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    Completed Call of the Wild

    Post by Guest 8th January 2016, 8:55 am

    CALL OF THEWILD
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    Primary Magic: Call of the Wild
    Secondary Magic: Serenata of the Siren
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Call of the Wild is a shamanistic magic, dating back to when Shamanism was first introduced into the realm of the living. A shaman's point of view is that the living realm is pervaded by invisible forces and/or spirits that affect a living being's life, the elements, and nature in general. For shamans, two levels of existence exist for them, beside the living realm: the Underworld, where spirits go, and the Upperworld, where great spirits/gods live. Shamans are people who have the ability and training/knowledge on how to perceive the spirits, their effects on the living world, and how to contact and manipulate them. They are able to control spirits through the acts of bargaining, tricking, or forcing the spirit to abide the shaman's will. While having the ability to manipulate the spirit world, shamans are then under control of the spirit's abilities and powers. Shamanism allows for the user to have a wide range of ability, and with a little practice, not much can't be done with patience and the right contacts.

    Through the use of a staff, Kanix is able to connect to and speak with spirits residing in the spiritual realm. With the feathers and gem located on the knot of the staff, it's said that those very items will give a stronger connection to the other world. The staff's gem will glow a brilliant light when she has contacted a spirit and accessed one of the spirit's abilities. This, in turn, will allow for her to use that ability of the spirit's as a physical attack or support spell in the real world. However, she almost always has to return the favor to the spirit, in which much of her stamina, or magic power, may be drained. Though she will often be fatigued after connecting with the spirit world, her magic is, overall, very powerful.

    Strengths:

    • Often successful where other techniques have not been
    • Strong against natural elements
    • Works with spirits and the user's ancestors

    Weaknesses:

    • Requires immense training to master
    • Spirits may vary in power, area of control, and abilities; finding the right one may be difficult
    • Must be careful with spirits, as they can range from benevolent to extremely malevolent
    • Has to somehow get the spirit to do their bidding (i.e bargaining, tricking, forcing, etc)

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    Unique Abilities:

    • Death Sense:

      • The user is able to sense the coming of death, be it that someone is currently dying or someone has already died. Tacked on to this, the mage can see who died in a location, but is not able to see what had caused their death. They are also capable of being able to sense the oncoming death of a living person, though, again, are not able to see what the cause of it would be. This extends the ability to being just a sixth sense, in that there is no real advantage to the ability other than death sensing. This ability is constantly active, thus it hinders most activity that Kanix does on a daily basis, without having to fear a death.


    • Soul Trapping:

      • Once in a while, the mage is able to trap the soul of the opponent within themselves, so they are paralyzed for one post (50% speed reduction for 1 rank above, ineffective against 2 or more ranks above). The unique ability would have an immense drawback of fatigue, as the mage is using a majority of their magic power to trap the soul. It can drain an upwards of 15% of the mage's MP; this ability can only be used two times per thread.


    • Precognition:

      • With this ability, Kanix is able to see multiple outcomes and probabilities of events, this includes extremely ridiculous and unlikely outcomes. Though this unique ability does take some time to activate, and in that time, a person could easily alter the future, so she is unable to see the outcome. This ability operates at Kanix's will, and will only specific details that she happens to be looking for, she cannot see anything else. For instance, in battle, this unique ability would be completely useless, as the opponent's actions could change.


    • The Calling

      • With this ability, Kanix is able to bring a person back from the brink of death, restoring a small amount of their health. In doing so, she uses a part of her life essence to bring the person back; however, once the person dies, dead is dead. She is not able to bring them back from the dead, so this ability becomes ineffective should the ally cease to exist. When bringing the person back from the brink of death, she restores 20% of their total health gain for anyone the same rank as, or 1 or 2 ranks below her. For a mage any rank higher than her, it reduces the healing ability by 5% (i.e. one rank above is 15%, 2 ranks 10%, 3 ranks 5%, etc). This means that, when using her life essence, it removes 10% of her own health, alongside removing 10% of her MP.



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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Inspirational Quote 14th January 2016, 11:00 am

    Alright. So far as I can see, most of this is just fine. A few things though that need to be adjusted. First off as this is still D rank for everything parylization is going to need some way to break free from it and is going to have to have something stated that reduces the effect for higher ranked mages. The only other thing is that the spell which pulls a target into hell will probably be a no go as there are far too many factors involved with that sort of thing for a D rank spell. If you would like to talk about any of these things then just shoot me a PM. Bump when complete and I will take another peek.


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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Guest 14th January 2016, 1:45 pm

    Bump!
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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Inspirational Quote 15th January 2016, 4:44 pm

    Seems to be good to me. Nice work!

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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Guest 19th January 2016, 2:10 pm

    Bump. Added C rank spells, unique ability, and two signature spells.
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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Inspirational Quote 25th January 2016, 6:24 am

    A few edits needed.

    The Calling:This ability needs to state a reduced effect for higher ranked mages it is used upon or have it stated that it can only work on same ranked mages.

    Infectious Cloud:Just a small question on this one. If the area of effect is 15 meters around then how far away can this spell be actually cast?

    Anathema:Just needs a range added in.

    Spirit of Lightning:Needs a range added in.

    Pretty simple overall but if you have any issues with my grading or questions then feel free to PM me otherwise bump when completed.









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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Guest 25th January 2016, 8:37 am

    I believe I have edited everything, so bump!
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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Inspirational Quote 26th January 2016, 7:02 am

    Reapproved by IQ


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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Guest 11th March 2016, 9:39 am

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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Mistress Venir 11th March 2016, 1:21 pm

    Alrighty there's just a few edits requested but nothing major!:


    • I know you got the spell slots from the raffle but please make note of that somewhere for future mods reference!


    • Winter's Roar: There's quite a few effects in this spell. So let's go over them. If someone of equal or lower rank is hit then they are dealt frost bite, and just to make sure if they instead are frozen for a post then they do not get the frost bite effect? As far as higher ranks getting hit by this: 1 Rank higher is 50% speed reduction OR frost bite effect, and 2 ranks higher are unaffected.


    • Shock of the Tainted: Change to 30 meter please!


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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Guest 11th March 2016, 6:20 pm

    Edited what you asked, but I'm confused on what you're asking me to do for Winter's Roar.
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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Mistress Venir 12th March 2016, 10:14 am

    Call of the Wild HfOLxY4


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    Completed Re: Call of the Wild

    Post by Mistress Venir 6th April 2016, 7:39 pm

    Unlocked upon user's request

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