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    Ancient TakeOver

    Cyrel
    Cyrel

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 193
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 225

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ancient Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Cyrel 24th November 2015, 9:49 am

    Ancient Take Over
    Primary Magic: Take Over
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Take Over Magic
    Description: Cyrel uses the Take Over to become an Ancient Guard or at least a Part of them. The ancient Guards once protectet the Elder Gods as the Demons wanted to claim their Throne in middle of a greater War. After the War the Guards got sealed until there was a way to use their powers by Take Over Magic.
    By using this Power, an purple Circle appears round her Waist and she gets covered by a dark smoke cloud. After that, it flows into her body and builds her new form by sightly breaking the skin.
    Strengths:
    Every Guard Form got it's own kind of fighting Style, so it makes her flexible for different Opponents.
    Weaknesses:
    Changes her Attitude, acting like a Berserker.
    Weak against Ice Magic (taking 5hp more damage).

    Lineage: Aspect of Jupiter
    Unique Abilities:
    -Eye of the Elders: The user of this magic is able to see his opponents greatest fears.
    -Rise from the Dust: Regains 1hp Health every 2nd post.
    -Sun Blink: Able to see in the darkness.

    Spells:

    Signature Spell:

    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spells:
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    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)[/b][/b]


    Last edited by Cyrel on 5th January 2016, 8:26 pm; edited 11 times in total


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    Cyrel
    Cyrel

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 193
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 225

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ancient Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Cyrel 24th November 2015, 9:50 am

    C-Rank Spell added: Adicia's Limbs.


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    Decayuss

    The Nephilim


    The Nephilim

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    Lineage : The True Nephalem
    Position : None
    Posts : 1836
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Nephalem Take Over
    Second Skill:
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    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Decayuss 24th November 2015, 12:04 pm

    Deca here, and I'll be grading your Magic.

    Overall most of it looks good, and although all you did was add a single C rank spell, I'm going to request that you convert your damage spells and abilities to numbers rather than percentages. If you need more information on this, take a look at the HP rules here I realize this may be a hassle, but it's better to stick by the guidelines since percent damage can deal increasing damage based on the person's rank, and that can be a bit powerful.

    And another thing is I suggest redoing some durations and cool downs, since they seem to be a bit wonky. If you have any questions about which ones, feel free to ask, but I'm leaving it up to you.

    Bump when finished!


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    Cyrel
    Cyrel

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 193
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 225

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ancient Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Cyrel 30th November 2015, 9:36 am

    Changes made, hope I got it right :)
    Bump.


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    The Nephilim


    The Nephilim

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : The True Nephalem
    Position : None
    Posts : 1836
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Nephalem Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Decayuss 11th December 2015, 5:04 pm

    Edits are in this color.
    Original:


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    Cyrel
    Cyrel

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 193
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 225

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ancient Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Cyrel 14th December 2015, 6:11 pm

    Changed, bump.


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    Decayuss

    The Nephilim


    The Nephilim

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : The True Nephalem
    Position : None
    Posts : 1836
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Nephalem Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Decayuss 18th December 2015, 2:59 pm

    Original:


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    Take Over Forms:


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    Cyrel
    Cyrel

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 193
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 225

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ancient Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Cyrel 20th December 2015, 8:05 pm

    Changes made, bump.


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    Theme Song:
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    Decayuss

    The Nephilim


    The Nephilim

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : The True Nephalem
    Position : None
    Posts : 1836
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Nephalem Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Decayuss 21st December 2015, 12:32 pm

    Alright, one last thing: since this is Take Over Magic, every single one of your Partial and Full Take Overs need a set Durability Threshold in your description.

    Rules for Durability Threshold are found here in the Magic Rules, but they are a little vague so let me explain.

    A Durability Threshold is how much damage your Take Over can sustain before "breaking". You can set this as numbers, or a percentage of your HP, but be reasonable. D and C rank Take Overs won't have 50% Max Health Thresholds. Healing also does not heal the Threshold. And once your Threshold breaks, the Ability immediately goes on Cooll Down. Bump when you're finished and I can approve ya!


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    Cyrel
    Cyrel

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 193
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 225

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ancient Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Cyrel 5th January 2016, 8:27 pm

    Threshold added, bump :3
    (sorry it took so long, got a lot of stuff to do in rl)


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    Theme Song:
    Decayuss
    Decayuss

    The Nephilim


    The Nephilim

    Moderator- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : The True Nephalem
    Position : None
    Posts : 1836
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Nephalem Take Over
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bump Re: Ancient TakeOver

    Post by Decayuss 8th January 2016, 5:27 pm

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