on evil enemies.

Strengths:
-A good offensive attack
-Does extra damage to evil enemies

Weaknesses:
-Gives off a light when attacking, so hard to hide
-May unintentionally harm dark allies
-May blind allies with its light
Since "evil enemies" is rather vague and dependent on the user's views, I would suggest changing it to "dark enemies" or even mages that wield a darkness/shadow element.

Hi-ho Dragoon!: