Lightning Dragon Slayer

D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

Base D rank spells:

C rank Spells:

C rank, special:

Takumi Yoshino. wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Lightning Dragon Slayer[1st Gen]
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you trained for goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster, Lost
Description: Dragon Slayer Magic was a magic specifically made to kill dragons. This is a rare magic, one that few people have. Takumi is the the Lightning Dragon Slayer. He has learnt most of what he knows on his own, though the dragon gave him this magic in the form of a lightning bolt, which struck Takumi, filling him with the powers of the lightning dragon himself.

Takumi uses this magic, along with his necromancy lineage, to overwhelm an opponent with strength and speed generated by the lightning. This magic is powerful, but not very subtle, so Takumi prefers to use it for head-on combat. In a contest of strength this magic would more like than not win. Takumi's Lightning DS magic is different from most, because his lightning is blue rather than the typical gold.
Strengths:
-Multiple targeting What do you mean by multiple targeting? Isn't all magic, in a way, considered to be multiple targeting? I'd like a more in depth explanation of this strength or a new one entirely.
-+25% damage against water magic, as water is a great conductor of electricity (impure water is anyhow. If it's distilled there is no extra damage done)
-Has a lot of physical power behind it What exactly do you mean by "has a lot of physical power behind it?" Does this mean Takumi has to exert more of his strength to use the magic or that the magic has a natural boost of power? If it has a natural boost of power, I can't let this pass as it would be considered a UA buff in a sense.
Weaknesses:
-can be neutralized by any electrical charge of greater power(so any lightning magic of a higher rank)
-subtlety. this is a very loud and bright magic, so it is only really effective in direct confrontation, it is completely useless at stealth for the most part.
-defense. most spells of this magic are useless at defending.
You need one more weakness than strength. Right now, you have 3 strengths and 3 weaknesses, you should have 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses.
Lineage: Necromancer's Passion, located in The Fallen
Unique Abilities:
Lightning Storm
Lightning Storm creates a temporary lightning storm. This storm lasts for 1-2 posts I would like a set duration for this; 1-2 posts is not a set duration. I can allow a duration of up to 4 posts max, depending on the conditions(lasts longer if it is already cloudy, if the sky is otherwise clear it will last for a single post.) The storm created will have lightning coming down from the clouds, within a range of 15 meters, a couple seconds apart each and at least 2 meters away from each other. Can you please explain what exactly this UA does aside from creating a storm? Do the lightning bolts deal damage for the duration of the summon or not? Does it boost Takumi in some way? Etc.

Electrical current
This ua allows Takumi to radiate an electrical current across his body, causing 50% rank damage to anyone who touches him while in this state over two posts. The eletrical current is one of this magic's few forms of defense. This ability can be used as many times per thread as the users desires, though it lasts for 2 posts and has a 4 post cooldown.

Bioelectric Manipulation
This ua allows Takumi to manipulate the bioelectrical signals in a person's body and absorb that energy, or to cut it off completely. If the user is capable of absorbing the electrical currents in another's body, how exactly does the user benefit? Basically, what does this ability do to Takumi? Does it give him a boost? Does it return HP or MP? If so, how much? This ability does have a weakness though: the user's own energy could potentially be absorbed instead and cause paralysis or even death. With Bioelectric Manipulation a user can essentially control the movements of another, and sense their presence by their Bioelectricity.

Spells:

D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

Base D rank spells:

Takumi Yoshino. wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Lightning Dragon Slayer[1st Gen]
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you trained for goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster, Lost
Description: Dragon Slayer Magic was a magic specifically made to kill dragons. This is a rare magic, one that few people have. Takumi is the the Lightning Dragon Slayer. He has learnt most of what he knows on his own, though the dragon gave him this magic in the form of a lightning bolt, which struck Takumi, filling him with the powers of the lightning dragon himself.

Takumi uses this magic, along with his necromancy lineage, to overwhelm an opponent with strength and speed generated by the lightning. This magic is powerful, but not very subtle, so Takumi prefers to use it for head-on combat. In a contest of strength this magic would more like than not win. Takumi's Lightning DS magic is different from most, because his lightning is blue rather than the typical gold.
Strengths:
-Multiple targeting(dealng damage to multiple enemies at once.
-+25% damage against water magic, as water is a great conductor of electricity (impure water is anyhow. If it's distilled there is no extra damage done)

Weaknesses:
-can be neutralized by any electrical charge of greater power(so any lightning magic of a higher rank)
-subtlety. this is a very loud and bright magic, so it is only really effective in direct confrontation, it is completely useless at stealth for the most part.
-defense. most spells of this magic are useless at defending.
Lineage: Necromancer's Passion, located in The Fallen
Unique Abilities:
Lightning Storm
Lightning Storm creates a temporary lightning storm. This storm lasts for 2 posts. The storm created will have lightning coming down from the clouds, within a range of 15 meters, a couple seconds apart each and at least 2 meters away from each other. The storm does damage, any lightning bolt that hits an enemy does about 50% rank damage.

Electrical current
This ua allows Takumi to radiate an electrical current across his body, causing 50% rank damage to anyone who touches him while in this state over two posts. The eletrical current is one of this magic's few forms of defense. This ability can be used as many times per thread as the users desires, though it lasts for 2 posts and has a 4 post cooldown.

Bioelectric Manipulation
This ua allows Takumi to manipulate the bioelectrical signals in a person's body and absorb that energy, or to cut it off completely. This ability does have a weakness though: the user's own energy could potentially be absorbed instead and cause paralysis or even death. With Bioelectric Manipulation a user can essentially control the movements of another, and sense their presence by their Bioelectricity. When Takumi absorbs a person's bioelectricity, it gives him an additional boost of about 10% to both speed and power.

Spells:

D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

Base D rank spells:

Takumi Yoshino. wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Lightning Dragon Slayer[1st Gen]
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you trained for goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster, Lost
Description: Dragon Slayer Magic was a magic specifically made to kill dragons. This is a rare magic, one that few people have. Takumi is the the Lightning Dragon Slayer. He has learnt most of what he knows on his own, though the dragon gave him this magic in the form of a lightning bolt, which struck Takumi, filling him with the powers of the lightning dragon himself.

Takumi uses this magic, along with his necromancy lineage, to overwhelm an opponent with strength and speed generated by the lightning. This magic is powerful, but not very subtle, so Takumi prefers to use it for head-on combat. In a contest of strength this magic would more like than not win. Takumi's Lightning DS magic is different from most, because his lightning is blue rather than the typical gold.
Strengths:
-Multiple targeting(dealng damage to multiple enemies at once.
-+25% damage against water magic, as water is a great conductor of electricity (impure water is anyhow. If it's distilled there is no extra damage done)

Weaknesses:
-can be neutralized by any electrical charge of greater power(so any lightning magic of a higher rank)
-subtlety. this is a very loud and bright magic, so it is only really effective in direct confrontation, it is completely useless at stealth for the most part.
-defense. most spells of this magic are useless at defending.
Lineage: Necromancer's Passion, located in The Fallen
Unique Abilities:
Lightning Storm
Lightning Storm creates a temporary lightning storm. This storm lasts for 2 posts. The storm created will have lightning coming down from the clouds, within a range of 15 meters, a couple seconds apart each and at least 2 meters away from each other. The storm does damage, any lightning bolt that hits an enemy does about 50% rank damage.

Electrical current
This ua allows Takumi to radiate an electrical current across his body, causing 50% rank damage to anyone who touches him while in this state over two posts. The eletrical current is one of this magic's few forms of defense. This ability can be used as many times per thread as the users desires, though it lasts for 2 posts and has a 4 post cooldown.

Bioelectric Manipulation
This ua allows Takumi to manipulate the bioelectrical signals in a person's body and absorb that energy, or to cut it off completely. This ability does have a weakness though: the user's own energy could potentially be absorbed instead and cause paralysis or even death. With Bioelectric Manipulation a user can essentially control the movements of another, and sense their presence by their Bioelectricity. When Takumi absorbs a person's bioelectricity, it gives him an additional boost of about 10% to both speed and power.

Flash Step
This ua gives Takumi a passive speed bonus of 20%, though he shoots off sparks of blue lightning while using this ability. It is the telltale way to see he's using this ability.

Spells:

D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

Base D rank spells:

C rank Spells:

C rank, special:

You're allowed a D-rank signature. This signature is stationary in rank, so it remains at D-rank compared to your C-rank one that ranks up with you to S-rank.

Takumi Yoshino wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Lightning Dragon Slayer[1st Gen]
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you trained for goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster, Lost
Description: Dragon Slayer Magic was a magic specifically made to kill dragons. This is a rare magic, one that few people have. Takumi is the the Lightning Dragon Slayer. He has learnt most of what he knows on his own, though the dragon gave him this magic in the form of a lightning bolt, which struck Takumi, filling him with the powers of the lightning dragon himself.

Takumi uses this magic, along with his necromancy lineage, to overwhelm an opponent with strength and speed generated by the lightning. This magic is powerful, but not very subtle, so Takumi prefers to use it for head-on combat. In a contest of strength this magic would more like than not win. Takumi's Lightning DS magic is different from most, because his lightning is blue rather than the typical gold.
Strengths:
-Multiple targeting(dealng damage to multiple enemies at once.
-+25% damage against water magic, as water is a great conductor of electricity (impure water is anyhow. If it's distilled there is no extra damage done)

Weaknesses:
-can be neutralized by any electrical charge of greater power(so any lightning magic of a higher rank)
-subtlety. this is a very loud and bright magic, so it is only really effective in direct confrontation, it is completely useless at stealth for the most part.
-defense. most spells of this magic are useless at defending.
Lineage: Necromancer's Passion, located in The Fallen
Unique Abilities:
Lightning Storm
Lightning Storm creates a temporary lightning storm. This storm lasts for 2 posts. The storm created will have lightning coming down from the clouds, within a range of 15 meters, a couple seconds apart each and at least 2 meters away from each other. The storm does damage, any lightning bolt that hits an enemy does about 50% rank damage.

Electrical current
This ua allows Takumi to radiate an electrical current across his body, causing 50% rank damage to anyone who touches him while in this state over two posts. The eletrical current is one of this magic's few forms of defense. This ability can be used as many times per thread as the users desires, though it lasts for 2 posts and has a 4 post cooldown.

Bioelectric Manipulation
This ua allows Takumi to manipulate the bioelectrical signals in a person's body and absorb that energy, or to cut it off completely. This ability does have a weakness though: the user's own energy could potentially be absorbed instead and cause paralysis or even death. With Bioelectric Manipulation a user can essentially control the movements of another, and sense their presence by their Bioelectricity. When Takumi absorbs a person's bioelectricity, it gives him an additional boost of about 10% to both speed and power.

Flash Step
This ua gives Takumi a passive speed bonus of 20%, though he shoots off sparks of blue lightning while using this ability. It is the telltale way to see he's using this ability.

Spells:

D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

Base D rank spells:

C rank Spells:

C rank, special: