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    Tōketsu yumi (Frozen Bow)

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    Post by Guest 13th January 2013, 11:05 am

    [b]Name: Tōketsu Yumi (Japanese for "frozen bow")
    Type: Cross Bow
    Rank: Strong(+)
    Description: about the size of Eves forearm. It latches on to the users arm, and at the end extends to the form of an ice crystal, with a hole in the bottom to shoot out arrows. The arrows are made by shooting out cold air, as soon as it shoots out, the condensation in the air freezes, forming an arrow. The further the arrow travels, the larger but slower it becomes. The weapon is made up of tinny little ice crystals, that when condensed together with wind or air magic, turn into a cross bow.
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    Strengths:
    -never have to reload.
    -Eve can use wind current to try and guide the arrow to the target.
    -has unlimited arrow due to always being condensation in the ground.
    -the further the opponent, the more damage done.
    -when first fired, goes 50 mph.

    Weaknesses:
    - fire magic
    -the closer the target, the less damage done.
    -speed decreases by 2 mph every second
    -after 1 post (1 from you and 1 from your opponent), the arrow disappears
    -1 arrow at a time
    -becomes less effective if manipulated by magic.
    -after 3 arrows a 5 post cool down.
    -does take magic energy from the user.

    Abilities:
    Spoiler:


    Last edited by Reapers Muse on 13th January 2013, 2:13 pm; edited 3 times in total
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 13th January 2013, 12:58 pm

    Please put your abilities like you would a normal spell.

    Also weapon abilities have to relate to your magic in some way.


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    Post by Guest 13th January 2013, 1:48 pm

    edited to your specifications :)
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 13th January 2013, 1:52 pm

    Your second one seems to rely on your lineage. As these are ice arrows you wouldn't need an ability relevant to them to control them with your lineage. I suggest replacing that with something else.

    The second ability is fine. However, how strong are the little arrows.

    An arrow getting stronger the further away it is doesn't make much sense as it would LOSE power due to moving slower. So remove that. Just say it fires ice arrows and say how powerful they are.


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    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
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    Post by Guest 13th January 2013, 2:14 pm

    ok, i replaced the first ability, and got rid of any thing having to do with lineage. and i added the the arrow gets bigger the further it travels, but it also gets slower.
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 13th January 2013, 2:21 pm

    Eh seems ok. Approved


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    Tōketsu yumi (Frozen Bow) Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Tōketsu yumi (Frozen Bow) Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

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