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    Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic

    Reiya
    Reiya

    Player 
    Lineage : Technological Superiority
    Position : None
    Posts : 155
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Dragons and Stoners?
    Experience : 450

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Archive Gun
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic Empty Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic

    Post by Reiya 25th November 2016, 9:17 am

    Magic
    Primary Magic: Archive Gun Magic
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Archive Gun magic is a well-balanced magic. It has a great supportive and defensive system, as well as offensive. This magic's purpose is to keep the user informed and to gather intel as well as transferring information over great distances. It's the perfect battle-tactician magic. Able to keep all allies in touch on the battle field, as well as transferring a spell for one to use, one time. It's offensive side is a artillery of guns and bullets, anything similar. Very rarely does this magic use spells that involve close-combat. As well as creating defensive mechanisms such as walls, domes and more with pixels.


    Mavis has developed the magic for using it to record data on spells and even developed a bank to transfer data to others to use. Also she has developed a tracking ability for her spells, the ones that can, such as a tracking blast and bullets/missiles of any kind. As well as projecting screens to defend herself from any oncoming attacks, her development in the magic is nothing short of a miracle being her magic is one of the more complicated ones.
    Strengths: 

    • Communication in battle
    • AoE
    • Single Target {Homing Bullets}
    • Knowledge/Gathered Information
    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses:

    • Limited in the distance of communication/Communication is cut
    • No elemental advantage
    • The information can only be gathered from in battle or from books, must have witnessed the person or magic in action to gather information on it
    • Homing bullets can only turn to a certain degree
    • Limited Data Stored
    • Delayed transferring of spells

    Lineage: Technological Superiority
    Unique Abilities: 
    Transferring:
    Natural Data Bank:
    Byte Pixel Shield:
    Archive Enhanced:


    Spells:
    Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic CD2pLGU


    Spells:


    Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic DpplF10

    Spells:


    Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic WoBNE7e
    D-Rank Signature:

    Signature Spell:



    Last edited by Mavis Lockheart on 10th December 2016, 10:20 am; edited 6 times in total


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    Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic Empty Re: Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic

    Post by Guest 26th November 2016, 4:20 pm

    Hey there, Mavis! I have a few things that need to be fixed on your magic app. Once they're all fixed up you're good to go. You can find my requests in this color.
    Mavis Lockheart wrote:
    Magic
    Primary Magic: Archive Gun Magic
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Archive Gun magic is a well-balanced magic. It has a great supportive and defensive system, as well as offensive. This magic's purpose is to keep the user informed and to gather intel as well as transforming information over great distances. It's the perfect battle-tactician magic. Able to keep all allies in touch on the battle field, as well as transferring a spell for one to use, one time. It's offensive side is a artillery of guns and bullets, anything similar. Very rarely does this magic use spells that involve close-combat. As well as creating defensive mechanisms such as walls, domes and more with pixels.


    Mavis has developed the magic for using it to record data on spells and even developed a bank to transfer data to others to use. Also she has developed a tracking ability for her spells, the ones that can, such as a tracking blast and bullets/missiles of any kind. As well as projecting screens to defend herself from any oncoming attacks, her development in the magic is nothing short of a miracle being her magic is one of the more complicated ones.
    Strengths: 

    • Communication in battle
    • AoE
    • Single Target {Homing Bullets}
    • Balanced Out
    • Knowledge/Gathered Information
    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses:

    • Limited in the distance of communication/Communication is cut
    • No elemental advantage
    • The information can only be gathered from in battle or from books, must have witnessed the person or magic in action to gather information on it
    • Homing bullets can only turn to a certain degree
    • Limited Data Stored

    Since you have 6 strengths and only 5 weaknesses, you need two more weaknesses, as there should always be one more weakness than strength (i.e. 6 strengths, 7 weaknesses)
    Lineage: Technological Superiority
    Unique Abilities: 
    Transferring:
    Natural Data Bank:
    Byte Pixel Shield:

    Spells:

    Name: Kilobyte Blast
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: A flat-screen appears, information scribbled in an ancient language begins to rapidly scroll past the small screen no bigger than 12x18. {In inches} The screen while scrolling through the information fires a small yellow circular blast at the foe, this blast is a foot all around in size, this blast can only extend out to fifteen meters. The blast can travel at 15 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Can't track foe's movement/Meaning not homing.


    Name: Tri-chive Storm
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: Three orange-yellow orbs made from pixel which look like disoriented squares form, no bigger than half a foot all around, circle Mavis' head. When she signals the orbs to attack her opponent they latch out at her foe, with her passive ability. They can travel up to fifteen meters. The speed for this spell is a bit different being 10 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage
    • Homing

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • One Orb only does 1/3 of the spell's damage
    • Limited Homing


    Name: Data Commission:Kilo Beam
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: Mavis opens a spell circle below and above her foe that then has three 12x8 {Inches} screens appear that fire a pixel blast at her foe, the delay of the blast is half a second. The spell circles can be summoned with in a fifteen meter radius around Mavis. The speed the blast happens is 15 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Delay


    Name: Data Commission: Slashing Strike
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: One of the few close-ranged attacks of this magic. Slashing Strike, a diagonal flat wave is sent out of a projected screen, the wave being two meters long and a meter tall, it can travel up to seven meters. The wave travels at 5 m/s. 
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Close-range

    Reiya
    Reiya

    Player 
    Lineage : Technological Superiority
    Position : None
    Posts : 155
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Dragons and Stoners?
    Experience : 450

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Archive Gun
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic Empty Re: Mavis Lockheart | Archive Gun Magic

    Post by Reiya 26th November 2016, 4:43 pm

    Marceline Anicetus wrote:
    Hey there, Mavis! I have a few things that need to be fixed on your magic app. Once they're all fixed up you're good to go. You can find my requests in this color.
    Mavis Lockheart wrote:
    Magic
    Primary Magic: Archive Gun Magic
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Archive Gun magic is a well-balanced magic. It has a great supportive and defensive system, as well as offensive. This magic's purpose is to keep the user informed and to gather intel as well as transforming information over great distances. It's the perfect battle-tactician magic. Able to keep all allies in touch on the battle field, as well as transferring a spell for one to use, one time. It's offensive side is a artillery of guns and bullets, anything similar. Very rarely does this magic use spells that involve close-combat. As well as creating defensive mechanisms such as walls, domes and more with pixels.


    Mavis has developed the magic for using it to record data on spells and even developed a bank to transfer data to others to use. Also she has developed a tracking ability for her spells, the ones that can, such as a tracking blast and bullets/missiles of any kind. As well as projecting screens to defend herself from any oncoming attacks, her development in the magic is nothing short of a miracle being her magic is one of the more complicated ones.
    Strengths: 

    • Communication in battle
    • AoE
    • Single Target {Homing Bullets}
    • Balanced Out
    • Knowledge/Gathered Information
    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses:

    • Limited in the distance of communication/Communication is cut
    • No elemental advantage
    • The information can only be gathered from in battle or from books, must have witnessed the person or magic in action to gather information on it
    • Homing bullets can only turn to a certain degree
    • Limited Data Stored

    Since you have 6 strengths and only 5 weaknesses, you need two more weaknesses, as there should always be one more weakness than strength (i.e. 6 strengths, 7 weaknesses)
    Lineage: Technological Superiority
    Unique Abilities: 
    Transferring:
    Natural Data Bank:
    Byte Pixel Shield:

    Spells:

    Name: Kilobyte Blast
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: A flat-screen appears, information scribbled in an ancient language begins to rapidly scroll past the small screen no bigger than 12x18. {In inches} The screen while scrolling through the information fires a small yellow circular blast at the foe, this blast is a foot all around in size, this blast can only extend out to fifteen meters. The blast can travel at 15 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Can't track foe's movement/Meaning not homing.


    Name: Tri-chive Storm
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: Three orange-yellow orbs made from pixel which look like disoriented squares form, no bigger than half a foot all around, circle Mavis' head. When she signals the orbs to attack her opponent they latch out at her foe, with her passive ability. They can travel up to fifteen meters. The speed for this spell is a bit different being 10 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage
    • Homing

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • One Orb only does 1/3 of the spell's damage
    • Limited Homing


    Name: Data Commission:Kilo Beam
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: Mavis opens a spell circle below and above her foe that then has three 12x8 {Inches} screens appear that fire a pixel blast at her foe, the delay of the blast is half a second. The spell circles can be summoned with in a fifteen meter radius around Mavis. The speed the blast happens is 15 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Delay


    Name: Data Commission: Slashing Strike
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: One of the few close-ranged attacks of this magic. Slashing Strike, a diagonal flat wave is sent out of a projected screen, the wave being two meters long and a meter tall, it can travel up to seven meters. The wave travels at 5 m/s. 
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Close-range

    Think I got it all, although on my data bank can I start out two slots to store spells, cause I feel one is a little two low if you still disagree I will lower it, I just think I could justify the magic being a natural piggy bank of information  it should be able to copy more than one spell to transfer over to someone else to use.,


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    Post by Guest 26th November 2016, 5:31 pm

    The natural data bank, I'd like the spells to not be permanent spells; they can be use for the thread your in, but once that thread is over, information for the spells are lost. Same with the spell transfers.
    Reiya
    Reiya

    Player 
    Lineage : Technological Superiority
    Position : None
    Posts : 155
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Dragons and Stoners?
    Experience : 450

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Archive Gun
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Reiya 26th November 2016, 5:39 pm

    Bumped, did it. Thank you so much Queen Marceline. I'm sorry for suggesting against your grading and sorry if it annoyed you.


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    Post by Guest 26th November 2016, 6:56 pm

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    Post by Guest 4th December 2016, 10:24 am

    unlocked at user's request.

    Mavis Lockheart wrote:
    Magic
    Primary Magic: Archive Gun Magic
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Archive Gun magic is a well-balanced magic. It has a great supportive and defensive system, as well as offensive. This magic's purpose is to keep the user informed and to gather intel as well as transferring information over great distances. It's the perfect battle-tactician magic. Able to keep all allies in touch on the battle field, as well as transferring a spell for one to use, one time. It's offensive side is a artillery of guns and bullets, anything similar. Very rarely does this magic use spells that involve close-combat. As well as creating defensive mechanisms such as walls, domes and more with pixels.


    Mavis has developed the magic for using it to record data on spells and even developed a bank to transfer data to others to use. Also she has developed a tracking ability for her spells, the ones that can, such as a tracking blast and bullets/missiles of any kind. As well as projecting screens to defend herself from any oncoming attacks, her development in the magic is nothing short of a miracle being her magic is one of the more complicated ones.
    Strengths: 

    • Communication in battle
    • AoE
    • Single Target {Homing Bullets}
    • Knowledge/Gathered Information
    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses:

    • Limited in the distance of communication/Communication is cut
    • No elemental advantage
    • The information can only be gathered from in battle or from books, must have witnessed the person or magic in action to gather information on it
    • Homing bullets can only turn to a certain degree
    • Limited Data Stored
    • Delayed transferring of spells

    Lineage: Technological Superiority
    Unique Abilities: 
    Transferring:
    Natural Data Bank:
    Byte Pixel Shield:

    Spells:

    Name: Kilobyte Blast
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: A flat-screen appears, information scribbled in an ancient language begins to rapidly scroll past the small screen no bigger than 12x18. {In inches} The screen while scrolling through the information fires a small yellow circular blast at the foe, this blast is a foot all around in size, this blast can only extend out to fifteen meters. The blast can travel at 15 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Can't track foe's movement/Meaning not homing.


    Name: Tri-chive Storm
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: Three orange-yellow orbs made from pixel which look like disoriented squares form, no bigger than half a foot all around, circle Mavis' head. When she signals the orbs to attack her opponent they latch out at her foe, with her passive ability. They can travel up to fifteen meters. The speed for this spell is a bit different being 10 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage
    • Homing

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • One Orb only does 1/3 of the spell's damage
    • Limited Homing


    Name: Data Commission:Kilo Beam
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: Mavis opens a spell circle below and above her foe that then has three 12x8 {Inches} screens appear that fire a pixel blast at her foe, the delay of the blast is half a second. The spell circles can be summoned with in a fifteen meter radius around Mavis. The speed the blast happens is 15 m/s.
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Delay


    Name: Data Commission: Slashing Strike
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two Posts
    Description: One of the few close-ranged attacks of this magic. Slashing Strike, a diagonal flat wave is sent out of a projected screen, the wave being two meters long and a meter tall, it can travel up to seven meters. The wave travels at 5 m/s. 
    Strengths: 

    • No Elemental Disadvantage

    Weaknesses: 

    • No Elemental Advantage
    • Close-range

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    Post by Raiza 11th December 2016, 12:17 am

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