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    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa)

    Ejji
    Ejji

    Player 
    Lineage : Spirit Link
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shadow Manipulation
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ejji 24th February 2017, 4:43 am

    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa)

    Primary Magic

    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa)



    Secondary Magic

    None


    Caster Or Holder

    Caster

    Description

    Shadow Manipulation is a magic that uses the element of darkness/shadows. The user has control over shadows and has the ability to manipulate it, the user can use their shadows to their advantage and can bend and shape their own shadows and the shadows surrounding the user. This magic is very powerful, though it has a weakness that the user won't be as efficient if they aren't in a environment that has accessible shadows.

    Strengths

    - Strong against Plant Magic

    - More efficient if there are more shadows

    - Is a really flexible magic and can be used for various purposes.

    Weaknesses

    - Not as efficient if there isn't any shadows around.

    - Weak to Light magic.

    - Weak to Fire magic.

    Lineage:

    Unique Abilities

    Shadow Transportation - The user is able to vanish into a shadow casted by a object or person if his magic is over 50%, he can only vanish into shadow 5 times per thread.

    Night Vision - He can see clearly at night with ease, meaning in the dark, he would have a great advantage in battle.

    Shadow Power - When he gets extremely angry, shadows suddenly attach to him, giving him a 50% damage boost to all spells. This happens because his anger draws in the shadows, allowing him to become much powerful, the downside is that he can only use this when extremely furious, which rarely happens to him. It lasts for 7 posts though after using, the user has a 10% speed decrease. It has an 8 post cooldown.

    D-Rank Spells:


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    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa) U1Go3jy
                                                                              "The brightest flame makes the darkest shadow" - Ejji




                                                      
    Julius Seas
    Julius Seas

    Moderator- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 1623
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 1,855

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Water
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Julius Seas 24th February 2017, 3:30 pm

    Hi Ejji it's me Julius again^^

    This time I will grade your magic! A thing I'd like to request of the best is, if yo could change the color of some of the text since it blends in to much with the black background ^^;

    With that said! Requests will be in this color!

    Now let's get started shall we!?




    Strengths/weaknesses

    - Can vanish into shadows, if his magic power isn't too drained, can vanish into shadows cast by objects or even people. Though this only lasts for one post, and the user has to ascend form a nearby shadow.

    Unique abilities aren't allowed to be listed as a strength please change that.

    - People tend to think the user is a dark mage when the user uses this magic, due to it being people's natural definition of a 'Dark Magic'

    This fits more in the description then in the weaknesses please change this.




    Unique abilities

    Shadow Transportation - The user is able to vanish into a shadow casted by a object or person if his magic is over 50%, he can only vanish for one post, he has to ascend out of a nearby shadow after one post.

    Considering the fact on how many times this can be sed to dodge atatcks, I'd suggest you change it to 75% or make it only 5 times usable in a thread.


    Shadow Power - If Ejji absorbs enough shadows with his Shadow Absorb Spell, he gets a 50% damage and speed buff.

    This is more the strength of a spell then an UA, please change this into an actual UA.




    Spells

    Name : Shadow Body
    Rank : D
    Type : Shadow/Offensive/Defensive

    Description : Ejji is granted the ability to be brought down to the surface and transforms his body into that of a shadow, granting them the ability to move around surfaces all around him. Ejji can transition in and out of this form as they please. Great spell to set up great offensive attacks, or can be used to avoid a powerful attack. It is great as it is very slippery in most circumstances.

    Strengths :

    - Attacks Deal +1 D Rank Damage in this form.

    I can't allow to make this spell allow to ad full D-rank damage, I can allow half D-rank damage

    - Makes Ejji untouchable and cannot be affected by physical damage or weapons.

    - Can move across surfaces freely.

    Weaknesses :

    - Short Duration

    - Can be hit by spells in the form.

    - Light spells will do 25% more damage.

    - Long Cooldown

    Duration : 2 posts

    Cooldown : 4 posts


    Name : Shadow Pierce
    Rank : D
    Type : Offensive

    Description : Ejji holds his palm open in front of him, as six shadows on the ground turn into spikes, they suddenly appear out of the surface and simultaneously attack the target, each spike dealing half of D-Rank Damage.

    Considering the fact the amount of damage this spell can end to do, I have to request you lower the amount of spikes to 3. This spell also needs an range, the maximum range of a d-rank spell is 15 meters.

    Strengths :

    - Hard to dodge

    Weaknesses :

    - Long Cooldown

    - Can be stopped by a C-Rank Barrier and a really strong D-Rank Barrier.

    Duration : Instant

    Cooldown : 3 posts

    Name : Shadow Absorb
    Rank : D
    Type : Buff/Shadow

    Description : A black magic circle appears in front of Ejji, absorbing shadows surrounding him, which would activate his UA, Shadow Power, He get's a 50% damage and speed buff because of the shadows he absorbed.

    You can't have both stats being increased, it's either attack or speed. The only way you can gain both if you lower another stat by 50% for example defense.

    Strengths :

    - Allows him to get great buffs.

    Weaknesses :

    - Takes a full post without attacking to absorb the shadows.

    - Leaves him vulnerable to attacks.

    Duration : 1 post (1 post to absorb the shadows, without attacking.)

    All buffs require an duration.

    Cooldown : Can only be used once per thread.

    This spell needs an coodlown.


    Name : Shadow Void
    Rank : D
    Type : Offensive/Defensive/Shadow

    Description : Ejji can walk into any shadow in a area where a shadow is and can exit out of another. He does not have to move his whole body through the shadows, he can put a single arm through a shadow and his arm could come out of another or even his opponents shadow to unexpectedly attack or trip them.

    Strengths :

    - Quick way to confuse an opponent

    - Can pass items through shadows including other people

    - Very convenient in and outside of battle

    Weaknesses :

    - Can only emerge from shadow in range (25m)

    The maximum range of an D-rank spell is 15 meters.

    - If a part of their body, or their whole body is in a shadow, they cannot use a spell from within the shadow.

    - Vulnerable after coming out of shadow if his strategy is recognized.

    - Can still be hurt by others if a part of his body is showing out of the shadow, though if he is fully vanished in the shadow he cannot be hurt.




    That was all ^^

    If you have any questions regarding my requested changes, feel free to PM me ^^

    When you're done with the changes please bump this thread.

    Happy roleplaying!



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    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa) X9tEBuc
    Ejji
    Ejji

    Player 
    Lineage : Spirit Link
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shadow Manipulation
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ejji 24th February 2017, 5:45 pm

    Bumparooni!


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    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa) U1Go3jy
                                                                              "The brightest flame makes the darkest shadow" - Ejji




                                                      
    Julius Seas
    Julius Seas

    Moderator- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 1623
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 1,855

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Water
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Julius Seas 25th February 2017, 2:50 pm

    Unique abilities

    Shadow Power - When he gets extremely angry, shadows suddenly attach to him, giving him a 50% damage boost to all spells. This happens because his anger draws in the shadows, allowing him to become much powerful, the downside is that he can only use this when extremely furious, which rarely happens to him.

    Since this is a buff I request you add an duration and a cooldown.


    Spells

    Name : Shadow Absorb
    Rank : D
    Type : Buff/Shadow Healing isn't a buff, please change this into 'healing'

    Description : A black magic circle appears in front of Ejji, absorbing shadows surrounding him, allowing him to replenish 20% of his health.

    Strengths :

    - Allows him to get great buffs.

    Since this spell is now an healing spell you'd have to change this strength into something else.

    Weaknesses :

    - Takes a full post without attacking to absorb the shadows.

    - Leaves him vulnerable to attacks.

    Duration : 1 post

    Cooldown : 6 posts


    Everything else seems fine to me ^^

    Just make these changes and you should be go to go!


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    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa) X9tEBuc
    Ejji
    Ejji

    Player 
    Lineage : Spirit Link
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Shadow Manipulation
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ejji 25th February 2017, 3:59 pm

    Bumparooni!


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    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa) U1Go3jy
                                                                              "The brightest flame makes the darkest shadow" - Ejji




                                                      
    Julius Seas
    Julius Seas

    Moderator- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 1623
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 1,855

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Water
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Julius Seas 25th February 2017, 4:09 pm

    Shadow Manipulation (陰影操作 In'ei sōsa) EDoA9eJ


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