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    Sweet the Demon

    Spicywolf
    Spicywolf

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 2
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shapeshift(only female)
    Second Skill: Dark Magic
    Third Skill:

    Completed Sweet the Demon

    Post by Spicywolf 12th April 2017, 6:51 pm

    Name: Sweet
    Gender: (Female)
    Age: 20( Demon years 2000)
    Birthday: April 20,?
    Sexuality: (straight)

    Special Characteristics: Sweet has a scar going slightly across her back. She always changes her body features but usually has wolf ears, and tail.During missions her demon horns, tail, and wings come out.

    Personality:
    Sweet's personality varies on the person she meets. Her attitude changes depending on how that person acts around or towards her. The reason for this is because before she was demon she was born as a normal human being. Someone who lived an ordinary life and wanted nothing more was to have someone love her. She found someone who she believed loved her to cherish her always. But that wasn't the case as her boyfriend/lover lied to her and ran off with another girl saying how she was too simple and boring. Being left heartbroken Sweet carried on and soon she found another guy she fell in love with, but just like the last one he wasn't committed into the relationship and just up and left her by herself with debt and bills to pay. Being heartbroken a second time Sweet tried to lock her emotions and feelings away so she wouldn't be hurt anymore. But that didn't last long as one more guy eased her from out of her shell and made her believe that she was loving and caring and that she could get anyone she wanted.. Well she thought he was the one for her, someone she knew wouldn't ditch her. Her third lover after many months began to become abusive and hostile, forcing her to do things she did not want to, he would slap, kick, and slam her against the wall and into furniture and she would take it. Believing that he was just stressed out from work and bills. She finally thought her staying by his side paid off when he invited her to a loving picnic on a cliff near the ocean. Getting dressed up in a light blue sundress and ankle wedges, Sweet venture out to the cliff and waited for him. Hours passed from noon to sunset, she continued to wait until it turned dark. Feeling like he wasn't coming Sweet decided to try and head home with disappointment in her eyes. But before she could venture down the cliff she saw lights coming from a vehicle. She looked closely and saw it was her lover. She smiled as he had finally came but her smile soon turn a frightful one when he tried to run her over. Having dodge it and run back up the cliff with him coming close. She stopped at the edge of the cliff having nowhere to go. Turning to try and head back she was met with the vehicle that pushed her over the cliff, it slowly following after her. Her body had fallen into the cold water below. It fell deeper and deeper into the water with the car still above her body. She tried to escape but she couldn't. Soon her body hit the ocean floor and the car front landed on top of her. She felt pain on her back as it seemed like her back scraped a rock. She was losing air fast but she was trapped..
    As she was slowly losing consciousness she couldn't help but look up from the water's depths at the moon that shone above her. Her body becoming cold quickly as her life was coming to an end..Several times she was hurt by men who lied, cheated, and abused her for no reason..They took her kindness for granted and use it against her.. Her life was entirely worthless even as she slipped away so many emotions running through her. Negative emotions.. Emotions that wanted revenge... Her soul becoming tainted and was sent to hell where the devil himself saw she was useful to bring destruction.. He transformed her soul into the now demoness. One that was a seducer, trickster and heartbreaker.. She goes around many cities, villages, and towns seeking out any sinning men that she thinks that needs to be 'targeted'. She catches their interests, lures them into her lair, and then finish them off, before going on with her life. Occasionally, she disguises herself as a girl who is mainly sassy, is in control, and does not like to deal with men. But she gets along with mostly anyone due to her human life, but she never lets them get to close to her, once she thinks they are she leaves the area and tries not to return for sometime. She hates to hear lies come from people as it reminds her of her past so she tries to force her 'companions' to tell her the truth. Her trusting issues are extremely high when it comes to adults, but children are a different story. children are more likely for her to trust as they are innocent and she can always tell when their lying(they're terrible liars). But a part of her wants to find a place where she won't have to always live that life. A small fragment of hope is there waiting for the 'right' person to change her completely.


    Likes:
    1)Sweets and spicy food (of course)
    2) To play pranks or jokes on people. Being considered an age gap from child to adult she likes to express that she can be young.
    3) Sing and dance when no one is looking. She is someone who enjoys to be by herself in order to entertain herself or keep calm, so singing or dancing makes this happen.

    Dislikes:
    1) She doesn't like fish as it tastes weird to her.
    2) She dislikes being called 'sweetheart' or 'sweetie', because its cheesy and not very flattering to here other people call her that.
    3) She hates being lied to as through her past life, so many people that she trusted, broke her and now she has a hard time believing into people.

    Motivations:
    1) She's motivated to help her friends out, despite having trust issues she feels that its the least she could do and its in her kind nature to help.
    2) She's motivated to continue to live a more happy life  where she is as she thinks she deserves happiness.
    3) She's motivated, (not consciously) to find someone who would accept her fully and love her.

    Fears:
    1) Her first fear is being near or in a large body of water for a long period of time. She was once human in her previous life and her life ended by drowning. So that fear is now haunting her
    2) Another fear she has is not being accepted by people.. As some people will not like a demon, an evil being would join something 'good' like a guild.
    3) Fear of always being alone. A demon where she comes from as they all work, live, and do everything by themselves, even in death no one comes to see them farewell. She does not want to be forgotten when she dies.

    General Appearance


    Height: 5'6
    Weight: 124lbs
    Hair: Hair color varies on what she likes to have. But mainly she has red hair or pitch black hair.. The style of her hair is a slight curl to the edges. She has and edge bangs that will cover one side of her eyes to make her look seductive. Her hair length reaches to hanging over her butt.
    Eyes: Amber color eyes(occasionally glow)
    Skin Tone: Slightly tan color
    Appearance: Her main image is that she wears very revealing clothing to catch attention. She switches from a tight black dress that reaches to her mid legs, black leather boots, and a small silver crown that sits on top of her head. Her battle outfit is also revealing as she wears a dark purple tank top that shows off her flat stomach, a leather jacket that has wolf fangs on the back of it, a skort that has torn holes in the skirt part, she wears knee high boots.

    Guild/Council

    Guild: Guildless
    Tattoo: N/a
    Rank: Rank D


    Last edited by Spicywolf on 13th April 2017, 4:48 pm; edited 2 times in total
    Godlike Frederik
    Godlike Frederik
    The Forsaken

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 11 Sinner- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Apex of Darkness
    Position : None
    Posts : 2972
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 258,417

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Plague Craft
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Sweet the Demon

    Post by Godlike Frederik 13th April 2017, 1:00 pm

    (Please resize you avatar, right now it is to big. For roleplaying that can an issue as it can collide with your own text. Which makes it hard for others to read)

    Name: Sweet
    Gender: (Female)
    Age: 20( Demon years 2000)
    Birthday: April 20,?
    Sexuality: (straight)

    Special Characteristics: Sweet has a scar going slightly across her back. She always changes her body features but usually has wolf ears, and tail.During missions her demon horns, tail, and wings come out.

    Personality:
    Sweet's character is one that can get along with anyone. She is mainly sassy attitude with guys and tries to sound like she's in control. But she only puts up that as a front as she hasn't really a good 'term' with dealing with guys. And sometimes since she is a sexual being she teases or tempts others to touch or 'play' with her. In battle she usually tries to lock up her emotions so the enemy can't use it against her. She always use herself as a shield or a decoy so her fellow teammates can escape or come up with a plan.

    Allright for starters, your description is way to short right now. Around here we maintain at least 500 words for your character description. I know it sometimes can be hard to write so many right away. But you mostly get there when you expand on what you already have. Like you wrote: 'Sweet's character is one that can get along with anyone' Try to explain why she can get along with anyone. Like is it because of a her happy attitude? Is she just raised that way? Or has something happened in her past to be like this? Same goes for the dealing with guys thing, why is it that she isn't that good in dealing with guys. If you write it like that, you'll probably get to the 500.

    Likes:
    1)Sweets and spicy food (of course)
    2) To play pranks or jokes on people. Being considered an age gap from child to adult she likes to express that she can be young.
    3) Sing and dance when no one is looking. She is someone who enjoys to be by herself in order to entertain herself or keep calm, so singing or dancing makes this happen.

    Dislikes:
    1) She doesn't like fish as it tastes weird to her.
    2) She dislikes being called 'sweetheart' or 'sweetie', because its cheesy and not very flattering to here other people call her that.
    3) She hates being lied to as through her past life, so many people that she trusted, broke her and now she has a hard time believing into people. (Like this, use this in your description as well)

    Motivations:
    1) She's motivated to help her friends out, despite having trust issues she feels that its the least she could do and its in her kind nature to help.
    2) She's motivated to continue to live a more happy life  where she is as she thinks she deserves happiness.
    3) She's motivated, (not consciously) to find someone who would accept her fully and love her.

    Fears:
    1) Her first fear is being near or in a large body of water for a long period of time. She was once human in her previous life and her life ended by drowning. So that fear is now haunting her
    2) Another fear she has is not being accepted by people.. As some people will not like a demon, an evil being would join something 'good' like a guild.
    3) Fear of always being alone. A demon where she comes from as they all work, live, and do everything by themselves, even in death no one comes to see them farewell. She does not want to be forgotten when she dies.

    General Appearance


    Height: 5'6
    Weight: 124lbs
    Hair: Hair color varies on what she likes to have. But mainly she has red hair or pitch black hair.. The style of her hair is a slight curl to the edges. She has and edge bangs that will cover one side of her eyes to make her look seductive. Her hair length reaches to hanging over her butt.
    Eyes: Amber color eyes(occasionally glow)
    Skin Tone: Slightly tan color
    Appearance: Her main image is that she wears very revealing clothing to catch attention. She switches from a tight black dress that reaches to her mid legs, black leather boots, and a small silver crown that sits on top of her head. Her battle outfit is also revealing as she wears a dark purple tank top that shows off her flat stomach, a leather jacket that has wolf fangs on the back of it, a skort that has torn holes in the skirt part, she wears knee high boots.

    Guild/Council

    Guild: Guildless
    Tattoo: N/a
    Rank: Rank D

    (overall your application looks good. With the only real issue is that your description is to short. Try to incorporate other things you have in your app. Like you say she's a demon tell more about that. Or go more in-depth about her previous life and her fear large water bodies.)


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    Spicywolf
    Spicywolf

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 2
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shapeshift(only female)
    Second Skill: Dark Magic
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Sweet the Demon

    Post by Spicywolf 13th April 2017, 1:53 pm

    Godlike Frederik wrote:(Please resize you avatar, right now it is to big. For roleplaying that can an issue as it can collide with your own text. Which makes it hard for others to read)

    Name: Sweet
    Gender: (Female)
    Age: 20( Demon years 2000)
    Birthday: April 20,?
    Sexuality: (straight)

    Special Characteristics: Sweet has a scar going slightly across her back. She always changes her body features but usually has wolf ears, and tail.During missions her demon horns, tail, and wings come out.

    Personality:
    Sweet's character is one that can get along with anyone. She is mainly sassy attitude with guys and tries to sound like she's in control. But she only puts up that as a front as she hasn't really a good 'term' with dealing with guys. And sometimes since she is a sexual being she teases or tempts others to touch or 'play' with her. In battle she usually tries to lock up her emotions so the enemy can't use it against her. She always use herself as a shield or a decoy so her fellow teammates can escape or come up with a plan.

    Allright for starters, your description is way to short right now. Around here we maintain at least 500 words for your character description. I know it sometimes can be hard to write so many right away. But you mostly get there when you expand on what you already have. Like you wrote: 'Sweet's character is one that can get along with anyone' Try to explain why she can get along with anyone. Like is it because of a her happy attitude? Is she just raised that way? Or has something happened in her past to be like this? Same goes for the dealing with guys thing, why is it that she isn't that good in dealing with guys. If you write it like that, you'll probably get to the 500.

    Likes:
    1)Sweets and spicy food (of course)
    2) To play pranks or jokes on people. Being considered an age gap from child to adult she likes to express that she can be young.
    3) Sing and dance when no one is looking. She is someone who enjoys to be by herself in order to entertain herself or keep calm, so singing or dancing makes this happen.

    Dislikes:
    1) She doesn't like fish as it tastes weird to her.
    2) She dislikes being called 'sweetheart' or 'sweetie', because its cheesy and not very flattering to here other people call her that.
    3) She hates being lied to as through her past life, so many people that she trusted, broke her and now she has a hard time believing into people. (Like this, use this in your description as well)

    Motivations:
    1) She's motivated to help her friends out, despite having trust issues she feels that its the least she could do and its in her kind nature to help.
    2) She's motivated to continue to live a more happy life  where she is as she thinks she deserves happiness.
    3) She's motivated, (not consciously) to find someone who would accept her fully and love her.

    Fears:
    1) Her first fear is being near or in a large body of water for a long period of time. She was once human in her previous life and her life ended by drowning. So that fear is now haunting her
    2) Another fear she has is not being accepted by people.. As some people will not like a demon, an evil being would join something 'good' like a guild.
    3) Fear of always being alone. A demon where she comes from as they all work, live, and do everything by themselves, even in death no one comes to see them farewell. She does not want to be forgotten when she dies.

    General Appearance


    Height: 5'6
    Weight: 124lbs
    Hair: Hair color varies on what she likes to have. But mainly she has red hair or pitch black hair.. The style of her hair is a slight curl to the edges. She has and edge bangs that will cover one side of her eyes to make her look seductive. Her hair length reaches to hanging over her butt.
    Eyes: Amber color eyes(occasionally glow)
    Skin Tone: Slightly tan color
    Appearance: Her main image is that she wears very revealing clothing to catch attention. She switches from a tight black dress that reaches to her mid legs, black leather boots, and a small silver crown that sits on top of her head. Her battle outfit is also revealing as she wears a dark purple tank top that shows off her flat stomach, a leather jacket that has wolf fangs on the back of it, a skort that has torn holes in the skirt part, she wears knee high boots.

    Guild/Council

    Guild: Guildless
    Tattoo: N/a
    Rank: Rank D

    (overall your application looks good. With the only real issue is that your description is to short. Try to incorporate other things you have in your app. Like you say she's a demon tell more about that. Or go more in-depth about her previous life and her fear large water bodies.)




    (okay I gave the background of how she came to be.i hope this helps. if I'm missing anything let me know)
    Godlike Frederik
    Godlike Frederik
    The Forsaken

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 11 Sinner- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Apex of Darkness
    Position : None
    Posts : 2972
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 258,417

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Plague Craft
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Sweet the Demon

    Post by Godlike Frederik 14th April 2017, 12:09 am

    approved


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