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    Lightning Dragon Slayer

    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1143
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Ice
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 19th April 2017, 8:25 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Lightning Dragon Slayer[1st Gen]
    Secondary Magic: Vessel of the Gods(WIP)
    Caster or Holder: Caster, Lost
    Description: Dragon Slayer Magic was a magic specifically made to kill dragons. This is a rare magic, one that few people have. Takumi is the the Lightning Dragon Slayer. He has learnt most of what he knows on his own, though the dragon gave him this magic in the form of a lightning bolt, which struck Takumi, filling him with the powers of the lightning dragon himself.

    Takumi uses this magic, along with his necromancy lineage, to overwhelm an opponent with strength and speed generated by the lightning. This magic is powerful, but not very subtle, so Takumi prefers to use it for head-on combat. In a contest of strength this magic would more like than not win. Takumi's Lightning DS magic is different from most, because his lightning is blue rather than the typical gold.
    Strengths:
    -Multiple targeting(dealng damage to multiple enemies at once.
    -+25% damage against water magic, as water is a great conductor of electricity (impure water is anyhow. If it's distilled there is no extra damage done)

    Weaknesses:
    -can be neutralized by any electrical charge of greater power(so any lightning magic of a higher rank)
    -subtlety. this is a very loud and bright magic, so it is only really effective in direct confrontation, it is completely useless at stealth for the most part.
    -defense. most spells of this magic are useless at defending.
    Lineage: Necromancer's Passion, located in The Fallen
    Unique Abilities:
    Lightning Storm
    Lightning Storm creates a temporary lightning storm. This storm lasts for 2 posts. The storm created will have lightning coming down from the clouds, within a range of 15 meters, a couple seconds apart each and at least 2 meters away from each other. The storm does damage, any lightning bolt that hits an enemy does about 50% rank damage.

    Electrical current
    This ua allows Takumi to radiate an electrical current across his body, causing 50% rank damage to anyone who touches him while in this state over two posts. The eletrical current is one of this magic's few forms of defense. This ability can be used as many times per thread as the users desires, though it lasts for 2 posts and has a 4 post cooldown.

    Bioelectric Manipulation
    This ua allows Takumi to manipulate the bioelectrical signals in a person's body and absorb that energy, or to cut it off completely. This ability does have a weakness though: the user's own energy could potentially be absorbed instead and cause paralysis or even death. With Bioelectric Manipulation a user can essentially control the movements of another, and sense their presence by their Bioelectricity. When Takumi absorbs a person's bioelectricity, it gives him an additional boost of about 10% to both speed and power.

    Flash Step
    This ua gives Takumi a passive speed bonus of 20%, though he shoots off sparks of blue lightning while using this ability. It is the telltale way to see he's using this ability.

    Tech Control
    This Ua gives Takumi the ability to control technology, essentially anything that runs on electricity. This cannot be used offensively, but it can be used to open locks guarded by a password, or short circuit a lighting system, etc.

    Spells:

    D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

    Base D rank spells:


    C rank Spells:

    C rank, special:


    Last edited by Takumi Yoshino on 19th April 2017, 9:35 am; edited 3 times in total


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    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1143
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Ice
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 19th April 2017, 8:26 am

    B Rank Spells


    Base B rank spells:

    Lineage and purchased spells:


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    Post by Guest 20th April 2017, 10:55 am

    Please, tell me what you changed and added before I begin, otherwise I will be regrading everything from scratch x)
    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1143
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Ice
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 21st April 2017, 7:47 am

    all D rank spells as well as signatures and c rank lineage spells were untouched, as were all ua's besides the last one.


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    Post by Guest 22nd April 2017, 12:17 pm

    Since I remembered about a rule, I will be regrading all of your magic, I forgot that I can pull/regrade magic when bragging is involved, which can make me pull out the nerf guns.

    Anything in this colour will need to be looked at from you, the user x)

    Let's get started!~

    Takumi Yoshino wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Lightning Dragon Slayer[1st Gen]
    Secondary Magic: Vessel of the Gods(WIP)
    Caster or Holder: Caster, Lost
    Description: Dragon Slayer Magic was a magic specifically made to kill dragons. This is a rare magic, one that few people have. Takumi is the the Lightning Dragon Slayer. He has learnt most of what he knows on his own, though the dragon gave him this magic in the form of a lightning bolt, which struck Takumi, filling him with the powers of the lightning dragon himself.

    Takumi uses this magic, along with his necromancy lineage, to overwhelm an opponent with strength and speed generated by the lightning. This magic is powerful, but not very subtle, so Takumi prefers to use it for head-on combat. In a contest of strength this magic would more like than not win. Takumi's Lightning DS magic is different from most, because his lightning is blue rather than the typical gold.
    Strengths:
    -Multiple targeting(dealng damage to multiple enemies at once.
    -+25% damage against water magic, as water is a great conductor of electricity (impure water is anyhow. If it's distilled there is no extra damage done)

    Weaknesses:
    -can be neutralized by any electrical charge of greater power(so any lightning magic of a higher rank)
    -subtlety. this is a very loud and bright magic, so it is only really effective in direct confrontation, it is completely useless at stealth for the most part.
    -defense. most spells of this magic are useless at defending.
    Lineage: Necromancer's Passion, located in The Fallen
    Unique Abilities:
    Lightning Storm
    Lightning Storm creates a temporary lightning storm. This storm lasts for 2 posts. The storm created will have lightning coming down from the clouds, within a range of 15 meters, a couple seconds apart each and at least 2 meters away from each other. The storm does damage, any lightning bolt that hits an enemy does about 50% rank damage.

    Sorry but, we don't even use seconds here. We will also need a specific number of lightning bolts that come out of this storm, I suggest 1 lightning bolt each post until the storm stops, I would also like a 'solid' %, not 'about'.

    I also say this sounds more like a spell than anything, So I would like this to be moved into a spell slot and this UA changed into something else.


    Electrical current
    This ua allows Takumi to radiate an electrical current across his body, causing 50% rank damage to anyone who touches him while in this state over two posts. The eletrical current is one of this magic's few forms of defense. This ability can be used as many times per thread as the users desires, though it lasts for 2 posts and has a 4 post cooldown.

    AS MANY TIMES?! DUDE! NO! 3 times >:T not as many as you want >:T and not 'over 2 posts' just '2 posts'

    Bioelectric Manipulation
    This ua allows Takumi to manipulate the bioelectrical signals in a person's body and absorb that energy, or to cut it off completely. This ability does have a weakness though: the user's own energy could potentially be absorbed instead and cause paralysis or even death. With Bioelectric Manipulation a user can essentially control the movements of another, and sense their presence by their Bioelectricity. When Takumi absorbs a person's bioelectricity, it gives him an additional boost of about 10% to both speed and power.

    For 2 posts, cd 4 posts

    Flash Step
    This ua gives Takumi a passive speed bonus of 20%, though he shoots off sparks of blue lightning while using this ability. It is the telltale way to see he's using this ability.

    You already get a buff to speed and power from being a DS and from your UA up above, so I want this changed

    Tech Control
    This Ua gives Takumi the ability to control technology, essentially anything that runs on electricity. This cannot be used offensively, but it can be used to open locks guarded by a password, or short circuit a lighting system, etc.

    Spells:

    D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

    Base D rank spells:


    C rank Spells:

    C rank, special:

    Takumi Yoshino wrote:
    B Rank Spells


    Base B rank spells:

    Lineage and purchased spells:

    All done!!! :) If you have any questions, leme know through this thread OOOOR by PM :) thanks!
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    Faction : The Luminous Covenant
    Posts : 1555
    Guild : ☽ luminous rose guild mistress ☾
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 336
    Mentor : ☽ diamandis stellavera ☾
    Experience : 915,017

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ☽ blooms of chrysalis: crystal rose demon slayer ☾
    Second Skill: ☽ pink dominion ☾
    Third Skill: ☽ gemstone serpentine ☾

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    Post by desirée 16th December 2017, 6:25 pm

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    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1143
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Ice
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lightning Dragon Slayer Empty Re: Lightning Dragon Slayer

    Post by Takumi Yoshino 17th December 2017, 12:19 am

    Can be archived.


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