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    Ice Golem Magic

    LightBringerX
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    First Skill: Ice Golem
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by LightBringerX 25th April 2016, 6:21 pm

    Frosts

    Magic
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    Primary Magic: Ice Golem
    Secondary Magic: Locked
    Caster or Holder: Caster - Lost
    Description: Ice Golem magic is a lost and very powerful type of ice magic. It entails  The caster being able to transform himself into an ice golem.

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    The magic itself is Strength and defense based when being used and heavily favors physical attacks and a strong defense. The golems frozen body provides an excellent shield from both physical and magical attacks.This type of ice magic keeps frost body temperature at round 20 degrees which gives him a natural resistance to most sources of heat.


    Strengths:

    -Ice Golem magic is strictly a close combat physical attack and a defensive magic encompassing a major  increase in physical attacks and defense when the caster is in Golem form.

    -This magic has caused his body temperature to stay below freezing constantly giving him a boost in his ice abilities and giving him an additional resistance to water and other Ice magic.

    Weaknesses:
    - has limited range capacity.
    - Speed is decreased by 20% While in Golem form
    -being Ice magic It has a 20% weakness to fire magic and abilities.


    Lineage:
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    Unique Abilities:

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    Post by Anastasia Isayev 27th April 2016, 10:34 pm

    Hello there, LightBringerX. I'm Anastasia and I'm here to grade your magic.
    If, at any time, you require assistance on what things you can/can't do with your magic, please send me a Pm and I can help you out.
    Anything you see in This Color are things I request of you to correct.

    Now let's get to it shall we?
    LightBringerX wrote:Frosts

    Magic
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    Primary Magic: Ice Golem
    Secondary Magic: Locked
    Caster or Holder: Caster - Lost
    Description: Ice Golem magic is a lost and very powerful type of ice magic. It entails  parts of the caster's body taking on the appearance of an Ice Golem. It could be just an arm or leg or it could cover the casters entire body giving a 30% boost to attack power what ever limbs the caster has cast the spell on.  Sorry, but adding boosts and stuff isn't what the description is for. Please add that to your actual take-over spells

    The magic itself is Strength and defense based when being used the Golems limbs cause the users speed to decrease by 20% to off set this it gets a 30% boost to physical attacks and defense as the frozen limb can be used as a shield as well. Being as this is Ice magic it keeps his body temperature close to zero at all times. As mentioned above, please post all of the bonuses in your spells and UA instead of the description

    As for how he uses the magic its strictly for combat and he has perfected how to use it at his current level. As a Class D mage he only knows the spells to freeze his arms. But through  training and learning new spells, and abilities over time(rank up) Until he can switch seamlessly between which limbs he has enchanted and eventually being able to unlock its full body transformation taking on the full appearance of an ice golem.

    Strengths:

    -Ice Golem magic is strictly a close combat physical attack and a defensive magic encompassing a 30% increase in physical attacks and defense of whatever parts of his body are covered in ice.
    30% damage reduction is pretty darn high. However, if you want additional damage reduction, those belong in a UA and not in a strength. So please delete the bonus from the strength.

    -This magic has caused his body temperature to stay below freezing constantly eliminating his weakness to heat. He also gains an additional 15%  boost in attack and Defense if the magic enchantments are connected. (ie His arms and chest are frozen which creates a chain giving him the boost.) Also very similar to UA. Strengths generally don't give bonuses and simply states what you're strong with. For this one, you could always state that your character is resistant to natural heat sources. While putting the boosts into a UA

    -When he obtains the spells and skill to become the complete Golem he gets a 50% Chain boost as well as the original 30% to his physical attack and defense.
    No idea what a chain boost is. Again, having % boosts belongs in UA and not strengths. Please remove the boosts and change this to something that your magic is strong against.

    - Has a 20% resistance to all water based attacks and abilities.
    You could state that "Is more resistant to water based attacks and abilities" leaving the numbers to the UAs. Please replace this with what I suggested or change it.

    Weaknesses:
    - has limited range capacity.
    - Speed is decreased by 20% while limbs are enchanted.
    -being Ice magic fire magic takes removes the 30% boost in defense when in full Golem mode and the 15% chain bonus.
    What is a chain bonus?


    Lineage:
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    Unique Abilities:

    Ability 1:

    You're going to need at least 4 D Rank spells and 3 UAs


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    Post by desirée 16th December 2017, 5:11 pm

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