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    Ice S Molding Magic

    Faris_Blaz!
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    Completed Ice S Molding Magic

    Post by Faris_Blaz! 24th December 2016, 6:18 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Ice S Molding Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Axel, is using an Ice S Molding Magic which he learnt in the North far from his Village during heavy Snowfall, and practiced with glaciers.This magic allow's him to make immersive powerful objects; therefore, this Magic not only allow's the caster to form magic, but to move the object at different Rates and Velocity(defined in the Second Paragraph ). The Symbol "S" in Magic refers to two essential things provided to the Caster unlike other Ice magics....Firstly the caster can control the Blizzard, and Secondly It can transform somehow likely with this Magic on occasions(Not to forget that this symbol still has some qualities that haven't being discovered by the mage aka Lightning and stuff ).

    The immersive, and powerful objects could be made through caster's observation, and thoughts; therefore, not to forget this magic also allow's the caster to have strong faith in his heart,magic, and friends to form it in a moving form thus the more trust he has the more faster, and powerful the moving Ice get's. Coming to the "S" Symbol The first and the most important is that it doubles the power(speed,strength etc) of the caster through Transformation thus It is only applicable when the Mage had 10-50 MP right in order to not to cross the limit of the D Rank(Will be edited when moved to next rank ); therefore, to save him from Occasions.Secondly the "Blizzard Controlling" the Second sub-form of this symbol thus It allow's us to control the blizzard as an opportunity for the Caster who is being trained with Glaciers in a High Blizzard risking his life. For example : the mage can use the Blizzard to make himself fly or can use It as an opportunity to speed up himself.



    Strengths:


    • Faster, and stronger thus increases with a strong faith in Friends.


    • An Ice Transformation Avail to save from Occasions.


    • Form anything of Mage's Wish


    Weaknesses:

    • Ice Magic get's weaken by Fire Magic.


    • Ice Magic would be useless on Ice Slayers as they will eat their element to boast them up.


    • Arid Zones with much high temperature could slow down the Ice Magic, and the Caster both as well.


    • Ice have a bit of weakness near Time Arc(If we apply the same condition as the anime.... It would drain mage's Health or MP as he need's blood to be applied on Ice)

    Lineage
    Glory of the Slayer:

    Unique Abilities



    • Immunity against the element: Immune to high Blizzards,Snow(Ice), and Glaciers(Turn's to blizzard when hit's the mage)



    • Controlling Blizzards : As the sub part of the S Magic...the mage is given an opportunity to control the blizzard the way he want's to with his hands thus this could be useful to save his friends from terrible conditions.(If It normally can't be done, so Mhhhmmmm gurl I'll put it into the spell list ).




    • Ice Magic Versus Ice Magic : Another Ice magic against this magic is kinda useless since the affect would be low, but in a unique way the Slaying sword or the Right Hand Crystal ( mentioned down - Transformation ) could physical and magically could cause a lot more damage then local magic.




    • Invulnerable Cold : The mage has a resistance to cold like every other mage possessing the Ice Magic because of his habitual way of training into a very extreme tough weather(High Blizzards ).


    D Rank Spells:


    Last edited by Faris_Blaz! on 29th December 2016, 5:31 am; edited 22 times in total
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    Completed Re: Ice S Molding Magic

    Post by Godlike Frederik 25th December 2016, 3:55 am

    Allright, merry christmas, time to grade your magic.

    First off are a few appearance tips. Just to make things easier on the eyes. Like your strengths and weaknesses in your spells. Please bullet point them like you did in the main description of your magic. It's not really a top priority but it makes it easier for the staff to look through. Secondly, try to keep your spelling in mind:

    Faris_Blazi wrote:It's a magic usually taken when a mage have(has) 10-40 MP left. This magic allow's the mage to have a kind of transformation to increase physical abilities, as well as there(their) own Magic power.

    There points mostly to a place, while we are talking about your magic power which is your possesion. Then it's their. Anyway, I am not much to talk about spelling tho. Since mine isn't always that accurate either xD anyway, just a small tip to keep an eye out. It makes reading for others and yourself just a bit more easier.

    Well then, let's get down to buisness.

    Your main description is pretty much good enough, I would only add a small part on what you can really do with the blizzards. I understand that you can control them, but go a little bit more in depth with that small aspect. Like give an example or two. Also add Ice Slayer magic into your weaknesses of your magic. No matter what kind of ice/snow/blizzard magic there is, most ice element slayers can eat most ice related magics.

    now the spells,

    >
    Name: Ice Make Barrier
    Rank: D
    Type:Ice S Magic, and Defense
    Description: It's a defensive type magic that makes a Barrier around the mage usually 14 Feet up defending the one near him too.This magic create's Ice, and get's stronger when the caster is in a snowy area.... Basically the best affect(effect) of this barrier is that It could reflects the attack back.. The Sub way to use it is basically create an own copy of our self.
    (please give us more detail on how this spell is used. You say it gets stronger when you are in colder areas. How does this work? Does it suck in the cold to strengthen it? Does this also mean that the barrier is weaker when in hotter areas? What kind of attacks can it reflect back? And how does this copying yourself work? Like a second reflection of you in the barrier?)

    Duration:1 Posts
    Cooldown: : 2 Posts. (we keep a minimum of 3 posts for a cool down around here)

    Strength : Provide's a comfortable support to the mage to defend himself by repulsing the opponent magic on them self.

    Weakness : The barrier can be broken when anyone through underground cast's spell against the caster as It only cover's the land within where the mage is standing.


    >
    Name: Ice Make Eagle
    Rank: D
    Type:Ice S Magic, and Offensive
    Description: It's a Spell of Instant, and Multiple Hits of Ice made Eagles towards the opponent...this Attack also do have a sub attack.... all the Eagle combines together to form a single, but a lot more powerful, larger, and stronger eagle thus Opponent is in danger.
    (What does it do exactly? Like is it like a rapid fire thing where the eagles just hit you and do damage? Can they home in on their target? And is the bigger combined eagle more alive? Like can you ride it, can it support you as a larger creature? Go a bit more in depth on what you can really do with each form of this spell)

    Strength: The spell is really rapid; therefore, the opponent can't likely dodge them physical until some defensive spells have been cast, but those are also weaken when the caster gain's a clearly opportunity to increase it's power through his heart, or in a snowy atmostphere(Could be winter,Snow Area/Weather thus causes more Damage)

    Weakness : The caster is all wide open from his behind thus It's vulnerable until their isn't a partner in his back to protect him( if anyone from behind attack's )
    Duration:2 Posts
    Cooldown: : 3 Posts.


    >
    Name: Ice Make Wave
    Rank: D
    Type:Ice S Magic, Offensive, and Charge Up Spell
    Description: It's mixture of Ice, and Blizzard making a wave through his hand; therefore, he can double the impact of the wave by using his another hand... this wave take's some time and use's 25 MP% being the most powerful attack so far except Transformation...
    (it says it is one of the more powerful attacks. But what does it do? You make a wave? What kind of wave? Does it do damage? Please tell a bit more on what this spell is really for, what you can do with it. Because you stated it targets the opponent when being fired. Yet it doesnt really tell me how yet. Is it a wave similar to wave in the sea. Or a wave all around you. Or more like spiked ice heading towards an opponent.)

    Strength: The spell is really fast when being fired at the opponent, and If the spell is cast to an opponent off guard the Affect of It is doubled, and the opponent might face unconsciousness...This Spell has been trained in a way to take out half of the mountain as the caster is habitual of facing high glaciers.

    Weakness : It's CuS, so the mage is wide open to be attacked until the wave is being charged if he fires It in the middle the affect would be to low then expected
    Duration:3 Posts
    Cooldown: : 4 Posts.


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    Faris_Blaz!
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    Completed Re: Ice S Molding Magic

    Post by Faris_Blaz! 25th December 2016, 5:27 am

    Done! :D
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    Completed Re: Ice S Molding Magic

    Post by Godlike Frederik 28th December 2016, 2:14 am

    Once more please bullet point the weaknesses and strength in your spells as well, the same as you have in your main description.

    Also you can lose the 25% MP cost in your last spell Ice Make Wave the normal cost for casting a D - rank spell will suffice


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    Faris_Blaz!
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    Completed Re: Ice S Molding Magic

    Post by Faris_Blaz! 28th December 2016, 8:22 am

    BUMP!
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    Completed Re: Ice S Molding Magic

    Post by Godlike Frederik 31st December 2016, 3:27 am

    allright approved


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