Frozen Demon Slayer magic

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 Primary Magic:Frozen Demon Slayer
 Secondary Magic:N/A
 Caster or Holder: Slayer
 Description: Frozen Demon Slayer magic is a form of Lost Magic that uses divine magic to destroy infernal beings. The coloring of the magic used is a dim white colored with tints of blue coloring to it. If someone were to take a piece of ice they might be reminded of a benevolent crystal and blessed crystal; They might even mistake the spells as some sort of artwork created by the gods themselves. If the demon slayer were to eat their own element than any who saw the spectacle that the Frozen Demon Slayer would be more akin to the infernal beings of the underworld. Creating demonic blizzards that even those brave and foolish enough to enter it will soon realize that they will not leave alive. The demon slayer uses the magic to slow down an enemy mage's body leaving their reactions too slow to dodge the oncoming assault. The slayer can drop the temperature so low after much magic is used that the opponent will simply freeze still. The slayer can do this effect to themselves but to a much different result entombing themselves in a block of ice. Xeline had been given her powers of her magic by the demon goddess Illyria. Though the demon had little time other than to give a few basics Illyria had allowed Xeline to take one of her artifacts to enhance and nurture the power she had given.

Xeline's magic is used as a means to make it easier to keep her distance but still able to attack her opponent. While using her magic her main goal is to slow and prevent the movement of her opponents. When that is happily accomplished she will lock her opponent down using frozen vines to prevent the movement of her prey. If she is caught in more dire situations she will result to bringing up a wall of Ice to reduce the brunt of the attack. After she is done battling her opponent and wins she will have her pet drain what magic is left of the popsicled opponent.


 Strengths:
-Dual typing of Ice and Divine magic
-Allows Xeline to eat magic  Be more specific to what magic Xeline can eat.  While it's implied that Ice can be eaten, please state what magic your character can eat
-Great at catching up to opponents
 Weaknesses:  
-Xeline is weak to fire taking 50% extra from any fire type moves
-Some of Xeline's attacks are made from the ground so while in midair some of her attacks will be useless.
- Along with the fire weakness Xeline can not take immense heat.
Earthquakes- Ground tpe moves would be able to shake apart her more fragile spells with ease.
Lineage: Avatar of Illyria

Unique Abilities:
Extra Sense- Xeline can sense the magical energy around her up to roughly 3 meters from her current area including the areas above or below. It lets her 'see' the innate magic energy that is in all things animate or inanimate similair infer red. Since Xeline has a bit of a heads up her reaction time is increased.  Well, everyone is capable of sensing magical auras as stated in the Character perks thread in the rules.  If you want to be able to use this similar to infrared vision, you could make the distance rank up with you.  Can start it with:
D Rank:  10m
C Rank:  20m
etc etc if you so desired.
If you are going to use this as a means of increasing your reaction time, please state your reaction time increase by percentages, ranking up with you as well.  
Numb Feeling- Xeline's magic has caused her body to lower it's natural temperature. As a result the pain from attacks is numbed preventing Xeline from flinching from attacks that are her rank or lower.
Can't trick the blind- Visual illusion magic will not work on Xeline.  Indicate that illusions of her rank or lower does not work on your character instead of a blanket statement
Frozen Demon Aura-Xeline has a cold aura that surrounds her chilling the air until it begins to freeze. The aura is a passive and is only turned off at the users will. After 3 (of Xeline's) post of being in a thread the area around Xeline begins to snow down bright glowing snow. The snow slows her enemies as well as allies run and walking speed. The area is roughly 15 feet from where Xeline is standing  Unfortunately, this is modeled like a spell.  Please change this.


Spells

Signature Spells

Name: Grasp of Illyria
Rank: Up to S (same rank as Xeline)
Type: Ice and Divine
Duration:3  You can make the duration vary as you rank-up since duration varies when you get to a higher rank.  If you need help with duration, please see the magic rules
Cooldown:4
Description: Xeline calls for assistance from Illyria and summons a frozen animate tentacle that is roughly 10ft. The tentacle makes attempts to grab whatever it's target is. Deals 100% C rank damage per post.  This is a damage over time spell.  Damage over time is handled with 50% of the spell's rank's damage being dealt immediately and 25% of that rank's damage every post afterward.  Please make the change to fit with the Damage over Time (DoT) rules.
Strengths:
-Immobilizes the enemy
Weaknesses:
-It is rather tall and thus making it easier to hit
-Can be melted by fire
Also, you need to add that you cannot immobilize targets 2 ranks higher than yourself.  By adding this, you can add another strength.

D Spells

 Name: Demon's Frozen Wall
Rank: D
Type: Ice and divine Defensive
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: Xeline presses her hands to the ground and summons a frozen wall of Ice that blocks magic attacks. The wall is roughly twice her height and three times her width. The wall will be able to block 3 D rank attacks Change this to 2 D Rank attacks
Strengths:
-Covers the front very well
-Can pump an aditional 10% of magic to replenish the wall.  If you wish to use this, this would have to go under the spell's description instead of strength.  Please add this to the description and make another strength
Weaknesses:
-Fire spells would count as 2 spells(so if one D rank fire spell hits it would count as two to the wall.)
-It can't block attacks that come from above
-Requires the ground in order to summon.

Name: Frozen Demon Glacier
 Rank: D
 Type: Ice and Divine
 Duration:1 post until burst, 1 post stun Change this to Instant
 Cooldown:2 post
Description:Xeline collects magic in her left hand and creates a 2ft ice sphere. She then tosses the revolving sphere that  expands itself to roughly 5ft in width and 2ft in height. The sphere is a two hit spell the first part dealing 75% of D rank damage and the second part doing 25% of D damage.  The sphere is tossed and will burst on the second post. The sphere bursts on the second part that stuns those that are within 5 feet of its center.    Add that the stun lasts for 1 post here and not the duration
Strengths:
-Stunned opponents are easier to hit.
-Good for close range disengage
 Weaknesses:
-Easy to dodge if not up close
-Can be melted with fire
-Long range spells can bounce it out of the way.
Must add another weakness stating that you cannot stun a target that is 2 ranks higher than yourself.  With this, you need to add another strength

Name: Frozen Demon Link
Rank: D
Type: Ice and divine, Mana burn
Duration:2 post
Cooldown:3 post
Description: Xeline whips at the target with her plant's vines in order to wrap a limb of her opponents. The maximum amount of distance it can go is 6 feet.The plant begins to leech mana from the opponent. Someone who has the plant attached begins to feel a sharp stab of pain as the plant drinks their mana. Opponent loses 10% of mana per post.  10% is WAY too high for a D Rank spell.  Please change this to 2-3% at maximum
Strengths:
-Burning an opponents mana is always a good thing
-If Xeline is physically stronger than the opponent she would be able to drag the person around.
-Gives her a safe option in chasing down an opponent.
Weaknesses:
-Despite the plant leeching the mana none is given to Xeline.
-The opposite applies to Xeline as well. If her target is physically stronger she can be tossed around as well.
-If someone set fire to the plant Xeline has no way of canceling the magic before it spreads to her.
-Doesn't deal damage

C Spells

Name: Frozen Demon's Claws
Rank: C
Type: Ice and Divine, Offensive
Duration: 3 post C Rank can go up to 5 post duration, FYI
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: Xeline freezes her hands up to her elbows over creating frozen gauntlets with claws at the end. The claws are roughly 2ft Change to 1 feet please.  2 feet is a bit much for C Rank. Xeline prefers the use of this weapon whenever she is required for close combat fighting and rarely uses it for anything else. The gauntlets add on 50% 50% is too much.  You can change this to 30% bonus damage for duration of the spell though c ranked physical damage on top of the normal damage that Xeline has.  
Since this is a weapon make spell, please indicate that 1 B Rank strike or 2 C Rank strikes to the weapon will destroy the weapon
Strengths:
-Great for putting pressure on opponents in close combat
-Adds protection to her hands  It's either a weapon or armor, can't be both unfortunately
-Increases physical damage
Weaknesses:
-Useless for long range fights
-Prevents from casting magic
-Fire melts the gauntlets off
-When striking against armor or shields the ice begins to chip away and gets rid of the physical bonus

Name: Frozen Demon's Sword
Rank: C
Type: Ice and Divine, Offensive
Duration: 3 As with the above, you can have the duration up to 5 if you wanted
Cooldown: 4
Description:  Xeline forms a katana made of ice into her right hand. The katana is roughly the same length as her arm and is good for a mid ranged fighting. The color of the katana is the same as the rest of her magic. The blade is thin but slices through armored opponents extremely well. The blade adds 25% C damage to her normal attacks and helps her pierce through armor. Can have the blade increase your damage with the katana by 25% for duration of the weapon.
Since this is a weapon make spell, please indicate that 1 B Rank strike or 2 C Rank strikes to the weapon will destroy the weapon
Strengths:
-Gives her an easier time to fight at mid-range
-Gives her a way to pierce through armor and shields
-Easy to maneuver around and weave attacks with
Weaknesses:
-Can be melted by fire magic
-Useless at long range fighting
-Requires two hands effectively to use thus limiting the use of her magic
-though it can pierce, barrier magic and endurance magic reduce the effectiveness of this spell.
Also state that you cannot pierce through anything stronger than Strong Armors.


Name: Frozen Demon's Garden
Rank: C
Type: Ice and Divine, Aoe
Duration: 3 post
Cooldown: 4 post
Description: Xeline puts both of her hands to the ground (much like her wall spell) and begins to shift the snowy area around her. Once the spell is cast sharp flower shaped ice begins to sprout from the ground. The flowers can pierce through objects such as stone. Simply touching the flowers while avoiding being impaled by one only deals 70% of C damage through the sheer cold temperature of the objects. You can make this an AoE spell. AoE deals 100% damage to the source and 75% of the spell's rank damage to everything else within range of the spell.
Strengths:
-Pierces through barriers and armor
-Can be as big as 15ft Can make this 25m if you want from where Xeline is standing
Weaknesses:
-Weak to ground attacks as it shakes apart the ground below the crystals
-Without a snowy surface Xeline can not use the spell
-Fire can melt through the frozen flowers.