Fairy Tail RP

Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

• Patch Notes •                 • New User Guide •                • Guild Information •

    Sky Demons Guardian

    Guest
    avatar
    Guest
    Guest

    • Post n°1

    Sky Demons Guardian Empty Sky Demons Guardian

    Post by Guest 15th January 2013, 11:27 am

    Name: ( What's the name of the weapon? )
    Type: Armored clothing
    Rank: Legendary
    Description: A unordinary set of armor. It was said to be crafted by Zeus, the Sky God, who as used the legendary Sky crystals (the big blue crystals incorporated in the outfit) giving heavenly ability's of flight and rejuvenation, but not only that, he gave it the properties to protect against magic of his own, lightning. The outfit was then stolen by Sora, the Sky Demon. After soon realizing he could not tamper with Zeus's magic, he put a few dark spells in it as fell.
    regular:
    Spoiler:
    Strengths:
    -lightning resistant
    -heat (not fire) resistant
    -wind resistant, not that that matters.
    -light weight
    -covers most of body

    Weaknesses:
    -because it is light weight
    -ice/cold magic
    -fire

    Abilities:

    Spoiler:


    Last edited by Reapers Muse on 15th January 2013, 3:17 pm; edited 4 times in total
    • Back to top
    NightDrivenEn7
    NightDrivenEn7
    NightDrivenEn7

    Administrator- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Dragon Slayer- Veteran Level 3- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Shadows of Anarchy
    Position : None
    Posts : 1869
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Experience : 200

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip: Four elements.
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:
    • Post n°2

    Sky Demons Guardian Empty Re: Sky Demons Guardian

    Post by NightDrivenEn7 15th January 2013, 12:25 pm

    yeah, NO. None of this makes coherent sense. On a full mood? don't you mean Moon? adn why would you get power from the moon? that makes NO SENSE!? You're wearing Sky armor.

    Next, the abilities; 150% ontop of the already large amount of percentages you get from the armor being it's rank? No. Just no.

    And what is with the True Master ability? True master of what the name itself makes no sense, and the ability turns you completely into wind?.....this is a legendary armor all right but it's abilities are only equal to your rank. these are S ranks.

    how can you create a full moon anyway? it is one of your main weaknesses, no unless the thread itself is set to night YOU cannot make a full moon randomly appear. not everyone is going to go about around at night....

    Please just completely redo this application.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    "True Strength shall be shown, and the corruption of magic shall be broken."

    Current EXP: 150

    Informatio and Items:
    :


    Jobs:
    :


    Completed Missions:


    Theme:
    :
    • Back to top
    Guest
    avatar
    Guest
    Guest

    • Post n°3

    Sky Demons Guardian Empty Re: Sky Demons Guardian

    Post by Guest 15th January 2013, 1:18 pm

    ok, so first i pretty much edited like 80% of it :P. I got rid of the Full moon thing, and i got rid of the Wind transformation ability.
    When i made this, i meant for it to give a 50% boost, not a 150%. I Changed the last ability to something completely different,
    • Back to top
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:
    • Post n°4

    Sky Demons Guardian Empty Re: Sky Demons Guardian

    Post by Rosetta Crawford 15th January 2013, 1:25 pm

    Full moon makes no sense. If it was a water armor i'd understand it, but for a wind armor no. The wind is not affected by the moon (at least as far as i am aware).

    50% is a bit too much of a boost. Say 25%.
    Also, you need to put limits on who the second can pull in rank wise.



    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Sky Demons Guardian Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Sky Demons Guardian Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Sky Demons Guardian Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    • Back to top
    Guest
    avatar
    Guest
    Guest

    • Post n°5

    Sky Demons Guardian Empty Re: Sky Demons Guardian

    Post by Guest 15th January 2013, 1:29 pm

    ok so i meant to delete all of the full moon stuff I'm an idiot who cannot type real words (and i just did). As for the rank thing, it depends. No matter what rank you are going to get pulled in, its just the lower your rank the less you can withstand the strength of the winds.
    • Back to top
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:
    • Post n°6

    Sky Demons Guardian Empty Re: Sky Demons Guardian

    Post by Rosetta Crawford 15th January 2013, 2:16 pm

    Not really because an S rank for example has a lot higher strength and speed (or so I understand) and so a D rank wind would not pull them in at all as they'd be able to resist it completely. That's what I mean. What level is higher enough to resist it. I'd say B. And C can resist, but not completely.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Sky Demons Guardian Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Sky Demons Guardian Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Sky Demons Guardian Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    • Back to top
    Guest
    avatar
    Guest
    Guest

    • Post n°7

    Sky Demons Guardian Empty Re: Sky Demons Guardian

    Post by Guest 15th January 2013, 3:12 pm

    ok :)
    • Back to top
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford
    Rosetta Crawford

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Villain- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
    Position : None
    Posts : 3499
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
    Experience : 367,824.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:
    • Post n°8

    Sky Demons Guardian Empty Re: Sky Demons Guardian

    Post by Rosetta Crawford 16th January 2013, 12:00 pm

    Approved


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Sky Demons Guardian Zack2_by_gramcrackers-d8ker96

    Sky Demons Guardian Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Sky Demons Guardian Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    • Back to top
    « View previous topic · View next topic »

      Current date/time is 18th November 2024, 10:19 am