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    Triple_Hell

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    Post by Triple_Hell 11th November 2016, 7:34 am

    Name: Orion
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Long Bow
    Description:
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    Strengths: Orion is one heck of a heavy longbow, weighing a good 60kilos. Well that's its strength, its not easily broken in half like a twig.

    Another strength is its material, ironwood is hard and heavy, making being whack by it feel like an iron rod.

    Lastly, the bow is designed to deliver arrows swiftly and with strength. The draw strength makes the arrow fly faster and straighter, also delivering a powerful punch.

    Weaknesses: Orion's weight usually isn't a problem, but it still is nonetheless to the inexperienced. The hefty weapon makes it a hard weapon to lift.

    Draw strength comes with a set back, it requires strong arms to pull the line.

    Another weakness is its height, 2 meters tall. Adapting to the weapon is hard and nooks and crannies are not it's best friend.

    Lastly, it is still wooden, so if it vunerable to catch fire.

    Abilities: It is just a regular non magic bow so no special abilities.


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    Post by Guest 11th November 2016, 9:49 pm

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    Hello again, Phoenix!
    Only one thing needs to be edited here. You need one more weakness than strength. You need one more weakness.

    Also, please provide proof (link, screenshot, etc) that you bought a strong rank weapon. If this cannot be proven, you will have to downgrade it to weak.

    Bump the thread once the edit has been made.

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    Post by Triple_Hell 11th November 2016, 9:59 pm

    I'll just justify the rank as it comes from Haia's history. Orion is a long bow not for beginners, too heavy and too big for a novice archer so Weak wouldn't count, the draw strength too will be too much for anyone who wants to pick up the long bow. Any rank above strong would be too much as, it is a regular long bow, no magic enchantments or anything to give it a stronger boost. Haia obviously by now wouldn't be called a novice archer, she had the bow for 3 years and having done archery with the long bow for a year.

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    Post by Guest 11th November 2016, 10:04 pm

    Though it may be part of the history, you would still have to buy it from the armory if it's any rank but weak.

    Also, as a side note. Strongs can have abilities, if you wanted.
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    Post by Triple_Hell 11th November 2016, 10:06 pm

    Well changed it to Weak, since I'm poor lel.

    I'll take note of that thanks


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    Post by Guest 11th November 2016, 10:09 pm

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